Day 468

The Tracking and the Tide

Kevin checked the barometer, then the dock. South piling's greenheart sister plank bridged a scoured void. He oiled seized through-bolts, drove oak wedges, worked slow on slick wood. "Easy does it," he muttered. The tide climbed.

Dawn broke over a rising barometer and a leg gone hot and red. Jenny sat on the porch, ankle propped on a seed crate, sketchbook open. She drew a precise pencil line around the edge of the tracking on her calf — morphology of the wayangitic spread — then another: red tracking on her shin. The infection was moving up the lymphatics in the thigh.

Midday heat pressed flat. Kevin climbed the moss-slick roof to batten the loose tarp with timber strips and weights. Jenny stayed below, mint poultice on the ankle, watching the rain tank intake. It gained twenty-five litres.

He returned, inspected the shortwave. Transmit dead, receive crackling. Aerial insulator tape lifting. "Needs re-seal before the blow," he said. Jenny: "Wrap it tight. The wind is already picking up."

Afternoon: Jenny emptied the heirloom seed tin. Lettuce packets showed minor mold at damp edges. She examined each corner. "They look dry for now," she said, "but I need to check the corners."

Evening. Generator winding down. Limpet broth in tin mugs. "Kettle's on. Limpet broth in five. Drink it slow," Kevin said. She drank. "It smells like the sea." "Good. Finish it."

Night fell thick and still. Tide fully out, shore pools slick with kelp rot. Barometer steady six hours. Generator fuel for twelve days. Water tank full. Jenny scratched pencil on paper. Kevin watched the line she'd drawn climb higher.

Scenes

the keeper's cottage · dawn

The Rising Pressure Gap

Jenny sits on the porch chair with her ankle elevated on a crate of seeds. Kevin checks the barometer as the sky darkens over the garden wall.

The pressure is rising, indicating the immediate storm is breaking, though the air remains heavy and humid. Jenny sits on the porch, her notebook open as she meticulously sketches the spreading inflammation on her leg, marking the advance with a pencil line like a tide chart.

🔧 Kevin02:57

Kettle's on. Limpet broth in five. Drink it slow.

walk to the porch rail and rest a hand on the back of her chair, looking down at her ankle where the pencil line marks the infection's edge

💭 thought

Barometer's still rising. 998. Sky's lying — clouds stacking up but pressure says different. She's propped on the seed crate, ankle above heart. Good. The pencil line on her leg... need to see where it sits now. Last check it crossed the knee. If it's moving up, the herbs aren't holding. But she won't take the knife. Won't let me cut. So I watch. And wait. And keep the radio warm.

🌿 Jenny02:59

I need the broth. Just... don't touch the bandage yet.

Sketch the morphology of the wayangitic tracking on my leg in the notebook.

💭 thought

If the tracking reaches the thigh, I won't be able to walk to the north ridge, let alone finish the survey.

🔧 Kevin03:00

Not touching. Mug's on the rail.

set the tin mug of steaming limpet broth on the porch rail beside her, then step back and watch her sketch, eyes flicking between the pencil line on her leg and the notebook page

💭 thought

She's mapping it. Treating her own leg like a transect quadrant — elevation, species spread, salt tolerance thresholds. Clinical. Detached. The way she used to do sea beet morphology before the fever took the fine motor control. Her hands are steady now. That's either good or very bad. Broth first. Then I look at the drawing. Then we decide.

🌿 Jenny03:01

It smells like the sea.

Take a slow sip of the broth while focusing the pencil on the pattern of the inflammation.

💭 thought

The red lines are moving faster than I can draw them; I need to hope the antibiotics hold before the boat arrives.

🔧 Kevin03:01

Good. Finish it.

lean against the porch post, arms folded, watching the pencil move across the page — the careful hatch marks, the margin notation, the way she records the advance like tide lines on a chart

💭 thought

She's drinking. That's something. The broth's mostly water and salt and whatever minerals the limpets pulled from the rock — not medicine, but it's warm and it's clean and it's in her. She's drawing the tracking like it's data. Like if she gets the morphology right, the infection becomes a problem with a solution. Maybe it does. The line at her knee... looked angry this morning. Red, hot, spreading. If the pencil stops at the groin, we're still in fight territory. If it goes past... Mayday. Coordinates. Nature of distress. She can hate me after.

