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Day 639

Storm Front and Infected Ankle

At first light Kevin checked the south piling — solid, three millimetres play, no change. He returned for the 0700 radio sked but the shortwave gave only heavy static. Jenny logged the rain tank at 397 litres and the barometer at 989 hPa. She began debriding her swollen ankle but the scalpel slipped in her trembling hand, tearing fresh tissue. Kevin took over, cleaned the deeper incision, and applied a fresh sea beet, mint and honey poultice with a tight gauze wrap. He secured the east shutter with the final 150mm stainless through-bolt.

At first light Kevin checked the south piling — solid, three millimetres play, no change. He returned for the 0700 radio sked but the shortwave gave only heavy static. Jenny logged the rain tank at 397 litres and the barometer at 989 hPa. She began debriding her swollen ankle but the scalpel slipped in her trembling hand, tearing fresh tissue. Kevin took over, cleaned the deeper incision, and applied a fresh sea beet, mint and honey poultice with a tight gauze wrap. He secured the east shutter with the final 150mm stainless through-bolt.

The wind rattled the loose shutter. Barometer read 988 hPa. They ate cold limpet broth at the table. Kevin had the 10mm threaded rod and last through-bolt ready. The debridement had gone poorly; the ankle looked worse.

Warm rain fell in steady intervals, drumming the roof. Tide rose quickly, lapping the lower dock steps. Jenny sat on the porch, ankle throbbing. Kevin monitored the barometer — rapid fall, significant storm front.

Rain turned to downpour as wind shifted east. No record was kept for the afternoon and early evening.

At night Kevin aggressively debrided the infected wound, removing necrotic tissue and draining pus. The wound showed deep necrotic pockets extending toward the Achilles tendon; debridement reached viable tissue but could not fully clear the deepest areas without surgical tools. He applied a fresh sea beet and pine resin poultice. The procedure was painful, the wound remains angry, but drainage improved. They used the last of the sterile gauze and saline.

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the keeper's cottage · dawn

The Approaching Front

Jenny sits on the steps wrapping her swollen ankle while the barometer drops to 990 hPa. Kevin watches the thickening cloud layer over the flat sky, feeling the shift in wind moving in from the north.

Kevin checked the south piling at first light and found it solid with no movement. He returned to the cottage and powered on the shortwave radio for the 0700 sked, but the set only produced heavy static. Jenny checked the rain tank and logged 397 litres, then noted the barometer had fallen to 989 hPa. She began to debride her ankle and apply a fresh sea beet poultice, but the pain was sharp and the swelling had not receded overnight.

🔧 Kevin00:38

South piling first. Back by 0700 for the sked.

walk down to the dock to check the south piling

💭 thought
Wind's backing north. Barometer's still falling. She's moving careful but she's moving — that's something. Need to check south piling before the ebb tide drops it bare.
🌿 Jenny00:39

Don't stay out long. The tide is going out fast.

Tighten the wrap on my ankle and sketch the edge of a sea beet leaf in the margin.

💭 thought
The pressure is dropping faster than my patience, and if that storm hits before the boat, I won't be able to walk.
🔧 Kevin00:43

Won't.

walk down the porch steps and across the damp grass to the dock, boots finding the worn path without looking

💭 thought
She's watching the water too. Knows the timing. Good.
🌿 Jenny00:43

Jenny — stand up with a hiss and limp to the kitchen to check the water tank level.

💭 thought
He thinks he can hold the island down with sheer will, but the salt doesn't care about his schedule.
🔧 Kevin00:44

Kevin — reach the dock edge, crouch at the south piling collar, run fingers along the oak wedges and greenheart sister plank, checking for fresh movement or water seepage at the mortise

💭 thought
She's up and moving. Ankle's holding. Tank check means she's thinking ahead — water for the day, maybe the garden if the rain holds off.
🌿 Jenny00:45

Jenny — check the gauge on the rain tank and note 397 litres in the log.

