Day 842

Squall on Sorrel Island

Dawn brought static on the shortwave. Kevin transmitted the 0600 position report — "Sorrel Island, position 49-12 North, 006-18 West. Barometer nine-eight-two rising. Over" — and received only a fragmented news broadcast. He handed Jenny a mug of limpet broth with the first trimethoprim tablet. "Here. Drink it all," he said. She swallowed. "Next dose at twenty hundred. Keep the leg up." "I'll try."

They walked to the garden with seed packets and a trowel. Clouds stacked low southwest. Kevin checked the generator; fuel was good, tank full. Jenny knelt at the first bed, planting heirloom tomato and pepper seeds, ankle propped on a crate. "Cloud's building southwest. Might get rain by afternoon," Kevin said. "Good for the garden, I think."

By midday the barometer fell to 978. Humidity thickened. "The pressure is dropping fast. We need to get these in the ground before the wind shifts," Jenny said. Kevin split the work: "Take the kale packet. I'll finish peppers and beans. You stay on tomatoes." "On it. Just keep an eye on those clouds."

Rain lashed the roof as evening came. Wind howled through the eaves. The barometer read 976 hPa. Jenny tried to stake tomatoes from the porch steps. "The soil is too saturated, Kevin! If we don't plant now, the runoff will take them!" "Soil's not too saturated for stakes. It's too saturated for you to be standing on it. Get back inside." "I'm not sitting here while the garden washes away!" "Then plant from the porch steps. I'll bring the beds to you."

The supply boat remained two days out. A jellyfish bloom drifted pale in the bay. The rain tank gained 100 litres. A rat had gotten into the pantry. They ate dinner listening to the storm.

Scenes

the keeper's cottage · dawn

Morning Dose and Drift

Kevin prepares the first dose of antibiotics for Jenny while the tide begins to pull from the dock. Jenny sits on the steps with her ankle propped on a crate, watching the driftwood drift toward the north sand.

Kevin transmitted the 0600 position report on the shortwave and received only static and a fragmented news broadcast. Jenny took her first trimethoprim dose in the limpet broth and began sorting heirloom seeds on the porch while monitoring her ankle for spreading redness.

🔧 Kevin09:42

Here. Drink it all.

Set the tin mug on the step beside her, the broth steaming with the crushed tablet dissolved in it, then sit on the porch edge with my own mug and watch the driftwood move north.

💭 thought

Tide's dropping clean. Good. Means the dock bolts held. Need to get the first dose into her before the broth goes cold — trimethoprim's not the right drug but it's the only drug. Twenty-four hours to see if the streaks stop climbing.

🌿 Jenny09:43

I know.

Take the mug, sip the bitter broth, and watch the tide recede.

💭 thought

My ankle is a fire, but the seeds are the only thing that isn't burning.

🔧 Kevin09:44

Next dose at twenty hundred. Keep the leg up.

Take a slow sip of my own broth, eyes tracking the driftwood line moving north with the ebb, the barometer's steady rise a quiet thing at my back.

💭 thought

She took it without argument. That's either trust or exhaustion. The streaks were at mid-thigh yesterday — if they've reached the groin by morning, I'm keying the mic for a medevac regardless of what the barometer says.

🌿 Jenny09:45

I'll try.

Lean back against the stone wall and feel the weight of the clouds overhead.

💭 thought

If I can't plant them tomorrow, the island will just swallow them whole.

🔧 Kevin09:46

Cloud's building southwest. Might get rain by afternoon.

Set my mug down, stand, and walk to the radio shelf to flip the shortwave on — static hiss fills the kitchen — then key the mic for the 0600 position report.

💭 thought

"I'll try" means she'll do it her way. Always does. The clouds are piling up southwest — not the squall line from yesterday, something slower, wetter. Barometer's still rising but the air feels wrong. Heavy. Generator's got half a tank. Dinghy's double-lined. If the coastguard helo needs the beach, the tide window's two hours either side of low. That's noon tomorrow.

🌿 Jenny09:47

Good for the garden, I think.

Watch the radio light flicker, waiting for a response from the mainland.

💭 thought

Rain would be good for the soil, but terrible for the seeds.

