Day 635

The Storm Hits Sorrel Island

Dawn broke heavy and still, the air thick with salt and coming rain. The barometer read 991 hPa and falling. Jenny sat on the porch with her ankle wrapped in a damp mint poultice, her hands shaking too badly to document the fever. Kevin secured the garden tarp, driving fresh oak stakes and battening with timber strips, checking the north side tension on spruce stakes. The water tank stood at 397 litres, nearly full. Midday found Kevin at the dock in driving rain, wrestling the Yanmar gearbox and reinforcing the south piling with greenheart before the tide turned. Antibiotics were exhausted. The storm intensified. Wind howled through the radio mast at 55 knots sustained, gusting 70. The north dock piling failed at 0600; the dock listed hard to starboard. Kevin doubled the dinghy lines — stern spring, bow line, heavy weather warp to the ring — and ran a second spring from the dinghy's stern to what remained of the north piling base. Kevin keyed the radio: "Sorrel Island, Sorrel Island, Sorrel Island. This is Kevin, caretaker. Position 49-12 North, 006-18 West. Barometer nine-nine-zero and falling fast... Medical: one adult female, ankle infection recrudescent, fever thirty-nine point five, antibiotics exhausted. Request status on supply vessel. Over."

Jenny lay on the stone floor, shivering despite the heat. "I can't see the page through the shaking," she said. Kevin brought her water. The barometer bottomed out. The rain tank gained 25 litres, then 25 more, then 25 more. They ate. The wind caught the shed corner; Kevin went out and came back before the tide peaked.

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the keeper's cottage · dawn

The Heavy Air

Kevin sits on the porch steps, watching the barometer drop to 991 hPa. Jenny sits in a chair nearby, her ankle wrapped in a damp mint poultice cloth. The air is perfectly still and smells of salt and coming rain.

The morning air is heavy and still, smelling of salt and impending rain. The barometer is showing a steady drop to 991 hPa, signaling a shift in the weather. The tide is out low, exposing the slick rocks of the tide pools and the base of the dock.

🌿 Jenny20:21

The wind is going to turn soon. Check the tank again before the rain starts.

Reach down to carefully adjust the poultice on my ankle, wincing at the heat, then open the notebook to mark the height of the red line relative to the knee.

💭 thought

The pressure is dropping too fast. If the boat doesn't come in nine days, I'm going to be part of the soil here.

🔧 Kevin20:22

Tank's full. Overflow seal held last storm. You want me to check the garden tarps while I'm up?

walk to the rain tank at the back of the cottage, tap the side to confirm level, then check the copper spillway hose where it runs past the east foundation

💭 thought

She's right about the wind — barometer's dropped two millibars since I last looked. Tank's full at 394 but the overflow seal held through the last blow. Her ankle's the real gauge; that red line retreating means the antibiotics are winning.

🌿 Jenny20:23

Yes, make sure the south corner is weighted down. The wind will catch it from the ridge.

Lean back against the stone wall, watching him move, and try to

💭 thought

At least the water is secure. If the tarps hold, the seedlings might survive the night.

🔧 Kevin20:24

South corner's the weak point. Crab got the stake last blow. I'll drive fresh oak and batten with timber strips.

walk to the garden, inspect the shade cloth's south anchor point, pull the shredded stake remnants, drive a new oak stake deep, and secure the cloth edge with a timber strip battened down with galvanized nails

💭 thought

South corner took the worst last time — crab shredded the anchor point. Need to drive new stakes and batten it proper.

🌿 Jenny20:27

Make sure the nails are galvanized. The salt air eats through everything else.

Watch him work from the porch, my ankle throbbing in time with the hammer strikes.

💭 thought

He's fast with the hammer. I hope that wood doesn't split when the gale finally hits.

🔧 Kevin20:27

Got the box by the bench. Four left after this.

pull galvanized box nails from the tin at the workbench, batten the shade cloth's south edge with the timber strip, drive four nails through the strip into the new oak stake, then walk back toward the cottage checking the other three corner

💭 thought

She knows the salt better than she lets on. Galvanized box nails in the tin by the workbench — used three last repair, four left. Good for this and one more blow.