💭 thought
If those wedges are shifting, the whole dock will go when the swell hits. I need to check the water.
🔧 Kevin00:46

Kevin — stand, wipe salt damp from fingers on trousers, walk back up the path toward the cottage

💭 thought
Three mill play unchanged. Wedges seated tight. Greenheart sister holding. Ebb tide's pulling the water clear — can see the bolt heads on the steel doubler plate, all four nylocs still flush. South-one's good for now.
🌿 Jenny00:47

Jenny — close the notebook and watch the clouds swallow the horizon.

💭 thought
He's back too soon. The air is turning too sharp for him to be playing the hero yet.
🔧 Kevin00:48

South piling's solid. Three mill, no change. Wedges and sister holding.

step onto the porch, pull the door open, move to the radio shelf and flip the power switch, letting the tubes warm up

💭 thought
Sky's closing in proper now. Uniform grey, no breaks. Wind steady northeast, cold bite to it. She's seen it too. Radio sked in twenty minutes — need the set warm and the aerial clear.
🌿 Jenny00:53

The radio's picking up static. Might need to check the ground stake.

Check the barometer again and note it's now 989 hPa. </think> Grab my field notebook and head to the dock to inspect the south piling collar.

💭 thought
He's counting on the ocean to wait for his schedule. The pressure's dropping faster than he's moving. I should check the south piling before the tide turns.

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the keeper's cottage · morning

Morning radio sked fails, storm closes in

Kevin and Jenny sit at the cottage table with tin mugs of cold limpet broth. The shortwave hisses static on Tom's frequency. The barometer on the wall reads 988 hPa. Wind rattles the loose shutter. Jenny's ankle is propped on a cushion, the poultice wrap damp at the edges. Kevin has the 10mm threaded rod and last through-bolt on the table beside the radio log.

Kevin secured the east shutter with the final 150mm stainless through-bolt, then turned to Jenny's ankle. The debridement went poorly — the scalpel slipped in Jenny's trembling hand, tearing fresh tissue and widening the wound. Kevin took over, cleaned the deeper incision, and applied a fresh sea beet-mint-honey poultice with a tight gauze wrap. The shutter holds; the ankle looks worse.

🌿 Jenny01:01

The shutter's loose again. I need you to help me bolt it before the wind catches it full force. The shutter's loose again. I need you to help me bolt it before the wind catches it full force.

Debride the ankle incision with sterile scalpel, remove devitalized tissue, apply fresh sea beet-mint poultice with honey base, re-wrap with clean gauze and elastic bandage, then retrieve the through-bolt and 10mm stainless rod from the tab

💭 thought
Nine hundred and eighty-eight. The drop from yesterday means the storm won't break cleanly—it'll linger. Kevin's holding that through-bolt like it's a lifeline, but the real problem is the ankle, the infection spreading, and I can't keep changing dressings if I'm fighting sepsis.
🔧 Kevin01:02

Shutter first. Then I'll hold the light for the ankle.

push back from the table, take the 150mm stainless through-bolt, washers, nyloc nut, and the threaded 10mm rod, and head to the east shutter with the heavy wrench

💭 thought
She's right about the shutter. The wind's already rattling it and the barometer's still dropping. But she's doing the ankle work herself again — scalpel, debridement, poultice — while I sit here with the bolt and rod on the table. She doesn't ask for help with the body. Only the building.
🌿 Jenny01:05

Jenny — limp to the porch, leaning my weight against the stone wall, and hold the shutter steady while he works the bolt.

💭 thought
He's right, the shutter is the priority before the glass breaks, but the heat in my leg is pulsing in time with the wind. I can feel the red line moving up my calf. neverSAY: Just make sure the washers are tight, the vibration will shake the frame off the hinges.
🔧 Kevin01:05

Shift your weight off that leg. I've got the shutter.

brace the shutter against the frame with my shoulder, line up the bolt through the existing hole in the greenheart sister knee, thread the washer and nyloc nut, and crank it down with the heavy wrench until the shutter's fast

💭 thought
She's holding the shutter with her bad leg taking weight. The cushion's back on the porch floor. She'll not say it hurts.
🌿 Jenny01:07

It's tight. For now.

Lean back against the whitewashed stone, breathing through the throbbing, and watch the grey clouds lower over the sea.

