Day 398
Rising Pressure
"Ankle look any different this morning?" Kevin asked. "It feels tighter. The skin is shiny," Jenny said. "Give it here. I'll do it," Kevin said. "Be careful. Don't go too deep," Jenny said. "Breathe out slow. Long exhale," Kevin said. "There goes... it's finally coming out," Jenny said. "Kevin, your hands are shaking. Let me help you," Jenny said. "They're fine. Sit still," Kevin said. "Thank you for doing that. I... I couldn't have managed last night," Jenny said.
Dawn found Kevin at the cottage window watching the flat sky lighten, the barometer needle edging up to 975 hPa as the tide pushed against the dock pilings. Jenny sat at the kitchen table with her ankle propped on a chair, the first-aid kit open beside her and a sterilized scalpel laid out on clean gauze. Limpet broth simmered on the stove. The shortwave radio sat silent on its shelf, its aerial insulator still shattered.
Kevin guided Jenny back to the porch after she confused the water test strips with soil testing. The tide was high, flooding the northern garden bed. He took the diesel filter setup to the shed to process the recovered drum. Jenny remained on the porch with her notebook, watching waves break over the northern shelf where she had mapped sea beet clusters.
At midday Kevin drilled a new bolt hole through the dock mortise from the dinghy and secured the mooring ring with a bronze bolt and washers, stabilizing it against lateral loads. Jenny made a precise scalpel incision over her infected ankle, drained a small amount of pus, flushed with boiled saline, and applied a fresh poultice and dressing.
"Ankle look any different this morning?" Kevin asked. "It feels tighter. The skin is shiny," Jenny said. "Give it here. I'll do it," Kevin said. "Be careful. Don't go too deep," Jenny said. "Breathe out slow. Long exhale," Kevin said. "There goes... it's finally coming out," Jenny said. "Kevin, your hands are shaking. Let me help you," Jenny said. "They're fine. Sit still," Kevin said. "Thank you for doing that. I... I couldn't have managed last night," Jenny said.
Evening brought rain, warm and steady. They sat on the porch sharing limpet broth and tinned mackerel. The barometer held at 979 and rising. The supply boat was due in six days. Jenny abandoned the corroded ground rod and ran a bypass ground wire from the radio to the treated steel garden frame instead, while Kevin supplied tools and watched. The coax from the waterlogged crate proved dry and intact, and the new ground path was connected without a hitch.
Kevin examined Jenny's ankle despite her protests, finding the redness tracking up her calf. He re-dressed it gently and insisted they address it properly tomorrow.
"The infection's still spreading," Jenny said. "The antibiotics should've held it by now. They didn't," Kevin said. "It's not the medicine, Kevin. It's the damp," Jenny sai
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the keeper's cottage · dawnMorning routines and a rising barometer
Kevin stands at the cottage window watching the flat sky lighten, the barometer needle edging up to 975 hPa as the tide pushes against the dock pilings. Jenny sits at the kitchen table with her ankle propped on a chair, the first-aid kit open beside her and a sterilized scalpel laid out on clean gauze. The smell of limpet broth rises from the stove where a pot simmers, and the shortwave radio sits silent on its shelf, its aerial insulator still shattered.
No narrator was available, so nothing about this stretch was recorded.
Ankle look any different this morning?
walk to the kitchen table and crouch beside Jenny's chair to examine her ankle
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It feels tighter. The skin is shiny.
Jenny reaches for the scalpel, her fingers trembling slightly as she prepares the site.
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Give it here. I'll do it.
take the scalpel from Jenny's hand and set up the clean gauze and antiseptic瓶 (bottle) from the first-aid kit
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Be careful. Don't go too deep.
Jenny leans back against the chair, holding her breath as she watches the blade.
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Breathe out slow. Long exhale.
make a shallow nick at the lowest point of the abscess with the scalpel tip, letting it drain onto the gauze
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There goes... it's finally coming out.
Jenny lets out a long, shaky breath, her eyes fluttering shut as she watches the white gauze turn yellow.