🌿 Jenny20:31

Check the tension on the north side too. If it sags, it'll tear.

Rub a hand over the hot skin of my calf, then open the notebook to sketch the path of the red streaks.

💭 thought

He's counting nails now. I'm counting the hours until the fever breaks or the infection reaches my hip.

🔧 Kevin20:33

Spruce stakes on north, drove them deep last time. I'll check tension anyway.

walk to the garden's north edge, tug the shade cloth to test give, confirm stakes are firm and cloth is drum-tight, then circle back to the cottage porch

💭 thought

North side's held — stakes are spruce, drove them deep after the last storm. But she's right to ask; sag tears cloth faster than wind.

🌿 Jenny20:35

Good. If that holds, we can at least sleep without worrying about the garden.

Sit up slowly, wincing as the weight shifts, and watch the grey light bleed over the horizon.

💭 thought

The air is too quiet. The island is holding its breath, and so am I. ...

🔧 Kevin20:35

Garden's secured. Dock's south piling next — needs the greenheart sister before the tide turns. Three hours.

walk to the dock, assess the south piling's lean, position the greenheart offcut against it, and start driving the 150mm stainless through-bolts with washers and nyloc nuts to sister it fast

💭 thought

She's watching the horizon like she's reading the barometer in the sky. The grey's thickening west — front's closer than the pressure says. Yanmar's vibration still needs the gearbox pull, but the dock's pilings come first. South one's listing. Greenheart sister plank and bolts are staged. Tide's low now, comes up in three hours.

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the keeper's cottage · morning

MORNING

The first heavy drops of rain hit the dust just as the wind picks up from the ridge.

Kevin secured the garden tarp against rising wind and checked the water tank, finding it nearly full at 397 litres. Jenny attempted to document her fever but her hands shook too badly to write.

🌿 Jenny20:37

The pressure is dropping, Kevin. Secure the tarp on the seeds.

Tightens the bandage around her swollen ankle and winces as the salt stings the wound.

💭 thought

If the boat is late and this fever spikes, I'll be buried here in the weeds.

🔧 Kevin20:37

On it.

Walk to the garden and secure the tarp over the seed trays with timber battens and rope.

💭 thought

Barometer's falling fast. Wind off the ridge means southwest — swell'll hit the dock before the rain gets heavy. Tarp first, then the dinghy lines, then the pilings.

🌿 Jenny20:41

Check the water tank when you go. I need to know exactly how much we have.

Leans back against the whitewashed stone of the cottage and closes her eyes.

💭 thought

He doesn't see the way the skin is darkening around the edge of the wrap.

🔧 Kevin20:41

Will do.

Check the water tank level at the back of the cottage before heading to the garden.

💭 thought

Tank's been holding at 397. Won't have changed unless the overflow leaked again. Check it quick while I'm out.

🌿 Jenny20:43

Don't let the wind get under the corners this time.

Reaches for the notebook to note the temperature, but her hands are too shaky to write clearly.

💭 thought

397 litres. Enough for now, if the sky doesn't quit on us.

🔧 Kevin20:43

They're staked. I'll double the lines.

Secure the garden tarp corners with extra rope and check the oak stakes are firm.

💭 thought

She's worse than she's saying. Hands shaking that bad means the fever's still there or the infection's spreading. Corners held last storm — oak stakes and timber battens. Just need to make sure the new rope doesn't chafe.

🌿 Jenny20:45

Watch the north ridge. The clouds are bruising fast.

Presses a cold damp cloth to her forehead, trying to dull the throbbing in her leg.

💭 thought

The wind is turning. If that tarp rips, I'll have to start the heirloom seedling management all over again.

🔧 Kevin20:45

Watching it.

Glance up at the north ridge, then finish battening the tarp corners.

