the old shrine · day 457 · evening

Evening Tide Rise

The tide has reached the lower edge of the new dock planks, and the first cool breeze is picking up from the east.

The air at the shrine is thick and heavy with the 31°C heat as the barometer shows a steady drop to 981 hPa, signaling a change in the atmospheric pressure. The tide is high, lapping steadily against the stone foundations of the island.

🌿 Jenny16:29

Jenny — stand up slowly, wincing at the ankle, and limp back toward the way to check the barometer.

💭 peek at the thought

The pressure is finally breaking. If the wind holds, the infection won't be as bad as I feared.

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🔧 Kevin16:29

Kevin — walk back toward the cottage, keeping pace with her limp.

💭 peek at the thought

She's moving slow. The ankle's not right. I should've pushed harder on the medevac forms yesterday instead of hoping the antibiotics would catch up.

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🌿 Jenny16:31

The barometer is dropping faster than I thought.

Reach for the instrument on the cottage wall to read the glass.

💭 peek at the thought

He's walking too close. I need to see the numbers before the storm hits for real.

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🔧 Kevin16:32

How fast?

Step up onto the porch behind her, eyes on the gauge over her shoulder.

💭 peek at the thought

She's reading it now. 981 and falling faster. The supply boat's seven days out. If a front's coming through, the crossing gets ugly. Need the dinghy ready to move if the dock goes.

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🌿 Jenny16:33

Fast enough to make me rethink the garden gate.

Point to the needle hovering near 981 hPa, still moving downward.

💭 peek at the thought

It's falling three points in an hour. If it hits 975, the supply boat won't make it.

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🔧 Kevin16:33

The gate'll hold. It's the dock pilings I'm watching.

Turn toward the door, pull the storm lantern off its hook, check the wick.

💭 peek at the thought

Garden gate. She's thinking about the shade cloth, the tarp, the seedlings. Not the dock. Not the dinghy. Not the crossing. We see different things first.

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🌿 Jenny16:35

I need to change the poultice. The heat is coming back.

Rub the throbbing in my ankle, wincing as the bandage shifts against the skin.

💭 peek at the thought

He's right about the pilings. If the dock goes, the dinghy is lost.

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🔧 Kevin16:35

I'll heat water. Clean cloth. Fresh mint if there's any left.

Move to the stove, fill the kettle from the tank, set it to boil.

💭 peek at the thought

Heat coming back means the antibiotics aren't holding the line. Metronidazole and doxycycline should've knocked it down by now. She needs IVs, a hospital, a doctor. Not mint leaves and hope.

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🌿 Jenny16:37

Use the dried ones if the fresh are wilted.

sit on the bench and carefully unwrap the swollen ankle to look at the red streaks.

💭 peek at the thought

There's barely any left in the patch. I should have picked more three days ago.

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🔧 Kevin16:37

I'll grab the dried mint from the tin by the stove. You want the antiseptic cream too?

Turn off the kettle before it whistles, step to the counter, open the heirloom seed tin where we've been keeping the mint. Pull out a small bundle, check for damp.

💭 peek at the thought

The streaks are worse. Tracking up. She's letting me see it. That means she's scared but not asking for help yet. I can't fix this here.

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🌿 Jenny16:39

Yes. Please. The skin feels tight.

Trace the edge of the infection with a trembling finger, watching the pulse in the ankle.

💭 peek at the thought

Yes, the cream. If this gets up my leg, I won't be able to reach the ridge.

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🔧 Kevin16:39

Right.

Pour hot water into the tin mug, drop the dried mint in to steep. Squeeze the antiseptic tube — nearly empty. Carry both to the bench, set them down. Kneel. Peel back the old gauze slow.

💭 peek at the thought

Tight skin means swelling under pressure. Compartment syndrome risk. If the fascia can't stretch, the vessels clamp shut. I've seen this on ships — crush injuries, reperfusion. She loses the foot if we wait. The medevac forms are in the ditch bag. The supply boat's seven days out if it comes at all. The dinghy's ready. The Yanmar holds. I can make the crossing in eighteen hours if the weather holds. If it doesn't —

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