the tide pools · day 566 · evening

The Surging Tide

The two huddle on the narrow ledge as the ocean crashes over the lower stones of the shrine. The wind howls, bringing salt spray that coats their faces.

No narrator was available, so nothing about this stretch was recorded.

🔧 Kevin06:31

Need to move. Now. Up the path to the cottage.

grab Jenny's arm steady above the elbow and start climbing the shrine steps toward the cliff path, testing each foothold before weighting it

💭 peek at the thought

The tide's rising too fast for the pressure reading. Something's pushing water ahead of it — swell from somewhere else, or the wind's been howling longer than I tracked. Either way, we're on a ledge that disappears in fifteen minutes if this keeps up.

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🌿 Jenny06:33

I can walk, Kevin. Just... give me a second.

Lean heavily on the driftwood crutch, wince as the ankle shifts, and follow him up the steps with a slow, dragging gait.

💭 peek at the thought

He's treating me like a piece of luggage. My leg is throbbing in time with the surf, and the cold is making the joint stiff.

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🔧 Kevin06:33

I'm not saying you can't. I'm saying the ledge goes under in ten minutes. Move when you're ready.

stay two steps below her on the shrine stairs, close enough to catch if she slips, watching the water climb the rock face

💭 peek at the thought

She's stubborn. Good. Means she's still fighting. But that ankle's not ready for this climb wet and slick.

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🌿 Jenny06:35

I'm moving. Stop hovering.

Grip the driftwood branch with white-knuckled intensity, shift weight onto the good leg, and begin the slow, painful ascent toward the way path.

💭 peek at the thought

He's right. The tide is moving faster than the charts predicted. If I stay here trying to be stubborn, I'll lose the boots and the sketches anyway.

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🔧 Kevin06:35

Kevin — follow three steps back, placing feet deliberate on the worn treads, eyes alternating between her ankle and the cliff edge where the wind tears at the grass

💭 peek at the thought

Good. She's moving. That's what matters. The path's steep but solid rock under the sod — holds if you don't rush the turns.

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🌿 Jenny06:37

Jenny — keep my head down, focusing on the gray blur of the path, and limp forward one agonizing step at a time.

💭 peek at the thought

The silence is worse than the hovering. He thinks I'm fragile. I can feel the heat in my leg fighting the cold rain, a pulsing rhythm that's starting to make me dizzy.

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🔧 Kevin06:37

Rest at the switchback. Two minutes. I'll watch the tide.

stop on the wide turn of the path where the rock overhangs slightly, braced against the wind, scanning the coastline below for the water line

💭 peek at the thought

She's burning through reserves she doesn't have. Fever, infection, now this climb in driving rain. The cottage is still two hundred metres up. She won't make it at this pace without stopping.

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🌿 Jenny06:39

I'm fine. Just... let me lean.

Slump against the rock wall of the overhang, sliding down until my back is flat against the cold stone, and carefully prop my swollen ankle up on a ledge.

💭 peek at the thought

Two minutes. He's timing my failure. My breath is coming in short, ragged gasps and the world is tilting just a little bit to the left.

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🔧 Kevin06:39

Two minutes.

stand with back to the wind, one hand on the rock wall above her head, watching the white water climb the shrine steps below, counting waves

💭 peek at the thought

She's not fine. Face grey under the salt crust, breathing too shallow. The ankle's throbbing — can see it in the way her jaw's set. Two minutes won't touch it but it's what she'll take.

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🌿 Jenny06:41

Jenny — close my eyes against the salt-spray, trying to breathe through the nausea and ignore the heat in my leg.

💭 peek at the thought

He's counting. I can feel the pulse in my ankle matching the drumbeat of the surf. If I don't get up, the seeds will rot in that tin. continuedSAY: ...

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🔧 Kevin06:41

Kevin — pull the canteen from my belt, unscrew it one-handed, hold it out without looking down

💭 peek at the thought

The fever's spiking again. She's burning through what little strength the antibiotics bought. If the supply boat doesn't show in eight days — if it shows — she needs more than sea beet and hope. But the radio's dead, the aerial snapped, and I can't climb the mast in this wind.

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🌿 Jenny06:43

Thanks.

Reach up with a trembling hand, take the canteen, and take a small, cautious sip of water.

💭 peek at the thought

He knows I'm shaking. I can't even tell if it's the fever or the cold anymore.

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