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the keeper's cottage · morningA Quiet Stretch
Back at the cottage.
Kevin guided Jenny back to the porch after she confused the water test strips with soil testing. The tide is high, flooding the northern garden bed. Kevin took the diesel filter setup to the shed to process the recovered drum. Jenny remained on the porch with her notebook, watching the waves break over the northern shelf where she mapped sea beet clusters.
Kevin — walk inside to the bedroom, crouch by the bed where Jenny's sleeping, gently peel back the blanket to check her ankle.
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Kevin, your hands are shaking. Let me help you.
uncork the antibiotic cream and hand it to him, then sit on the edge of the bed and watch him work.
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They're fine. Sit still.
Take the antibiotic cream from her, squeeze a measured bead onto clean gauze, carefully unwrap the old dressing from her ankle, inspect the wound — pink edges, no heat, no pus — then apply the fresh gauze and wrap it clean with the elastic
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Thank you for doing that. I... I couldn't have managed last night." "The wrap's good, but I need to drink water and take the rest of the antibiotics. Can you check the water test strips?
reach for the notebook on the nightstand and flip to the page where I sketched the sea beet salt glands, then trace my finger along the delicate structures with the ballpoint pen that's running dry. </think>THOUGHT: The wrap is clean, too c
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Strips are on the shelf. Five left. I'll get water.
Stand, walk to the kitchen, pull a clean mug from the cupboard, dip it in the rain tank tap, bring it to her with the antibiotic blister pack from the first aid kit, then turn to the radio shelf and pick up the water test kit
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Wait—let me check the soil pH first. I need to know if the beds are ready for the sea beet seedlings. The lime application last week might have pushed the drainage too far. And Kevin? The water test kit—if any of those strips show ammonia spikes, we need to address the tank before the storm hits.
pull the pH test strip from the kit, dip it in the ankle wrap gauze to check for any bacterial contamination, then head to the garden shed to grab the soil auger and check drainage in the northern bed where I planned to plant the sea beets.
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Jenny. The strip goes in water. Not gauze. Soil won't tell you different today.
Set the water test kit down on the table, watch her through the window crossing to the shed, then pick up the diesel filter setup — felt, funnel, clean drum — and carry it out to the shed where the recovered drum sits
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The soil... I need to transplant those sea beet seedlings today. The northern shelf cluster mapped at low tide showed the drainage's perfect—should I wait for the tide to go out, or can I work with the current conditions? And Kevin, if the water tests show anything concerning, we need to act before the storm hits. The soil in the northern bed needs checking before I transplant the sea beet seedlings. The drainage mapped at low tide showed the cluster's in the right zone, but I need to confirm the pH matches what the seedlings need. And Kevin—if the water tests show any contamination, we need to address the tank before the storm hits.
grab the diesel filter setup from the shed, run it through the rain tank to check for contamination, then head to the garden with the soil auger to check the northern bed drainage.
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Jenny. Stop. The tide's high. Northern bed's flooded. Tank's clean — I tested it three days ago. Put the funnel down.
Walk to the shed doorway, take the funnel from her hands, set it on the workbench, put a hand on her shoulder — steady, not gentle — and guide her back toward the cottage porch
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I know. I just... I need to be sure the seeds don't rot. If the soil is too acidic, the whole season is gone.
sit heavily on the porch bench, clutching the notebook to my chest, and watch the grey waves break over the northern shelf.
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the dock · middayMidday work at dock and garden
Kevin works at the dock on the mooring ring reinforcement while Jenny tends the garden beds and seed trays at the cottage.
Kevin drilled a new bolt hole through the dock mortise from the dinghy and secured the mooring ring with a bronze bolt and washers, stabilizing it against lateral loads. Jenny made a precise scalpel incision over her infected ankle, drained a small amount of pus, flushed with boiled saline, and applied a fresh poultice and dressing, reducing immediate pressure and heat.
Not today. Not like this.
