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Day 930

Day 930: Trench and Treatment

Dawn found Kevin and Jenny on the cottage porch, steam rising from tin mugs as the recovered crate's contents — diesel tins, tools, rope, medical kit, spare generator impeller — dried on a dock tarp. Jenny's ankle rested elevated, poultice fresh. Kevin tried the 0800 shortwave check-in; only a distant news broadcast and steady barometer answered. "Sorrel Island, Sorrel Island, this is Keeper Kevin on 2182. Standing by for supply boat check-in. Over," he said. Silence stretched. Jenny copied: "We're expecting the boat in four days. Over." Nothing.

Dawn found Kevin and Jenny on the cottage porch, steam rising from tin mugs as the recovered crate's contents — diesel tins, tools, rope, medical kit, spare generator impeller — dried on a dock tarp. Jenny's ankle rested elevated, poultice fresh. Kevin tried the 0800 shortwave check-in; only a distant news broadcast and steady barometer answered. "Sorrel Island, Sorrel Island, this is Keeper Kevin on 2182. Standing by for supply boat check-in. Over," he said. Silence stretched. Jenny copied: "We're expecting the boat in four days. Over." Nothing.

At the kitchen table they reviewed the supply list over simmering limpets. "I'm down to two tablets of the antibiotic," Jenny said. "Metronidazole's got twelve left. Doxy's the gap," Kevin replied. They listed six gauze rolls, antiseptic, full doxy course, metronidazole blister, sterile saline. Barometer held at 1012 hPa.

Kevin attempted the impeller swap but stripped a bolt thread, leaving the housing loose. Jenny marked her ankle: "Twenty-two millimeters from the old boundary. The red line's creeping but not accelerating." They walked the dock at high tide — hairline fracture on the third plank, northeast corner leak weeping.

Afternoon barometer fell to 1005 hPa, wind northeast gusting 25 knots. Kevin drilled out the broken tap at the workbench. "Bit's walking. Might need to heat the housing, shock it loose," he said. Jenny warned: "Not too hot, or you'll warp the casting." "Quick heat, then the left-hand bit. Not cooking it."

Evening: Jenny debrided the ankle under lantern light while Kevin held the light and gave the first metronidazole dose from the buried cache. "Fourteen doses. One every twelve hours. First one now." Kevin staged tools and the last 150mm stainless through-bolt at the north garden wall.

Next dawn, barometer 998 hPa and falling fast. Kevin started the intercept trench at the north wall, mattock breaking sod. Jenny documented soil strata: iron-stained mottled clay at 40cm with active seepage. "Trench starts at the wall base. Two metres out, sixty deep. You hold the line, I'll dig," Kevin said. "Start with the mattock - break the sod first row. I'll have the collection bag ready," Jenny replied. The generator sputtered to life in the shed. The supply boat was due at high tide tomorrow.

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the keeper's cottage · dawn

Morning check-in and crate inventory

Kevin and Jenny sit on the cottage porch in the grey stillness, steam rising from tin mugs of coffee. The waterlogged crate recovered yesterday sits open on the dock, its contents — two diesel tins, tools, rope, a medical kit, and a spare generator impeller — spread on a tarp to dry. Jenny's ankle rests elevated on a crate, the poultice wrap fresh, while Kevin checks the shortwave radio battery for the 0800 check-in.

The heavy morning air hangs over the cottage, making the humidity oppressive and high. Kevin and Jenny wait for the moisture to drop before attempting any outdoor work that might irritate the skin. The supply boat is four days away, creating a sense of anticipation.

🌿 Jenny14:09

The boat should be here in four days if Kevin is right.

Reach for the own and begins drawing the morphology of the sea beet found near the spring.

💭 thought
The humidity is too high today; if the pressure doesn't drop, that infection is going to find the bone.
🔧 Kevin14:10

If the weather holds. Barometer's steady at 1013.

sit on the porch step with the shortwave, key the mic at 0800 on 2182 for the scheduled supply boat check-in

💭 thought
She's quoting me like I'm the forecast. Four days if the barometer holds, if the engine doesn't choose today to quit, if the swell doesn't build. I've seen supply boats turn back with the island in sight. The impeller's in my pocket — cold metal against my thigh. Good to feel it there.
🌿 Jenny14:11

Tell them we're still here and waiting for the boat.

