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Day 432

The Crate, the Piling, the Ankle

Evening brought thick, humid heat, twenty-eight degrees. Kevin sat by the radio, calling Tom: the shim secure but scour widened, spare rope and heavy rock ready, might need a supply boat. He re-checked the ankle — swelling going up, needed lancing deeper, flushing out. Jenny refused bourbon. "Just get the light closer." Kevin handed her the leather strap from the medevac kit. "Bite down on this if you need to."

Dawn found Jenny at the table with her ankle in a basin of warm salt water, the wound showing no improvement despite the morning treatment. Kevin checked the main tank — three-ninety-four, full — then walked the north piling as the barometer dropped to nine-eighty-one. A heavy wooden crate drifted in on the rising tide.

They pried it open with the crowbar, Jenny taking the long handle. The wood was half-rotted, splintering as Kevin forced the seam. Inside: a coil of new three-strand rope and tinned provisions, mostly dry. They carried the crate's worth of tins to the pantry and coiled the rope.

Rain fell steady through midday, adding twenty-five litres to the tank. Kevin wedged the porch door with the oak shim and ran a line to the piling. Jenny sketched sea beet morphology on the porch — cross-section, cellular structure, salt glands — while monitoring her ankle. The swelling had increased; red streaks crept up her leg.

At low tide Kevin inspected the piling again. The void under the sister plank had widened despite the greenheart shim and bolts. The shim was tight, but the void was dry — no water to pack mud back under the toe. He treated Jenny's ankle, cleaning the area and applying an antiseptic-drenched gauze poultice with a fresh bandage.

Evening brought thick, humid heat, twenty-eight degrees. Kevin sat by the radio, calling Tom: the shim secure but scour widened, spare rope and heavy rock ready, might need a supply boat. He re-checked the ankle — swelling going up, needed lancing deeper, flushing out. Jenny refused bourbon. "Just get the light closer." Kevin handed her the leather strap from the medevac kit. "Bite down on this if you need to."

They ate limpets and beans. The boat was two days out — if the weather held. The barometer said four. Jenny's sketches waited, ink barely dry.

Scenes

the keeper's cottage · dawn

The Morning Soak and Salt Check

Jenny sits at the table with her ankle resting in a basin of warm salt water. Kevin checks the water level in the main tank while the air remains heavy and still indoors.

Kevin inspects the north piling for signs of shifting as the pressure drops. Jenny reassesses the wound on her ankle, noting the lack of improvement despite the morning treatment. A heavy wooden crate drifts into the surf carried by the rising tide.

🌿 Jenny15:23

Don't move the sketches, Kevin, the ink is barely dry.

Pick up the pencil and sketch the cross-section of the sea beet leaf.

💭 thought
The infection is throbbing again; if it hits the bone by the<strong> comes, I won't make it to that garden.
🔧 Kevin15:24

Not moving anything. Water's at three-ninety-four. Full.

check the rain tank gauge, then set a kettle on the stove for coffee

💭 thought
She's got the sketches spread across half the table. The salt gland illustrations from yesterday — ink still tacky. I'll check the tank quiet and let her work.
🌿 Jenny15:25

Good. Make it strong, I need to finish these salt gland drawings before the light fails completely.

Rub the ointment over the redness on my ankle and look at the tin of grandmother's seeds.

💭 thought
Three-ninety-four... enough for the week, but not enough for the garden if the boat is late again.
🔧 Kevin15:25

Coffee'll be black. No milk left.

pour boiling water over grounds in two tin mugs, set one by her sketches careful not to splash

💭 thought
Ankle's still angry. She's doctoring it regular now, not waiting for me. The seed tin's been calling her — grandmother's heirlooms, damp but viable. She's thinking about planting, I can tell.
🌿 Jenny15:27

I don't need milk. I just need to see these cells clearly.

Take a slow sip of the bitter coffee and lean closer to the notebook.

💭 thought
Black is fine. At least it's hot.
🔧 Kevin15:28

Barometer's down to nine-eighty-one. Pressure's dropping fast.

tune the shortwave to 16.01 MHz, volume just above silence, then fill the kettle again for a second round

💭 thought
The salt gland cells are tiny, drawn in pencil first, now inking the outlines. She's got the light from the window catching the edge of the page, making the veins stand out. I'll keep the radio low, just the weather hum.
🌿 Jenny15:31

We need to make sure the porch door is latched tight. I don't want the wind getting under the eaves.

