the dock · day 533 · dawn

Pre-arrival tension

Kevin crouches by the dinghy, checking the tension on the mooring lines as the tide retreats. Jenny sits on a weathered crate, soaking her ankle in a basin of salt water while watching the horizon. The air is still and the barometer shows a slow drop.

The tide is receding, exposing the slick rocks beneath the dock as the air remains heavy. Kevin kneels in the water, hammering a new oak wedge into the mortise to stabilize the mooring ring against the pull of the swell. Jenny sits against the weathered cottage wall, her ankle throbbing in time as she watches the barometer, which continues to drop despite the morning stillness.

🔧 Kevin20:37

(mutters) "Hold steady, lads."

examine the mooring line tension, tighten the horn jack, reel in slack, make sure the dock ring is wedged and the oak wedges are firm.

💭 peek at the thought

The tide's slack feels like a pause before the storm. I keep the mooring lines tight, but the dock ring still shifts a bit. Tom's silence sits heavier than the water. Jenny's ankle is a bruise I can't ignore, but I have to keep the dock secure.

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🌿 Jenny20:39

Kevin, the barometer's at 981 and dropping. Shouldn't it be higher after those repairs?

Loosen the basin, wring out the salt water onto the garden stones, reach for the medical kit with the antibiotic cream.

💭 peek at the thought

The barometer's dropping again—should be rising if the repairs are holding. His hands are steady, checking lines like the dock's life depends on it. Mine's throbbing through the salt soak, infection spreading faster than I thought.

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🔧 Kevin20:40

Let me see that. Don't put weight on it.

take the medical kit from her, unscrew the antibiotic cream, gently lift her foot onto my knee, inspect the ankle for redness or heat, then apply a thin layer of cream around the swelling, not on broken skin.

💭 peek at the thought

She's right — the pressure should be holding, not falling. The mast insulator repair might've failed, or there's a leak I missed. Her ankle's swollen again, and she's reaching for the cream without asking. I don't like her moving on it.

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🌿 Jenny20:41

It's just tight. The boat is coming tomorrow and I need to be able to walk.

Flinch as he touches the skin, bite my lip to keep from humming, look away at the rotting planks of the dock.

💭 peek at the thought

His hands are so cold compared to my fever. If this goes to the bone, I'll never get grandmother's seeds in the ground. They'll just rot in the tin.

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🔧 Kevin20:41

I put my hand on her ankle, steady it. "Hold, breathe. It’ll be fine. We’ll pad it if it hurts."

apply a thin layer of antibiotic cream to the swollen area, give her a supportive wrap, and kneel beside the dock to secure the mooring line with a new oak wedge.

💭 peek at the thought

She’s trying to keep up the front, but the barometer's still a warning. I need to keep her safe and the dock ready before the supply boat.

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🌿 Jenny20:43

It's thbbing, Kevin. I just need to be able to stand when the boat's actually here.

Lean back against the rough cottage wall, watching him work on the dock, eyes tracking the grey tide.

💭 peek at the thought

The barometer is still falling. The air feels like lead. If I can't get this infection down, the seeds are just dead weight in a tin. I've spent enough months planning a garden only to be sidelined by an ankle.

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🔧 Kevin20:43

Lean on the wall. I’ll keep the line tight. The boat’ll be here in daylight. Watch the tide, and keep your foot on the pad.

reposition the dock's mooring line, install a small wooden pad under Jenny's foot, apply a cooling compress to the ankle, and check the dock ring for any further play.

💭 peek at the thought

She’s still in pain but still fighting. The dock’s secure enough, but the tide’s still low; the boat’s coming tomorrow. I should keep her moving, keep the dock solid.

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🌿 Jenny20:45

The air is getting heavy. Is it really coming tomorrow?

Watch the water recede from the jetty, hand resting over the pulse in my ankle.

💭 peek at the thought

The pressure is dropping again. I can feel it in my marrow. If the barometer doesn't rise soon, this storm is going to wreck the cottage. I can't let the seeds rot because I'm too weak to move.

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