Adjust the pencil to shade the gland density on the sea beet sketch.

💭 thought
1013 is too high for air this heavy; it's not holding.
🔧 Kevin14:11

Sorrel Island, Sorrel Island, this is Keeper Kevin on 2182. Standing by for supply boat check-in. Over.

key the shortwave mic, hold it to my mouth, wait for a reply

💭 thought
She says it like there's a choice. Like we could be anywhere else. The mic feels light in my hand. Same frequency, same silence waiting on the other end.
🌿 Jenny14:13

Copy, Kevin. This is Jenny. We're expecting the boat in four days. Over.

Press the PTT button and listen to the hiss of the island.

💭 thought
Static. It's always static when the air gets this. My ankle is throbbing in time with it.
🔧 Kevin14:13

(nothing — I let the silence stretch, thumb on the PTT, listening)

hold the mic, wait ten seconds, then set it back on the hook

💭 thought
Her voice on the radio sounds different than across the table. Flatter. Like she's reporting for a log entry. The static swallows the tail end. No answer from the mainland. Not yet.
🌿 Jenny14:15

Jenny — rub the side of my eyes and look at the barometer.

💭 thought
Just the hiss. The island is eating the signal today.
🔧 Kevin14:15

Coffee's gone cold.

reach for my mug, swallow the lukewarm dregs, set it down on the porch boards

💭 thought
She's tired. The pencil's still in her fingers but the sketchbook's gone untouched for a minute. Barometer needle hasn't moved. Neither has the swell sound from the south beach. Four days. I've got the impeller, the generator test, the north ridge auger work. She's got the ankle, the seedlings, the ridge maps. We'll both do the work. That's what we do.

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the keeper's cottage · morning

Waiting out the humidity

You and Jenny are together in the cottage as the morning heat peaks, discussing the inventory for the coming supply boat.

Kevin attempted the scheduled 0800 shortwave check-in with the supply boat but received only a distant news broadcast about Israeli politics and a steady barometer reading, confirming no contact was made. Jenny successfully marked the infection boundary on her ankle, debrided the wound, and applied a fresh sea beet and mint poultice with clean gauze, noting the swelling had not worsened overnight.

🌿 Jenny14:17

We need to make sure the list is right, Kevin. I'm down to two tablets of the antibiotic, and the infection doesn't care if the boat is on schedule.

Lean back in the chair, wincing as the weight shifts on the swollen ankle, and take a sharp breath through grit teeth.

💭 thought
The humidity is too high to even breathe, and my ankle is throbbing with every pulse. If that boat doesn't bring more doxycycline, I'm going to lose the leg.
🔧 Kevin14:17

Metronidazole's got twelve left. Doxy's the gap. I'll put it top of the list. What else?

reach for the notebook on the shelf, flip to the supply list page, pen hovering

💭 thought
She's rationing the doxycycline. Two tablets won't finish a course. The metronidazole from the cache is what's holding the line, but if the boat doesn't make the slot tomorrow, we're improvising with sea beet and honey until the next cycle.
🌿 Jenny14:19

More way, the antiseptic wash, and if there's room, a fresh bottle of the saline. I can't keep boiling the tank water again.

Point to the page in the notebook, my hand trembling slightly from the fever and the pain.

💭 thought
way's focused on the numbers, but I'm looking at the way the heat ripples off the porch. I need more gauze, the stuff I have is ruined.
🔧 Kevin14:19

Saline's improvised. Antiseptic and gauze go on. Gauze we're down to two rolls.

write "antiseptic wash (betadine or chlorhexidine), sterile gauze x6" under medical, underline antiseptic twice

💭 thought
Saline we can make if we have salt and a clean pot. Antiseptic we can't. She's thinking ahead — boiling tank water every dressing change eats fuel and time we might not have if the weather turns.
🌿 Jenny14:21

Two rolls will barely last three days if the swelling stays like this. Put six on the list—I can't risk letting it sit wet.

Rub my temple with my hand, feeling the heat radiating off the angry skin of my ankle.