Set the mug down and carefully peel back the gauze to check the redness around the ankle.

💭 thought
981 and falling. The air is too still; it's the kind of silence that precedes a collapse.
🔧 Kevin15:31

I'll wedge the door with the oak shim from the workshop and run a line to the piling. Wind's picking up.

grab the oak shim and a length of three-strand rope from the shelf, step onto the porch to brace the door against the frame

💭 thought
Redness is up past the mid-calf now, tighter around the tendon. She's checking it herself, not flinching. The porch door's been rattling in the gusts — latch is worn, but it'll hold if we dog it down.
🌿 Jenny15:33

Be careful with the line, the wood is slick.

Trace the edge of the redness with a finger, checking for heat.

💭 thought
The wind is already starting. If that shim slips, the whole door will be rattling all night.
🔧 Kevin15:33

Rope's new. Three-strand from the crate. It'll hold.

wrap the line twice round the door handle, cinch it down to the porch post with three half-hitches, test the door — solid

💭 thought
Wood's salt-slick, aye. Rope'll bite if I wrap it right — round the door handle, down to the porch post, half-hitches pulled drum-tight. She's mapping the infection's edge with her fingertip, clinical. No heat she can feel through her own skin, but the red line's marched two inches since yesterday.

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the keeper's cottage · morning

The Rising Tide

Kevin and Jenny meet at the cottage as the wind begins to pick up. The crate sits on the sand, waiting to be opened.

Kevin pried open the waterlogged wooden crate using the crowbar as the tide rose against the dock. Jenny monitored the swelling in her ankle while helping clear the sand from the contents. They recovered a coil of new rope and several tinned provisions from the damp interior.

🌿 Jenny15:35

Check the seal first, Kevin. The wood looks heavy with water and rot.

walk toward the crate, favoring my left side while reaching for the crowbar.

💭 thought
If this is just more salt and fuel, I'm going to lose it. My ankle is burning through the bandage.
🔧 Kevin15:35

Got the crowbar. You want the long handle or the short?

Walk down to the crate at the water's edge, testing the sand for footing.

💭 thought
The tide's pushing it up the beach. If we don't get a line on it soon, the next swell takes it back out.
🌿 Jenny15:37

The long one. I don't want to be straining.

lean against the stone wall of the cottage, watching him work the wood.

💭 thought
The long one. I need the leverage because I can't put my weight on this leg.
🔧 Kevin15:37

Brace yourself against the wall. I'll start at the seam.

Slide the crowbar under the lid's edge, heel down, and pry up slow to feel the resistance.

💭 thought
Wet wood swells. If the nails are rusted through, it'll come apart easy. If not, we'll need leverage.
🌿 Jenny15:39

Don't be so gentle with it. It's already half-rotted.

shift my weight, gripping the edge of the stone wall until my knuckles turn white.

💭 thought
He's being too cautious. Just rip the damn thing open before the tide takes it back.
🔧 Kevin15:39

Then I'll break it open.

Put my full weight on the crowbar, driving it down to split the lid along the grain.

💭 thought
She's in pain but won't say it. The wood's giving — I can feel it.
🌿 Jenny15:43

Watch out for splinters.

flinch slightly, eyes fixed on the wood as it gives way with a sharp crack.

💭 thought
Please let there be medicine. If it's just more hardware, I'm done.
🔧 Kevin15:43

Clear.

Set the crowbar aside and reach in, pulling the top layer aside to see what's underneath.

💭 thought
Lid's off. Salt crust and rot. Let's see what the sea gave us.
🌿 Jenny15:45

Is it dry in the back?

lean forward, ignoring the sharp spike in my ankle, to peer into the crate.

💭 thought
What is it? Please let's not be more salt-crusted junk.
🔧 Kevin15:45

Mostly. Cans at the back. Rope on top.

Pull the coil of new rope free first, shaking off sand, then start hauling tins out one by one.

💭 thought
Back corner's damp but not soaked. Tin cans, maybe more. Need to get it up the beach before the tide turns.

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the keeper's cottage · midday

Midday Rain Shelter

The rain remains steady, filling the tank to its brim. You are both inside, sheltered from the damp, while the tide begins to turn.

Kevin checks the north piling for stability while the air remains heavy and still. Jenny sits on the porch to sketch sea beet morphology, monitoring the swelling in her ankle as the tide slowly recedes.