💭 thought
The bolt is holding, but my ankle feels like it's being branded. If this infection doesn't break, I'm not making it to the boat.
🔧 Kevin01:07

Come back inside. Light's better at the table. I'll do the poultice.

turn back toward the cottage door, holding it open for her

💭 thought
She's masking it. The breathing's too controlled. Ankle's throbbing hard enough to make her lean like that. Shutter'll hold for this blow — greenheart knee, stainless through-bolt, nyloc — but she needs the ankle re-dressed proper, not just watched.
🌿 Jenny01:11

Give me a minute.

Limp across the threshold, wincing as the ankle shifts, and sink heavily into the kitchen chair by the wood stove.

💭 thought
I can't stay out here in the damp. The salt air is making the skin feel tighter.
🔧 Kevin01:11

Kettle's warm. I'll bring the kit.

fetch the first aid kit from the shelf, the honey jar, the basin with de-salted sea beet and mint, and the sterilized scalpel, and set them on the table beside her chair

💭 thought
A minute's what she needs. The chair takes her weight off the ankle. Stove's throwing heat. I've got the scalpel sterilized from yesterday, fresh sea beet and mint in the basin, honey jar on the shelf, clean gauze and elastic wrap in the medical kit. She'll let me work if I don't make a thing of it.

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the keeper's cottage · midday

Midday radio sked and shutter check

Kevin and Jenny sit at the kitchen table. The 1900 sked is hours off. Kevin has the threaded 10mm rod ready as a spare through-bolt. Jenny's ankle is wrapped, elevated, the poultice steaming faintly. The barometer reads 990 hPa, steady. Outside, the wind has not yet backed west. They eat cold corned beef from the tin and watch the grey sea.

The warm rain continues in steady intervals, drumming against the cottage roof as the air pressure continues to drop. The tide is rising quickly, lapping at the lower steps of the dock and beginning to cover the rocks. Jenny sits on the porch, her ankle throbbing despite the sea beet poultice, while Kevin monitors the barometer, noting the rapid fall suggests a significant storm front.

🔧 Kevin01:13

Radio at nineteen. If the voice comes through again — I'll answer proper this time.

eat corned beef from the tin, watch the grey sea through the window

💭 thought
The silence between us isn't the bad kind anymore. It's the kind that comes after you've both seen the worst and you're still here. The corned beef tastes like salt and metal but it's hot in the belly. Her ankle's wrapped tight, the poultice doing its work. Barometer holding at 990. Wind hasn't backed. South piling held. We're still here.
🌿 Jenny01:15

The tide is coming in, Kevin.

rub the throbbing in my ankle, look at the sketch of the sea beet glands.

💭 thought
He's looking at the horizon like he can command the boat to come faster, but the salt is already in the air.
🔧 Kevin01:15

Aye. High water in forty minutes. South piling's got the greenheart sister and the new lashings. It'll hold.

wipe corned beef fat from fingers on a rag, glance at the barometer again

💭 thought
She's watching the water, not me. The sketch, the ankle, the tide — all of it measured. She knows the rhythms better than she lets on.
🌿 Jenny01:17

Everything moves through the salt eventually.

shift my weight, flinch as the heat in the ankle pulses against the poultice.

💭 thought
He thinks the wood will stop the rot, but the infection is already moving under my skin.
🔧 Kevin01:17

The sea beet survives it. The limpets. The kale under the sailcloth. We're still here too.

pour the last of the tea from the pot into her tin mug, set it on the table within reach of her good hand

💭 thought
That's not about the ankle. That's about the tin marked E at the shrine. The letter in the dry bag. The voice on the radio. Everything we've buried here.
🌿 Jenny01:19

I hope the seeds are stubborn.

reach for the mug, fingers trembling as I watch the rain hit the stone walls.

💭 thought
He talks about survival like it's a choice, but I'm just counting the days until the fever breaks.
🔧 Kevin01:19

They are. Tin E's sealed. High shelf. Dry paper and desiccant. Tomato, pepper, basil, sea beet — all viable. I checked them myself.

push the mug closer so she doesn't have to stretch, pull my chair back from the table

💭 thought
The tremor in her fingers isn't the fever. It's the weight of everything she's carried since the crate came ashore. The seeds. The garden. Me. She thinks I don't see it.
🌿 Jenny01:21

Don't let them get damp.

take a sip of the warm tea, eyes fixed on the sketch of the sea beet's morphology.