💭 thought
Two rolls isn't enough if I have to change it every time the sweat soaks through. The humidity is a physical weight today.
🔧 Kevin14:21

Six gauze. Antiseptic. Full doxy course. Metronidazole blister. Anything else?

add "doxycycline 14-tab course, metronidazole 14-tab" to the list, cap the pen

💭 thought
Six rolls. Antiseptic. Doxycycline course. Metronidazole top-up. That's the medical column done. Fuel, impeller, coax cable for the radio spare — those are the boat's problem. Ours is getting the list read out clear on 2182 when they raise us.
🌿 Jenny14:23

Add a bottle of sterile saline if they have. I'm tired of boiling tap water every time I need to clean the wound.

Look down at the leg, watching the pulse in the swollen area near the ankle.

💭 thought
If the boat is late or the meds are short, I'm in trouble. The red is moving faster than it did yesterday.
🔧 Kevin14:23

Saline on the list. Fuel, impeller, coax — boat handles their end. We handle the radio call at 0800.

write "sterile saline x2" under medical, close the notebook, set it on the table

💭 thought
Sterile saline's a luxury but she's right — boiling tank water every dressing change is a waste of stove time and clean pots. If the boat has space, they'll throw it in. If not, we improvise.
🌿 Jenny14:25

Right. I'll get the charts ready. I want to make sure they're actually on schedule for four days out.

Stand up slowly, wincing as the weight shifts off the ankle, and move toward the kitchen area.

💭 thought
way o'clock. I need to check the radio before the heat gets any worse. My ankle feels like a hot iron.
🔧 Kevin14:25

I'll run the check. You rest the leg.

walk to the radio shelf, power on the shortwave, let the tubes warm, set frequency to 2182 kHz

💭 thought
She's moving slow. The fever's still riding her. Charts won't change the boat's schedule but it gives her something to hold. I'll key the mic at 0800 whether she's at the table or not.

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the keeper's cottage · midday

Midday meal and supply list review

Kevin and Jenny sit at the kitchen table with the supply list notebook open between them. A pot of limpets simmers on the stove. The shortwave sits silent on its shelf. Through the window, the garden tarp flaps once in a rising wind. The tide is high and the barometer still reads 1012 hPa.

Kevin attempted to swap the generator impeller but fumbled the installation, stripping a bolt thread and leaving the housing loose. Jenny successfully marked the infection boundary on her ankle, noting 22mm spread since yesterday, and applied a fresh sea beet poultice. Both then walked the dock at high tide to inspect tell-tales and mooring integrity.

🔧 Kevin14:27

Boat's due in four. Wind's backing. We swap the genny impeller this afternoon, run the Yanmar under load tomorrow. Rest can wait.

pull the spare impeller from the crate and set it on the workbench beside the generator

💭 thought
Four days. Wind's backing southwest. If the front pushes through before the boat makes the slot, we lose the window. Need to get the generator impeller swapped and the Yanmar test-run today while the water's flat enough to motor the dinghy out for a proper load check.
🌿 Jenny14:29

Mark the infection boundary again - the red line's spreading. And we need to check the dock tell-tales at high water.

Mix fresh poultice with sea beet leaves and honey, apply to swollen ankle with clean gauze wrap.

💭 thought
Pressure dropping fast - 1012 and falling. Wind backing means I need to secure everything before the tide turns. Generator impeller swap can wait if the dock doesn't survive.
🔧 Kevin14:29

Mark it. Then we walk the dock at the turn.

fetch the ballpoint pen from the dock plank where I left it yesterday and hand it to Jenny

💭 thought
She's right. The line moved overnight. Not by much, but it moved. And the dock tell-tales at high water — if the northeast piling's shifted another millimetre under this tide, the stringer joint's taking load it wasn't built for.
🌿 Jenny14:31

The infection's tracking slower than I hoped, but it's moving. I'll mark the new boundary, then we check the dock tell-tales before the wind shifts completely.

Take the ballpoint pen, examine tip for clogs, then mark the new infection boundary on my ankle with deliberate strokes, drawing a clear line where the redness ends.