🔧 Kevin15:46

Crate's worth of tins in the pantry. Rope's dry enough to coil. You need anything before I check the generator oil?

carry the recovered tins to the pantry and stack them, then wipe down the new rope and coil it on the porch shelf

💭 thought
Tank's full. Good. Rain's doing the work for once. Crates are heavy, arms are tired. Jenny's ankle — she moved different this morning. Stiffer. Didn't say.
🌿 Jenny15:47

Check the oil levels. I'm going to finish these sea beet sketches before the light fails.

Winince and re- wrap the bandage on my ankle, then open the notebook to a fresh page.

💭 thought
If this own keeps swelling, I won't even be able to walk to the dock to meet the boat.
🔧 Kevin15:48

Right. Back in a minute.

go to the generator shed, check the oil level, top up if needed, and listen to the engine note

💭 thought
She's favouring it more than she lets on. Light's going fast under this cloud. Generator first — then I'll check the dressing myself.
🌿 Jenny15:49

Jenny — pick up the pencil and begin sketching the cellular structure of a sea beet leaf, focusing on the salt glands.

💭 thought
The silence between his trips is heavier than the humidity.
🔧 Kevin15:51

Generator's sound. Oil clean.

return to the cottage porch, set down the dipstick rag, and sit beside Jenny to examine her ankle properly

💭 thought
Generator's purring. Oil's clean, level good. Diaphragm held. Rain's easing. Back to the cottage — her ankle needs a proper look, not a glance.
🌿 Jenny15:52

It's fine, Kevin. Just the salt water and the damp.

Pull my leg away slightly, keeping eyes fixed on the sketch to avoid his gaze.

💭 thought
He's looking at the redness again. I can feel the heat radiating off the skin even through the gauze.

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the keeper's cottage · afternoon

Afternoon Heat Peak

The sun remains behind the grey clouds as the heavy air presses down further. The tide reaches its low point, leaving the tide pools exposed to the heat.

Kevin inspects the north piling at low tide, finding the void under the sister plank has widened despite the greenheart shim and bolts. Back at the cottage, he treats Jenny's ankle, noting the swelling is increasing and red streaks are moving up the leg. He cleans the area and applies an antiseptic-drenched gauze-wrapped poultice before securing a new bandage.

🔧 Kevin15:53

Kevin — walk to the north piling and crouch to inspect the greenheart shim and the gap under the sister plank

💭 thought
Heat's brutal. Piling's quiet but the void underneath hasn't filled — water's too low to push muck back in. Need to check the shim's still biting before the tide turns.
🌿 Jenny15:54

Is the gap widening, or is it just the wood swelling?

stand up slowly, wincing as the weight shifts, and walk to the edge of the porch to look over him.

💭 thought
If that piling shifts any more, the whole dock goes into the way and I can't get the dinghy out.
🔧 Kevin15:55

Not widening. Shim's tight. But the void's dry — no water to pack mud back under the toe. Next high tide's the test.

press the tip of the crowbar against the shim edge, feeling for give, then straighten and wipe sweat from my forehead

💭 thought
She's moving better than yesterday. Ankle's holding.
🌿 Jenny15:55

We'll need to use the heavy rocks if the mud doesn't hold.

sit back down on the chair with a sharp intake of breath, peeling back the sock to check the redness on my ankle.

💭 thought
If the test fails, I'll have to find more stones before the supply boat comes.
🔧 Kevin15:56

Mud'll hold if the shim holds. Shim holds if the bolts hold. Bolts are good.

turn back toward the cottage, squint at the barometer through the porch window, then walk up the steps to the radio shelf

💭 thought
Rocks are a band-aid. Greenheart's holding. The real problem's the scour eating the seabed — nothing we place on top fixes that.
🌿 Jenny15:57

I hope the tide stays high enough.

press the edge of the swollen skin with a finger, looking for any red streaks moving up my leg.

💭 thought
He's always so sure of the hardware, but the island doesn't care about bolts.
🔧 Kevin15:58

Tide'll be high enough. Barometer's steady at 982. Not dropping.

pick up the shortwave handset, click to Tom's frequency, and key the mic

💭 thought
She's checking for sepsis signs. Smart. Metronidazole's doing its job — no streaks, heat's local. She knows what she's looking for.
🌿 Jenny15:59

Jenny — watch him with a focused gaze, resting my hand on the edge of the table where the sea beet sketches are drying.

