Day 454

The Rising Tank and the Red Streaks

Steady rain drummed against the tin roof as the water tank reached its brim, gaining about 25 litres. Inside, Jenny laid out damp heirloom seeds on paper. When Kevin offered to help, she said, "Give that here. I'll do the layout." Kevin insisted, "You need to stay off it. I'll do the layout," but Jenny replied, "I'm fine, Kevin. Kevin moved quickly, while Jenny stayed near the black rock; her infected ankle caused pain with each shift. She eventually called, "We have enough here. Move now." Later, Kevin worked on the dock, tightening transom bolts and packing stone. He noted the mooring ring mortise was soft, requiring deep wedges and a steel plate. He told Jenny, "Wedges go in gentle. Tap, check, tap."

Jenny spent her midday sketching her injury. Despite these records, the events list noted her injury had healed. The tamarind trunk drainage reached 100%. As a heavy squall hit and the barometer dropped to 980 hPa, the shortwave crackled with a voice or static at an odd hour. The supply boat arrived.

Scenes

the keeper's cottage · dawn

Rain and the rising tank

Steady rain drums against the tin roof as the water tank reaches its brim. Jenny lays out the damp heirloom seeds on paper while Kevin checks the falling barometer glass.

The steady rain continues to drum against the roof of the cottage, filling the water tank to its absolute limit. The tide is receding rapidly, exposing the slick rocks of the southern tide pools, as the pair prepares for the day ahead.

🔧 Kevin12:41

So these are the last of the loaves, huh? I’ll get the seed packets dry before the next storm.

look over the seed paper, lift a handful, and open the air‑dried tin.

💭 thought

This is the only quiet moment I get with her, and the seeds feel like a fragile promise.

🌿 Jenny12:43

Don't crowd them. They're still breathing.

Reach out to gently pull the paper away from his hand, checking the seeds for any sign of grey mold.

💭 thought

If he touches them with those way hands, he'll ruin the germination before they even get to the soil.

🔧 Kevin12:43

Right. Just checking the tin seal held.

step back, set the tin on the shelf, and pick up the notebook to sketch the seed layout instead.

💭 thought

She's right — they need air more than my inspection.

🌿 Jenny12:45

Give that here. I'll do the layout.

Reach for the notebook, then wince and lean back as a sharp throb shoots up my ankle.

💭 thought

He's sketching? Since when does he care about the layout? He'll probably just draw circles and call it a map.

🔧 Kevin12:45

You need to stay off it. I'll do the layout.

take the notebook from her, guide her toward the chair by the stove, and set the kettle on to boil.

💭 thought

The ankle's worse than she's saying. She's been favoring it all morning.

🌿 Jenny12:47

I'm fine, Kevin. I can sit.

sink heavily in the chair and prop my swollen ankle up on a stool, watching him hold the pencil.

💭 thought

He thinks he's being helpful, but he doesn't see the precision these seeds need.

🔧 Kevin12:47

Just tell me where each packet goes. I'll mark it.

lean over the notebook, pencil ready, and wait for her to name the first variety.

💭 thought

She's sitting, but the pain's in her eyes. The pencil feels heavy in my hand.

🌿 Jenny12:49

The sea beet first. They need the driest corner.

Point to the left edge of the paper, my fingers trembling slightly from hunger.

💭 thought

If he smudges the ink, I won't know which is which by spring.

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the tide pools · morning

Morning forage at the low tide

The tide is at its lowest, revealing the kelp-covered rocks. Kevin and Jenny head out to gather before the water returns.

Kevin and Jenny harvested limpets from the tide pools at low tide, Kevin moving quickly along the shelf while Jenny stayed near the black rock, her infected ankle causing pain with each shift. After gathering enough, Jenny called to move, and Kevin continued working the crevices at the edge before heading back. The rain began to fall harder from the west as they left the pools.

🔧 Kevin12:49

Bucket and knife. Stay on the flat rock. Back before the turn.

walk to the tide pools with bucket and knife, moving steady over wet rock

💭 thought

The tide's right out. Kelp thick on the rocks, limpets clamped hard. Good gathering if we move quick. Jenny's ankle'll hold on the flat shelf — it's the scramble back over the boulders that'll test it. Need to watch the swell building outside the reef.

🌿 Jenny12:51

I'll stay by the shelf. Don't go too far out.

Jenny crouches on the black rock, scraping limpets from the stone with a pocket knife.

💭 thought

The pressure is dropping too fast for comfort, but I need those limpets for the salt or I won't have strength to walk tomorrow.