💭 thought

Clouds stacking on the ridge means rain within the hour, maybe less. Wind'll back southwest with it. Dock takes the hit first — south piling's sistered but the north one's still shaky. Need eyes on it after the tarp.

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the dock · midday

Midday at the dock and cottage

Kevin works on the Yanmar gearbox at the dock while Jenny rests at the cottage, monitoring her ankle infection.

Kevin worked at the dock in the driving rain, struggling to pull the Yanmar gearbox while trying to reinforce the piling. Jenny stayed inside the cottage, managing her ankle infection and documenting the skin changes as the storm rolled in.

🔧 Kevin20:50

Kevin — file the brass shim to thickness, install between coupling faces, torque bolts to spec, re-check alignment with straight edge.

💭 thought

Two hundredths is enough to eat the output shaft in twenty hours. Brass shim, proper torque, and this coupling runs true.

🌿 Jenny20:57

Kevin, if you're hearing this, I need you to check the supply boat channel. Tell them I'm having complications with the ankle infection and the antibiotics are running low. I might not make it through the storm if you don't have backup medical supplies.

retrieve scalpel from medical kit, sterilize with alcohol and heat, prepare fresh sea beet-mint-honey poultice, apply to infected ankle with clean gauze, document infection progression in notebook with timestamp, check water test kit for pH

💭 thought

The infection is moving faster than the poultice can catch up. I need to lance again, this time with better tools, and keep the sea beet-mint-honey mixture on constant watch. The barometer dropping means I have maybe three hours before the storm hits and I can't risk the north ridge trek.

🔧 Kevin20:58

Kevin — reinstall Yanmar gearbox, align driveshaft, torque coupling bolts to 35Nm. Walk to south piling, inspect greenheart sister plank bolts at rising tide line.

💭 thought

Coupling's true now. Gearbox going back on. Tide's still coming up — need to check the south piling sistering before the water gets too high to see the bolts.

🌿 Jenny21:01

Stay dry, Jenny. Just stay dry.

wrap the ankle tighter with a fresh bandage, check the radio for anyES from Kevin, sketch the pattern of the infection in the margin of the notebook.

💭 thought

The rain has finally started, a heavy drumming on the tin roof. My ankle is throbbing in time with the storm, and the red lines are definitely closer to the knee now.

🔧 Kevin21:02

Kevin — key mic on 2182 and 4125 for 1300 radio check. Report position, weather, Yanmar status. Then walk back to cottage.

💭 thought

Gearbox seated, coupling spins clean. South piling sistering holds — both stainless through-bolts tight, greenheart sound. Tide's lapping the lower bolt heads. Good. Radio check at 1300 next. Then the cottage.

🌿 Jenny21:05

way yet... not yet.

soak a clean cloth in cold water, reapply to forehead, take the next dose of antibiotics, stare at the seed tin on the table.

💭 thought

The fever is getting heavy again; the room is blurring at the edges. If I can't get the temperature down, I won't be able to walk to the radio tomorrow.

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the keeper's cottage · afternoon

The storm intensifies midday

The rain has turned to a torrential downpour, and the wind is howling through the radio mast as Kevin meets Jenny inside.

The rain continues in a steady warm drizzle, drumming against the heavy-duty tarp over the cottage roof. Inside, the air is thick with the smell of damp earth and the medicinal sea beet poultice. Jenny lies on the floor, her body shivering despite the heat as the fever continues to take its hold.

🔧 Kevin21:08

Piling's gone. North one. Went at first light. Dock's listing hard to starboard.

strip off the oilskins and hang them on the porch hooks, water pooling at my boots

💭 thought

The gearbox is still sitting on the dock getting hammered by rain. I should've tarped it. She'll ask about the piling — what to tell her. The truth or the version that keeps her calm. Both feel like lying.

🌿 Jenny21:08

Check the lines on the dinghy first.

Lean heavily against the kitchen table, clutching my swollen ankle as a sharp throb of pain shoots through the joint.

💭 thought

If the dock goes, the boat can't land, and I'm stuck with this rotting leg.

