Day 442

Waiting at the Shrine

Dawn came warm and wet, rain drumming the tin roof while Jenny sorted heirloom seeds on the sofa, ankle elevated. Kevin watched the tide lap the reinforced dock pilings, then walked down to check mooring lines as the water peaked. Back at the cottage, Jenny unwrapped her bandage — red streaks had climbed another inch toward her knee. Kevin repaired the radio ground stake at the garden frame in stages, reaching seventy percent by afternoon, and transmitted a medevac request: "St. Mary's Coastguard, Sorrel Island. Patient conscious, alert, fever rising, red line tracking above ankle. On antibiotics forty-eight hours, no improvement. Request urgent medevac or supply boat diversion. Over." No reply came. The handheld VHF failed to transmit on Channel 16. By evening, Kevin helped Jenny toward the ridge, path slick with mud, wind rising. She de-salted her sea beet sketches and confirmed the seed tin was dry and viable. At 0400, they sheltered at the old shrine under a tarp, Jenny curled with the tin against her ribs, breathing shallow. The shortwave battery died. Kevin held the microphone, thumb on the key, waiting for the supply boat due in two days. "Three hours. I'll be here," he said. Jenny whispered, "Stay. Just stay." The rain hammered stone. The barometer held steady at 983 hPa.

Scenes

the keeper's cottage · dawn

The Morning Lull

Kevin sits at the kitchen table watching the warm rain drum against the tin roof. Jenny rests her ankle on the sofa, sorting through heirloom seeds while the coffee steeps on the stove.

The morning rain continues, a steady warm pattering against the cottage roof. The tide is high, lapping at the reinforced lower pilings of the dock. Inside, the air is thick with the scent of damp earth and drying sea-beet leaves.

🔧 Kevin01:37

Coffee's almost ready. Want yours black?

Pour two mugs of coffee from the kettle, set one beside Jenny on the sofa. Keep mine in hand, steam warming my palms. Don't look up from the table. Watch the rain blur the cottage windows.

💭 thought

Rain won't let up, and neither will the silence between us. I watch Jenny's hands move over the seeds—steady, careful—like she's trying to grow something from what's left. I should say something, but the words feel like they'd crack if I spoke them.

🌿 Jenny01:39

Black. Thanks.

Reach for the mug, wincing as the movement pulls the swollen skin. Pick up a single dried tomato seed, rolling it between my thumb and forefinger.

💭 thought

He's being careful again, like I'm made of glass instead of muscle and infection. The ankle throbs in time with the rain.

🔧 Kevin01:39

That seed's from last year's batch. Still good?

Lean forward slightly, elbows on knees, mug cradled in both hands. Keep my voice low, eyes on the seed in her fingers, not her ankle. Wait for her answer, rain tapping the roof like a second pulse.

💭 thought

She winced again. Same spot, same pull. The infection's not backing off, no matter how clean we keep it. I want to say let me look at it, but she'll shut down. So I watch her thumb roll that seed—small, hard, alive—and I think how much she's carrying without asking for help.

🌿 Jenny01:41

It's dry enough. The humidity is the only enemy now.

Rub the seed over with my thumb, checking for any sign of mold or softness, then take a slow sip of the hot coffee.

💭 thought

If these don't sprout, the whole year was a waste. I can't let them rot in this damp.

🔧 Kevin01:41

Tin's sealed. Tape's holding. They'll keep.

Take a slow drink of my own coffee, the heat settling in my chest. Set the mug down on the table with a quiet clink. Let the silence stretch, comfortable as an old rope. Don't fill it.

💭 thought

Dry enough. She says it like a verdict she's willing to accept. The coffee steams between her fingers, and I notice she's not looking at the window anymore—she's looking at the seed, at her hand, anywhere but out. I know that rhythm. I've lived it.

🌿 Jenny01:43

I hope so. I need them to be in the ground before the boat comes.

Shift my weight, a sharp intake of breath through teeth as the ankle flares. I look down at the sea beet sketches, checking for curls on the paper.

💭 thought

He thinks the tape is enough, but the salt air gets into everything. My leg feels like it's breathing fire.

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the keeper's cottage · morning

Dawn - The Rising Tide

The rain slows to a drizzle as the tide reaches its peak, submerging the lower dock pilings.

Kevin walked down to the dock to check the mooring lines and secure gear as the tide began to fall. Jenny stayed at the cottage to unwrap the bandage and inspect the swelling and redness on her ankle wound.