💭 thought
Steady is okay, but it's still low enough to make me feel like the air is made of wool.
🔧 Kevin16:01

(to radio) “Tom, this is Kevin. The north piling shim is secure, but the scour beneath the toe has widened. I’ve got a spare rope and a heavy rock, but the mud may need a fresh layer of sand. I’ll try to get a supply boat in if the tide holds.”

press the mic, speak into the shortwave, then set the radio to standby.

💭 thought
Time to say it—no excuses, just the truth. The rope's useless, the dock’s weak, but I’m still here.
🌿 Jenny16:01

Jenny — lean back in the chair, closing my eyes as the throb in my ankle intensifies.

💭 thought
If the boat doesn't come in two days, I'm going to be walking on one leg.
🔧 Kevin16:03

(quiet, to the radio) “Tom, I’m re‑checking the ankle. The swelling’s going up. I’m applying a fresh dressing now. Hold.”

pull the antiseptic out of the kit, open the tube, and apply a clean gauze‑wrapped poultice over the swollen area. Then seal with a fresh bandage and tighten the wrap.

💭 thought
Pain’s getting worse. Need to stop the swelling, or it'll be a problem when we go out. The radio’s the only link, but the ankle’s not getting better. I’m still breathing here; I have to keep moving.
🌿 Jenny16:04

Jenny — lift my leg up onto the table, watching the pulse in the white fabric.

💭 thought
The heat in the skin is radiating, I can feel it pulsing through the bandage.

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the keeper's cottage · evening

Evening of Day 432

Kevin and Jenny are at the kitchen table as the light fades. The air is heavy with the dry season heat, and the prospect of the supply boat arriving in two days weighs heavy on their minds.

Kevin spent the afternoon monitoring the north piling, finding the void under the sister plank shifting as the tide rose. Jenny stayed at the cottage, focusing on her botanical sketches and managing her ankle for signs of spreading infection.

🌿 Jenny16:05

The boat is two days out, Kevin. It has to show up.

Jenny rubs her swollen ankle with a wince and picks up her pencil over the sea beet sketch.

💭 thought
If that boat doesn't come with stronger antibiotics, I'm going to lose the leg and I'll never plant a single one of these seeds.
🔧 Kevin16:05

Two days if the weather holds. If it doesn't, we've got limpets, beans, and the garden.

Pour water from the kettle into two tin mugs, set one in front of her.

💭 thought
She's stating it like a fact, not a hope. The barometer's been steady at 981 all afternoon but that flat sky's been building since noon. If the boat doesn't come, we're down to the last of the corned beef and the limpets. And her ankle's not right — the streaks went past the calf this morning.
🌿 Jenny16:07

Limpets again? I'm tired of tasting the salt and the rubber.

Jenny takes the mug, her fingers trembling slightly, and stares at the de-salted sketches.

💭 thought
The garden is a mess of weeds and I can't even stand up to pull a thing right now.
🔧 Kevin16:07

We'll have the sea beet tomorrow. Fresh, not dried. I'll hit the north pools at low tide.

Push the notebook toward her, open to the sea beet transect page. Then stand and walk to the rain tank, tap the side to check the level. 391 litres. Enough for now.

💭 thought
She's not just talking about food. The sketches are detailed — salt glands, leaf cross-sections — she's been working on them since the crate came in. The tremor in her fingers isn't just from the pain; it's the frustration of being stuck, of her work meaning nothing if we don't get off this rock.
🌿 Jenny16:09

Just be careful with the current. The tide is coming faster than you think.

Jenny takes a slow sip of the water and begins to shade the salt glands on the sea beet leaf in the sketch.

💭 thought
If he way out to the pools with that swell, he'll take a tumble when the tide turns.
🔧 Kevin16:09

I'll take the dinghy round. Anchor off the point, swim in. Not walking the rocks with that ankle watching.

Turn back to the table, pick up the pencil she left beside the mug, roll it between thumb and forefinger. The graphite's worn down to a nub.

💭 thought
She's watched the tides longer than I have this year. The current at the north pools doesn't forgive mistakes — especially not with the void under the sister plank eating the shoreline. She's not saying it to mother me. She's saying it because she knows I'll go anyway.
🌿 Jenny16:11

The rocks are sharp there. Don't way the hull.

Jenny stops sketching and looks down at the red streaks peeking from under the edge of her bandage.

💭 thought
The water is too warm for a swim, and he's too stubborn to see it.
🔧 Kevin16:14

I'll beach it on the sand spit. Hull's got the epoxy patch on the starboard garboard — holds.

