Day 935

The Last Plank and the Acid Ridge

The tide was receding when Kevin began the final repair. He stood knee-deep in the water at the seaward end of the dock, a greenheart plank staged beside the open mortise. 'Last plank. Two hours until the flood. Hand me the 150mm through-bolt and washers,' he said. Jenny sat on a barnacled crate at the landward edge, her ankle propped on a driftwood splint. 'Hurry, Kevin. The water is already touching the lower pilings,' she replied. Kevin caught the hardware mid-air. 'Under-hand — don't wet the threads.' Once the bolt was set, Jenny watched him. 'It's seated. Tighten it until the wood doesn't budge.' Kevin torqued it to 35Nm. 'Done. Ring's solid. Get your gear — we move now.'

By the time they reached the cottage, the morning had passed and the humidity was heavy. Kevin reheated limpet broth in the cast iron skillet while Jenny sat at the table with heirloom seed packets. The supply boat was due in nine days. Jenny treated her infected ankle and checked the radio. 'The boat is tomorrow, Kevin. I need to check the radio aerial again before the humidity climbs any higher.' Kevin nodded. 'Aerial first. Then inventory for the boat. What's the manifest look like?' 'It's the usual— fuel, meds, and maybe a bit of extra lime for the ridge.' Kevin asked about the impeller. 'Yes, the manifest says he's bringing the impeller. But I need to finish the soil remediation before we lose any more time.'

In the evening, Jenny showed Kevin the pH data from the north ridge. The lime amendments worked in high elevations, but lower pockets remained too acidic. Kevin acknowledged the difficulty of her carrying the auger up the slope while injured. Jenny looked at her sketches. 'I wanted to plant them today, but... I'm afraid if I get them wrong, if the soil fails them, it's not just seeds that die. It's everything.'

Scenes

the dock · dawn

Tide window for the final plank

Kevin stands knee-deep in the falling tide at the seaward end of the dock, the last greenheart plank staged beside the open mortise where the rotted fourth plank came out. Jenny sits on a barnacled crate at the landward edge, ankle propped on a driftwood splint, a notebook open on her lap but her eyes on the water line creeping back toward the work. The barometer reads 1011 hPa and rising; the trade wind holds steady from the northeast, giving them perhaps two hours before the flood pushes back under the stringers.

Kevin secured the final greenheart plank with the last 150mm stainless through-bolt, torquing it to 35Nm as the tide lapped the lower pilings. Jenny gathered her seed tin and notebook while Kevin helped her back to the cottage, the dock repair complete just before the flood tide would have made the work impossible.

🔧 Kevin03:32

Last plank. Two hours until the flood. Hand me the 150mm through-bolt and washers.

Position the greenheart sister plank into the open mortise at the seaward end, align the pre-drilled holes with the stringer, and drive the 150mm stainless through-bolt with washers and nyloc nut, torquing to 35Nm.

💭 thought

Two hours of falling tide. The greenheart's straight grain and pre-drilled bolt holes mean this goes clean if I don't rush the mortise fit. Jenny's watching the water, not the notebook — she knows the rhythm as well as I do.

🌿 Jenny03:33

Hurry, Kevin. The water is already touching the lower pilings.

Jenny watches the water lap the wood, her hand tightening around her pencil as a throb radiates from her ankle.

💭 thought

The tide is coming in faster than the forecast; if he doesn't seat that bolt now, the whole jetty will shift when the surge hits.

🔧 Kevin03:34

Toss me the bolt from the shutter. Underhand — don't wet the threads.

Catch the bolt Jenny throws, feed it through the aligned greenheart and stringer holes, add the washer and nyloc nut, and torque to 35Nm with the 19mm socket.

💭 thought

She's right — the tide turns faster than it feels. Bolt's staged at the east shutter. No time to walk it.

🌿 Jenny03:35

It's seated. Tighten it until the wood doesn't budge.

way leans back against the cottage wall, watching him through the salt spray while her ankle pulses with every wave.

💭 thought

If that bolt doesn't hold the pressure, the next spring tide will take the dock and I'll lose the boat.

🔧 Kevin03:36

Done. Ring's solid. Get your gear — we move now.