🔧 Kevin01:43

Kevin — walk down to the dock with the greenheart offcuts and tools, wait for the tide to turn, then check the transom gap and drive shims.

💭 thought

Slack water's coming. Greenheart offcuts are stacked on the dock. Transom gap won't fix itself.

🌿 Jenny01:45

The water's too high for the transom today, Kevin.

wipe a bead of salt-water off the seabeet- sketch page with a dry cloth.

💭 thought

If the tide stays this high, the shims will shift before the epoxy sets. He's always rushing the wood.

🔧 Kevin01:46

Aye. Slack low's the one. Couple hours.

Turn back toward the cottage, stack the greenheart offcuts under the porch roof out of the rain, and check the dock lines while the tide's still high.

💭 thought

She's right. Water's over the transom line. Can't see the gap proper, can't drive shims clean. Waste of greenheart and tide window.

🌿 Jenny01:47

Don't get the grit on the sketches.

peel back the bandage on my ankle to inspect the swelling.

💭 thought

Two hours. My leg feels like it's pulsing with the tide. I need to see if the redness has moved up.

🔧 Kevin01:47

That's your ankle, Jen.

Step back onto the porch boards, boots dripping, and watch her unwrap the dressing.

💭 thought

She's looking at the wrong ankle. Mine's fine. Hers is the one with the red line tracking up the calf.

🌿 Jenny01:49

I know what it is.

press a finger firmly against the red streak to check for heat.

💭 thought

It's hot. Too hot. The redness is reaching further up the calf than yesterday.

🔧 Kevin01:49

Metronidazole's in the kit. Five tabs left.

Lean against the doorframe, arms crossed, letting her work.

💭 thought

Stubborn. Same as me. Red streak means the doxy's not winning yet. Might need the metronidazole on top.

🌿 Jenny01:51

I'm counting them.

trace the edge of the redness with a pen to mark the progress.

💭 thought

Five tabs isn't enough if this hits the bone. I can't afford to lose the leg.

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the keeper's cottage · midday

Midday Tides Turn

The overcast sky remains oppressive as the pressure continues to drop. You meet in the cottage to discuss the next steps for the infection and the boat.

Kevin repaired the radio ground stake at the garden frame and transmitted a medevac request for Jenny's worsening ankle infection. Jenny stayed in the cottage, monitored her symptoms, and used heirloom seeds to soothe her fever. The radio contact was made, but no reply was received before the scene ended.

🌿 Jenny01:52

The infection is tracking up my leg, Kevin. I need to check the radio again; I can't wait two days.

sits on the edge of the bed, tracing the angry red streak on her ankle with a trembling finger.

💭 thought

The red line is moving. If I don't get antibiotics from the boat, I'm not going to be here to plant these seeds.

🔧 Kevin01:53

Radio first. Ground stake at the garden frame — corroded, killing the signal. I'll fix it now. You stay off that leg.

walk to the garden frame to inspect and repair the radio ground stake

💭 thought

The red line's moved since morning. She's right to be scared. Two days for the supply boat assumes it comes on schedule — last three times it didn't. If the infection hits lymph nodes or bloodstream, we're past what doxycycline and metronidazole can handle. Radio's our only lever. Ground stake at the garden frame is corroded; transmission's weak. I can fix it, but tide's dropping and the transom gap won't wait. Need to choose.

🌿 Jenny01:53

It's not just the signal. My skin is literally hot.

reaches for the tin of heirloom seeds, clutching the cool metal against her cheek to soothe the fever.

💭 thought

He thinks he can just bolt the world back together and the rot won't go away.

🔧 Kevin01:55

Drink water. Now. Full mug. I'm fixing the ground stake — be back in fifteen with the radio up.

walk to the garden frame, pull the corroded ground stake, clean the contact points with the wire brush, drive in the spare copper-clad stake, run the heavy lead back to the radio shack, tighten the lug, key the mic on channel 16

💭 thought

Fever means systemic. Metronidazole covers anaerobes, doxy covers the rest, but if it's tracking this fast the dose may not be enough or the bug's resistant. She's burning through fluid. Needs cooling, hydration, and the radio working yesterday. Ground stake first — ten minutes, maybe fifteen. Then I key the mic on 16 and the trust frequency. If the boat's coming, they need to know it's medevac, not resupply.

🌿 Jenny01:55

fine. but if the way spikes, I'm calling anyway.

reaches for the water mug and takes a long, slow swallow, her eyes fixed on the red line climbing her skin.

💭 thought

He treats me like a faulty Yanmar engine that just needs a new gasket and a bit of oil.

