Day 381

Rain, Rat, and Rising Barometer

Rain hammered the tin roof at dawn. The water tank overflowed into the collector, gaining about twenty-five litres. Kevin checked the dock mooring ring under load and ran the Yanmar at full throttle for twenty minutes. The barometer held steady at 986 hPa. "Barometer's steady. Boat's still three days out if she holds," Kevin said. Jenny sat on a bench wrapping her ankle in a damp salt cloth. She boiled sea beet for a wash and dressed the wound. "Coffee's getting cold. The infection's climbing toward my knee — salt water's not touching it anymore," she said. Kevin checked the blister packs. "Three days of pills. Three days to the boat. If the fever breaks, we're even. If it doesn't —" Jenny cut in: "Don't start with the forms yet. Just check the radio again."

At midday they ate limpets and sea beet. A rat had gotten into the pantry. Jenny checked the damp seedlings and her ankle. She made three sketches: a detailed cross-section of a sea beet leaf, the morphology of a limpet with her hand shaking slightly, and salt glands on scrap paper with a shaky hand. At low tide they collected a half-bucket of limpets from the north shelf, where clusters were larger and denser. "Follow my lead. The limpets are bigger over here," Jenny said. "Easy, Kevin. You don't want shards in the salt we eat." The tide rose faster than forecast. "Let's get back. The tide's coming in faster than the forecast," Jenny said. Afternoon heat hung heavy. Kevin checked generator filters and water pressure while Jenny propped her ankle on a cushion. At 1900 Kevin tuned the shortwave. "Is it anything but static today, Kevin? Or is the island winning?" Jenny asked. "Static so far. But the set's clean since the insulator swap. Give it a minute," Kevin replied. The skipper had radioed a noon position — two days, six hours if she held course. Kevin ran the generator to top the tank from the roof catchment. He cleaned the first-flush diverter, ran the pre-filter sock, and added a second tie-off to the downpipe bracket. "Flow's clean. Diverter's catching the sludge. Tank'll top off in twenty minutes," he said. Evening brought a temperature drop of only a few degrees. They planned the meal from remaining limpets and sea beet. "We need to boil the limpets longer this time, or the salt from the beet will ruin the whole pot," Jenny said. Kevin scrubbed limpets under the tap, rinsed beet in two changes o

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the keeper's cottage · dawn

Rainy Morning Prep

Steady rain falls against the tin roof as the water tank overflows into the collector. Jenny sits on a bench wrapping her ankle in a damp salt cloth while Kevin checks the barometer for the coming boat arrival.

Kevin checked the dock mooring ring under load and ran the Yanmar engine at full throttle for twenty minutes. Jenny dressed her ankle with salt water and cloth, boiled sea beet for a wash, and checked the radio for the boat's ETA. The barometer remained steady at 986 hPa.

🔧 Kevin14:26

Barometer's steady. Boat's still three days out if she holds.

pour two mugs of coffee from the pot on the stove, set one on the table near Jenny

💭 thought

Three days until the boat. The barometer's holding at 986 and steady — that's good. She's wrapping the ankle again, same routine. Cephalexin's been in her system forty hours now. Should see improvement if it's working. The dock ring held at high tide with the doubler plate and oak wedges. Yanmar's clean at 2200. Radio's functional. Just need to key Tom's frequency at 0800 and 1900. Everything else is noise.

🌿 Jenny14:28

Coffee's getting cold. The infection's climbing toward my knee—salt water's not touching it anymore.

unwrap the damp cloth from my ankle, examine the red streaking that's migrating despite everything, then rewrap with fresh salt-soaked gauze from the first aid kit.

💭 thought

The barometer's steady at 986, but that's dangerously low for a system holding. Three days without the boat means I need to make landfall decisions now, not wait for Kevin's mechanical optimism about weather systems.

🔧 Kevin14:28

Let me see the blister packs. Check what's left of the doxycycline and metro.

move to the first aid kit on the shelf, pull out the antibiotic blister packs, count remaining pills

💭 thought

Red streaking climbing past the ankle toward the knee. Forty hours on cephalexin and it's tracking upward. That's not holding. That's failing. She's matter-of-fact about it — no panic, just stating it. The salt cloths aren't drawing it anymore. The metronidazole's in the kit, started same time. Dual coverage should handle anaerobes too. But if the streaking's moving, the oral route might not be cutting it. Need to check the blister packs, see what's left. And the supply boat's three days out if the barometer holds. Three days is a long watch on a spreading infection.