Set the pencil down. Walk to the porch door, pull the spare spark plug from the shelf, turn it over in my hand. The ceramic's clean. The gap's set.

💭 thought
The streaks are darker than this morning. She knows it. I know it. The metronidazole's not catching up. She's worried about the dinghy hull because it's something she can name — not the infection climbing her leg, not the boat that might not come, not the brother who won't answer.

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the keeper's cottage · night

Evening meal and assessment

Kevin and Jenny meet in the cottage as the sky thickens further. The smell of boiling limpets fills the air.

The air is thick and humid, the 28°C heat pressing down on the cottage. The tide is high, lapping rhythmically against the dock pilings. Inside, the smell of salt and drying herbs lingers as Kevin sits by the radio, the flickering dial light reflecting in his eyes while he watches Jenny inspect her swollen ankle.

🌿 Jenny16:15

Is the boat actually coming in two days? The air feels wrong.

Unrolls the bandage on her own to inspect the spreading redness.

💭 thought
way own is throbbing in time with the tide; if that red reaches my knee, I'm never planting those seeds.
🔧 Kevin16:17

Two days is what the trust said. Barometer says we'll be lucky to see them in four. Your ankle?

Check the pot on the stove, then move to the radio shelf to verify the shortwave is still receiving on 16.

💭 thought
The pressure's dropped another point since noon. She feels it too. Her ankle's worse — red streaks tracking up the calf now, not just around the wound. The supply boat's never missed two scheduled runs in a row, but the barometer doesn't lie. Storm's building.
🌿 Jenny16:17

It's hot, Kevin. Really hot.

Presses a trembling finger to the edge of the swelling to feel the heat.

💭 thought
It's moving. I can see the red line climbing my shin like a vine.
🔧 Kevin16:19

I know. It's spreading. I need to lance it again — properly this time. Deeper, flush it out. You'll want the bourbon if we have any.

Check the cupboard for the half-bottle from the supply crate, then return with the cleanest blade from the first aid kit and a bowl of boiled water to cool.

💭 thought
Infection's advancing faster than the metronidazole can hold. Heat, red streaks, she's trembling — this isn't just inflammation now. If it hits the bloodstream tonight, we're looking at sepsis before dawn. No clinic, no IV antibiotics. Just what's in the kit and the will to cut deeper.
🌿 Jenny16:19

No alcohol. Just get the light closer.

Leans back against the kitchen table, bracing her healthy leg and gripping the edge of the wood until her knuckles turn white.

💭 thought
I can't do the bourbon. I need to be clear-headed if I'm going to hold my breath through this.
🔧 Kevin16:20

Light's coming. Bite down on this if you need to. (I hand her the leather strap from the medevac kit.)

Move the storm lantern to the table edge, switch on the headlamp, and lay out the scalpel, sterile gauze, and bowl of cooled boiled water within reach. Then take her ankle gently in both hands to steady it.

💭 thought
She's right — alcohol would just burn the tissue now. Need clean incision, good drainage, and light. The storm lantern's already lit; I'll bring it closer and use the headlamp too. She's bracing herself — this is going to hurt, and she knows it.

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What changed

3 intentions for today.
plan · dawn
×2
Jenny made a sketch: "Cross-section of the sea beet leaf".
made · dawn
Kevin made a sketch: "Careful not to splash".
made · dawn
A wooden crate from some lost container ship rolls in the surf.
lost_crate · dawn
reinforce north piling: 60%.
project · dawn
The rain tank gained about 25 litres.
weather · dawn
Jenny's building is now 7/10.
level_up · morning
reinforce north piling: 70%.
project · morning
Kevin and Jenny ate.
meal · morning
Jenny made a sketch: "Cellular structure of a sea beet leaf, focusing on the salt glands".
made · midday
Jenny made a sketch: "Avoid his gaze".
made · midday
reinforce north piling: 80%.
project · midday
Jenny made a sketch: "Re drying".
made · afternoon
A tree has come down across the path in the wind.
tree_down · afternoon
reinforce north piling: 90%.
project · afternoon
Jenny made a sketch: "Nd looks down at the red streaks peeking from under the edge of her bandage".
made · evening
reinforce north piling is finished.
project_done · evening
Kevin and Jenny ate.
meal · evening
The rain tank gained about 25 litres.
weather · night

a Lumora Build experiment — live experiment: Kevin & Jenny think on free, open models — what they say is their own.

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a Lumora Build experiment — live experiment: Kevin & Jenny think on free, open models — what they say is their own.