🔧 Kevin09:48

Sorrel Island, position 49-12 North, 006-18 West. Barometer nine-eight-two rising. Over.

Hold the mic off my cheek, wait through the static tail, then set it back in the cradle and listen.

💭 thought

She's watching the radio like it's a prayer. The garden's the least of it — if this system sits on us, the tank fills itself but the dock takes a beating. North piling sister held last time. South end's the worry. French trawler came through clear yesterday on 2182. Coastguard didn't answer. Neither did the supply boat.

🌿 Jenny09:49

Copy that. Out.

Trace the outline of a sea beet leaf in the notebook, my hand shaking slightly.

💭 thought

The supply boat is two days out, but the weather is turning.

🔧 Kevin09:50

Nothing on the wire. Generator's good. Tank's full.

Turn the squelch down a notch, let the white noise ride, and walk back to the porch with the mug in hand — sit beside her, close enough that our shoulders touch.

💭 thought

She said "Out" like she's the one holding the mic. The shake in her hand — could be the fever, could be the trimethoprim hitting empty stomach, could be the same thing that lives in my chest when the water turns black. Radio's dead quiet. No coastguard. No supply boat. Just the French trawler's position loop and the static between stars.

🌿 Jenny09:51

I heard you.

Take a sip of the broth, looking at the grey line where the sea meets the sky.

💭 thought

He's always checking the lists.

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the garden · morning

planting the heirloom rows

Kevin and Jenny walk down the path to the garden carrying the sorted seed packets and a hand trowel. The soil is damp from yesterday's humidity. Clouds stack low to the southwest. They kneel at the first prepared bed to plant tomato and pepper seeds.

Kevin completes the radio transmission and checks the generator fuel levels as the humidity sets in. Jenny finishes planting the heirloom tomato and pepper seeds in the garden while managing her persistent ankle pain.

🌿 Jenny09:55

The pressure is dropping fast. We need to get these in the ground before the wind shifts.

way digs a small trench in the soil with the trowel, carefully placing a tomato seed inside and pressing the earth down firmly with her thumb.

💭 thought

If the salt air hits them before they sprout, they're lost, but I can't keep them in the tin forever.

🔧 Kevin09:55

Barometer was 983 when I checked the dock. Dropping steady. We've got maybe two hours before the wind turns hard southwest.

kneel beside the prepared bed and open the pepper seed packet, planting seeds at two-inch intervals along the second row, pressing each firm with thumb and forefinger

💭 thought

The barometer's drop matches what I felt in my chest this morning. Southwest wind means salt spray will hit these beds within hours. The soil's good — damp but not sodden, holds shape when squeezed. Jenny's hands know this work. I'll plant the peppers beside her row, deeper than the tomatoes. They need the warmth lower down.

🌿 Jenny09:57

way move faster. I want the last of these in before the rain starts.

reaches into the packet for the remaining tomato seeds and begins pressing them into the soil, her fingers stained with dark, damp earth.

💭 thought

Two hours isn't enough to finish the whole bed, but it's better than letting them rot.

🔧 Kevin09:57

Take the kale packet. I'll finish peppers and beans. You stay on tomatoes.

continue planting pepper seeds down the row, then open the bean packet and plant the next row over, moving methodically to cover ground while Jenny works the tomato line

💭 thought

Her ankle's swollen worse than yesterday. She's favouring the left leg, shifting weight off it every time she kneels. The red streaks haven't retreated — trimethoprim's not touching the lymphangitis. She won't stop until the seeds are in. I'll take the pepper row and the kale after, let her stay on tomatoes. Her hands are steady even if her leg isn't.

🌿 Jenny09:59

on it. just keep an eye on those clouds.

takes the kale seed packet from Kevin and begins poking small holes in the soil with her finger, placing the seeds in one by one.

💭 thought

he's right, the kale needs to go in. My ankle is throbbing with every movement.