💭 thought
He's so sure of the tin, but the soil is the thing that's failing.

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the keeper's cottage · afternoon

The Storm Approaches

The rain turns to a downpour as the wind begins to shift from the east.

No narrator was available, so nothing about this stretch was recorded.

🌿 Jenny01:27

Kevin, check the radio again. The wind is turning.

pull the leg up onto the chair and wince as the movement shifts the swelling.

💭 thought
The pressure is dropping too fast; if the boat comes in this, they won't even see the island.
🔧 Kevin01:27

On it.

Walk to the cottage kitchen and power on the shortwave radio, adjusting the squelch and tuning through the marine bands and Tom's frequency.

💭 thought
Wind shifting east means the front's turning on us. Barometer's already at 989 and falling. Radio was static at 0700 but the aerial insulator shattered in the last blow — might be picking up something now with the wind shift. Need to check it before the squall hits proper.
🌿 Jenny01:29

Jenny — reach for the notebook and start to sketch the way the clouds are beginning to bruise over the ridge.

💭 thought
Just static. If he's stuck on the mainland, I'm completely alone with this leg.
🔧 Kevin01:29

Nothing on any band. Insulator's shot — too much static. Wind's backing northeast. Dock's going to take a beating on this tide.

Step out onto the porch, pull the collar of my oilskin up, and scan the dock and mooring lines, checking chafe points and the south piling's wedges.

💭 thought
Radio's still dead air on the scheduled bands. Tom's frequency — 4125 kHz — nothing but atmospheric crackle. The shattered insulator on the mast is killing reception. Might try the spare ceramic I filed and taped last week, but not in this rain. Wind's backing northeast now, steadying. That's the direction the swell comes from. Dock lines will take the load in an hour.
🌿 Jenny01:31

Check the cleats again. The tide is coming in fast.

squeeze the cold pack on my ankle, feeling the heat radiate through the fabric.

💭 thought
If the dock goes, the dinghy goes, and I'm stuck here with the rot.
🔧 Kevin01:31

Checking now.

Walk down the garden path to the dock, moving quickly against the wind, and inspect each cleat bolt, the mooring ring wedges, and the stern spring lines for chafe or slack.

💭 thought
She's right. Tide's pushing hard against the wind now — northeast swell meeting flood current. The cleats on the dock took a hammering last storm. The greenheart sister plank held but the bolts work loose in saturated wood. Need to check all four, plus the mooring ring mortise where the oak wedges are seated. If one pulls, the dinghy goes broadside into the pilings.
🌿 Jenny01:33

Watch the spring lines! They're pulling hard.

lean forward toward the window, watching the waves break against the whitewashed stone.

💭 thought
The water is rising too quickly already. If those lines snap, the dinghy is lost to the surf.
🔧 Kevin01:34

They're tight. Bow line's jerking hard — dinghy's taking green water over the bow.

Grab the bow line where it leads to the forward cleat, check the knot and the cleat horns for slip, then move to the stern springs and test each for heat from friction, working fast in the driving rain.

💭 thought
She sees it from the porch — the stern springs are singing under load. The doubled line on the mooring ring and the second spring on the north piling. Both tight as fiddle strings. The dinghy's bow is driving into the chop, jerking at the bow line. If a cleat fails or a line parts, she goes stern-first into the south piling. The oak wedges in the mortise are holding but the wood around them is pulping. Rain's horizontal now. Can't hear the radio from here anyway.
🌿 Jenny01:35

Watch for chafe on the bow line!

grip the edge of the porch railing, knuckles white as the throbbing in my ankle syncs with the wind.

💭 thought
If the dinghy gets smashed, I have no way to get to the mainland.
🔧 Kevin01:36

Chafing gear's gone. Slipping the bow line now — need slack to re-lead.

Uncleat the bow line fast, feed it through the dinghy's bow fairlead to fresh rope, re-cleat it with a round turn and two half hitches, then seize the chafe point with sail twine from my pocket.