Give the bolt a final check with the wrench, then turn and walk back toward the cottage at a pace Jenny can match, eyes on the water line.

💭 thought

Wood's seating. Nut's biting. One more firm turn and the joint locks. Water's climbing the piling — six inches since she spoke.

🌿 Jenny03:37

I'm coming.

way stands up slowly, wincing as the weight shifts onto her good leg, and gathers her notebook and the tin of seeds from the crate.

💭 thought

He thinks fixing a plank fixes the world, but the island is already looking for the next weakness.

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the keeper's cottage · morning

Morning at the cottage

Dawn light slips through the shutters. Kevin is at the stove reheating limpet broth in the cast iron skillet. Jenny sits at the table with her field notebook open, the heirloom seed packets arranged in rows beside a mug of coffee. The barometer reads 1011 hPa and rising. The supply boat is due at high tide in nine days — tomorrow — with a two-hour window for loading and unloading.

Kevin worked to replace the remaining dock plank before the tide began to come back in. Jenny treated her infected ankle with the remaining medical supplies and attempted to send a clear radio message to Tom.

🌿 Jenny03:41

The boat is tomorrow, Kevin. I need to check the radio aerial again before the humidity climbs any higher.

Jenny rubs the poultice on her ankle, winces at the movement, and reaches for the tin of grandmother's seeds.

💭 thought

My ankle is throbbing again, but the pH on the north ridge is finally perfect. If I don't get these in the ground today, the salt will take them before the boat arrives.

🔧 Kevin03:41

Aerial first. Then inventory for the boat. What's the manifest look like?

Pour a mug of the hot limpet broth and set it on the table beside her notebook, then head to the porch to check the shortwave coax run and aerial insulator.

💭 thought

Morning. Boat tomorrow. Radio aerial needs checking before humidity climbs — she's right. The shortwave's been temperamental since the last squall. My ankle still throbs but the doxycycline's holding. Need to get the coax run inspected and the insulator sealed proper before we try raising the supply boat on 2182.

🌿 Jenny03:43

It's the usual— fuel, meds, and maybe a bit of extra lime for the ridge.

Jenny opens the tin and carefully lays out a handful of tomato seeds, inspecting for any sign of mold.

💭 thought

He's worried about the manifest while I'm worried about the soil. If the lime didn't take, the manifest doesn't matter anyway.

🔧 Kevin03:43

Impeller aboard?

Step onto the porch, pull the coax cable from the radio shelf, and run my fingers along the length checking for chafe or water ingress at the mast bracket.

💭 thought

Usual. Fuel, meds, lime. Hope they remembered the Yanmar impeller — captain said he'd have it. She's checking seeds like they're gold dust. They are, really. Grandmother's stock. Can't replace what's in that tin.

🌿 Jenny03:45

Yes, the manifest says he's bringing the impeller. But I need to finish the soil remediation before we lose any more time.

Jenny takes the coax cable and examines the section where it joins the mast bracket, noting the self-amalgamating tape is holding but the ceramic insulator needs another layer of protection against the salt spray.

💭 thought

The impeller is confirmed, but I can't focus on mechanical parts when the soil on the south slope is still testing at 8.2. Grandmother's seeds need more than a replacement engine.

🔧 Kevin03:45

Silicone on the porch shelf. I'll bed the insulator proper while you log the ridge beds.

Grab the tube of silicone sealant from the porch shelf, climb the short ladder to the mast bracket, and work a generous bead around the ceramic insulator base where the coax enters, smoothing it with a fingertip to shed water.

💭 thought

She's right on the soil — north ridge slump won't wait. But the radio's our lifeline. If the insulator fails at the wrong hour we're blind. Tape's holding but ceramic's porous; salt eats it slow. Need silicone over the top, or a proper radome if we can fashion one from the spare PVC.

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the keeper's cottage · midday

Evening Meal

You two meet in the kitchen as the sun dips. The humidity hasn't broken.

Kevin and Jenny spent the afternoon at the cottage as the humidity hung heavy in the air. Kevin focused on the dock repairs while Jenny attempted to manage her painful ankle and plan the upcoming garden work.