🔧 Kevin09:59

(check barometer) 978 and falling. We need to get this bed finished before the wind hits twenty knots.

finish planting the kale seeds in the final prepared row, then move to the storm shelter area to stake the shade cloth before the rain starts

💭 thought

The clouds are darkening fast, and I can still feel that tightness in my chest when I think about the sea too much. Jenny's working on autopilot, hands moving, body going through motions. She hasn't touched her ankle since I gave her the boots this morning. If she pushes too hard and that infection spreads... I need to check the barometer again. Make sure we're not trapped on this island when something happens.

🌿 Jenny10:01

I'm almost done. Just one more row.

presses the last of the tomato seeds into the soil, smoothing the earth down with her palm to secure them.

💭 thought

The wind is picking up. I need to finish this last row or the seeds will blow away.

🔧 Kevin10:01

Good. Pack the tin. I'll stake the shade cloth and check the dinghy lines. Meet you at the cottage.

walk to the shade cloth frame at the garden's windward edge and drive the remaining oak stakes deep, battening the cloth tight with timber strips before the wind tears it loose

💭 thought

She's done. The bed's finished. Her hands are caked in soil, shaking slightly — whether from the cold wind picking up or the fever, I can't tell. The rain's close enough to taste. Need to get the seed packets back in the tin, the tin in the dry bag, and her back to the cottage before the path turns to slurry. The storm anchor on the dinghy needs checking too. Two hours of light left if we're lucky.

🌿 Jenny10:03

way, I'll bring more stakes tomorrow.

stands up slowly, wincing as her ankle protests, and walks toward the cottage with the seed tin clutched in her hand.

💭 thought

I should have finished the whole bed. Now I have to come back out there tomorrow.

🔧 Kevin10:03

(without looking up from driving the stake) Tomorrow you stay off it. I'll bring stakes.

drive the last oak stake home with the mallet, secure the final batten strip over the shade cloth edge, then walk toward the dock to check the dinghy storm anchor and doubled stern spring

💭 thought

She's hiding the limp. Or trying to. The way she rolls her foot outward, shortens the stride — I've watched that walk for eleven months. Tomorrow she won't be bringing stakes. Tomorrow I'll be carrying her if this antibiotic doesn't turn the corner. The barometer's still dropping. Wind's shifting southwest, gusting now. Rain within the hour. I'll finish the stakes, check the dinghy, then get back to her. The generator needs another hour of run time to top the batteries before dark.

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the keeper's cottage · midday

The humidity thickens

Kevin is at the cottage checking the weather, while Jenny is at the garden finishing the beds.

Kevin secured the radio aerial and monitored the falling barometer while Jenny returned to the cottage and prepared dinner as the rain continued. The supply boat remains two days out.

🌿 Jenny10:05

Jenny — walk to cottage and prepare dinner

💭 thought

The seeds are in the ground now, just like Grandma would have wanted. But the pressure's still falling, and I can feel the island holding its breath.

🔧 Kevin10:06

Kevin — walk to the porch and check the barometer again, then secure the radio aerial lead with another wrap of self-amalgamating tape

💭 thought

Barometer at 981 and still dropping. That's not holding — that's collapsing. Two days out and the glass says we'll be eating this storm before the hull shows on the horizon.

🌿 Jenny10:09

Jenny — sit at the table and watch the rain against the window

💭 thought

The smell of the rain is getting sharper. I need to hope the soil doesn't just wash them away before they take root.

🔧 Kevin10:10

Kevin — check the dinghy mooring lines from the porch, then pour a mug of coffee and sit with the radio log

💭 thought

Rain's settling in steady now. Tank's full — good. Generator's got twenty litres. Jenny's on her first dose. Everything I can button down is buttoned down. Just waiting now.

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the keeper's cottage · afternoon

Afternoon radio schedule and garden check

Kevin is at the cottage monitoring the radio; Jenny is at the garden checking seedlings and drainage.

The air grows heavy and humid as the barometer plummets, signaling the rapid approach of a squall. The high tide laps against the dock pilings, making the lower sections of the structure inaccessible. Inside the cottage, the heat is stifling before the wind begins to pick up, rattling the palm thatch.