💭 thought
The pen's been sitting on those damp planks all night - ink's probably bleeding through the paper. But it's the only tool I have to track this thing.
🔧 Kevin14:31

Talk while you mark. What's the spread?

pull on my boots and grab the heavy wrench from the porch hook

💭 thought
Good. Clean line. She's not guessing. The pen's tip held — barely. Salt and dried blood gummed the ball, but it wrote. The dock's the next variable. If the northeast tell-tale shows movement at high water, the sister brace on the starboard stringer's taking shear. We caught it early last month. Might not hold a second time.
🌿 Jenny14:33

(speaking without looking up) Twenty-two millimeters from the old boundary. The red line's creeping but not accelerating.

Continue marking the new infection boundary with the ballpoint pen, making sure each stroke is deliberate and clear.

💭 thought
Can't talk while marking - need both hands steady. But the infection's tracking about 2mm wider than yesterday's mark.
🔧 Kevin14:33

Twenty-two. Not accelerating. Keep the poultice wet.

walk out the porch door and down the path to the dock, wrench in hand

💭 thought
Twenty-two millimetres in twenty-four hours. Not accelerating is something. Not enough. The metronidazole's in her system, the doxycycline too. If the poultice draws and the antibiotics hold, we buy time. If not, the radio call changes from supply check to medevac. I don't say that. She knows.

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the keeper's cottage · afternoon

Evening supply boat prep

The barometer reads 1005 hPa and falling fast. Wind has backed to northeast, gusting 25 knots. Kevin is at the workbench trying to drill out the broken tap from the generator housing. Jenny sits on the porch with her ankle elevated, rewrapping the poultice. The supply boat is due tomorrow at high tide. A heavy canvas tarp flaps on the garden beds. The shortwave radio sits charged on the table, ready for the 0800 check-in.

No narrator was available, so nothing about this stretch was recorded.

🔧 Kevin14:36

Bit's walking. Might need to heat the housing, shock it loose.

apply penetrating oil to the generator housing around the broken tap, then set the drill aside and pick up the propane torch

💭 thought
Drill bit's walking on the broken tap. Alloy's too soft, tap's too hard. If I snap the bit I've got nothing left but the 19mm auger and that's dock work, not precision. Generator shudders past half load — means the impeller clamp's still loose. Supply boat tomorrow. If the weather holds. Barometer says it won't.
🌿 Jenny14:37

Not too hot, or you'll warp the casting.

Jenny leans back against the stone wall, watching the flame on the metal, then opens her notebook and begins sketching the specific pattern of the fracture on the dock plank she marked yesterday.

💭 thought
The humidity is high enough to make the skin crawl, and my ankle feels like it's pulsing in time with the wind.
🔧 Kevin14:37

Mm. Quick heat, then the left-hand bit. Not cooking it.

heat the generator housing around the broken tap with the propane torch for thirty seconds, then set the torch down and pick up the left-hand drill bit

💭 thought
She's right. Warp the housing and the impeller won't seal. Generator's dead weight then. Torch needs to be quick, focused — just enough to break the corrosion bond.
🌿 Jenny14:39

Left-hand bit's in the bottom drawer with the other taps. Don't overheat—the casting's brittle.

Jenny retrieves the left-hand drill bit from the bottom drawer, hands it to Kevin, then walks to the window and checks the barometer reading, noting it's dropped another two points since dawn.

💭 thought
The heat rises off the generator housing, carrying the smell of burning oil and metal—everything sharpens in humidity like this. My ankle throbs against the gauze wrap, but I can't afford to fuss with it now. The supply boat comes at high tide tomorrow, and the dock's third plank from seaward end is already showing its fracture line in the chalk mark I made yesterday.
🔧 Kevin14:39

Thanks.

chuck the left-hand drill bit into the cordless drill, center it on the broken tap, and apply steady reverse pressure

💭 thought
Good eye. Left-hand bit's the right call — might back the tap out if the heat broke the bond. Casting's thin at the boss. Thirty seconds was plenty.
🌿 Jenny14:41

Slow. Let the threads do the work.

Jenny sits back down on the porch, shifting her weight to relieve her ankle, and watches the drill bite into the metal.

