Day 507
The Rising Tide
Dawn broke with a flat, heavy grey sky. Kevin and Jenny sat on the porch as cloud cover thickened over the north ridge and humidity rose. Jenny massaged her swollen ankle while Kevin watched the barometer. The water tank overflow was saturating the cottage foundation, accelerating the rot in the wood. Kevin noted, "We need to secure the overflow trench before the rain hits."
Dawn broke with a flat, heavy grey sky. Kevin and Jenny sat on the porch as cloud cover thickened over the north ridge and humidity rose. Jenny massaged her swollen ankle while Kevin watched the barometer. The water tank overflow was saturating the cottage foundation, accelerating the rot in the wood. Kevin noted, "We need to secure the overflow trench before the rain hits."
As heavy rain began, Kevin laid salvaged dock planks to divert water, while Jenny prepared a mint poultice and ate a boiled limpet. She sketched the cloud formations and later the way the water swirled around the paddings. Despite their efforts, damp soil and pooling water interrupted the work. Kevin fought the pooling water at the dock, and Jenny struggled with heavy bolts on a dinghy oarlock bracket in the humid heat.
By evening, the tide rose steadily, lapping the lower dock planks. The tank gained 25 litres, but water pooled at the corner, threatening Kevin's diversion. In the night, the wind rattled the spruce mast and the tide submerged the lower dock steps. Kevin hauled heavy stones from a rock pile, passing them to Jenny, who knelt in the rising tide wedging them into silt beneath sandbags. The effort slowed the erosion, though the tide continued to push against the rotting pilings. The overflow repair reached 30% completion.
Scenes
the keeper's cottage · dawnPre-storm Stasis
Kevin and Jenny sit on the porch as the cloud cover thickens over the island. Jenny massages her swollen ankle while Kevin watches the falling barometer, noting the humidity in the air.
The sky is a flat, heavy grey, with cloud cover thickening over the north ridge as the wet season humidity rises. The tide is rising, pushing against the island's edge, and the water tank overflow is currently saturating the cottage foundation, accelerating the rot in the wood-structure.
We need to secure the overflow trench before the rain hits. I'll check the digger bar's still sharp—might need to cut a new channel if the old one's silted.
walk to the back of the cottage, kneel by the overflow trench, inspect the outlet for blockage with gloved hands
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Don't overexert yourself, my ankle is throbbing just watching you move. I'll check the water tank level while you're down there.
Lean back, open the notebook, sketch the cloud formations forming over the north ridge.
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I'm just clearing the outlet, love. Won't take long. Tank's at 388—still good, but if the overflow fails, we'll lose more than water.
use hands and digger bar to clear silt and debris from the trench outlet, ensuring water flows freely away from the cottage foundation, then wipe sweat from brow with sleeve and stand slowly, testing weight on both feet
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388 is enough for now, just make sure the channel doesn't choke again tonight. I'm going to go get the limpets started.
Limp to the kitchen, set the limpets on the counter, and start a pot of water on the stove.
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Trench is clear. Water's draining proper. I'll nip down to the dinghy and check that oarlock bracket—saw it shift yesterday when I was mooring.
walk to the dock, crouch beside the dinghy, inspect the starboard oarlock bracket for play or movement by applying pressure with palm and fingers, then tighten the bolts with the wrench if needed, ensuring the backing plate remains seated s
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Be careful on the dock, the salt makes everything slick today. I'm going to prep the mint poultice while the water boils.
Sit at the kitchen table, peel the shells off the limpets, and crush the mint sprigs in the mortar.
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Bracket's tight. No movement. I'll rinse my hands at the tap and come in—limpets should be nearly ready.
rinse hands at the dockside tap, wipe on trousers, walk back to the cottage, enter through the porch, and hang the damp jacket on the hook by the door before stepping into the kitchen
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Good. I'm going to put the poultice on. My ankle feels like it's pulsing with the tide.
Transfer the limpets into a bowl, wrap the mint paste in a clean cloth, and prepare to band my leg.
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I'm right here. Let me know if you need the bandage passed or the cloth held. I'll keep the stove low—don't want the broth to boil over.
stand near the kitchen table within arm's reach, watch Jenny apply the poultice to her ankle, then silently hand her the clean gauze roll when she reaches for it, maintaining quiet presence without speaking unless asked
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Thanks. It's starting to cool down. The mint is sharp.
Wrap the gauze around the mint poultice, secure it loosely, and lean back against the chair to elevate the leg.
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the keeper's cottage · morningMORNING
The smell of boiling salt water fills the cottage as the first heavy drops of rain begin to hit the roof. The tide continues to climb toward the dock.
Kevin inspected the overflow trench and began laying salvaged dock planks to divert water away from the cottage foundation. Jenny prepared a mint poultice and ate a boiled limpet for salt, then wrapped her ankle with the poultice. Both actions were interrupted by damp soil and pooling water at the diversion point.
Jenny, I’m going to check the overflow trench and make sure it’s still clear. If the rain keeps up, we might need to sandbag the west corner.
walk to the back of the cottage, kneel by the overflow trench, and inspect where it meets the soil — looking for erosion, blockage, or signs of water backing up toward the foundation.