💭 thought
Bow line's sawing through the chafing gear — the old canvas wrap's shredded. One more surge and it parts. Need to slip it and re-lead through the fairlead with the spare heavy weather line from the ditch bag, or serve it with sail twine if there's time. Tide's still rising. Next hour's the worst.

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the keeper's cottage · evening

A Quiet Stretch

Back at the cottage.

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🌿 Jenny01:39

The barometer is crashing. It's coming.

Sit on the porch step, prop the swollen ankle up on a crate, and watch the clouds darken the horizon.

💭 thought
The pressure is dropping too fast. My ankle feels like it's being squeezed in a vise. I need to check the radio before the storm really hits.
🔧 Kevin01:39

0530 piling check held. Three mil play, no change. Come-along bit clean. Wedges seated." (I move to the radio shelf, flip the power, twist the squelch.) "0700 sked was dead. Static only. Trying Tom's frequency now.

power on the shortwave, tune to Tom's frequency, key the mic — "Sorrel Island, Sorrel Island, this is Kevin. Over."

💭 thought
She's right. 988 and falling fast — this isn't a squall, it's a proper blow. Need the dinghy triple-lashed, shutters dogged before the wood swells, generator shed battened. And the radio aerial insulator's already cracked; one good gust takes the mast.
🌿 Jenny01:41

The tide is coming in fast, Kevin. Look at the water.

Reach for the sketchbook and draw a quick, jagged line representing the storm front's edge.

💭 thought
He's so focused on the bolts and the radio while the sky is turning bruised. My leg is pulsing in time with the tide.
🔧 Kevin01:46

Spring tide with a falling glass. Surge'll add a foot, maybe two." (I glance through the porch door at the dock, then back to the radio, hand on the key.) "Sorrel Island, Sorrel Island, this is Kevin. Over." (Static. I wait, finger off the key.) "Dinghy's got the storm anchor out, double stern springs, bow line slack for swell. But if the piling shears —

step to the porch rail, eyes on the dock and the water climbing the planks, one hand still on the radio mic

💭 thought
Tide's pushing earlier than the tables. Barometer dropping, wind backing — surge on top of spring tide. Dock's already taking green water. If the south piling goes, the dinghy goes with it.
🌿 Jenny01:49

I'll check the generator after this. Make sure it's secure.

Stand up slowly, keeping weight on the good leg, and walk toward the cottage where I can see the generator covered with the tarp.

💭 thought
The water is already touching the second dock plank. He's right, the piling could go. I need to get to the seed tin before the cottage gets water.
🔧 Kevin01:49

Shed's ratchet-strapped. Four points. Tarp's battened with split timber. Fuel drum's chocked aft of the cottage." (I don't look away from the water.) "Sit down, Jen. Ankle takes weight, wound opens. You know that.

keep watching the dock, the south piling where the wedges sit, the dinghy dancing on its lines — key the mic again — "Sorrel Island, Sorrel Island, this is Kevin. Over."

💭 thought
She shouldn't be walking on that ankle. Not with the swelling up the calf. But she'll do it anyway — same way I'd do it. Generator shed's lashed, tarp battened, fuel drum chocked. She'll verify what I already know. Let her.
🌿 Jenny01:55

Not now, Kevin. I need to secure the seed tin. The tin's too high. I need to move it.

Make toward the cottage, favoring my good leg, and head for the high shelf where the heirloom seeds are stored. </think> Climb the cottage steps two at a time to the pantry, grab the seed tin, and carry it down to the generator where I can

💭 thought
My ankle throbs with each heartbeat, the poultice doing nothing but drawing heat. I need to get to the seed tin before the water reaches the porch. The water's already splashing against the third plank. My ankle's throbbing, but I can't let the seeds go under.
🔧 Kevin01:56

I'll get it. You sit." (I'm already moving past her, shoulder through the cottage door.) "Generator's done. Radio's next. Then the shutters.

cross the kitchen in three strides, pull the step stool from the corner, climb up, take the heavy rusted tin E from the high pantry shelf, descend, carry it to the generator shed, set it on the raised pallet beside the fuel drum, tap the li

💭 thought
She's not stopping. High shelf means the step stool — means putting weight on the bad ankle. Tin E's heavy, rusted, sealed. If she drops it, we lose twelve viable packets. If she falls, we lose more.