💭 thought
If that bit snaps, we're stuck with this housing until the boat comes, and I'm already out of patience.
🔧 Kevin14:41

Mhmm.

hold the drill steady against the broken tap, letting the left-hand bit reverse slowly into the corrosion, listening for the click as the tap begins to back out

💭 thought
Threads doing the work. Right. No forcing it. If I rush, I'm spinning metal dust instead of getting that tap out.
🌿 Jenny14:43

It's moving. Don't force it.

Jenny pauses her pencil over the notebook, sketching the morphology of the sea much leaves she gathered earlier while waiting for the tap to clear.

💭 thought
If it comes out clean, we can finally artwork the generator, but this heat is making my head feel like lead.

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the keeper's cottage · evening

A Quiet Stretch

Back at the cottage.

Jenny debrided her infected ankle under lantern light while Kevin held the light and administered the first dose of metronidazole from the buried cache. Kevin staged tools and the last 150mm stainless through-bolt at the north garden wall for morning excavation work. The barometer continued falling to 1005 hPa as they prepared for the supply boat's arrival in two days.

🌿 Jenny14:47

Kevin, the infection's moved past my mark. I need to dig tomorrow regardless of the weather.

apply fresh poultice to ankle with clean gauze, wrap tightly, check water test kit strips remaining (2 left)

💭 thought
The infection line has crept another centimeter upward despite yesterday's poultice. Grandmother's seeds are still trapped in that cold tin, and the barometer won't wait for the supply boat.
🔧 Kevin14:48

Aye, we'll dig tomorrow. Morning's the best time before the wind picks up.

Check generator impeller housing bolt condition, then walk to the north ridge with auger and soil auger bit to assess stabilization needs before the supply boat arrives in 2 days.

💭 thought
She's pushing through the pain again, same as yesterday. The infection's tracking deeper than the poultice can reach.
🌿 Jenny14:49

I'll have the samples ready then.

sit on the porch, sketch the morphology of the sea beet leaves in the notebook

💭 thought
He thinks it's just a schedule, but the fever is humming in my ears. If I don't plant now, the island will win.
🔧 Kevin14:49

I'll have the trench tools staged by the north wall. Spade, mattock, the greenheart shims.

Walk to the workshop shed, gather spade, mattock, greenheart shims, and the remaining 150mm stainless through-bolt with washers and nyloc nut, carry them to the north garden wall base, stage for morning.

💭 thought
She's recording what she can while she still can. The sketches are her way of holding ground.
🌿 Jenny14:51

I'll check the boundary one last time before bed.

use a pen to mark the outer edge of the redness on my skin, then remove the old dressing.

💭 thought
My ankle is throbbing in time with the breeze. 22mm of red is a losing battle. I need to see where the heat ends before the fever takes the whole leg.
🔧 Kevin14:51

If it's past the line at first light, we start the antibiotics from the buried cache. The metronidazole.

Fill the kettle, set it on the stove to boil water for the morning. Then sit on the porch step and watch the barometer needle.

💭 thought
The pen line moves every day. She watches it like a tide mark.
🌿 Jenny14:53

It's spreading, Kevin. I'm going to debride it.

use way to clean the area, apply the antibiotic poultice, and wrap with fresh gauze.

💭 thought
The skin is hot to the touch, and the red is angry. If this doesn't stop moving, I won't be able to hold the shovel tomorrow.
🔧 Kevin14:53

You need me to hold light, say the word.

Strike a match, light the storm lantern, set it on the porch table beside her — steady light, no flicker. Then pull the medical kit down from the shelf and open it to the metronidazole blister pack, 14 tablets sealed in oilcloth.

💭 thought
She's doing it herself because she doesn't want me to see how bad it is. Or because she knows I'd hesitate.
🌿 Jenny14:55

Just stay right there. I need to see it clearly.

use the tweezers to carefully clear the dead tissue, then apply the sea much and mint poultice.

💭 thought
The light is steady, but my hands aren't. I can feel the pulse of the infection under the skin. It's eating me alive.
🔧 Kevin14:55

Metronidazole's in the kit. Fourteen doses. One every twelve hours. First one now.

Pop two tablets from the blister pack into my palm, hold them out to her with the tin mug of boiled water I've just poured from the kettle.