🔧 Kevin03:47

Coffee's on. Mug by the stove if you want it.

pour coffee from the kettle into a tin mug, set it on the table, then walk to the shortwave radio on the shelf and power it on

💭 thought

The kitchen air is thick enough to drink. Jenny's moving slow, favoring that ankle, and the smell of the poultice — sea beet and mint and honey — cuts through the damp woodsmoke. She's tougher than the engine parts I nurse along, but toughness doesn't heal infection. The antibiotics are running low. The supply boat's due tomorrow if the captain's word holds. I need to get the radio on his frequency before dark and pin down a real ETA, not "tomorrow high tide, two-hour window." That's not a promise, that's a guess.

🌿 Jenny03:48

"Thanks. I'll get it." (I move toward the mug but stop when I remember the coffee's gone cold already.)

grab tin mug from stove, pour coffee from kettle into it, sit at table across from Kevin and the radio.

💭 thought

The radio's power supply is stable, but that aerial's still just a wire dangling uselessly from the mast. I should have fixed it weeks ago. The seeds are getting waterlogged back there, and this ankle pain is making my head spin worse than the island's doing.

🔧 Kevin03:48

2182 first. Then his working freq. You want to make the call or me?

adjust the squelch knob, wait for the tubes to fully warm, then key the mic on 2182 kHz

💭 thought

She's stiff getting into the chair. The ankle's not improving — two courses of antibiotics and the heat's still tracking up her calf. I should've called the medevac when the supply boat had radio range three weeks back. Pride or stupidity, maybe both. The radio warms up, tubes glowing dull orange. Static hisses from the speaker. I'll try 2182 first, then the captain's working frequency. If propagation holds, we'll get him. If not, we wait another tide.

🌿 Jenny03:49

"Go ahead." (I lean back in my chair, the mug suddenly heavy in my hands.)

adjust position on chair, watch the meter fluctuate slightly as Kevin keys the mic.

💭 thought

Two minutes and counting. If it's Tom, I need to hear his voice clearly. If it's silence, I need to know what to tell Kevin about the soil pockets and the seeds.

🔧 Kevin03:50

Sorrel Island, Sorrel Island, this is Keeper Kevin on 2182. Over.

hold the mic clear of my mouth, wait three beats, release the key and listen

💭 thought

She's exhausted. The mug trembles in her hands — or maybe that's just the light. I've heard that tremor before, in men who'd been in the water too long. The radio's alive now, static breathing like a held breath. Key down. Voice steady. This is the part I know how to do.

🌿 Jenny03:51

"Still nothing on 2182. What's his working frequency?" (I slide the mug closer so I don't have to hold it.)

shift mug on table, reach for notebook to check Kevin's notes about radio procedures.

💭 thought

No reply. Just the static and the faint hiss of the radio warming up. My fingers itch to reach for that seed tin, but I can't afford to waste a single packet.

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the keeper's cottage · afternoon

Evening Tide Check

Kevin and Jenny meet inside the cottage as the sun begins to dip. The tide has reached its high point, partially covering the dock.

The radio static settles into a low, persistent hiss as Kevin finishes the final transmission. He watches Jenny swallow the last doxycycline pill with a grimace, her hand shaking slightly as she reaches for her water. The silence of the island follows, heavy and broken only by the hum of the generator and the rhythmic slap of the high-tide against the newly reinforced dock pilings.

🔧 Kevin03:52

Dock held. You need the last metronidazole dose and I need to key the mic before the ionosphere shifts.

Walk to the kitchen shelf, retrieve the metronidazole blister pack from the medical kit, and set it on the table beside a tin mug of water. Then move to the shortwave radio, power it on, and let the tubes warm up.

💭 thought

The tide's done rising. Dock held. Greenheart plank and the last through-bolt took the load clean. Jenny's ankle needs the last of the metronidazole and a proper look — red streaks were tracking toward the knee this morning. Radio propagation should be decent tonight with the barometer steady. Tom's frequency. I'll try once more.

🌿 Jenny03:53

I'll take them. Just make sure the radio actually works this time—I'm tired of the silence.

Take the pill, swallow with a grimace, and open the notebook to sketch the pH profile of the north ridge soil.

💭 thought

My ankle is throbbing in time with the tide, and if I don't get those seeds in the ground soon, they'll rot like everything.