Kneel despite the sharp spike in my ankle, carefully brushing the white mold off the healthy seedlings with a sterilized toothpick.
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Kevin — climb down the dock ladder into the dinghy, brace against the gunwale, and assess the drilling angle from water level
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(Kevin! Check the mooring ring again!)
Reach for the first aid kit, pulling out the scalpel and the antiseptic; I have to drain this thing before the storm hits.
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Kevin — climb back up the ladder, fetch the brace, 12mm auger bit, bronze bolt, washers, and a mallet from the workshop
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Breathe, Jenny. Just breathe.
Sit on the garden bench, prop my ankle up on a crate, and steady the blade for the incision.
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Kevin — lash the dinghy bow and stern tight to the dock cleats with the heavy weather line and a spare warp, then lower the brace and bit into the boat
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the keeper's cottage · afternoonEvening meal and radio watch
Kevin and Jenny sit on the porch as light fails, sharing limpet broth and tinned mackerel. The shortwave sits on the table, aerial insulator shattered, silent. The barometer holds at 978. The supply boat is due in six days. They talk low about the storm prep list, the garden, and the letter left for Tom.
Kevin examined Jenny's infected ankle despite her protests, finding the redness tracking up her calf. He re-dressed it gently and insisted they address it properly tomorrow. The barometer continues rising as evening approaches.
The rain is turning cold. We need to check the way ring after the swell.
Take a sip of broth and sketch a quick morphology of the sea beet leaves in the margin of the notebook.
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Ring's held two tides now. Bronze bolt, oak wedges, greenheart shim under the north piling. She'll hold.
sip broth, watch the last light on the water
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As long as the dock stays. I can't lose the dinghy now.
Rub the back of my ankle and wince at the sharp heat radiating from the skin.
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Let me look.
set bowl aside, shift on the porch boards to face her, reach for her ankle
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It's fine, just a bit swollen. Really, I've got it handled. (voice tight with pain) It's fine, just a bit swollen. Really, I've got it handled. (voice tight with pain)
Cross my legs to press the ankle against the cool stone of the porch step, trying to reduce the throbbing. </think>THOUGHT: Don't let him touch it - he doesn't understand what I'm dealing with, can't see the spreading redness even if he loo
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It's not fine.
take her ankle in both hands anyway, thumb pressing gently along the calf to track the heat, peel back the dressing edge
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It's just the salt, Kevin. The damp gets deep.
Wince through gritted teeth and pull my leg away slightly as he exposes the skin.
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Salt doesn't track up the calf.
hold her ankle firm but gentle, turn it to catch the last light, memorize the spread
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I am tired. way let me be.
Go quiet and look out at the darkening water, refusing to look at his hands.
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Tomorrow. We do it proper tomorrow.
re-wrap the dressing careful, not tight, set her foot back on the step, pick up my broth
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the keeper's cottage · eveningEvening broth and radio watch
They sit on the porch as rain falls warm and steady. The shortwave sits silent on its frequency, the shattered insulator still dead. Kevin has a broth bowl; Jenny's ankle is propped on a cushion. The barometer reads 979 and rising. The supply boat is due in six days.
Jenny abandoned the corroded ground rod and ran a bypass ground wire from the radio to the treated steel garden frame instead, while Kevin supplied tools and watched. The coax from the waterlogged crate proved dry and intact, and the new ground path was connected without a hitch.
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lift broth bowl, sip slow, watch rain sheet off porch roof
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The insulator's cracked clean through the ceramic. I can splice the coax right here with the electrical tape and try a temporary ground wire through the shack.
grab the coil of coax from where it's coiled against the wall, pull out the electrical tape and wire strippers from the tool kit, begin carefully stripping the outer jacket while keeping the inner conductor intact.