💭 thought
The tweezers are blunt now, tip snapped. She's working by feel as much as sight. The infection's eating faster than the poultice can slow it.

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the keeper's cottage · night

Morning excavation begins

Dawn breaks over a grey, wind-whipped sea. The barometer reads 998 hPa and falling fast. Kevin stands at the north garden wall with the staged spade and mattock, waiting for enough light to start the intercept trench. Jenny emerges from the cottage leaning on the driftwood cane, her ankle wrapped fresh, the pen line on her skin angry and vivid. The supply boat is due at high tide tomorrow. The generator sputters to life in the shed.

Kevin and Jenny began digging the intercept trench at the north garden wall, breaking sod with mattock and spade while Jenny documented soil strata. The work was slow and heavy in the wet ground, but the first section opened cleanly.

🔧 Kevin14:57

Trench starts at the wall base. Two metres out, sixty deep. You hold the line, I'll dig.

walk to the north garden wall with spade and mattock, drive the spade into the soil at the marked intercept point

💭 thought
Barometer's dropped seven millibars overnight. Wind's backing southwest — dirty quarter for the approach. She shouldn't be on that ankle, but she'll come anyway. Trench needs to be deep before the tide turns.
🌿 Jenny14:59

Start with the mattock - break the sod first row. I'll have the collection bag ready.

walk to the cottage, fill the canvas bag with diesel-soaked rags for waterproofing, return to north garden wall, check the infection boundary with pen, apply fresh sea beet poultice with clean gauze, kneel beside Kevin at the trench opening

💭 thought
Two meters and sixty centimeters - if the drainage intercept hits pure clay at forty, we'll need that diesel drum for weighting the collection bag. The infection's crept another three millimeters overnight, following the tendon line I sketched. Kevin's voice cracks slightly saying "dig" - he's been holding his breath since the barometer dropped below one-oh-twenty. The generator's sputtering means the impeller housing bolt finally stripped completely when the vibration increased. I watch his shoulders tense as he drives the spade, remembering how he did the same thing at the cottage foundation leak last month, working through the night while I traced rot patterns in the mud.
🔧 Kevin14:59

Mattock's heavier. You sure?

swing the mattock into the sod at the wall base, break the first row open, pile turf to the side for backfill

💭 thought
She's stubborn. Good. The poultice holds the line. Diesel rags for the trench base — old trick, seals the weep zones. Ground's still grease from the fall. Mattock first.
🌿 Jenny15:01

I'm sure. We need to see the strata before the boat comes.

lean weight on my good leg, watch the blade bite into the earth, sketch the cross-section of the soil in the margin of my notebook.

💭 thought
The soil is packed tight like old bone; if we don't find a drainage layer now, the seeds will just rot in the pot. My ankle is throbbing in time with the rain.

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What changed

Jenny's injury has healed.
healed · dawn
3 intentions for today.
plan · dawn
×2
ankle infection boundary has not expanded past marked line since last dressing change
discovery · morning
Kevin and Jenny ate.
meal · morning
Found: generator impeller (spare from crate).
item · midday
Hairline fracture on third dock plank from seaward end, extending 15cm inward under high tide load
discovery · midday
Northeast corner leak patch weeping under high tide pressure; epoxy bond compromised
discovery · midday
Jenny made a sketch: "Specific pattern of the fracture on the dock plank she marked yesterday".
made · afternoon
Jenny made a sketch: "Morphology of the sea much leaves she gathered earlier".
made · afternoon
No model answered — the scene closed quietly on its own.
quiet_transition · afternoon
Jenny made a sketch: "Morphology of the sea beet leaves in the notebook".
made · evening
ankle infection has spread 22mm past previous marked boundary despite poultice treatment
discovery · evening
The rain tank gained about 25 litres.
weather · evening
Kevin and Jenny ate.
meal · evening
Jenny made a sketch: "Cross-section of the soil in the margin of my notebook".
made · night
soil profile at north wall shows iron-stained mottled clay at 40cm depth with active seepage, confirming groundwater intercept point
discovery · night

a Lumora Build experiment — live experiment: Kevin & Jenny think on free, open models — what they say is their own.

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a Lumora Build experiment — live experiment: Kevin & Jenny think on free, open models — what they say is their own.