🌿 Jenny03:03

I'm done.

Close the notebook and reach for the boiled water to start debriding.

💭 thought

If I can't get the fever down, the seeds will just rot in that tin while I lie here.

🔧 Kevin03:03

Water's hot. Let it cool a minute.

turn and go into the kitchen, returning with the pot of boiled water and a clean tin mug, setting both on the porch rail beside her — then sit on the edge of the crate, facing her ankle, ready to help or hold or whatever she needs

💭 thought

She's moving to debride. That means she saw something in the drawing she didn't like — or she's buying time before the real decision. The boiled water's on the stove. Clean gauze in the kit. She thinks the herbs and salt and careful cleaning will draw the poison back. It hasn't. Not in three days. The line crossed the knee. The groin's next. Bloodstream after that. She won't let me cut. Won't let me key the Mayday. Says the island provides. The island provided a German newsfeed on 2182 and a barometer that lies. I'll let her clean it. Then I'll look at the wound myself. Then we'll see.

🌿 Jenny03:05

Just hold the light for me.

Dip the gauze into the warm water and begin to clean the area.

💭 thought

The heat from the leg is radiating off the skin; I need to see if the tracking has moved since the last dose.

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the keeper's cottage · morning

Morning Lull

The tide is further out, exposing the rocks near the north shore. The clouds are thinning slightly, but the wet-season heat persists.

Kevin returns from the dock as the pressure begins to stabilize, noting the dip in the barometer has passed. Jenny is inside the cottage, debriding her leg with boiled water and managing the pain while checking the heirloom seed tin for any signs of rot from the rising humidity.

🔧 Kevin03:05

Going to the dock. Check the north piling and the transom sleeve while the tide's out. Back before the turn.

walk down to the dock, crouch at the north piling, run fingers along the greenheart shim line, check for movement or new scour, then move to the dinghy transom and inspect the bronze sleeve epoxy joint, tap it with the handle of the heavy w

💭 thought

Tide's low enough to check the north piling shim and the scoured void under the greenheart sister plank. If the water's dropped another foot I can see whether the shim's holding or if the piling's settled further. Also need to look at the transom bronze sleeve — last time the epoxy was tacky but the joint felt sound. Jenny's on the porch with her leg propped. She hasn't asked me to stay. She hasn't asked me to go.

🌿 Jenny03:07

Be careful with those bolts, the wood is slick.

Draw a precise pencil line around the edge of the tracking on my calf, then reach for the boiled water and poultice.

💭 thought

The red line is moving. If it reaches the knee, I won't be able to walk to the spring, let alone forage.

🔧 Kevin03:08

Aye. Slow hands.

crouch at the north piling, press my palm flat against the greenheart shim where it meets the piling toe, feel for any give or water seepage, then shift to the transom and run a fingertip along the bronze sleeve epoxy bead, testing cure wit

💭 thought

She's watching me even when she's tending her own wound. The pencil line — she's mapping the advance like a surveyor. Smart. Means she'll know if it jumps the margin before the naked eye catches it. Slick bolts, slick timber, rising tide behind me. I'll move slow.

🌿 Jenny03:11

Don't stay out too long, the barometer is dropping again.

Apply the boiled water to the wound, flinching as the heat stings, then wrap the leg in the fresh mint poultice and clean gauze.

💭 thought

He's too slow. The infection doesn't wait for the tide to turn.

🔧 Kevin03:11

Shim's holding. Transom's sound. Coming in.

stand, step off the damp dock planks onto the shore path, walk back toward the cottage at a steady pace, glance at the barometer on the porch rail as I pass — 996 hPa and falling — then set the heavy wrench down on the workbench and sit on

💭 thought

Barometer dropping again. She felt it in her leg before I saw the needle move. The shim's solid — no play, no weep. Transom sleeve epoxy's cured hard, no crack lines. Good. But the tide's already turning; I can hear the channel filling. Five minutes before the current rips. Need to be off the dock planks.