🔧 Kevin01:57

Fifteen minutes. Don't move.

drive the copper-clad ground stake deep at the garden frame, solder the heavy lead connection, run the cable to the radio shack, terminate at the antenna tuner, key the mic on channel 16

💭 thought

She'll call if I don't. Good. The mic's hot in my hand — haven't keyed it for anything but weather and position reports in weeks. Tom's frequency. 0400. The Fiji freighter answered last time. Tonight I say his name. First, ground stake. Copper-clad, eight foot, driven deep into wet sand below the garden frame. Heavy lead soldered at both ends. Barometer's 983 and steady but the swell direction's wrong for this pressure. Something's building.

🌿 Jenny01:57

I'm not going anywhere, Kevin.

lies back against the pillows, propping the ankle up, watching the pulse throb in the swelling.

💭 thought

Fifteen minutes is an eternity when your blood feels like it's trying to escape your skin.

🔧 Kevin01:59

St. Mary's Coastguard, Sorrel Island. Patient conscious, alert, fever rising, red line tracking above ankle. On antibiotics forty-eight hours, no improvement. Request urgent medevac or supply boat diversion. Over.

hold the mic, wait for Coastguard reply, log the time and frequency in the notebook

💭 thought

Copper stake bites into wet sand. Good contact. Lead's heavy, solder holds. Cable run back to the shack — zip-tied to the garden frame posts, out of the tide line. Terminate at the tuner: clean the ring lug, cinch it down. Key the mic. Channel 16. Voice sounds strange in the speaker — mine, but not. "Pan-pan, pan-pan, pan-pan. Sorrel Island keeper's cottage. Medical emergency. Female, 38, lower leg infection tracking proximal with fever. Request medevac or supply boat diversion. Position 49-12 North, 006-18 West. Over." Wait. Static. Then — "Sorrel Island, this is St. Mary's Coastguard. Received pan-pan. Confirm patient conscious? Over."

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the keeper's cottage · afternoon

Waiting for a Sign

Kevin and Jenny are in the keeper's cottage at midday. Jenny lies on the bed with her ankle elevated, tracing the infection's progress. Kevin sits at the table, notebook open, watching the silent radio for any reply from the Coastguard. The air is still and overcast, the barometer steady at 983 hPa.

The rain has shifted from a driving lashing to a heavy drumming against the tin roof of the cottage. The air is thick with the smell of wet earth and salt. While Jenny's fever remains high and the red streaks on her ankle have climbed another inch toward her knee, the tide is rising steadily, pushing the surf against the lower dock pilings.

🔧 Kevin02:01

How's the head?

reach over and press the back of my hand to her forehead, checking temperature

💭 thought

She's counting the red lines like I count engine hours. Three doses of doxycycline down, five to go. Metronidazole's holding but the streaking's past the knee now. Radio's been quiet since the medevac call — Coastguard either didn't copy or they're deciding if we're worth the fuel. Supply boat's two days out if she shows. I should check the transom at slack, but I'm not leaving her alone with this fever climbing.

🌿 Jenny02:01

Hot. Everything's hot.

Shift away from his touch and press the cold seed tin against my temple.

💭 thought

His hand is like ice. My skin feels like it's on fire.

🔧 Kevin02:03

Tin's for planting.

let her hold it there a moment, then reach for the tin mug of water with the doxycycline tablet ready

💭 thought

The tin's cold through the tape seal. She's using my own trick on me — seeds against skin for fever. Stubborn as a seized bolt.

🌿 Jenny02:03

Not yet. Right now.

Take the pill from his hand and swallow with a painful gulp, wincing as the movement makes my ankle throb.

💭 thought

Everything is a project to him. Even the seeds I'm too scared to use.

🔧 Kevin02:05

Lie still. I'll check the radio log.

set the mug down, pull the radio notebook closer, scan the last entry — 0400 medevac request, position, symptoms, no reply logged — then key the mic on 16

💭 thought

She took it dry. Throat's raw from fever. Four doses down. The streaking hasn't slowed but it hasn't accelerated either. That's something.

🌿 Jenny02:05

They aren't coming today.

Close my eyes and focus on the rain hitting the tin roof, trying to ignore the heat radiating from my leg.

💭 thought

The radio is just static and hope. He thinks the act of checking will make it happen.