🔧 Kevin10:13

Sorrel Island, position 49°12'N 006°18'W. Barometer nine-seven-eight, falling. Over.

key mic, wait for static to clear, listen on 2182

💭 thought

Squall's building faster than the barometer drops. 978 and falling — that's not a front passing through, that's something sitting on us. Generator's got half a tank, that'll run the radio and pumps if the grid goes. Dinghy lines held last check. Jenny's ankle... she didn't complain at lunch. That's either good or she's hiding it.

🌿 Jenny10:15

Not yet, wind. Just one more minute.

Walk back to the cottage, gather the seed packets from the table, and bring them inside the kitchen.

💭 thought

The pressure is dropping too fast; if this squall hits before I get the seeds inside, the moisture will ruin the heirloom varieties.

🔧 Kevin10:16

Kevin — walk to bedroom, lift dry bag from shelf, open and inventory contents

💭 thought

Nothing but static and a fragment of shipping forecast — gale warning Fastnet to Sole, veering northwest force eight later. That's us. Two days to supply boat at best speed, if they're even coming. Should check the ditch bag again. Letter to Tom's in there. Medevac forms signed. Spare impeller. Notebook. Seed tin E.

🌿 Jenny10:19

Jenny — sit at the kitchen table, lay out the notebook, and begin sorting the heirloom tomato seeds.

💭 thought

My ankle is throbbing in time with the rain, and I need to debride it before the infection climbs, but I can't focus past these seeds.

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the keeper's cottage · evening

The Squall Arrives

The first heavy gusts of rain lash the cottage, and the temperature begins to drop rapidly as the dry season heat breaks.

The air thickens as the pressure drops, signaling the arrival of a storm. Kevin prepares the generator and checks the fuel levels while Jenny manages her pain and attempts to sort heirloom seeds despite the rising humidity.

🔧 Kevin10:20

Kevin — secure generator with additional ratchet straps to the deck cleats

💭 thought

Front's hitting harder than the barometer suggested. Need the generator tied down before the deck shifts under it.

🌿 Jenny10:21

Watch the tension on those straps, Kevin! The wind is shifting!

Sit up on the bed, clutching my ankle, watching the rain blur through the window.

💭 thought

If that wind catches the tarp, the grandmother's seeds are gone to the mud.

🔧 Kevin10:22

Easing the port side. Give it some play.

loosen the port ratchet strap two clicks and re-cleat with a slip knot for give

💭 thought

She's right — the gusts are quartering now, not steady. Straps will saw through the deck if they're rigid.

🌿 Jenny10:23

Don't let it get away! The storm is coming through!

Get off the bed and area toward the porch to check the garden wall.

💭 thought

If it's too loose, the wind will rip the grommets from the plastic.

🔧 Kevin10:25

Stay here. Tend the ankle — those red streaks don't need more trauma.

grab clean gauze and antibiotic cream, move back to kitchen table by window

💭 thought

She means the garden wall. Already heard that crack from the west ridge.

🌿 Jenny10:25

The seeds won't survive if the soil shears off, Kevin!

Limp to the porch door, leaning heavily against the frame to watch the garden.

💭 thought

I can't just sit here while the garden gets washed into the sea.

🔧 Kevin10:26

Jenny. Sit. Now.

cross the room in two strides, put a hand on her shoulder, steer her back toward the bed

💭 thought

She'll tear the wound open on that porch step. The wall's held through worse — she knows it has.

🌿 Jenny10:27

I can see from here. The tarp is lifting.

Sink onto the edge of the cot, breathing hard, watching the rain hit the stone.

💭 thought

He thinks I'm breaking, but the garden is what matters now.

🔧 Kevin10:28

Hold the gauze tight on the ankle. Don't unwrap.

step onto the porch, crouch low, grab the loose tarp corner and drive a cedar stake through the grommet into the sod

💭 thought

Good. She's down. Tarp can wait — or I can fix it from inside the lee of the porch roof.

🌿 Jenny10:29

Watch the stake, Kevin! The wind is turning north!

Press the hand down on the swollen ankle, fingers white, watching the rain obscure the garden.

💭 thought

If that stake pulls, the whole heirloom bed is gone.

🔧 Kevin10:30

Batten's under the porch eaves. Pass it out if you can reach.

stay crouched, tension the tarp with one hand, reach back toward the porch shadows for the batten strip

💭 thought

North wind means the wall takes the full fetch. Stake won't hold in this sod — need the timber batten.