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the keeper's cottage · night

A Quiet Stretch

Back at the cottage.

Kevin aggressively debrided Jenny's infected ankle wound, removing necrotic tissue and draining pus, then applied a fresh sea beet and pine resin poultice. The procedure was painful and the wound remains angry, but the drainage improved. They used the last of the sterile gauze and saline.

🌿 Jenny01:59

Kevin, the infection's getting worse. I need you to help me debride again - more aggressively this time. And I need pine resin mixed with the sea beet poultice.

Retrieve the sea beet poultice from the cottage, gather fresh mint and honey for the mixture, locate pine resin in the woodshed, prepare the debridement tools with saline solution, begin the more aggressive cleaning of the ankle wound while

💭 thought
The poultice isn't working - the swelling's getting worse and the infection's tracking past the margin. I need to try the pine resin mixture, but I'm running out of sea beet and the antibiotics are nearly gone. This ankle is going to take me under if I don't act fast.
🔧 Kevin01:59

Pine resin's in the woodshed, third shelf. I'll get it. You sit.

walk to the woodshed, retrieve the jar of pine resin from the third shelf, return to the porch, set it down beside the poultice bowl, pick up the scalpel and sterilize the blade in the flame of the storm lantern

💭 thought
She's asking me to cut deeper into her own flesh. The swelling hasn't gone down, the heat's still there, and now she wants pine resin — old sailors' trick, draws poison but burns like hell. My hands were steady at 0600. They're steady now. But the scalpel slipped last time because *she* was holding it. This time I hold it.
🌿 Jenny02:11

Be careful with the blade. The tissue is so angry.

Flinch as the cold steel touches the skin, grip the edge of the stone bench, watch the blood mix with the saline in the bowl.

💭 thought
He's being quiet again. That silence is more heavy than the storm. If I can't get this infection cleared out, I won't even be able to walk to the north ridge.
🔧 Kevin02:11

Breath slow. In through the nose, out through the mouth. I'm only taking what's already dead.

position the scalpel at the edge of the necrotic tissue, make the first careful incision along the swollen margin, let the pus and dead fluid drain into the bowl, wipe the blade clean on sterile gauze, continue debriding in small controlled

💭 thought
Angry tissue bleeds. That's good — means it's alive. Means it'll fight. The resin'll seal it after, but first I need to take what's dead. She's watching the blood. Let her watch. She needs to see it come clean.

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What changed

Jenny's injury has healed.
healed · dawn
3 intentions for today.
plan · dawn
×2
A rat has gotten into the pantry.
rat · dawn
Jenny made a sketch: "Edge of a sea beet leaf in the margin".
made · dawn
shortwave radio still not receiving clear signals despite recent insulator repair; ground stake or coax likely at fault
discovery · dawn
barometer falling faster than previous day; 989 hPa at dawn indicates storm front within 12-18 hours
discovery · dawn
The rain tank gained about 25 litres.
weather · morning
Kevin and Jenny ate.
meal · morning
Jenny made a sketch: "The sea beet glands".
made · midday
Jenny made a sketch: "The sea beet's morphology".
made · midday
A sudden squall sweeps through — wind first, then a wall of rain.
squall · midday
heirloom seed viability check: 36%.
project · midday
Jenny made a sketch: "Way the clouds are beginning to bruise over the ridge".
made · afternoon
No model answered — the scene closed quietly on its own.
quiet_transition · afternoon
Gave up on "make" after 3 failed attempts.
job_dropped · evening
No model answered — the scene closed quietly on its own.
quiet_transition · evening
Kevin and Jenny ate.
meal · evening
Found: sterile gauze.
item · night
ankle wound has deep necrotic pockets extending toward Achilles tendon; debridement reached viable tissue but could not fully clear deepest areas without surgical tools
discovery · night

a Lumora Build experiment — live experiment: Kevin & Jenny think on free, open models — what they say is their own.

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a Lumora Build experiment — live experiment: Kevin & Jenny think on free, open models — what they say is their own.