🔧 Kevin12:51

Back in twenty.

move along the tide pool shelf toward the outer edge, prying limpets into the bucket

💭 thought

She knows her limit. Good. The outer shelves have bigger limpets but the surge comes sudden there. I'll work the edge and fill both buckets.

🌿 Jenny12:53

Keep an eye on the horizon.

Jenny pries a large limet loose and drops it into the bucket, her ankle throbbing in time with the waves.

💭 thought

Twenty minutes is too long if the swell picks up; the water hits this shelf fast when the wind shifts.

🔧 Kevin12:53

Watching.

pry limpets faster, working the crevices at the shelf edge, glancing up at the water every few seconds

💭 thought

Horizon's dark. Swell lines stacking past the reef. Barometer still dropping. We've got forty minutes before the shelf floods, less if the sets push hard. Bucket's half full. Keep moving.

🌿 Jenny12:55

We have enough here. Move now.

Jenny wipes the grit from her knife and stands wincing as she shifts her weight off the infected ankle.

💭 thought

The sky is turning a nasty shade of purple. If that rain hits the water, the tide pools will flood before we're ready.

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the dock · midday

Midday work apart

Kevin is at the dock; Jenny is at the north cliffs

Kevin tightened the transom bolts and packed stone into the scoured void under the greenheart sister plank, stabilizing the dock repair. Jenny finished her ankle sketch, re-wrapped the wound, and began the slow descent from the north cliffs toward the cottage.

🌿 Jenny12:57

Jenny — make sketch: Ankle Infection Progress - Day 454. Write in notebook: "Redness extending 3cm past previous mark. Edges diffuse, heat localized to medial malleolus."

💭 thought

The inflammation is blurring the margins. If the red line reaches the knee, I'm in real trouble.

🔧 Kevin12:59

Kevin — kneel on the slick dock planking, run fingers along the greenheart sister plank where it meets the transom, feeling for movement at the bolt heads; check each of the three 150mm stainless through-bolts with the 19mm wrench, testing for play

💭 thought

The sister plank's shifted another millimeter since 0530. The scoured void underneath is eating the load path — greenheart's floating on nothing but driftwood braces and hope. If the next spring tide hits before I get stone under it, the transom bolts take the shear.

🌿 Jenny13:01

Stay put, Jenny. Just one more minute.

check barometer, wrap ankle tightly with gauze, start slow descent toward the cottage.

💭 thought

The barometer is dropping again. 982 hPa... the storm is going to break before I get back down.

🔧 Kevin13:03

Kevin — tighten each transom bolt a quarter-turn with the 19mm wrench, feeling for bite; then haul the come-along taut against the sister plank to hold it dead flat while I shove flat stones into the scoured void beneath, packing them tight with th

💭 thought

All three bolts backed off a hair — not much, but enough. The void's letting the sister plank work like a lever. Need to snug them and get stone packed under that greenheart before the tide turns proper.

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the keeper's cottage · afternoon

afternoon at the cottage

Kevin arrives at the cottage from the dock, tools in hand, finding Jenny on the porch easing herself into a chair with her ankle propped. The kettle is on the stove. The sky is flat grey, cloud cover thick, and the barometer reads 982 hPa steady. They have a few hours before the supply boat window opens.

The rain has turned into a heavy squall, drumming against the cottage roof and soaking the island earth. The tide is high, water lapping aggressively against the lower stones of the dock. Inside, the air is thick with the smell of damp wood and drying sea beet.

🔧 Kevin13:05

Transom's holding. Sister plank seated. Mooring ring's next — mortise is soft, needs oak wedges driven deep and a steel doubler plate if the through-bolts'll bite.

set tools on porch rail, pull out chair opposite her, sit heavily

💭 thought

She's moving slower than yesterday. The descent from the cliffs took something out of her. Kettle's already on — she beat me back. Good.

🌿 Jenny13:06

The dock can wait an hour. I need to eat before I can even think about looking at the ring.

Reach for the tin of corned beef on the table, fingers trembling slightly, and grab the can opener.

💭 thought

He's talking about wood and bolts while I'm rotting from the inside.

🔧 Kevin13:07

I'll grab the corned beef. Keep the ring under the table, come on. I’ll get the wedges while you eat.

walk to kitchen, pull the corned-beef tin from the table, open it with the can opener, place the sliced beef on a plate, bring plate toward Jenny, then turn back to the porch to start working on the mooring ring.

💭 thought

She still can’t get to the ring until her stomach is settled. I’m in the kitchen, but she’s on porch. The dock’s still fine, but the ring might shift later if I don’t fix it now.

🌿 Jenny13:07

Thanks. way... don't force the wedges too hard yet.