🌿 Jenny14:28

There's enough for three days, if the fever doesn't break first.

reach for the seed tin on the table, tracing the rust in the metal while I lean back and fight the throbbing in my leg.

💭 thought

He's counting pills like he's counting days. If the boat doesn't show, I'll be out of medicine before grandmother's seeds sprout.

🔧 Kevin14:30

Three days of pills. Three days to the boat. If the fever breaks, we're even. If it doesn't —

pull the medevac forms from the radio shelf, set them on the table beside the seed tin

💭 thought

Three days of pills. Three days until the boat. The math is too tight. If the fever spikes tonight, the oral antibiotics won't catch up. She's tracing the rust on the seed tin — her grandmother's tin, the Roma seeds I gave her. Her hands are steady but she's favoring the leg hard. The throbbing she mentioned earlier, the way she's leaning back. She's worse than she's saying. Always is. The medevac forms are face down on the radio shelf, filled out. I haven't keyed the Coast Guard. Haven't decided if I will. She'd refuse anyway. Said she'd die here before leaving the garden. But the streaking's climbing and the boat's three days out and I'm not losing her to a leg infection on a rock in the Atlantic.

🌿 Jenny14:31

Don't start with the forms yet. Just check the radio again.

pull the seed tin away from the medevac forms, shielding it with my hand as I stare at the rain on the glass.

💭 thought

He's already filling out the paperwork. I'm not a casualty to be filed away, even if my leg feels like the island is.

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the keeper's cottage · morning

Midday Meal and Monitoring

They are at the keeper's cottage, sharing a simple meal of limpets and sea beet. Jenny's ankle continues to throb, and Kevin watches her closely as he eats. The rain has eased to a drizzle, and the tank is nearly full.

Warm rain falls over the cottage as the pair prepares for the supply boat arrival in three days. Kevin manages the pantry against a persistent rat while Jenny checks the damp seedlings and her her ankle infection.

🌿 Jenny14:33

It's just the salt, Kevin. I need to check the radio again before tomorrow.

Winces as she shifts her weight on the chair, then begins to sketch the salt glands on a piece of scrap paper with a shaky hand.

💭 thought

The heat is moving up my leg. If the boat doesn't come in three days, I won't will be able to walk to the garden, let alone plant a single seed.

🔧 Kevin14:35

I'll key the radio for the boat's ETA. You keep eating, get some strength back.

walk to radio shelf, turn on shortwave, tune to supply boat frequency, press transmit: "This is Sorrel Island, request ETA for supply boat. Over." then listen for response.

💭 thought

She's pushing through pain again, sketching like it's the only thing keeping her grounded. I should take the radio check off her hands—let her rest.

🌿 Jenny14:37

I'm not that hungry for more.

Pushes a piece of sea beet around the plate with her fork and stares at the damp seed tin on the table.

💭 thought

He talks like everything is a mechanical fix with a wrench, but you can't tighten a bolt on an infection.

🔧 Kevin14:37

Eat what you can. Put the rest in the pot for broth later.

pick up her plate, scrape remainder into the broth pot on the stove, set plate aside, return to radio and adjust squelch, listen through static.

💭 thought

She's not eating. Not sketching either. Just staring at that tin like it holds answers. The antibiotics should've turned the corner by now. If they haven't...

🌿 Jenny14:38

Just tell them we need the meds. Not just the supplies this time.

Reaches for the tin of seeds, fingers tracing the worn metal edge, feeling the weight of everything she hasn't planted yet.

💭 thought

If the boat is late again, the antibiotics will run out before the infection reaches my hip.

🔧 Kevin14:38

They know. Forms went out last run. Meds are on the manifest.

lean against the doorframe, arms folded, watch the barometer needle — steady at 986 — then glance at the ditch bag clipped to the dinghy eye bolt through the window.

💭 thought

She's asking me to say it plain — medevac forms already filled, ditch bag packed, and now this. The boat's three days out if it comes. Three days of her ankle not improving, of antibiotics running thin. I keyed Tom's frequency this morning. Static. I'll key it again at 1900. Same words.

🌿 Jenny14:40

I hope so. The heat is moving faster than the boat.

Picks up a small piece of boiled sea beet and swallows it against the salt, masking the throbbing in her ankle.

💭 thought

The manifest is just paper; the island doesn't care about schedules.

