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the old shrine · day 907 · evening

Evening at the ridge

Kevin and Jenny walk together toward the ridge as the sky darkens and the rain intensifies.

Kevin helped Jenny descend from the old shrine as the warm rain intensified. They examined the weathered carvings on the stones, but the humidity made the descent slick and treacherous. They turned back toward the cottage with Jenny's ankle beginning to throb.

🌿 Jenny07:19

The rain is getting heavier. We should reach the stones before the light goes completely.

Lean heavily on the driftwood cane, limping slowly toward the shrine.

💭 peek at the thought
Every step feels like a hot needle in my joint. I can't tell him how much it hurts; he'll just tell me to stop walking.

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🔧 Kevin07:20

Pace yourself. The stones aren't going anywhere.

walk beside her toward the shrine, matching her stride, one hand free near the cane in case she needs it

💭 peek at the thought
She's moving slower than this morning. Ankle's stiffening in the damp. I should've made her rest longer, but she wouldn't have stayed.

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🌿 Jenny07:21

I know. I just want to see the names before the rain washes them away.

Reach out to touch the weathered surface of a stone, tracing a worn carving with a wet thumb.

💭 peek at the thought
He thinks it's just the ankle. He doesn't see the way the island is shifting under us.

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🔧 Kevin07:23

They've lasted a hundred years of worse rain than this.

stand a pace back, hood dripping, watching her fingers on the carving

💭 peek at the thought
She's not talking about the names on the stones.

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🌿 Jenny07:23

(A short, dry laugh) Everything lasts until it doesn't, Kevin.

Pull my hand away and lean back on the cane, looking at the slope leading down to the cliffs.

💭 peek at the thought
He's so focused on the durability of the stone that he forgets the soil beneath it is practically liquid.

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🔧 Kevin07:24

You done?

step closer, boot finding purchase on the slick stone, arm extending toward her elbow

💭 peek at the thought
The ridge drops sharp behind the shrine. One bad step on wet grass and she's over. I didn't come up here to watch her decide.

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🌿 Jenny07:25

I'm done. Let's go back.

Shift weight to my good leg, wince as the throbbing spikes, and start turning toward the cottage.

💭 peek at the thought
If I stay here any longer I'll start crying and I won't let him see that.

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🔧 Kevin07:26

Slow. I've got you.

fall in on her right, hand hovering at her elbow, boots picking the driest line through the wet grass back toward the cottage

💭 peek at the thought
Good. Downhill's harder on the ankle than up. Stay on her bad side.

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🌿 Jenny07:27

way watch the step.

Grip the handle of the cane until my knuckles turn white, eyes fixed on the light in the cottage window.

💭 peek at the thought
He's being helpful, but it just makes me feel how much I'm failing.

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🔧 Kevin07:28

Watch me. Step where I step.

shorten stride, plant each boot deliberate on the slick track, arm firm at her elbow, guiding her down the ridge toward the cottage lantern

💭 peek at the thought
She's fading fast. Fever's climbing. The window light's just the lantern I left burning — she's reading it like a beacon.

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🌿 Jenny07:28

I can see where you're stepping, Kevin.

Follow his lead, placing my boot exactly where his was, though my ankle pulses with every impact.

💭 peek at the thought
I can't even walk a straight line to my own house.

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🔧 Kevin07:30

Next one's loose shale. Cane first.

test the next step with a boot, feel it shift, hold position until she transfers weight onto the cane and the inside line

💭 peek at the thought
She's tracking me clean. Good. Means the head's still clear even if the leg's failing. Two more switchbacks to the garden gate.

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