🔧 Kevin02:07

Didn't say they were. Said I'd check.

release the mic, let the static fill the silence, then reach for the damp cloth on the nightstand to wipe her face and neck

💭 thought

She's probably right. Coastguard launch out of St. Mary's needs four hours in this swell, and they'd have launched by now if they were coming. Which means we hold the line here. Next supply boat's the real window — two days if she keeps schedule. That's six more doses. Keep the leg elevated, keep the fluids down, watch for confusion or rigors. If she spikes tonight, I'll key the mic again regardless.

🌿 Jenny02:07

I know.

Reach under the sheets to touch the red line moving up my thigh, feeling how far it has traveled since morning.

💭 thought

He's so clinical with the log. Like I'm just another entry in the book.

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the old shrine · evening

The Ascent to the Ridge

Kevin helps Jenny stand as they begin the slow trek toward the ridge. The path is slick with mud, and the wind is picking up, carrying the scent of the sea.

Kevin attempted to call a medevac on Channel 16 but the handheld VHF failed to transmit. Jenny, despite her fever and pain, managed to de-salt her sea beet sketches and secure the heirloom seed tin, confirming the seeds are dry and viable.

🔧 Kevin02:09

Lean on me. I've got you.

wrap my right arm around her waist, take her weight on my left shoulder, start walking slow up the ridge path toward the shrine

💭 thought

She's favouring the left leg hard. The swelling's past the knee now — I can see it through the bandage. Every step costs her. I should've called the medevac yesterday. Should've keyed the mic and not let go until someone answered.

🌿 Jenny02:09

I'm okay. Just... watch the step.

Lean heavily into Kevin's side, grit teeth against the sharp pain, keep my eyes fixed on the muddy ground ahead to avoid tripping.

💭 thought

Every step feels like a hot needle being driven into my bone. Why did I come out here alone?

🔧 Kevin02:11

The step's fine. You watch me.

adjust my grip, shorten my stride to match hers, plant each boot careful on the slick stone and root, breathing steady against the climb

💭 thought

She's not okay. The heat off her skin feels like fever. Red streaks tracking up past the bandage edge. She'd walk on a broken leg if I let her. I won't.

🌿 Jenny02:11

The rain is getting worse.

Rest a shaky hand on his shoulder for balance, let out a shallow breath, look up at the dark stones of the shrine.

💭 thought

He's so steady, and I feel like I'm melting.

🔧 Kevin02:13

It'll pass. We're nearly there.

guide her the last few metres onto the level ground of the shrine ring, ease her down onto the flattest stone, keep a hand on her arm

💭 thought

Rain's the least of it. Barometer's been holding 983 but the swell's pushing different — west groundswell under the wind chop. Dock'll take a pounding tonight. But she's here, upright, moving. That's what matters.

🌿 Jenny02:13

way for a second.

sink onto the cold stone, lean my head back, and close my eyes as the throb in my leg pulses.

💭 thought

If I sit down, I might not be able to get back up.

🔧 Kevin02:15

Take your time.

step back a pace, scan the ring of standing stones, eyes finding the one marked 'E' and the softwood scrap beside it with the carved words, hands loose at my sides

💭 thought

Let her rest. The stone's cold but dry-ish. She needs the pause. I'll check the ring while she breathes — see if the carved stone's still where I left it, if the 'E' one's shifted.

🌿 Jenny02:15

It's burning.

Press a hand over the red streaks on my thigh, wince quietly, and watch the rain blur the ancient carvings.

💭 thought

Stone is cold, but my skin feels like fire. I can feel the heart beating in my ankle.

🔧 Kevin02:17

I know.

crouch beside her, pull the first aid kit from my belt pouch, peel back the bandage edge just enough to see, jaw tight

💭 thought

The infection's moving fast. Past the knee now, tracking up the thigh. Doxycycline and metronidazole aren't catching it — or the dose isn't enough, or the bug's resistant. She needs IV antibiotics. She needs a hospital. She needs the supply boat in two days to actually show up and have a medic aboard. I should've keyed the mic harder yesterday. Should've stayed on frequency until someone answered.

🌿 Jenny02:17

Don't touch.

Pull my leg away instinctively, hiss through gritted teeth, and stare at the rain hitting the stones.

💭 thought

Don't look so close. Don't see how bad it really is.

🔧 Kevin02:19

Right. I won't.

sit back on my heels, hands on my thighs, watching the red streaks climb past the bandage line, rain dripping off my hat brim

💭 thought

She's scared. Not of the pain — she's had worse. Scared of what it means. Scared I'll see how bad it really is and have to make the call she won't let me make. The medevac forms are in the ditch bag. The radio works. I just have to key the mic and not stop talking until someone hears me.

🌿 Jenny02:19

I'm... I need to sit.