🔧 Kevin14:41

I'll keep the skillet warm. More limpets if you can.

refill the skillet with limpets from the bucket, place on low heat by the stove, return to the radio shelf, key Tom's frequency at 0800 as planned: "This is Sorrel Island. Still here. Still trying. Over." then listen.

💭 thought

She's swallowing pain with sea beet, hoping the boat beats the fever. The tank's full, the radio works, the Yanmar's sound. But none of that cools an infection. I said the forms are in — they are. What I didn't say: if the boat's late, or if the meds don't make the manifest, we burn that bridge when we come to it. For now, I keep the watch.

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the tide pools · midday

low tide foraging

The rain tapers to a drizzle as the tide retreats, exposing the rocky flats. They decide to check for limpets before the water returns.

Kevin and Jenny collected a half-bucket of limpets from the north shelf of the tide pools at low tide, working carefully to avoid shell shards and Jenny's injured ankle. The tide began rising faster than expected, prompting their return to the cottage.

🔧 Kevin14:42

Bucket's on the porch. Mind the slick rock — ankle first.

grab the galvanized bucket from the porch and walk down to the tide pools

💭 thought

Good. Limpets are protein we don't have to chase. Bucket's by the door.

🌿 Jenny14:42

I'm being careful. Just don't let the water get the sketches.

way limps toward the black rock shelves, clutching her notebook to her chest and watching her step for slick algae.

💭 thought

If I slip and twist this ankle, it's over. The seeds will never see the dirt.

🔧 Kevin14:44

North shelf. Deeper pools. I'll work the edge.

follow Jenny onto the rock shelves, keeping to the drier edges and scanning the pools for limpets

💭 thought

She's stubborn. That's why she's still here. Watch the pools on the north shelf — deeper water holds bigger limpets.

🌿 Jenny14:44

Follow my lead. The limpets are bigger over here.

kneels slowly by a rock pool, breathing through the sharp throb as she reaches for a cluster of limpets.

💭 thought

He's moving too fast for me today. I need to get these limpets before the tide turns back.

🔧 Kevin14:46

Kevin — kneel beside a pool near Jenny and start working the edge of a limpet cluster with the crowbar, prying them loose one by one and dropping them in the bucket

💭 thought

She knows these pools better than I do. Let her lead.

🌿 Jenny14:47

Easy, Kevin. You don't want shards in the salt we eat.

reaches into the water to carefully pry a smaller limpet free with her fingers, wincing as the movement flares through her ankle.

💭 thought

He's being too rough with that bar, he'll crack the shells.

🔧 Kevin14:48

Kevin — set the crowbar aside and use fingers to twist limpets free, filling the bucket methodically

💭 thought

Fingers work better than iron. Less waste.

🌿 Jenny14:48

Good. We need them whole for tonight.

sketches the morphology of the limpet she just pulled, her hand shaking slightly despite the pain in her leg.

💭 thought

At least he's being careful now. I just need to finish this before the water comes back fast.

🔧 Kevin14:50

Bucket's half full. That's enough for two meals.

stand, wipe wet hands on trousers, and scan the tideline for anything else useful while the water's still out

💭 thought

Her hand shakes but the pencil doesn't stop. That's the woman I married.

🌿 Jenny14:51

Let's get back. The tide's coming in faster than the forecast.

tries to shift her weight to her good leg, hissed as the swelling in her ankle pulses against the bandage.

💭 thought

Two meals is good, but I'm starving. My ankle feels like it's burning.

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the keeper's cottage · afternoon

Afternoon wound care and radio check

Kevin and Jenny are on the cottage porch. The galvanized bucket of limpets sits beside the stove. Jenny's ankle is propped on a cushion, a salt-soaked cloth bound over the swelling. Kevin has the shortwave radio out, tuning to Tom's frequency for the 1900 check-in. Rain hammers the roof in bursts.

The heavy afternoon heat hangs over the cottage as the tide begins its slow turn inward. Kevin checks the generator filters and monitors the water pressure, while Jenny manages the swelling in her ankle and tends to the seedlings under the shade.

🌿 Jenny14:53

Is it anything but static today, Kevin? Or is the island winning?

Jenny tightens the bandage on her ankle and ignores the pulse in her leg to sketch a detailed cross-section of a sea beet leaf in her notebook.

💭 thought

If the boat doesn't come in three days, I won't have the strength to even open the seed tin.