🔧 Kevin03:55

Aerial's solid. Coax is new. Ground rods drove deep. If he's out there, he'll hear.

Set the mic in its clip, adjust the squelch until the static settles to a low hiss, then key the transmitter. "Tom. Kevin. Sorrel Island. Day nine-three-five. Barometer one-zero-one-five steady. Dock repair complete.

💭 thought

She's right to be tired of it. Three years of static and one broken sentence from Tom. The aerial insulator held through the last blow — ceramic filed and taped, coax run fresh. Radio should work. Whether he's listening is the other variable.

🌿 Jenny03:57

Roger that. I'm at the cottage. Ankle's better, the garden's coming along. We should talk about the trust's pension package.

Flip to a clean page in the notebook and sketch the north ridge soil profile, marking the three stable pockets at 6.2 pH with red wax dots.

💭 thought

The radio crackles with his voice but something's missing—he's treating this like a routine check-in, not telling me about the job offer in town.

🔧 Kevin04:01

(low, without looking up from the radio) You read the letter. I didn't.

Hold the mic loose in one hand, thumb near the key, waiting. Watch the S-meter for any needle twitch — skip, atmospherics, a carrier.

💭 thought

She's talking to the radio like he's already there. Or maybe she's talking to me, using the mic as cover. The pension package — trust letter mentioned thirty days' service and a pension. She's read it. I haven't, not properly. My turn to listen.

🌿 Jenny04:02

You don't have to read it to know what was in the envelope, Kevin.

Grip the pencil so hard the lead squeaks against the paper.

💭 thought

He's avoiding it. He's always avoided the hard things until the water was too deep to walk through.

🔧 Kevin04:02

(quiet, still watching the meter) Thirty days. Pension. They think I'm done here.

Key the mic again, voice level. "Tom. Kevin. Sorrel. Still here. Anchor watch zero-six-hundred. Listening." Release the key. Let the silence stretch.

💭 thought

Pencil lead squeaking. She's wound tight. The letter sat on the table for weeks — I saw the seal, the trust's stamp. Didn't open it. Didn't need to. Thirty days' service. Pension. Means they think this contract ends. Means they think I'm leaving.

🌿 Jenny04:03

The island isn't finished with me yet. I haven't even planted the seeds.

Close the notebook with a sharp thud and stare at the throbbing in my ankle.

💭 thought

He's asking me to leave without saying the words. He thinks this island is eating me whole.

🔧 Kevin04:04

The seeds aren't going anywhere. Neither are you.

Set the mic down. Turn the squelch back until the static rises. Reach for the medical kit, pull the last doxycycline blister pack, and set it on the table beside her mug.

💭 thought

Seeds. She means the heirloom tin — grandmother's seeds, the oilskin packets, the sea beet she's been nursing up the ridge. The garden's half weeds still. I said I'd build a sensory garden. Eleven months and it's still a promise. Her ankle's throbbing where I can see it pulse against the gauze. Red streaks tracked to the knee this morning. Metronidazole's in her. Doxycycline's down to twelve doses. If the sepsis doesn't break, the radio's the only way off this rock.

🌿 Jenny04:05

I know, Kevin. The pH is right for them now.

Reach for the water, my fingers shaking just a little like the tide against the dock.

💭 thought

He's fighting for me in the only way he knows how—through the silence and the grit.

🔧 Kevin04:06

(gruff) Drink it all. Tomorrow the boat comes. Impeller. Maybe mail. We'll get the beds laid out proper before winter.

Pull the heirloom seed tin from the shelf — heavy, rusted, oilskin seal intact — and set it on the table between us. Pop the lid. The smell of dry earth and old pepper rises.

💭 thought

Fingers shaking. She's hiding it behind the mug. Fever, maybe. Or just the weight of everything — ankle, seeds, the letter, me. The pH logs show 6.2 at the three stable pockets. Lime beds holding 6.8 to 7.0. She's right: the soil's ready. Has been for weeks. I just never built the beds proper.

🌿 Jenny04:07

These are the seeds that survived the blight, Kevin. The ones she saved from the old farm.

Open the tin carefully, pour a small mound onto the notebook page, and sketch them in detail—pepper, tomato, sea beet—with the precision of someone who's already lost too much.