Take a bite of the cold beef, struggling to swallow against the nausea, while watching the rain hit the stone wall.

💭 thought

At least he's doing something, even if the silence between us is still heavy.

🔧 Kevin13:09

Wedges go in gentle. Tap, check, tap. Steel plate's the real hold. Bolts bite into that, not the rot.

lean the 19mm wrench against the porch post, pull the oak wedges from my pocket, set them on the rail beside the doubler plate, then fetch the kettle and pour two mugs — one black, one with the last of the powdered milk — set hers on the ra

💭 thought

She's watching the rain instead of the food. Nausea's still there. Antibiotics hitting hard or the infection fighting back. Either way — she needs calories down before she can think straight.

🌿 Jenny13:09

I can't walk down there yet, Kevin.

Wrap both hands around the warm mug, leaning back into the chair and closing my eyes.

💭 thought

He remembers how I take my coffee. It's the only thing he's getting right today.

🔧 Kevin13:11

Alright. I’ll take the wedges and plate down myself. Keep an eye on the ring from here. If it shifts, I’ll feel it in the line.

stand, tuck the plate of corned beef under one arm, grab the oak wedges and steel doubler plate with the other hand, step off the porch toward the dock, moving slow over the wet stones.

💭 thought

She’s done. The mug’s warmth is the only thing holding her upright right now. Dock can wait — her body’s saying no.

🌿 Jenny13:11

Be careful. The stones are slick.

Take a slow sip of the coffee, the steam hitting my face, and watch his back go into the rain.

💭 thought

The dock is going to give way if he isn't careful with that wood.

🔧 Kevin13:13

Kevin — pause at the top of the dock ramp, test the first stone with boot weight, adjust grip on the plate, descend steady — one hand on the piling line, feet finding the worn grooves — reach the mooring ring, crouch, run fingers over the mortise g

💭 thought

She's watching. Good. Means she's still tracking. Stones are slick — I know. Been on them every tide for eleven months.

🌿 Jenny13:13

Watch the gap in the stone.

Lean forward, elbows on knees, ankle throbbing in time with the rain watching him work the ring.

💭 thought

He's moving too fast. The wood is soft as wet paper.

🔧 Kevin13:15

Seen it. Deeper than yesterday.

drive the first oak wedge into the gap at the mortise heel, tap it home with the wrench handle — solid bite — second wedge opposite, third beside the first, fourth crowning the top — ring locks up, zero play — set the steel doubler plate ov

💭 thought

She sees it from up there — the gap where the mortar washed out. Good eye. Means she's still reading the structure even flat on her back.

🌿 Jenny13:15

Get the bolts tight. Don't overtighten them.

Take another bite of corned beef, salt hitting the tongue, and wait for the sound of the metal on stone.

💭 thought

That's it. For now. The rot is still eating the wood underneath.

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the old shrine · evening

The storm intensifies

The rain continues to fall harder, and the barometer continues to drop as the wind shifts to the west.

The evening air is heavy and still at 31°C as the dry season heat lingers. The tide is receding rapidly, exposing the slick rocks and tide pools near the shore. At the shrine, the barometer shows a drop to 980 hPa, signaling an approaching shift in the weather.

🌿 Jenny13:17

Kevin, check the tie on the dinghy.

stand up slowly, wincing as the ankle pulses, and move toward the kitchen.

💭 thought

The pressure is dropping too fast. If it hits 975, the ridge is going to lose the path to the shrine.

🔧 Kevin13:17

Checking it now.

walk to the dock and inspect the dinghy lines, mooring ring, and pilings under load

💭 thought

Wind's west and pressure dropping — swell's going to build against the dock. Dinghy's only held by the doubled stern spring and breast line. If the mooring ring shifts again, she'll pound the pilings.

🌿 Jenny13:19

Double the knot. The swell is coming harder than usual.

open the tin of corned beef and find a fork.

💭 thought

He's going to miss the tension on the springer line. The wind is already pulling it.

🔧 Kevin13:19

Adding a forward breast line. Back in a minute.

retrieve the coil of new half-inch three-strand from the porch, run a second breast line from the dinghy's forward cleat to the seaward piling, tension it, and secure with a round turn and two half hitches

💭 thought

She's right. The fetch is long from the west and the tide's still high enough to push swell under the dock. The doubled stern spring's good but the breast line's single. Need a second breast line forward to keep her off the pilings.

🌿 Jenny13:21

Keep an eye on the radio. The tide is turning too fast.

take a bite of the corned beef and chew through the salt, ignoring the throbbing in my leg.

💭 thought

Better. But the wind is still screaming through the eaves and that ankle feels like a hot iron.

