the old shrine · day 592 · evening

Evening at the shrine

They walk the ridge path together as the light thins, Kevin carrying the dry bag with the letter, spare impeller, and seed tin E. The standing stones are salt-white in the dusk. The air is still, heavy with the wet season heat. They stop at the ring of stones, the carved initials 'LB' worn smooth by wind.

Kevin and Jenny met at the old shrine as heavy rain began to fall from the west. Kevin worked on the Yanmar sleeve while Jenny tended her ankle and sketched the sea beet morphology in her notebook. They eventually retreated to the cottage as the storm downpour fully arrived.

🔧 Kevin14:09

LB. Never found out who.

Set the dry bag down on a flat stone at the center of the ring, then run a calloused thumb over the worn initials on the nearest standing stone.

💭 peek at the thought

The stones hold more weight than the letter in my bag. LB carved initials worn smooth by forty years of salt wind — someone else who stood here and needed to mark it. I think about the tin E I left here weeks ago, rusted and sealed, and wonder if the sea respects anything we leave behind.

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🌿 Jenny14:12

Maybe someone who knew what it meant to wait.

place my palm flat against the cool stone beside the carving, then pull out my notebook and sketch the initials in faint graphite, capturing the wear as evidence of time.

💭 peek at the thought

The initials are worn smooth, but still legible—LB. Who were they? Lovers? Keepers? Someone who stood here watching storms come in, just like I have been.

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🔧 Kevin14:19

They’re just initials, Kevin. Or marks of time.

Sketch the initials LB in faint graphite on my notebook, leaving a clear line to show the worn edges.

💭 peek at the thought

The shape of those initials feels like a quiet promise, a pause in the endless tide.

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🌿 Jenny14:25

Or maybe someone carved them because they knew someone would come back.

reach into my pocket and pull out grandmother’s seed tin, running a finger along its edge as I study the stone.

💭 peek at the thought

Those initials have been here longer than any of our letters, longer than the crate wedged under the pilings. Someone carved them and came back to check if the mark still held.

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🔧 Kevin14:26

Could be.

Turn my palm up, letting the cool stone press against it, and watch her fingers on the tin's rusted rim.

💭 peek at the thought

The tin's edge is cold against my fingertip. Twelve packets inside, oilcloth still dry. She asked when we plant. Not if. When. The initials and the tin — both small rebellions against forgetting.

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🌿 Jenny14:35

I hope they didn't wait alone.

squeeze the tin in my hand, the weight of the unplanted seeds heavy against my palm, and look out at the darkening horizon.

💭 peek at the thought

The stone is cold, but the infection in my ankle is a fire. I wonder if they ever felt this stuck, or if the island just took them whole.

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🔧 Kevin14:35

They didn't.

Close my hand over the tin, my fingers brushing hers, and hold it there against the stone.

💭 peek at the thought

The horizon swallows the last light. She's not talking about the stones anymore. The tin presses into my palm — twelve packets, a season's hope, heavy as an anchor. I didn't write the letter with enough truth. One honest page. I wrote coordinates and a date. Not why I stayed.

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🌿 Jenny14:40

Then I'll make sure we're the ones remembered. We'll plant them tomorrow.

open the seed tin and let a few grains of sea beet seeds sift through my fingers, scattering them onto the stone beside the carving. </think></think> close my hand around the remaining seeds in the tin, feeling the tiny weight of possibilit

💭 peek at the thought

His touch is careful, like he knows how much the weight of waiting can press on someone. Maybe that's what the initials were—a promise that someone would remember, would return. The seeds scatter like small promises onto the ancient stone, and I realize I've been carrying this fear of abandonment like a stone in my chest.

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🔧 Kevin14:40

Tomorrow.

Tip the tin slightly, letting a pinch more seeds fall into the carved initials' grooves, then snap the lid shut and tuck the tin into my jacket pocket.

💭 peek at the thought

Sea beet seeds on ancient stone. She's planting in the shrine — not the garden, here, where LB carved initials and someone left a rusted tin marked E. The wind takes a few grains. The rest settle in the worn grooves. Tomorrow she'll plant the garden proper. Tonight this is its own kind of witness.

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🌿 Jenny15:05

Tomorrow. If the weather holds.

close my notebook with a soft thud and shift my weight to my good leg, beginning the slow limp back down the ridge.

💭 peek at the thought

Tomorrow is always a promise on this island, but the rain is coming now. I need to get back to the cottage before the sky truly opens up.

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🔧 Kevin15:06

Tomorrow, if the weather holds.

Shift my weight to my good leg, lift my foot, and begin the slow, deliberate limp back down the ridge.

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💭 peek at the thought

The ridge is still. The stone feels rough under my palm. The wind is quiet, but the air is heavy. I keep my head down, my eyes on the path, the weight of the seed tin still in my hand. Tomorrow is a choice, not an inevitability.

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🌿 Jenny15:11

Let's get back before it really pours down.

pull my jacket tighter against the wind and follow the path back toward the cottage, the weight of the tin pressing against my hip.

💭 peek at the thought

The rain is starting to hit the dust now; I need to get inside before the wind turns. My ankle is screaming with every step.

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🔧 Kevin15:11

Right behind you.

Follow her down the ridge path, boots finding the worn track in the fading light, one hand on the tin in my pocket.

💭 peek at the thought

Rain's coming. The barometer held steady but the wind's shifting west. My leg aches from the climb and the day's work — hydraulic ram, porch step holes, the letter still in the dry bag on the stone. She walks ahead, favoring her ankle. The tin against my hip is cold through the jacket. Twelve packets. Tomorrow we plant. If the supply boat doesn't come. If the infection doesn't spread. If.

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🌿 Jenny15:13

Almost there.

limp heavily onto my good leg, keeping my eyes on the cottage roof.

💭 peek at the thought

The wind is picking up, I can smell the salt and the coming storm. I just need to get to the door without my ankle giving out.

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