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Shield continuity?
set bowl down, reach for multimeter on shelf, hold it out to her
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The shield's been compromised since that last storm surge flooded the lower connections. I can try running a bypass wire from the mast base down to the ground rod, but I'll need to test the coax capacitance first to see if the inner conductor's intact.
grab the multimeter from where it sits on the shelf, check the resistance across the coax at both ends to verify the shield isn't completely broken, then begin planning a bypass route from the radio through the garden where I can access the
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Ground rod's off the southeast corner. Two metres down. Cable run's eighteen metres from shack.
stand, stretch back, walk to radio shelf, pull spare coax from crate — dry, found in the waterlogged one — coil it out, hand her the BNC connector
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I'll run this parallel to the existing wire, ground it at the rod with the copper wire from the first aid kit. Need to scrape the corrosion off the rod first - that's been sitting in salt water for months. I'll run this parallel to the existing wire, ground it at the rod with the copper wire from the first aid kit. Need to scrape the corrosion off the rod first - that's been sitting in salt water for months.
pull the copper wire from the first aid kit, head to the southeast corner where the ground rod sits, begin scraping the corrosion off the rod with my knife to expose clean metal for the connection. </think>THOUGHT: Eighteen metres of coax
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Knife's blunt. Wire brush in the shed. Steel bristles.
turn, walk to shed door, pull wire brush from pegboard, walk back, hold it out without looking at her hand
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I'll start with the ground rod, scrape it clean and make the connection, then run the bypass wire back to the radio. The coax's dry, so the insulation should hold.
grab the wire brush from where Kevin holds it, head to the southeast corner of the cottage where the ground rod sits, begin scraping the salt corrosion from the rod to expose clean metal for the connection. I'll start with the ground rod, s
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lean against porch post, watch her work, roll shoulder where the diesel drum haul sits heavy
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The rod's more corroded than I thought. Let me try the garden frame as ground instead - the steel posts are treated, won't eat through like this copper. The rod's more corroded than I thought. Let me try the garden frame as ground instead - the steel posts are treated, won't eat through like this copper. The rod's more corroded than I thought. Let me try the garden frame as ground instead - the steel posts are treated, won't eat through like this copper. The rod's more corroded than I thought. Let me try the garden frame as ground instead - the steel posts are treated, won't eat through like this copper.
grab a length of garden wire from the tool kit, head to the west garden where the tomato stakes still stand strong, begin running a ground wire from the radio location out to the steel post nearest the southeast corner. I need to </think> g
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the keeper's cottage · nightNight watch and shortwave try
Kevin and Jenny sit at the kitchen table with the shortwave radio. The new ground wire runs out the window to the garden frame. Kevin keys the mic on Tom's frequency; static answers. They wait for the 1300 window on 4125, broth cooling between them.
Kevin and Jenny dried the heirloom seeds inside the cottage while the clouds thickened overhead. Jenny applied a fresh dressing to her ankle, noting that the red streaks had continued to move up her calf despite the antibiotics.
Broth's going cold. Drink it while it's hot.
lift the mug, blow across the steam, take a slow sip; set it down and rest one hand on the mic gain knob, thumb hovering over the PTT
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The infection's still spreading.
make sketch: ankle comparison - normal vs infected cross-section
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The antibiotics should've held it by now. They didn't.
reach across the table, fingers brushing the edge of her sketchbook; key the mic — "Tom, this is Sorrel Island, Kevin on four-one-two-five. Over."; hold the mic away, listening to static
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It's not the medicine, Kevin. It's the damp.
pull the leg back, wincing as the movement pulls against the dressing.
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The cottage doesn't dry. Nothing dries here.
set the mic down slow; push my chair back; walk to the porch and unhook the spare tarp from the ridge beam; carry it back and spread it over the table, plastic crisp against wood; pull the oil lantern close, adjust the wick until the flame
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way I'm not letting the seeds rot, too.
reach for the tin of grandmother's seeds, rubbing a thumb over the metal lid.
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The seeds are dry. You dried them. They'll keep.
sit back down; pick up my mug, broth cold now, drink it anyway; keep one ear on the radio static, the other on her breathing
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Maybe.
look at the red streaks on my calf, tracing the path with a finger.
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What changed
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