🔧 Kevin21:09

Already doubled the stern spring and bow line at slack. Heavy weather warp off the bow to the ring. She'll hold.

grab a dry towel from the shelf and toss it to her, then move to the radio shelf and key the mic on 2182

💭 thought

She's right. Always the dinghy first. If the mooring parts in this swell we lose the only way off. The ankle's not good — she shouldn't be standing on it.

🌿 Jenny21:09

Tell the trust the pressure is dropping. I need to check the fever again.

Take the towel, wipe the cold sweat from my face, and stumble toward the notebook to

💭 thought

He's too optimistic; the wood is old and the surge is coming fast.

🔧 Kevin21:10

Sorrel Island, Sorrel Island, Sorrel Island. This is Kevin, caretaker. Position 49-12 North, 006-18 West. Barometer nine-nine-zero and falling fast. Wind southwest fifty-five sustained, gusting seventy. North dock piling failed zero-six-zero-zero. Dock listing starboard. Medical: one adult female, ankle infection recrudescent, fever thirty-nine point five, antibiotics exhausted. Request status on supply vessel. Over.

release the mic and wait, watching the S-meter for any return, the static loud in the quiet room

💭 thought

She's burning up again. The fever broke at 0300 — held for maybe six hours. Now it's back. The antibiotics are done. No more augmentin. Just metronidazole left and that's for anaerobic, not this. She needs IV fluids, real medical care. The supply boat isn't coming. The radio won't change that. But I key it anyway because that's the job.

🌿 Jenny21:11

I can't see the page through the shaking. 그런DO: Sit on the floor, leaning my back against the cold stone, and watch the rain race down the window.

💭 thought

If the boat doesn't come in nine days, I'm going to lose the leg.

🔧 Kevin21:12

Here.

wet a clean cloth in the basin of cool water, wring it out, and kneel beside her to lay it across her forehead and neck

💭 thought

Her hands are shaking too hard to write. The fever's spiking fast. No antibiotics left but metronidazole and that's the wrong spectrum. She needs cooling, fluids, rest. The radio's dead static — nobody's coming. I should sponge her down, get water in her, check the wound for spreading cellulitis. The dock can wait. The engine can wait. Everything waits.

🌿 Jenny21:13

Thank you.

Close my eyes and let the weight of the cloth hold me down, trying to breathe through the pulse in my ankle.

💭 thought

The water is cold, but my skin feels like fire.

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the keeper's cottage · evening

Evening - Approaching Storm

The rain intensifies as the light fades, and the wind begins to pick up from the southwest. The tide is out out, exposing the damaged base of the northern piling.

The air pressure drops steadily as the dry heat lingers, signaling an approaching front. Kevin spends the evening securing the cottage and checking the dock's structural integrity, while Jenny manages her swelling ankle and prepares the seeds for the storm.

🔧 Kevin21:14

Kevin — walk to the porch door and look out at the dock, assessing the dinghy mooring in the failing light.

💭 thought

North piling's gone. Dock lists starboard. Yanmar's the only thing keeping the bilge down. Need to check the sister knee bolts at low tide tomorrow — greenheart's sacrificial, iron holds. But first, secure the dinghy lines. Swell's building.

🌿 Jenny21:15

Check the cleats again, Kevin. The tide is pulling.

reaches for the notebook with a trembling hand, trying to record the temperature before the vision blurs.

💭 thought

The barometer is dropping too fast; if that piling doesn't hold, the dinghy is lost to the surge.

🔧 Kevin21:16

Cleats are sound. But I'll run a second spring from the dinghy's stern to the north piling base — what's left of it. Buy us hours.

Pull on oilskin jacket and boots, grab the coil of new half-inch three-strand from the porch, and head down the garden path toward the dock.

💭 thought

She's tracking the fever the only way she can. Cleats held last check but the swell's different now — longer period, southwest fetch. Dock lists five degrees starboard since the piling went. Lines'll chafe through by midnight if I don't double them.