Wrap my arms around my shaking knees, shivering despite the heat, and lean my head against the cold rock.

💭 thought

The fever is making the world tilt. The stones are moving.

🔧 Kevin02:21

Jen. Listen to me. I'm calling the medevac. Right now.

stand, pull the handheld VHF from the dry bag lashed to my belt, flip it on, thumb Channel 16

💭 thought

She's crashing. Fever spiking. The shivering's rigors — bloodstream infection. Sepsis. She needs fluids, IV antibiotics, a sterile bed, a doctor. She needs the supply boat to come in two days and not be empty. Or I need to put her in the dinghy and run for the mainland myself — forty miles in whatever sea the barometer's building, with an engine that vibrates above half throttle and a transom that's working loose. Either way I have to call it. Now.

🌿 Jenny02:21

The seeds... tell them the seeds are dry.

Reach into my pocket, fingers finding the cold metal of the tin, and squeeze it until my knuckles turn white.

💭 thought

He's actually doing it. The boat won't be fast enough.

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the old shrine · night

0400 on Tom's frequency

Rain hammers the shrine stones. Kevin kneels beside the dry bag, shortwave powered up, microphone in hand, waiting for the clock to tick 0400. Jenny lies curled on the tarp, eyes closed, breathing shallow, the heirloom tin clutched against her ribs. The barometer reads 983 and steady. High tide laps the base of the ridge.

Kevin shelters Jenny at the old shrine during a heavy, humid night, keeping her under a tarp as she battles a rising fever. The radio battery has died, leaving them in silence as they wait for the 0400 mark and the supply boat due in two days.

🌿 Jenny02:23

Kevin... check the radio again.

Reaches out a trembling hand to touch the cold metal of the tin, shivering as a fever chill runs through her.

💭 thought

If the boat doesn't come in two days, these seeds will rot in the tin along with me.

🔧 Kevin02:24

VHF's dead. Battery gave out. Shortwave's all we've got." (I set the mic down, pull the tarp tighter over her shoulders, and press the back of my hand to her forehead.) "0400's coming. I'll call then.

check Jenny's forehead for fever, adjust tarp over her, watch the shortwave clock

💭 thought

She's burning up and I'm sitting here with a dead VHF and a shortwave that hasn't raised a soul in weeks. Three hours to 0400. I should've keyed the mic hours ago instead of waiting for the clock.

🌿 Jenny02:25

Don't... don't leave yet.

Closes eyes against the wave of nausea, tightening her grip on the seed tin until her Analysis turn white.

💭 thought

He treats my leg like a Yanmar engine he can just bolt back together. I am melting.

🔧 Kevin02:25

"I'm not going anywhere." (I settle back on the stone, close enough that my shoulder blocks some of the wind off her. The mic stays in my hand, thumb on the key.) "Three hours. I'll be here.

sit close against the wind, keep mic ready, watch her face

💭 thought

She's not asking me to stay at the shrine. She's asking me not to leave her here alone while I go chase a signal that might not come. The tin's the only thing she's holding onto — seeds, not me.

🌿 Jenny02:27

Stay. Just stay.

Nests her head against his thigh, shivering so hard her teeth rattle against the tin.

💭 thought

The fever is a fire in my marrow, and the island is watching me burn out.

🔧 Kevin02:27

(Nothing. Just the rain on stone and her breathing ragged against denim.)

wrap my jacket around her shoulders over the tarp, hold the mic loose in one hand, keep the other on her shoulder

💭 thought

She's burning cold, shaking apart against my leg, and the only thing keeping her here is a tin of seeds and stubbornness. The shrine stones don't care. The radio doesn't care. Tom's frequency won't care either. But she's here, and I said I'd stay.

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What changed

3 intentions for today.

plan · dawn

×2

radio ground stake repair: 30%.

project · dawn

Jenny made a sketch: "Page with a dry cloth".

made · morning

The shortwave crackles with a voice, or static, at an odd hour.

radio_voice · morning

radio ground stake repair: 40%.

project · morning

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · morning

radio ground stake repair: 50%.

project · midday

The rain tank gained about 25 litres.

weather · midday

radio ground stake repair: 60%.

project · afternoon

The medevac request remains unacknowledged.

discovery · afternoon

The rain tank gained about 25 litres.

weather · afternoon

handheld VHF cannot transmit on Channel 16; only shortwave remains for medevac call

discovery · evening

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · evening

radio ground stake repair: 70%.

project · night

The rain tank gained about 25 litres.

weather · night

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