🌿 Jenny03:15

Check the radio. The sky is turning.

Lean back against the chair, feeling the throb in my leg between heartbeats, and reach for the seed tin to check for moisture.

💭 thought

The pressure is dropping. If the storm hits before the boat, I'm stuck here with this leg.

🔧 Kevin03:15

Checking.

walk to the radio shelf, lift the mic, flip the power, let the tubes warm, key the mic on 2182 kHz and speak the island's call sign and position, then release and listen for any return — coastguard, supply boat, static, anything

💭 thought

Sky's going the colour of old bruises. She reads it faster than the glass. Radio aerial insulator was shattered last storm — I bonded it with epoxy and self-amalgamating tape, held for weeks, but the tape's been peeling in this heat. If the wind picks up, the aerial whips and the ceramic takes the strain. Need to key the mic on 2182, see if the set even hears itself. And the supply boat's due in six days. If the coastguard's still gone, that boat's our only thread.

🌿 Jenny03:17

way but noise.

Open the tin of seeds, fingers trembling slightly as I lift the lid to check for any dampness or rot on the grandmother's heirloom.

💭 thought

static. Just the hiss of the atmosphere. My leg feels like it's melting.

🔧 Kevin03:17

Transmit's dead. Receive works. Aerial insulator tape's lifting. Needs re-seal before the blow.

set the mic down, pull the spare porcelain insulator and the roll of self-amalgamating tape from the shelf, check the tape's tack with a thumb, then move to the porch door and look up at the mast bracket where the aerial feeds through — ass

💭 thought

Nothing but noise. Same as yesterday. Same as the day before. The set receives fine — German newsfeed came through clear at 1400 — but transmit's deaf or the aerial's still bleeding signal into the wet ceramic. Tape's lifting at the edges. Wind'll finish it. I could climb the mast in this rising wind, re-tape the insulator, hope the epoxy holds another blow. Or I sit here and listen to static while the barometer drops and the supply boat fights a building sea six days out. Jenny's hands shake on the seed tin. She thinks I don't see.

🌿 Jenny03:21

Wrap it tight. The wind is already picking up.

Watch the clouds bruise over the ridge, my hand resting on the throbing heat of my calf.

💭 thought

If the wind catches that wire, it's gone. I can't call for help twice.

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the keeper's cottage · midday

MIDDAY

The flat sky thickens as the heat of midday presses on the cottage. The wind picks up, rattling the loose tarp on the roof.

Kevin climbed onto the roof to secure the loose tarp with timber strips and weights despite the slick shingles. Jenny stayed on the porch, applying a mint poultice to her infected ankle and checking the water intake.

🔧 Kevin03:21

Going to secure the roof tarp. Stay put.

climb onto the porch roof to batten down the loose tarp with timber strips and weights

💭 thought

Wind's shifting. Tarp's loose. Need to batten it before it tears the roof. Jenny's inside with the leg — don't want her moving on it.

🌿 Jenny03:23

Be careful, the shingles are slick with that moss.

Winince as I shift my throbbing leg, then reach for the seed tin to move it closer to the wood stove.

💭 thought

If he drops a tool, it's going to tear the canvas. way leg feels like it's on fire.

🔧 Kevin03:23

Got it. Boots are grippy.

work carefully across the moss-slick shingles, pulling the tarp tight and securing each corner with timber strips and oak wedges, checking each fastening twice

💭 thought

She's right about the moss. Nearly went over once already. Tin by the stove is smart — heat'll finish drying those seeds.

🌿 Jenny03:25

Just don't drop anything on the garden.

Watch him from the doorway, then look back down at my notebook to sketch the red tracking on my shin.

💭 thought

At least he's being useful for once. I hope the wind doesn't catch.

