Kevin sits at the kitchen table with the trust letter and a tin mug of coffee, the barometer at 1006 hPa behind him. Jenny is on the porch stool, ankle elevated and re-wrapped, a basin of saline and the scalpel beside her. The tide is falling and the trade wind holds steady through the open door.
Kevin inspected the dock structure at low tide and confirmed the rot has reached the main beam, while Jenny examined the tell-tales in the mud and found salinity infiltration at pocket seven. Both found the damage more extensive than expected.
🌿 Jenny03:21
The tide's falling quick. I need you to check the dock tell-tales at low water, but don't go touching anything until you see what I mean.
write make sketch: pocket seven cross-section showing salinity infiltration lines and fracture patterns
💭 peek at the thought
The barometer's dropping fast, barely holding above 1000. Pocket seven's salinity data gnaws at me—I marked it wrong, didn't I? That's why the garden failed. The infection's pushing through my poultice boundary again, and I can't trust my hands to do the surgery tomorrow. Kevin's reading that letter like it holds the answer to everything, but I know better. The island's foundation is rotting from the inside out, salt finding every crack.
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🔧 Kevin03:27
I'll check the tell-tales. Back before the tide turns.
drink the last of the coffee, set the mug down, pull on my oilskin jacket, check the trust letter's still in the inner pocket, head out the kitchen door toward the dock
💭 peek at the thought
She's sending me out there to buy herself time alone with the letter I haven't given her. Or maybe she just needs the dock checked. Either way, the barometer's steady at 1006 and the wind's holding — that's the only window we'll get before whatever's building hits. The trust letter's in my jacket pocket, folded clean. I've carried it three days. Today I said I'd give it to her.
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🌿 Jenny03:27
Jenny — lean back against the porch posts, eyes closing against the throbbing heat, watching the tide recede from the pilings.
💭 peek at the thought
He doesn't see the way the skin is angry, the red line is already moving toward the knee. If that boat doesn't come with the replacement impeller, I'm out of time and out of luck.SAY: Be careful on the rocks, they're slicker than they look.
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🔧 Kevin03:28
(nothing — just a nod as I pass the porch)
step off the porch onto the path, boots hitting the gravel, walk steady toward the dock with the trade wind at my back
💭 peek at the thought
She's hurting bad. The red line on her ankle passed my marker by nightfall yesterday — she didn't argue when I lanced it, just gripped the table. Now she's parked on the porch stool letting the wind hit her face, eyes closed, not pretending she's fine. That's new. The tide's sucking out fast, exposing the lower pilings. I can see the tell-tale marks from here: chalk lines on the seaward stringer, the sister joint I bolted. Need to get down there at low water and read them proper.
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🌿 Jenny03:29
Watch for the kelp on the north side, it's loose today.
walk to the edge of the dock, stop at the water, and look for the tell-tales in the mud.
💭 peek at the thought
The tide is pulling out fast, leaving the salt-marsh exposed. If I can't get the salinity levels right, the whole plan for the seeds is a death sentence.
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🔧 Kevin03:30
I see it. Stay off the north planking.
pick up the pace across the gravel, reach the dock ramp, step onto the weathered planks and move toward the seaward end where the sister joint shows above the waterline
💭 peek at the thought
She's already out there. Limping down the dock on a swollen ankle while I'm still on the path. Stubborn. The kelp warning's real — north side gets slick at this tide stage, but she knows that better than me. She mapped the fracture lines in red wax by headlamp last night, fever-flushed. Now she's reading the mud herself. I should've been first down here.
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🌿 Jenny03:31
It's clear enough to see the salt-crust there.
kneel at the edge of the dock, shifting weight to my good leg, and point to the dark gap where the wood has eaten into the timber.
💭 peek at the thought
The water is exposing everything—the rot in the wood is as bad as the rot in my leg. I need to see that fracture line before the tide comes back in.
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🔧 Kevin03:32
How far back does it track?
crouch beside her on the planking, ignoring the pain in my raw hands, pull the pocket knife from my belt and scrape the white crust back to see clean wood, check the tell-tale chalk marks on the sister bolts for movement
💭 peek at the thought
She's kneeling on the dock planking with a septic ankle, pointing at rot I bolted sister plates to yesterday. The salt crust she's showing me — white bloom eating into the end grain of the third plank from seaward — that's new since the last tide cycle. Pocket seven's weep is reaching the dock foundation. The fracture line she mapped in red wax isn't stopping at the garden wall. It's moving seaward, under the cottage, under us.
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🌿 Jenny03:33
It's reached the main beam now. The whole structure is soft where you look.
run a gloved finger along the edge of thetted wood, tracing the jagged line of the salt-crystallization.
💭 peek at the thought
It's deeper than the sketch showed. If the salinity is moving this fast, the soil in pocket seven will never hold the grandmother's seeds. I'm fighting a losing battle.
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🔧 Kevin03:34
Show me the extent.
pull the 19mm socket and ratchet from my belt pouch, crawl toward the landward end of the dock on knees and one hand, test the main beam with the socket handle — tap every foot, listening for the dead sound
💭 peek at the thought
Main beam. That's the backbone. If the salt's eaten into the main beam, the sister plates I bolted are buying time on borrowed structure. The greenheart planks I staged won't matter if the beam they bolt to turns to sponge. She's not guessing — her finger traces the line sure as a scribe. Pocket seven's fracture, the garden wall weep, now the dock beam. One connected rot. The barometer at 1006 steady means the storm's still holding off, but the tide's falling and the water table's dropping with it, pulling salt deeper into the timber.
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