Day 483
Day 483: Storm Approaching, Boat Unseen
Rain steadied through morning. Kevin secured the shade cloth with double-hitches on cedar stakes against increasing shear winds. Jenny watched the horizon, nursing her throbbing ankle. "Check the way ring again, Kevin. If it shifts even a way, the whole dinghy is lost to the tide," she said. He'd checked at first light — wedges holding, doubler plate secure, but scour under the north piling worse. "Greenheart shim's seated but the void behind it's deep. Tide's low now. I'll look before the boat comes."
Dawn broke heavy and still on Day 483, tide fully out, slick rocks exposed. Kevin, exhausted from a night watching Jenny's infected ankle, organized new stakes and lines for the shade cloth repair while she sat on the garden wall, ankle elevated. The supply boat was due tomorrow. Radio silent. Pressure dropping.
Rain steadied through morning. Kevin secured the shade cloth with double-hitches on cedar stakes against increasing shear winds. Jenny watched the horizon, nursing her throbbing ankle. "Check the way ring again, Kevin. If it shifts even a way, the whole dinghy is lost to the tide," she said. He'd checked at first light — wedges holding, doubler plate secure, but scour under the north piling worse. "Greenheart shim's seated but the void behind it's deep. Tide's low now. I'll look before the boat comes."
Midday: downpour thickened. Water crept toward garden edge. Kevin joined her under shelter. Barometer falling fast. Afternoon, he reinforced shade cloth anchors; she managed fever, mint poultice on ankle. Evening, they retreated to cottage. Rain continued. Jenny prepped radio. "Supply boat, supply boat, this is Sorrel Island caretaker station, over." Static. "Propagation might be bad with this front moving through. I'll try again at the scheduled window."
Night. Rain tapered to drizzle. Distant motor. "Doesn't sound like the supply boat," Kevin said. "The rhythm is too slow for the Yanmar. Stay low." Jenny: "Don't leave the radius. I need to hear them if they signal a warning." Fire held. Tank full — four hundred litres, overflow running. They waited.
Scenes
the garden · dawnPre-Arrival Prep
Jenny sits on the garden wall, checking the tension on the shade cloth while her ankle is elevated. Kevin organizes the new stakes and lines for the anchor repair, preparing for the boat's arrival tomorrow.
The air is heavy and still as dawn breaks on Day 483. The tide is fully out, revealing the slick rocks of the tide pools. Kevin is exhausted from a night-long vigil watching Jenny's ankle infection, while the garden waits for the supply boat's arrival.
Check the way ring again, Kevin. If it shifts even a way, the whole dinghy is lost to the tide.
Sketch the pattern of the red streaks on my calf in the margin of the notebook.
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Checked it at first light. Wedges holding. Doubler plate didn't shift. But the scour under the north piling's worse — greenheart shim's seated but the void behind it's deep. Tide's low now. I'll look before the boat comes.
Walk to the dock with the heavy wrench and come-along, inspect the mooring ring mortise and north piling scour at low tide.
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Don't go too far into the water. My heart is beating fast enough today.
Wrap the ankle poultice with fresh gauze, pulling it tight but not cutting off the flow.
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I'll stay in the shallows. Just need to see how bad the scour is — if it's undermining the piling toe, we might lose the ring even with the doubler plate. Won't go past my knees.
Wade carefully to the north piling, probe the scour with the spade handle, check if the greenheart shim is still seated and not washing out. If it's loose, I'll drive another oak wedge behind it before the tide turns.
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way watch the current. It's stronger than it looks at low tide.
Sit on the stone wall and watch him, tracing the red line on my calf with a trembling finger.
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Current's pushing northeast — same as the wind. I'll face into it, keep low. Won't be long.
Probe the scour hole with the spade handle — feel for the piling toe and check if the greenheart shim is still bearing or if it's suspended in water. If it's loose, I'll drive an oak wedge behind it to take the load.
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the garden · morningWaiting for the Tide
Kevin and Jenny stand in the garden as the heavy air presses down. The supply boat is due tomorrow, but the radio is silent and the shade cloth is failing.
The rain continues to steady down, soaking the island as the tide rises toward the dock. Kevin has finished securing the shade cloth over the garden, using double-hitches on the cedar stakes to withstand the increasing shear winds. Jenny sits against the stone wall, nursing the throbbing in her ankle and watching the horizon for any sign of life while the pressure continues to drop.
I’ll fix the cloth after I check the radio one more time. Then we’ll get you inside, warm.