🔧 Kevin03:26

Nothing's falling.

finish the last corner, test the tarp tension with a solid pull, then climb back down to the porch roof and drop to the ground

💭 thought

She's tracking the infection like I track a failing bearing — precise, clinical, watching for the moment it spins. Garden's the last thing I'd hit.

🌿 Jenny03:27

Good. Check the rain tank when you're done.

Sit back with a sigh, reaching for the bowl of boiled water and the mint poultice.

💭 thought

way. Now I need to focus on this leg before I lose my mobility entirely.

🔧 Kevin03:27

On it.

walk around to the back of the cottage, check the rain tank level and the gutter catchment for debris, tap the side to gauge fill

💭 thought

Tank's been holding. Still, good to verify before the next squall. She's managing the leg — mint, heat, rest. Best I can do is keep the systems running.

🌿 Jenny03:29

Check for leaves in the intake.

Dip the clean cloth into the warm water, bracing myself before it touches the angry skin of my leg.

💭 thought

If that tank is low, I'm in trouble for the antibiotics. The heat is suffocating.

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the keeper's cottage · afternoon

Afternoon Stillness

The heavy air remains motionless as the humidity peaks. Kevin and Jenny meet in the kitchen area as the tide continues its steady climb toward the dock.

Kevin inspected the south piling through-bolts and mooring ring mortise on the dock, applying penetrating oil to seized threads and checking oak wedges. Jenny examined heirloom seeds from the tin for moisture damage and mold while monitoring her ankle infection.

🌿 Jenny03:30

The tide is high. We need to check the moorings.

Jenny winces as she adjusts the poultice and looks at the seed tin on the table.

💭 thought

My leg is throbbing in time with the rain; if this infection doesn't break, I'll never see those seeds in soil.

🔧 Kevin03:31

Aye. Let me grab the wrench and the light. You stay put — I'll look.

pick up the 19mm wrench and the LED headlamp from the shelf, pull on boots, and walk out to the dock

💭 thought

She's right. High tide means maximum load on the ring and the sister plank. If the greenheart's floating on a scoured void, the rising water could shift it. Need to check the wedges and the through-bolts before the slack.

🌿 Jenny03:31

Watch the south-side bolts, the salt is eating them today.

Jenny sits at the kitchen table and opens the seed tin to check for the scent of damp.

💭 thought

way thinks he's helping, but he's just avoiding the sight of the red climbing my leg.

🔧 Kevin03:33

South side. Got it.

walk down the porch steps onto the dock planking, headlamp beam cutting through the humid dusk, and crouch at the south piling to inspect the through-bolts and the greenheart sister plank alignment

💭 thought

South-side bolts. She's seen the corrosion I missed. Salt crust builds fast in this heat. Need to check the nylocs on the sister plank and the ring mortise — if the threads are gone, the wedges won't hold long.

🌿 Jenny03:33

Don't force the wrench, the wood is soft.

Jenny takes a handful of the heirloom seeds from the tin and inspects them for any sign of mold.

💭 thought

If those bolts shear, the whole section goes, and I'm stuck here with no way to reach the boat.

🔧 Kevin03:34

Easy does it.

fit the 19mm wrench on the south-side through-bolt nut, apply slow steady pressure feeling for bite, watch the greenheart sister plank for any shift under the dock timbers

💭 thought

She knows every creak of this dock. Soft wood means the bolts will spin before they bite. Easy pressure, feel for the nyloc resistance. If the threads are stripped in the greenheart, no amount of torque helps — need longer bolts or a steel plate.

🌿 Jenny03:35

Use the oil if it won't turn.

Jenny winces as she shifts her weight, watching the red line on her calf through the window.

💭 thought

The metal is fused with rust; if he pulls too hard, the bolt will snap.