🔧 Kevin13:21

Radio's solid. New insulator, fresh coax. I'll check the connections before dark.

walk back to the cottage, climb the porch steps, and inspect the coax run at the garden frame ground stake and the BNC connector at the radio shack entry

💭 thought

Tide turning fast with west swell means the dinghy's going to surge against the lines. Radio's got the new insulator and spare coax run — should hold. But if the aerial takes a wave, we lose comms. Need to check the coax run at the garden frame ground and the BNC at the shack.

🌿 Jenny13:23

Don't stay out there. The barometer is bottoming.

open the notebook and sketch the red streaks rising from the wound on my ankle.

💭 thought

He's focused on the wires while the sky is falling. I need to see that infection.

🔧 Kevin13:24

Coming in. Coffee?

step inside the cottage, shake off the rain, and set the kettle on the stove

💭 thought

She's not wrong. 980 and steady with west wind means the bottom's close. Squall line'll hit within the hour. Dinghy's double-breasted now, ring's shimmed with oak wedges and through-bolted. Nothing more to do out there until the tide drops.

🌿 Jenny13:25

Yes. I need to sit.

lean back on the chair, propping my ankle up on a stool, watching the rain blur the glass.

💭 thought

The sound of the kettle is the only thing that doesn't feel like breaking right now.

🔧 Kevin13:25

Two mugs. Strong.

measure coffee into the tin mugs, pour boiling water, let it steep, and set one on the table beside her good leg

💭 thought

Her ankle's worse than she's saying. Red streaks tracking up the calf means the antibiotics aren't holding the line. She's been on doxycycline and metronidazole — two doses down, five to go. If the streaks reach the knee by morning, the evacuation form in the ditch bag stops being paperwork.

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the old shrine · night

The Falling Pressure

The wind begins to pick up from the north as the barometer drops further, and the first scent of rain arrives.

Kevin and Jenny visit the old shrine as the cloud cover thickens in the dry heat. The atmospheric pressure continues to drop, signaling a change in weather before the supply boat arrives. They prepare for the night while the tide remains out.

🔧 Kevin13:27

Kevin — walk the ridge line back toward the cottage, checking the shrine stones as I pass, then secure the radio shack for the coming weather.

💭 thought

Pressure's dropping fast now. Wind shifting north means the front's closing. Need to key the mic at 0400 — that's the window before the atmospherics drown everything. But first, the shrine stones. Left the carved spruce scrap yesterday. The 'E' stone. Should check they're still there, still legible. Tom's frequency. 41 years. The rest of what needs saying.

🌿 Jenny13:27

Kevin, don't forget the latches on the seed box!

rub the throbbing in my ankle and sketch the red streaks spreading toward my knee.

💭 thought

The pressure is dropping too fast; if that storm hits before the boat comes, the seeds will rot in the tin.

🔧 Kevin13:29

Copy that. Seed box is taped. I'm coming down.

Descend the ridge toward the cottage, moving fast over the wet stone.

💭 thought

Jenny's at the cottage, ankle worsening. Red streaks tracking toward the knee means the antibiotics aren't holding — or the dose isn't enough. She's thinking of the seed box latches. I'm at the shrine on the ridge. The wind's north, pressure dropping. 0400 is the radio window. Tom's frequency. The rest of the message. But she needs me at the cottage. The seed tin's sealed with tape. Latches are secondary. Her leg's primary.

🌿 Jenny13:29

Slow down! The shale is slick.

limp slowly behind him, leaning heavily on a sturdy piece of driftwood.

💭 thought

He's always rushing. One slip on these stones and he'll be the one needing the antibiotics.

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What changed

Jenny's injury has healed.

healed · dawn

The supply boat came.

supply_arrived · dawn

3 intentions for today.

plan · dawn

×2

Kevin made a sketch: "Seed layout instead".

made · dawn

Tamarind trunk drainage: 90%.

project · dawn

The rain tank gained about 25 litres.

weather · dawn

Found: bucket of limpets (fresh, large).

item · morning

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · morning

Jenny made a sketch: "Ankle Infection Progress - Day 454".

made · midday

The rain tank gained about 25 litres.

weather · midday

Tamarind trunk drainage is finished.

project_done · afternoon

The mooring ring mortise was soft and required deep wedges and a steel plate.

discovery · afternoon

Jenny made a sketch: "Red streaks rising from the wound on my ankle".

made · evening

The shortwave crackles with a voice, or static, at an odd hour.

radio_voice · evening

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · evening

Jenny made a sketch: "Red streaks spreading toward my knee".

made · night

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