🌿 Jenny21:17

Be careful, the wood is soft down there.

presses the pencil to the notebook page, forcing herself to write '988 hPa' in a jagged, shaky hand.

💭 thought

He thinks a rope will save the boat while I'm rotting from the inside out.

🔧 Kevin21:19

Got it. I'll keep the cleats tight and double the lines. Stay warm.

Pull a length of new rope from the porch, tie a fresh sling over the dinghy’s stern and run it to the north piling base, securing it with a quick‑tie. Then head back to the cottage to check the cleats.

💭 thought

She’s writing the barometer in the same hand that trembles from fever. 988 hPa— the drop is real. I can't let the dock give up. The wood is soft but the bolts are still holding… maybe.

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the keeper's cottage · night

The First Gusts

The first heavy drops lash against the tin roof. Kevin and Jenny are huddled inside as the wind begins to howl through the eaves.

The rain continues steadily against the cottage as the water tank reaches its maximum capacity. Jenny rests inside, managing her ankle pain while Kevin monitors the barometer, which shows the pressure dropping further, signaling a worsening storm.

🌿 Jenny21:21

Check the ties on the shed again, Kevin. The wind is catching the corner.

Pull the grandmother's seed tin from the high shelf and wrap it tightly in the dryest oilcloth to keep the damp out.

💭 thought

The pressure is dropping too fast. If this storm hits as hard as the barometer suggests, the half-finished garden will be buried. My ankle is throbbing in time with the rain, a dull, rhythmic heat that makes it hard to think straight. I need to make sure the seeds stay dry.

🔧 Kevin21:21

On it.

Pull on oilskin jacket and boots, grab the coil of 6mm chain and the two remaining 150mm stainless through-bolts from the workbench, head out the porch door into the driving rain toward the generator shed.

💭 thought

She's right. The shed corner's been lifting since the last blow. If that goes, we lose the generator and the spare fuel. Need to move now before the gusts hit thirty.

🌿 Jenny21:23

Don't stay out there too long, the tide is turning!

Wrap the seed tin in the oilcloth and Tuck it deep inside the waterproof crate under the bed, away from the leaks.

💭 thought

The wind is picking up speed; if the much loses its roof cover, the generator is ruined by the salt spray. My ankle feels like it's on fire, and the fever is making the edges of the room blur. I have to stay focused on the seeds—if those get wet, the whole season's hope is gone.

🔧 Kevin21:23

Back before it peaks.

Cross the slick grass to the generator shed, wind tearing at the oilskin. The corner post has lifted two inches — chain's slack. Drive a stake, cinch the chain tight around the post and the anchor eye, bolt it down with the through-bolt.

💭 thought

Tide turning means the surge will hit the dock pilings hard. Shed first, then check the dock lashings before the water rises too far.

🌿 Jenny21:25

Get inside! The barometer is bottoming out!

Pull the blanket to my chest and press the cold pack to the swollen ankle, waiting for the door to open.

💭 thought

The wind is screaming through the thatch now. If that shed goes, the radio and the tools go with. My own is a hot spike of misery, and I can feel the feverradi off my skin with every heavy thud of the rain on the roof.

🔧 Kevin21:25

Coming in.

Sprint back across the grass, rain horizontal now, burst through the porch door and slam it shut against the howl, latch it fast.

💭 thought

Barometer bottoming out means the eye's close. Wind'll back hard when it passes — that's when the dock takes the real beating. Shed's held. Get back, check the cottage shutters, then the dock if there's time before the turn.

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What changed

Jenny's injury has healed.

healed · dawn

3 intentions for today.

plan · dawn

×2

Jenny made a sketch: "Path of the red streaks".

made · dawn

A seabird chick has fallen from the cliff ledges.

chick_fallen · dawn

medevac preparation is finished.

project_done · dawn

The rain tank gained about 25 litres.

weather · morning

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · morning

Jenny made a sketch: "Pattern of the infection in the margin of the notebook".

made · midday

The rain tank gained about 25 litres.

weather · midday

×2

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · evening

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