🔧 Kevin03:37

Oil first. Then the wedges.

walk back to the porch, retrieve the penetrating oil can from the shelf, return to the south piling and spray the bolt threads liberally, then move to the mooring ring mortise to check the oak wedges for movement or crush

💭 thought

Penetrating oil on the south bolts. The can's on the porch shelf. Won't hurt to let it soak while I check the ring mortise wedges — if the oak's holding, the ring's the next weak point. She's watching the line on her leg like I watch the barometer. Neither of us likes what we see.

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the keeper's cottage · evening

Evening on the porch

Kevin and Jenny sit on the porch as the generator winds down. The rain has eased to a mist. The shortwave crackles with static. Jenny's ankle is propped on a cushion; Kevin has a tin mug of limpet broth. The supply boat is due in six days.

The heavy humidity of the wet season clings to the cottage as the tide recedes. Kevin has spent the afternoon struggling with the shortwave radio, frustrated by the persistent interference despite his repairs, while Jenny focused on meticulously inspecting the heirloom seed packets, fearing the slow creep of mold in the damp air.

🔧 Kevin03:37

Boat's due in six. Barometer's holding. Generator gave us a full charge.

sip from the tin mug, watching the mist lift off the water

💭 thought

Six days. Generator's charging, tank's full, epoxy's setting in the mooring ring. If the barometer holds, the boat makes it. If it drops four millibars in six hours, it doesn't. Jenny's pencil line hasn't moved past the knee in two hours. That's something.

🌿 Jenny03:39

I need to check the seed tin again. If the humidity holds, the heirloom varieties are lost.

Sketch the morphology of the sea beet leaf in the notebook.

💭 thought

Six days is a long time for an infection to stay stable if the red line doesn't move.

🔧 Kevin03:40

They're dry, Jen. Stove's been running. Cloth's bone dry.

set the empty mug on the porch rail, wipe hands on thighs

💭 thought

She's been checking that tin every few hours. Humidity's brutal — 29 degrees and the air's thick enough to drink. But the seeds have been drying by the stove for days. Wrapped in dry cloth, warmest spot. If they were going to rot, they'd have done it by now.

🌿 Jenny03:41

I know. I just need to see the packets for mold.

Open the heirloom seed tin and inspect the packets for moisture damage.

💭 thought

If the seeds are dry, I might actually have a chance once this leg stops eating me.

🔧 Kevin03:41

Take your time.

lean back against the porch post, watch the mist thin over the water

💭 thought

Let her check. It's the only thing that settles her — having eyes on it herself. The Cherokee Purple, the Brandywine. She labeled every packet like she was filing engine parts. Her hands were steady then. They're steady now, too, even with the fever gone and the ankle still angry.

🌿 Jenny03:43

I'm not sure.

Carefully lift the seed packets from the tin and lay them on the dry newspaper to check for dampness or rot.

💭 thought

If they're damp, I've wasted my grandmother's whole life on paper.

🔧 Kevin03:43

What do you see?

shift weight, boots scraping the porch boards

💭 thought

She's hesitating. That's not like her. Usually she knows — viable or not, move on. But these aren't just seeds. They're the garden she talked about for eleven months while I built walls and fixed engines and let the weeds win. The sensory garden. The life we'd make. She's holding the proof of whether any of it was real.

🌿 Jenny03:45

They look dry for now, but I need to check the corners.

Inspect the lettuce-seed packets for any hint of mold or dampness.

💭 thought

The paper feels stiff, but the edges aren't yellowed yet.

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the keeper's cottage · night

Evening Stillness

The air is thick and unmoving as the sun dips below the grey horizon. Kevin and Jenny meet on the porch, the sound of the generator cooling replaced by the distant lapping of the receding tide.

The humid night air is heavy and still, the scent of salt and damp earth clinging to the cottage. The tide is fully out, leaving the shore pools slick and smelling of kelp and decay. Inside the cottage, the low hum of the generator provides a constant backdrop to the rhythmic scratching of Jenny's pencil on paper.