Walk to the porch, pick up the shortwave radio, and turn the dial slowly to Tom’s known frequency, listening for any sign of life in the static.
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The weeds are pulling out, Kevin. way... make sure the water is full. I'm fine.
sit on the stone wall, leaning back to hide the throbbing, and watch the red line on my calf creep closer to the knee.
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I’ll check the tank after I shore up the west corner. You sit tight—no standing. I’ll bring you a mug of nettle tea when I’m done.
Walk to the garden shed, grab the spare cedar stakes and a coil of new three-strand rope, then return to the shade cloth’s western anchor point where the fabric’s ripped free.
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Don't let the tea get too cold... the rain is turning steady.
wipe sweat from my brow with the back of a shaky hand and sketch the path of the infection in the margin of my notebook.
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Tea won’t get cold in this rain. Water’s boiling on the stove. I’ll bring it out in a tin.
Drive the cedar stake deep with the mallet, pull the shade cloth taut, and secure it with a clove hitch and two half-hitches on the new rope—then move to the next anchor point, working methodically along the western edge.
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Use a double hitch on the north corner. The wind shears harder there.
lean my head back against the cold stone wall and close my eyes, listening to the rhythmic thud of the mallet.
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Double hitch it is. North corner next.
Move to the north anchor point, pull the shade cloth tight against the expected shear, and secure it with a double hitch on the new cedar stake, cinching it down hard with the mallet handle for leverage.
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It looks tight enough. way... watch the radio.
rub a hand over the swollen ankle, feeling the heat radiating off the skin through the gauze.
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Going now.
Walk to the porch, pick up the shortwave radio, power it on, and run through the scheduled supply boat frequency first—key the mic: "Sorrel Island, position 49°12'N 006°45'W, requesting supply boat ETA and status. Over."
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Jenny — hold my breath and stare at the grey line of the horizon, waiting for the static to break.
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the garden · middayThe Rising Tide and Falling Pressure
The rain turns into a steady downpour as the water creeps closer to the edge of the garden. Kevin joins Jenny under the shelter as the barometer continues its rapid descent.
The heat is heavy as the sky thickens, signaling a shift in the weather. Kevin focuses on securing the garden shade cloth anchors to prepare for the coming storm, while Jenny manages the persistent infection on her ankle in the midday shade.
The pressure is dropping too fast, Kevin. Check the radio again.
press a hand against the red line on my calf and wince.
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On it. Stay under cover.
grab the radio from the shelf and fumble for the shattered insulator, pressing the spare one into place with self-amalgamating tape while the rain drums on the roof.
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Don't just tape it, check the signal. I need to know for sure.
reach for the mint poultice to re-wrap the ankle with trembling fingers.
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Checking now.
key the mic on the scheduled supply frequency, holding it steady while the wind rattles the porch boards, and wait for the static to break.
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Jenny — hold my breath and lean forward, listening intently for any break in the static.
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Nothing. Just static.
flip to Channel 16, the distress frequency, and key the mic again — maybe a ship, maybe the coast guard, maybe anyone close enough to hear.
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the garden · afternoonPre-storm lull
The wind picks up slightly as the temperature drops a few degrees. You and Jenny meet at the garden to check the final lashings before the rain breaks.
Kevin spent the afternoon reinforcing the garden shade cloth with new stakes and lines to prepare for the coming storm. Jenny managed her fever while resting while Kevin dejected her ankle and applied a fresh mint poultice.
Let's finish these corner lashings quick. Wind's shifting—we don't have much time.
walk to northeast corner of garden, grab rope end, pull tight around oak stake, tie secure double-hitch, move to northwest corner, repeat, then southwest, then southeast, checking each lash for slippage as I go.
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Just make sure the stakes are deep. The barometer is dropping too fast today.
Lean weight onto my good leg, wincing as the movement sends a spike of heat through my ankle.
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Stakes going deeper. You sit. Don't need you going down on that ankle.
grab mallet from tool bag, drive northeast oak stake three solid hits deeper into soil, check line tension, move to northwest stake, repeat, then southwest, then southeast, each stake driven until only six inches show above ground.
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I can sit. way... make sure the anchors hold when the wind hits.
Sink back against the rough stone wall, breathing through the fever as I watch him work.
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Last stake's going in. Hold on—we're almost done.
drive southeast stake three hard hits with mallet until firm, give each line a sharp tug to test hold, then coil spare rope, walk to Jenny, slide arm under hers, help her stand slow, walk her step by step toward cottage door, keeping her we
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way get them tight. The air tastes like salt and rot already.