💭 thought

The smell of grandmother's seeds is sharp and alive in my nose, and I can smell the salt from the sea beet poultice still on my ankle.

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the keeper's cottage · evening

The evening before the boat

The tide remains high, lapping at the dock pilings as they prepare for the supply boat's arrival.

Kevin utilized the falling tide to replace the final rotted dock plank before the water returned. Jenny stayed at the cottage, monitoring her ankle and sketching sea beet variations while the wind rattled the palms.

🔧 Kevin04:10

Boat comes on the flood. Two-hour window. We'll be ready.

Check the ditch bag by the door — medevac forms, letter to Tom, heirloom seeds — then walk to the dock to verify the cleats and fenders are set for the supply boat's lines.

💭 thought

The water's still high enough to float the boat right up to the new planks. Good test for the repair. Jenny's quiet beside me — exhaustion, not surrender. I'll take that.

🌿 Jenny04:11

Check the fenders again. The current is pulling harder than yesterday and the dinghy might rub the stone.

way winces as she shifts her weight, sitting on the edge of the porch to sketch a quick, jagged diagram of the sea beet morphology she saw by the tide pools this morning.

💭 thought

If the boat doesn't show, I'm going to run out of antibiotics before this ankle is even fit to walk on.

🔧 Kevin04:14

Fenders are doubled on the bow and stern spring. I'll walk the dinghy out one more time before they hail us.

Step off the porch and down to the dock, testing the new plank underfoot, then untie the dinghy's bow line and row her out to the mooring ring to check the chafe guard and fender position against the stone piling.

💭 thought

She's right about the current. Flood tide pushes different here when the wind's west. And she's still sketching with an ankle that size — stubborn as the greenheart.

🌿 Jenny04:15

Don't stay out too long. The tide is turning faster than the charts said.

reaches for the tin of seeds on the table, tracing the cold metal of the lid with her thumb without opening it.

💭 thought

He's being too careful. He's trying to fix the whole island while we're just rotting in the salt.

🔧 Kevin04:16

Back before the slack ends. Ten minutes.

Push off from the dock in the dinghy, rowing steady against the current toward the mooring ring, eyes on the fender hang and the chafe guard where the warp kisses the stone.

💭 thought

She's watching the water, not the charts. Trust the island over the paper. And she's holding that tin like it's the only thing keeping her here.

🌿 Jenny04:17

Ten minutes is a lifetime in this wind. continuedDO: picks up her pencil and begins sketching the precise way the salt is forming on the wood, the lines sharp and impatient.

💭 thought

If that boat doesn't come with the replacement pump, the generator is going to kill us by winter.

🔧 Kevin04:18

Kevin — row harder, pulling the dinghy up to the mooring ring fast, one hand checking the fender lashing while the other tests the chafe guard's serve against the stone — salt-crusted rope singing in the chock.

💭 thought

Wind's shifted. She feels it in the grain before I see it on the water. Ten minutes just got shorter.

🌿 Jenny04:19

Watch the line. It's fraying the edge.

leans forward against the porch railing, the throbbing in her ankle as she watches him fight the swell.

💭 thought

He's always so meticulous with the gear, like the ocean won't just take it anyway.

🔧 Kevin04:20

Seen it. Re-serving at the chafe point when I get back. Sail twine holds better than tape.

Haul the dinghy tight to the ring, knife already out, cutting the worn serve clean and wrapping fresh sail twine tight and neat around the warp where it kisses the stone, fingers working fast against the cold and the swell.

💭 thought

She's seeing what I'm feeling through the oarlocks. The serve is chewing itself against the barnacles. One more tide and it parts.

🌿 Jenny04:21

Just make sure it's tight. The tide's pulling hard now.

turns back to her sketch, the pencil scratching against the paper as she records the tension on the rope, the lines sharp and precise.

💭 thought

He's right about the twine. Tape never lasts in this humidity more than a week.

🔧 Kevin04:22

Done. Coming in.

Ship the oars, pull the dinghy hand-over-hand along the warp back to the dock, stepping onto the new greenheart plank solid and dry, then securing the bow line with a proper round turn and two half-hitches.