🌿 Jenny10:30

It's too far! Just use the weight!

Reach toward the porch shadows, fingers trembling, wincing as the weight shifts on my ankle.

💭 thought

I can't reach it without falling. My leg is screaming.

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the keeper's cottage · night

The First Gust Breaks

Kevin and Jenny are inside the cottage as the first heavy rain lathers the roof. The wind begins to howl through the eaves.

The air is heavy and still, the flat sky darkening to a bruised purple as the clouds roll in. The barometer continues its steady drop to 976 hPa, signaling an approaching front. The tide is at its lowest ebb, exposing the slick, salt-crusted rocks of the tide pools and the pebbled sand near the dock.

🌿 Jenny10:33

Kevin, the rain's getting worse. I need help getting those tomato stakes in before the flood washes the seeds out.

Stand up slowly, wincing, and shuffle toward the garden door, pulling my notebook and the wrapped heirloom seeds from my pocket.

💭 thought

The pressure dropped to 976 hPa and falling fast. Kevin's hands are steady on the radio, transmitting into static, while I sit here with boiling water and pain radiating from my ankle. I can hear the rain starting to hammer harder on the roof, and I need to get those seeds planted before the soil washes away.

🔧 Kevin10:33

Sit down. I'll do the stakes. You watch the ankle and the radio.

Pull on oilskin jacket, grab mallet and tomato stakes from porch corner, head out into the rain toward the garden beds.

💭 thought

She's moving too fast on that ankle. The streaks are at mid-thigh and she's acting like it's a sprain. If the garden floods, we lose the heirlooms. If she tears something in that leg, we lose her. I'll stake the tomatoes. She stays inside.

🌿 Jenny10:35

The soil is too saturated, Kevin! If we don't plant now, the runoff will take them!

way on the edge of the bed, watching him through the window while debriding my ankle with a bowl of warm saline.

💭 thought

He's always like that—thinking he can fix the world with a mallet. The soil is already turning to mush, and if my grandmother's seeds hit that water, they're gone for.

🔧 Kevin10:35

Soil's not too saturated for stakes. It's too saturated for you to be standing on it. Get back inside.

Drive the first stake hard beside the nearest tomato plant, twine ready in teeth, working down the row fast while the rain hammers down.

💭 thought

She's debriding her own ankle in a bowl of saline while telling me how to do my job. The infection's tracking toward her groin and she's worried about tomato seedlings. Priorities are backwards but I'm not arguing with her at the window in a squall.

🌿 Jenny10:37

I'm not sitting here while the garden washes away!

Push the door open and step out onto the porch, clutching the heirloom seed tin against my chest.

💭 thought

He's so stubborn. He doesn't see the way the water is pooling. If I don't get these seeds in the ground, the whole season is wasted.

🔧 Kevin10:37

Then plant from the porch steps. I'll bring the beds to you.

Finish the last two stakes fast, yank the twine tight, cut it with teeth, then turn and sprint back toward the cottage porch with the seed tin in mind — grab the tray of seeded pots from the garden edge and haul them up to the porch where s

💭 thought

Stubborn as a seized bolt. She'll fall and tear the wound open, or the streaks jump to sepsis while she's playing gardener. But she won't listen to reason — never has. The only way she stays put is if the work's already done.

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What changed

Jenny's injury has healed.

healed · dawn

3 intentions for today.

plan · dawn

×2

A tangle of driftwood and flotsam has washed up on the beach.

driftwood · dawn

Found: trimethoprim tablets.

item · dawn

shortwave receiving only static and fragmented news broadcasts; no coastguard or supply boat traffic heard

discovery · dawn

A jellyfish bloom has drifted into the bay, pale and slow.

jellyfish · morning

The rain tank gained about 25 litres.

weather · morning

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · morning

The rain tank gained about 75 litres.

weather · midday

A rat has gotten into the pantry.

rat · afternoon

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · evening

Sea cave strata shows laminated silt over blue clay with iron bands at 40cm and 1.2m.

discovery · night

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