🔧 Kevin14:54

Static so far. But the set's clean since the insulator swap. Give it a minute.

key the shortwave to Tom's frequency, adjust the squelch, and wait with the mic in hand

💭 thought

The barometer's still rising. 989 now. That's not a storm holding — that's something building. I don't like it. But Tom's frequency first.

🌿 Jenny14:55

Just make sure they're actually coming. I'm running out of salt water.

Jenny stops her pencil mid-stroke and stares at the grey horizon, her jaw tightening against the throb in her leg.

💭 thought

Three days is a long time for an infection that is moving this fast.

🔧 Kevin14:56

They're coming. Skipper radioed noon position — two days, six hours if she holds course. Salt water's the real problem. I'll run the generator, top the tank from the roof catchment before it fouls.

set the mic down, stand, and head inside to fire up the generator

💭 thought

She's right about the salt water. The bucket's only got so much, and the tide pools are a limp with her ankle. But the boat — three days out, they said. Barometer says different. Rising pressure means fair weather holding, not a blow. Supply boat runs on schedule, not barometers.

🌿 Jenny14:57

Check the filters again. I don't want grit in the intake.

Jenny closes her notebook with a heavy thud and rubs her swollen ankle, feeling the heat radiating from the skin.

💭 thought

If the tank runs dry, the garden is the first thing to go, and then me.

🔧 Kevin14:58

Already cleaned the first-flush diverter. Sand bed's fresh from last month. But I'll run the pre-filter sock before it hits the tank.

pull the generator cord, let it warm up, then rig the canvas hose from the roof gutter to the pre-filter sock and the tank inlet

💭 thought

Filters. Right. The roof catchment runs through the sand-charcoal bed before the tank, but the first flush after dry weather carries ash and bird shit. She knows the system better than I do some days.

🌿 Jenny14:59

Keep an eye on the flow. The rain is carrying a lot of debris today.

Jenny leans back against the stone wall, closing her eyes as the rhythmic pulsing in her ankle syncs with the hum of the generator.

💭 thought

If that sock clogs, we lose the last of the clean runoff.

🔧 Kevin15:00

Flow's clean. Diverter's catching the sludge. Tank'll top off in twenty minutes.

watch the clear section of hose for any particulate, one hand on the generator's throttle lever in case the load changes

💭 thought

Debris. She's seen the gutters choke before. The spruce needles and gull shit turn to slurry in this kind of rain. Generator's running clean — good compression, no smoke. Hose is seated. First flush diverter's doing its job, dirty water spilling overboard. Clean water hitting the sock filter now. Tank's at 397 litres. Three litres to full. Won't take long.

🌿 Jenny15:01

Just don't let the hose slip. The wind is picking up.

Jenny reaches down to adjust the salt cloth on her ankle, wincing as the movement sends a sharp spike up her leg.

💭 thought

Twenty minutes is an eternity when your skin feels like it's melting.

🔧 Kevin15:02

It's snug. I've got a half-hitch on the inlet side and the gutter end's weighted with lead. But I'll add a second tie-off to the downpipe bracket.

walk back to the gutter, check the hose seating, and tie a second half-hitch to the downpipe bracket using the spare half-inch rope from the coil on the porch

💭 thought

Wind's picking up — barometer still rising, so it's not a front, just the land heating and the sea breeze kicking in. Hose is weighted at the gutter end with a chunk of lead flashing, and the sock is cinched tight to the inlet nipple. But she's right — better safe. One good gust and it could whip loose, dumping unfiltered water straight into the tank.

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the keeper's cottage · evening

Evening Prep

The sun begins to dip, and the temperature drops only a few degrees. You meet on the porch to plan the meal from the remaining limpets and sea beet.

Kevin tests the dock mooring ring by putting load on the dinghy to ensure the new doubler plate is secure. Jenny rests at the cottage, managing the swelling in her ankle while the humid air thickens overhead.

🌿 Jenny15:03

We need to boil the limpets longer this time, or the salt from the beet will ruin the whole pot.

Lean heavily against the porch post, propping my swollen ankle up on a crate to reduce the throbbing.

💭 thought

My leg is throbbing again; if this fever doesn't break, I won't even be able to hold the seed tin properly.

🔧 Kevin15:04

Rinse the beet in two changes. Cold water first, then the hot off the kettle. Limpets go in once it's rolling. Twenty minutes, lid on.

Walk into the kitchen, fill the big pot from the rain tank, set it on the wood stove to heat. Grab the colander and the bucket of limpets from the porch.