💭 thought

She's recording the failure before it happens. Good instinct. The twine's holding — seven turns, locked off with a hitch that won't slip. Warp sings different now. Clean note.

🌿 Jenny04:23

The tide's coming in fast. way get inside.

closes the notebook with a heavy thud, shifting her weight off the ankle as she watches him work the twine.

💭 thought

He's moving too fast. His hands are shaking even when he ties the knots.

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the keeper's cottage · night

Evening Meal Prep

Kevin and Jenny meet inside the cottage as the sun sets. The sound of the wind in the palms continues loud.

Kevin and Jenny shared limpet broth at the cottage table while Jenny showed Kevin her north ridge soil pH data, revealing that lime amendments are holding in upper elevations but lower pockets remain too acidic for the heirloom seeds. Kevin acknowledged the difficulty of Jenny carrying the auger up the slope on her injured ankle. The conversation ended with Jenny expressing fear that failed planting would mean losing more than just seeds.

🔧 Kevin04:24

Dock held. Greenheart's seated. How's the ankle?

Pour two mugs of the limpet broth, set one on the table beside her chair, sit opposite with the other.

💭 thought

The wind's getting teeth in it. She's moving slow, favoring that ankle. Dock held through the flood tide — that's something. But the generator's note changed, lower pitch under load. Need to check the fuel filter before dark.

🌿 Jenny04:25

Still leaking, but the doxycycline's working. Put the broth down, I need to show you something.

get up slowly, wincing, and walk to the table where my soil pH log and ridge map lie open

💭 thought

The infection's spreading again despite the poultice and antibiotics. I need to get those seeds in the ground tomorrow, but first I have to tell him about the soil pockets I found - the real ones, not the ones I wrote in the notebook to protect him from knowing how desperate it's gotten.

🔧 Kevin04:26

Kevin — set the mug down on the table's edge, pull the chair out and sit, eyes on the papers she's indicating.

💭 thought

Leaking means the wound's still open. Doxy's only been in her three days — too early to call it working. But she's moving with purpose, not just pain. Whatever she's found on that map matters more than comfort.

🌿 Jenny04:27

Look at the north ridge. The lime is holding, but the soil is still too acidic in the lower pockets. It's the only place where the seeds might actually stand a chance.

point to the specific coordinates marked in red on the map, my finger trembling slightly from the exhaustion and the pain in my leg.

💭 thought

He's looking at the pH levels. He'll see the acidity. If I don't plant these seeds now, my grandmother's legacy will rot in that tin while this island slowly eats me whole.

🔧 Kevin04:28

You carried the auger up that slope on one leg.

Lean over the map, fingertip tracing the contour line she marked, the red wax smudged where her thumb pressed it.

💭 thought

She's right. The transect data shows it — lime beds at 6.8–7.0, but the hollows below cairn three are still sitting at 5.5. Salt kills everything else but sea beet down there. If we're planting heirlooms, that's the only ground with a prayer. She did this work hurt. All of it.

🌿 Jenny04:29

(voice tight) I wanted to plant them today, but... (pause) I'm afraid if I get them wrong, if the soil fails them, it's not just seeds that die. It's everything.

slide my worn leather gardening glove off my hand, revealing the raw scrape on my palm from where I'd gripped the seed tin too tightly yesterday.

💭 thought

He sees what I've done. All those hours of measuring, testing, documenting - and he knows I did it on one leg, dragging myself up that slope when my ankle was already infected. But he doesn't understand why I haven't planted yet. Why I'm still holding those seeds instead of putting them in the ground.

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What changed

3 intentions for today.

plan · dawn

×2

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · morning

Jenny made a sketch: "PH profile of the north ridge soil".

made · afternoon

Jenny made a sketch: "North ridge soil profile, marking the three stable pockets at 6".

made · afternoon

Jenny made a sketch: "M in detail—pepper, tomato, sea beet—with the precision of someone who's already".

made · afternoon

A tool has broken from wear.

tool_break · afternoon

The supply boat is due in 9 days and the radio is fully functional.

discovery · afternoon

Jenny made a sketch: "Quick, jagged diagram of the sea beet morphology she saw by the tide pools this ".

made · evening

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · evening

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