🔧 Kevin03:45

Evening.

sit on the porch step beside her, close enough that our shoulders almost touch, and pull the kettle off the stove to pour two mugs of the limpet broth still warming there

💭 thought

She's watching the horizon like she's waiting for something to rise out of it. The pencil line on her leg is past the knee now. I should've cut yesterday. I should've cut the day before. The radio's dead quiet on 2182. Six days to the boat if it comes. Six days of this.

🌿 Jenny03:47

The pressure's holding steady.

way takes the mug with both hands, the warmth seeping into her cold palms, and reaches for her notebook to check the pencil mark on her ankle.

💭 thought

The red line hasn't moved past the mark, but the heat feels like it's pulsing.

🔧 Kevin03:47

Barometer hasn't moved in six hours. Generator's got fuel for twelve days at two-hour cycles. Water tank's full.

wrap both hands around my own mug, letting the heat bleed into my palms, and watch the pencil scratch across paper in the dying light

💭 thought

Steady at 1002. That's something. Not rising, not falling. Means the front's stalled or passed. Means we buy time. Her fingers are white-knuckled on the mug. The pencil line — she's measuring it like a tide mark. Like if she documents it careful enough, it stops being real.

🌿 Jenny03:49

It's good. For now.

take a slow sip of the broth, my eyes fixed on the red line on my skin to see if it has climbed even a millimeter higher.

💭 thought

Twelve days is enough if the boat shows up, but the island doesn't care.

🔧 Kevin03:49

You want me to look at it again? Proper light inside.

set the mug down on the porch floorboards and reach for the headlamp hanging from the nail by the door, clicking it on without waiting for an answer

💭 thought

It's climbed. I can see it from here — three, four millimeters past where she marked it this afternoon. The skin around it is shiny, tight. Hot. She knows. She's just not saying. The broth's good protein, salts, warmth. Won't touch what's moving up her leg. Six days. The boat doesn't always come on schedule. Sometimes it doesn't come at all.

🌿 Jenny03:51

way check the line.

peel back the damp gauze on my ankle, flinching as the cool air hits the raw skin, and hold my leg out for him to see.

💭 thought

The light is too bright, but I need to see if the infection is winning.

🔧 Kevin03:51

It's tracking up the thigh. Lymphatics.

crouch down, headlamp beam sharp on the wound, fingers probing the edge of the fluctuance — hot, tense, ready to burst — then reach for the first aid kit on the shelf behind me without taking my eyes off her leg

💭 thought

Past the knee. The red streaks feathering up the thigh now — lymphangitic spread. That's bloodstream territory. Septicemia. The smell hits me before I even lean in: sweet-rot, old meat, something floral underneath from the mint poultice trying to fight it. The skin's purple-black at the center. Fluctuant. Full of pus. She's burning up; I can feel the heat radiating off her leg from six inches away. Her pulse at the ankle is thready, fast. Twelve hours, maybe less, before she crashes. The boat's six days out if it comes. The radio's silent. The helicopter's grounded. I have a scalpel in the first aid kit. I have antibiotics for two more days. I have hands that know how to cut.

🌿 Jenny03:53

Don't be too rough.

hold my breath, watching his fingers white against the skin as he traces the red line.

💭 thought

If it hits the groin, I'm not going to see the spring.

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What changed

3 intentions for today.

plan · dawn

×2

A pod of dolphins passes close off the point.

dolphins · dawn

Jenny made a sketch: "Morphology of the wayangitic tracking on my leg in the notebook".

made · dawn

Something goes wrong in the middle of the work — a slip, a cut, a wrenched ankle.

injury · dawn

Jenny made a sketch: "Precise pencil line around the edge of the tracking on my calf,".

made · morning

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · morning

Jenny made a sketch: "Red tracking on my shin".

made · midday

The rain tank gained about 25 litres.

weather · midday

greenheart sister plank on south piling is bridging a scoured void beneath the dock timbers

discovery · afternoon

heirloom lettuce seed packets have minor mold at edges from damp storage

discovery · afternoon

Jenny made a sketch: "Morphology of the sea beet leaf in the notebook".

made · evening

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · evening

The infection is tracking up the lymphatics in the thigh.

discovery · night

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