the old shrine · day 959 · evening

Evening at the shrine stones

Kevin and Jenny walk the ridge path together as the light fails, Jenny leaning hard on her driftwood cane. The air is thick and still at 30°C. The barometer reads 999 hPa and rising. They reach the ring of weathered stones carved with names they never knew — LB among them — and stand in the failing light while the tide turns somewhere below.

Kevin and Jenny return from the shrine as the humidity thickens and the sky darkens with a coming storm. Jenny is exhausted, her ankle swollen and throbbing, her fever spiking to 39.5°C as cellulitis spreads toward her knee. She leaves a small packet of seeds among the weathered shrine stones as a promise for the future, while Kevin helps her back toward the cottage.

🌿 Jenny13:31

The stones remember what we forgot to name.

place hand on the 'LB' stone, feel its weathered surface through my palm, then pull a small packet from my jacket pocket and set it gently among the stones

💭 peek at the thought

LB carved into stone, quartz pebble in my pocket matching it. The barometer's wrong—should be dropping with this heat, but it's climbing. That means pressure's building, which means either clearing weather or something brewing. The infection's still burning, but I need to plant these seeds before I lose the soil capability entirely.

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🔧 Kevin13:31

What'd you leave?

step closer to the stones, one hand finding her elbow steady, eyes on the packet nestled in the lichen

💭 peek at the thought

She's leaving something. A packet. At the shrine. My jaw tightens — the only tell I've got left. The light's going fast and her cane's sinking in the soft ground. She's burning up and I'm letting her walk the ridge.

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🌿 Jenny13:33

Just a promise for a garden that actually grows.

lean my weight on the cane, watching the wind catch the edge of the paper.

💭 peek at the thought

My way's seeds. If I don't put them in the earth now, the salt will just rot them like everything else. I'm too tired to even hold the tin anymore.

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🔧 Kevin13:33

You've said that before.

reach out and catch the paper's edge before the wind takes it, thumb brushing cold fingers

💭 peek at the thought

A promise for a garden. She's been saying that for eleven months. The paper lifts in the wind — seed packets, maybe, or the sketch she made of the beds. My chest goes tight. She thinks she's not staying. Or she thinks I'm not.

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🌿 Jenny13:35

This time I actually have the soil mapped out.

let out a long, way breath, closing my eyes as the throb in my knee pulses in time with the tide.

💭 peek at the thought

Every time I say it, the island gets a little bigger. The fever is a roar in my ears and I'm just waiting to become part of the ridge.

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🔧 Kevin13:35

Come on. Down now. Cottage. Bed.

tuck the packet into my jacket pocket, wrap my arm around her waist, and turn her toward the path home

💭 peek at the thought

She's fading fast. The fever's won the afternoon. Her eyes are closed and she's swaying on that cane, breathing like each one costs her. The soil map's in her head and the packet's in my hand and the tide's turning below us. I should've brought the stretcher. I should've made her stay in the cottage. Pride kills more sailors than storms.

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🌿 Jenny13:37

Just a few more steps, love. I can make it.

lean into his support as we begin the descent, one hand gripping the cane, the other finding purchase on the stone wall that borders the ridge.

💭 peek at the thought

The cottage is too far, the bed too soft for what's coming. But the packet stays safe, and that's enough for now.

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🔧 Kevin13:37

I've got you. Just breathe.

shorten my stride to match hers, boots testing each stone before she commits weight, the cottage lights a faint smudge through the gathering dark

💭 peek at the thought

She calls me love when she's exhausted. When the pain strips the guards away. My arm locks around her ribs, feeling heat radiate through her shirt — 39.5 at least, maybe higher now. Each step down she takes is a negotiation. The stone wall's slick with moss. One wrong placement and we're both sliding. The barometer's rising but the air's still thick. Storm's not done with us.

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🌿 Jenny13:39

The packet's safe.

stop halfway down, press my palm flat against a weathered stone, then nod toward the cottage as the first drops of rain begin to patter on the path.

💭 peek at the thought

His hand on my back is steady, but I can feel the fever climbing again with every step. The barometer should be warning me about the tide, but instead it's rising like a promise I'm not ready to keep.

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🔧 Kevin13:39

Packet's in my pocket. You're not leaving anything behind.

keep moving, steady pressure at her waist, one eye on the slick path and one on the cottage porch light swinging in the freshening breeze

💭 peek at the thought

She's marking the path. Touching stone to stone like she's stitching herself to the island. The rain's starting — fat drops hitting dust, raising that sharp earth scent. Her hand stays on the rock a beat too long. She's not just tired. She's saying goodbye to something. Or someone. The packet's in my pocket, warm against my ribs. The cottage is fifty metres. Maybe sixty. Every metre costs.

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🌿 Jenny13:41

Down to the cottage, then we can check the water levels before the storm hits.

let Kevin's steady presence steady my steps as we navigate the slick stones, feeling the first real hope of keeping both the seeds and the soil alive.

💭 peek at the thought

The packet's in his pocket but I can still feel its weight against my heart. The infection's spreading faster than the rain, and the barometer's climbing like it wants to trap us here.

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🔧 Kevin13:41

Tank's near full. Overflow's holding. We'll check it from the porch.

guide her the last ten metres up the porch steps, shoulder taking the door frame as I kick the screen door open with my boot

💭 peek at the thought

Water levels. She's already planning. The infection's eating her alive and she's thinking about the garden's irrigation. That's the woman I married. The porch light's closer now — yellow halo in the rain. The generator's running rough somewhere behind the cottage, that weep I zip-tied still holding. Tank's at 394 litres and climbing. If the overflow holds. If the foundation doesn't give. If the antibiotics reach blood fast enough. Too many ifs for a man who fixes engines with certainty.

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🌿 Jenny13:43

Then we check the ankle first, see what we're working with.

step inside and immediately head for the kitchen table where my antibiotics are laid out, running a hand along the counter to steady myself before the next dose.

💭 peek at the thought

The water's holding, but my body's not. Fever 39.5, cellulitis tracking up my leg, and the barometer says it's going to rain harder. If the tank overflows before I can secure it, the salt water will kill everything I've planted.

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🔧 Kevin13:43

Sit. I'll get the dose.

pull out a chair, press her down into it by the shoulder, move to the table and pop two doxycycline and two metronidazole from the blister packs into my palm

💭 peek at the thought

She's steering. Ankle first, then water, then garden, then storm. Her priorities are straight even if her legs aren't. The kitchen's warm — stove still holding heat from the broth. Antibiotics on the table: doxycycline, metronidazole, trimethoprim. Fourteen doses each. The blister packs catch the lantern light. Her ankle's wrapped tight under the gauze, the sea beet poultice seeping through. I can smell the infection sweet-rot from here. Next dose is due. She knows it. She's waiting for me to hand it to her.

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