Lean heavily against his side, eyes blurring as I watch the garden throb in time with the pulse.
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I've got you. One step at a time. Porch is close.
tighten grip around her waist, match her pace slow and steady, carry most of her weight up the three porch steps, through the door, lower her onto the settee, pull blanket from the pile, tuck it around her legs, press back of hand to her fo
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It's okay. way... check the poultice later.
Close my eyes, letting my head fall against the cushion as the wind howls through the thatch.
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(quiet) Rest now. I'll wake you for meds.
walk to kitchen counter, unwrap honey-garlic poultice from jar, spread thick on clean cloth strip, fill tin mug with water, set doxycycline and metronidazole tablets on cloth beside mug, sit on stool beside settee, wait and watch her breath
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I'm awake. Just... let me sit.
Reach for the mug, feeling the throbbing heat in my ankle under the blanket.
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Take the pills first. Whole mug after.
hold out two doxycycline and two metronidazole tablets on palm, wait until she takes them, press mug into her hands, guide it to her lips, make sure she drinks it all, then peel back blanket, unwind old poultice strips, clean wound with boi
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I took them. Don't touch it yet.
Swallow the pills hard, wincing as he touches the area near the infection.
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the keeper's cottage · eveningPreparing for the Night
Kevin and Jenny retreat to the cottage as the first gusts of wind pick up. The supply boat's arrival is expected tomorrow.
Kevin worked to reinforce the shade cloth anchor points while the rain continued to fall on the cottage. Jenny tended to her ankle and prepared the radio equipment for the supply boat's expected arrival the next day.
Check the radio one more time, Kevin. The wind is shifting.
Lean back against the cool stone wall and close eyes, ignoring the throbbing ankle.
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Radio's on the shelf. I'll check it now.
walk to the kitchen shelf, pick up the shortwave handset, key the mic on the supply boat frequency
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Jenny — watch him from the corner of my eye, gripping the edge of the bench.
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Supply boat, supply boat, this is Sorrel Island caretaker station, over.
hold the mic keyed, wait for the squelch to break, listen for any reply through the static
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Jenny — hold my breath, listening to the static while sweat beads on my forehead.
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Nothing. Propagation might be bad with this front moving through. I'll try again at the scheduled window.
set the handset back in its cradle, glance at the barometer on the wall, then at Jenny's ankle wrapped clean under the cloth
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The pressure is dropping too fast.
Wince as I shift my weight, the heat radiating from my skin.
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It'll bottom out before dawn if it follows the last pattern. Boat's got a 40-foot hull and a cautious captain. He'll hove-to if he has to.
pull the porch door shut against the first real gust, latch it tight, then move to the wood stove and add two splits of dry firewood
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Keep the fire going.
Sit on the floor by the stove, stretching my leg out toward the warmth.
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Fire'll hold. Plenty of wood.
close the stove door, adjust the damper for a slow burn, then sit on the floor beside her — close enough that shoulders touch — and reach for the water tin to check the level
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Is the tank full?
Lean my head back against the stone wall, closing my eyes as the rain hammers the roof.
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Four hundred litres. Overflow's running down the back wall.
lift the tin, feel its weight, set it back on the stove trivet, then pull the notebook from my pocket and flip to the last weather log — barometer 954 at dawn, yesterday — and add today's reading: 986 hPa, falling, southeast wind increasing
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the keeper's cottage · nightWaiting for the Boat
You and Jenny are in the kitchen as the rain tapers to a drizzle. The sound of a distant motor engine echoes from the horizon.
No narrator was available, so nothing about this stretch was recorded.
Kevin, listen. Do you hear the engine?
Stand up slowly, wincing as weight shifts off my ankle, and peer through the porch window toward the south.
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Yeah. Heard it. Doesn't sound like the supply boat.
walk to the porch and raise the binoculars to my eyes, scanning the southern horizon
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The rhythm is too slow for the Yanmar. Stay low.
Lean against the doorframe for support, clutching my ankle as I watch the dark shape cut through the grey swell.
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Stays where you are. I'll take the radio up to the hilltop if I need to.
keep the binoculars trained on the approaching vessel, tracking its course and speed relative to the island
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Don't leave the radius. I need to hear them if they signal a warning.
Sink back into the kitchen chair, breathing through gritted teeth as I watch the throbbing pulse in my leg.
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What changed
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