💭 thought

She's right about the salt. The beet leaches hard into the broth if we don't rinse it proper, and the limpets need the full twenty minutes to tenderize. My gut's been growling since noon — haven't eaten proper since the corned beef at breakfast. The barometer's held steady all afternoon, 988 and flat. Three days to the boat. We'll make it.

🌿 Jenny15:04

I'll get the beet. Just make sure there's enough grit off those limpets first.

Sit heavily on the porch chair, rubbing the ankle wrap while reaching for the sea beet.

💭 thought

He's so focused on the mechanics, he doesn't see the red line moving higher up my shin.

🔧 Kevin15:06

I'll give them a hard scrub under the tap. Two changes of water for the beet, like you said. Then we start the pot.

Take the bucket of limpets to the sink, run fresh water over them, and scrub each shell with the stiff brush, paying attention to the ridges where grit hides. Rinse twice.

💭 thought

She's moving slow, favoring the left. The wrap's damp from the salt wash earlier — needs changing before it chafes. I'll scrub the limpets hard; no grit in the pot, no ruined meal. After we eat, I'll rewrap her ankle with dry cloth and check the generator fuel line while the fire's low.

🌿 Jenny15:07

Don't overcook the limpets. If they get rubbery, I can't stomach them.

Peel the sea much leaves with shaky fingers, wincing as a sharp pain shoots through my calf.

💭 thought

The heat from the stove is making the fever spike, and the skin on my tackle feels too tight.

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the keeper's cottage · night

The Approaching Storm

Kevin and Jenny are in the kitchen as the first heavy drops of rain hit the roof. The barometer begins to drop sharply.

Kevin prepares the dock for the coming supply boat, testing the integrity of the new mooring ring under load. Jenny remains in the cottage, struggling with her throbbing ankle as the air thickens with impending rain.

🌿 Jenny15:08

The barometer is diving, Kevin. Get the seed tin off the porch, now.

Winces as she shifts her weight off the swollen ankle, then hobbles to the kitchen table to grab her notebook.

💭 thought

The pressure is falling too fast; if this storm hits before the boat arrives, I won't be able to get the dinghy in the water.

🔧 Kevin15:09

On it.

Grab the heirloom seed tin from the porch and bring it inside to the kitchen table, then secure the porch door against the rising wind.

💭 thought

She's right. Barometer's dropping faster than I've seen it all season. Storm's not three days out — it's hours. Seed tin on the porch is the heirloom stock; if it gets soaked again we lose two years of selection. Move.

🌿 Jenny15:10

Check the radio again. I need to know if the boat is tracking this front.

Slumps into the kitchen chair, rubbing the throbbing heat of her ankle while she watches the clouds.

💭 thought

If that tin gets damp, my grandmother's seeds are gone, and I can't let them rot in this heat.

🔧 Kevin15:10

Checking now.

Turn on the shortwave radio, tune to the supply boat working frequency, and key the mic for a position check.

💭 thought

Radio's been quiet on the supply boat frequency all afternoon. But she needs to hear it for herself. And I need to know if we're battening for a blow or a week of rain.

🌿 Jenny15:12

Is there anyone coming through? The sky is turning a nasty color.

Leans back against the stone wall, eyes tight as she watches the red, angry skin of her ankle.

💭 thought

The static is thick tonight; if he can't get through, I'm stuck here with this leg rotting off.

🔧 Kevin15:13

Nothing. Just static. They're either in it or running from it.

Switch to Channel 16, the distress and calling frequency, and listen for any traffic — coast guard, other vessels, anything that tells us what's coming.

💭 thought

Static. Nothing but atmospheric noise on the working channel. The front's moving faster than any forecast said — sky's gone that bruised purple-green that means wind before rain. Boat's either hove-to somewhere or running for shelter. Either way, they're not talking.

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What changed

Jenny's injury has healed.

healed · dawn

3 intentions for today.

plan · dawn

×2

The rain tank gained about 25 litres.

weather · dawn

Jenny made a sketch: "Salt glands on a piece of scrap paper with a shaky hand".

made · morning

A rat has gotten into the pantry.

rat · morning

The rain tank gained about 25 litres.

weather · morning

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · morning

Jenny made a sketch: "Morphology of the limpet she just pulled, her hand shaking slightly despite the ".

made · midday

limpet clusters on north shelf are larger and denser than other zones

discovery · midday

Jenny made a sketch: "Detailed cross-section of a sea beet leaf in her notebook".

made · afternoon

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · evening

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