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Check the diversion point near the tank. The soil is already getting soft enough to turn to mud.
Crush the mint sprigs into the mortar to prepare the poultice for my ankle.
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On it. I’ll lay down some of the old dock planks we salvaged — they’re sound, and they’ll keep the water from cutting a new channel.
walk to the rain tank, follow the overflow trench to where it diverges away from the cottage, and begin laying salvaged dock planks along the edge to armor the soil and guide the flow safely downhill.
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Make sure they're pinned down. If the water gets under them, the whole line will lift.
Drain the boiled limpets from the pot and eat one for the salt.
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Got the planks. I’m going to pin them down with the oak stakes from the shed so the water can’t get underneath.
walk to the garden shed, retrieve two oak stakes, return to the overflow diversion point, and drive the stakes through the planks into the soil to anchor them securely, then check that the water is flowing cleanly away from the cottage foun
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Check the gap at the corner. The water is already starting to pool.
Wrap my ankle in the clean cloth with the mint poultice.
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the dock · middayDiverting the Overflow
Kevin is at the dock; Jenny is at the woods
The rain has turned into a heavy drive, turning the dust on the island into slick mud. The tide is receding rapidly, exposing the jagged rocks of the southern tide pools. Kevin is at the dock, battling the pooling water near the tank foundation, while Jenny makes her way through the dense woods, seeking shelter from the downpour.
Jenny — stop to wipe sweat from my brow and look at the canopy roof.
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Kevin — walk along debris line, eyes scanning for heavy, solid objects—logs, bolts, anything that won’t disintegrate in the wet.
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Jenny — lean against a screw pine trunk to catch my breath.
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Kevin — lift the greenheart offcut, cradle it against my hip, and carry it back to the overflow trench at the cottage foundation.
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the dock · afternoonThe Rising Deluge
The rain intensifies as the tide begins to turn. Kevin is still at the dock struggling with the structure while Jenny emerges from the treeline, soaked and exhausted.
Kevin reinforces the water tank overflow trench to prevent the pooling from undermining the dock foundation. Jenny attempts to secure the loose oarlock bracket on the dinghy but struggles with the heavy bolts in the humid heat.
Jenny! Come help me wedge these before the turn — oak shims in the mortise, then we drive them home as the water rises. It's the only way this holds.
Grab two soaked oak shims from the pile, jam them into the dock mooring ring mortise where it's loose, then brace myself to hold them in place as Jenny arrives.
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I'm here. Just tell me where to push.
Lean my weight against the piling to keep the shims steady while Kevin reaches for the hammer.
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Hammer's in my belt — take it. Hit the shim flush, hard, seat it into the mortise. I'll hold the piling from kicking out.
Wrench my grip on the piling to stop it from rolling, jaw tight, eyes on the shim as Jenny swings the hammer — drive it home before the rising water breaks our hold.
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I've got it. Hold steady.
Swing the hammer with a heavy grunt, driving the
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Second shim — same spot, opposite side. Hit it true, Jenny. We lock it now or we rebuild this whole damn thing next week.
Shift my weight to counter the piling's twist, left hand braced on the wet timber, right hand ready to catch the hammer rebound — eyes locked on the shim as Jenny lifts for the second strike.
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Almost there. Almost.
Brace my shoulder against the piling, leaning all my weight into the wood to keep the shims from shifting as Jenny strikes.
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Easy… easy… that's it. Hold — don't let go yet. Water's lifting, but the shims are seated. We got it.
Keep my weight locked into the piling, shoulders burning, feel the dock settle under us as the tide peaks — then, slow, ease the pressure, testing if the ring holds on its own.
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It's solid. Look.
way release my weight from the wood, watching the mortise for any groans as the water pulls at the dock.
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the dock · eveningEvening Meal
The tide is beginning to turn, licking the lower dock pilings. You and Jenny meet to finally eat the boiled limpets.
The tide is rising steadily, lapping the lower planks of the dock. The sky has darkened to a heavy, flat grey, and the air is thick with the scent of coming rain. The water in the overflow tank is pooling at the corner, threatening to soften the ground and undermine the diversion Kevin just built.
Limpets are ready. Tide’s coming in—let’s eat before it gets underfoot.
Sit on the damp dock planks, hand Jenny a tin mug of limpet broth, and begin eating slowly, watching the water creep toward the mooring ring.
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The water's higher than way.
Jenny takes the mug with trembling fingers, she wincing slightly as she shifts her weight off her bad leg.
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Yeah, it’s rising fast. Finish your broth—I’ll check the trench again before it gets worse.
Stand, leave my mug on the dock, and walk quickly to the overflow trench behind the cottage, kneeling to inspect where the water’s pooling despite the new channel.
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Don't stay too long in the mud.
Jenny takes a slow sip of the salty broth, eyes fixed on the rising water line.
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Won’t be long. Just need to make sure the flow’s holding.
Scoop away loose silt from the trench with my hands, then lay a salvaged dock plank lengthwise across the lowest point to reinforce the channel, weighting it with stones from the tide line to keep it from shifting.
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The sky is getting even darker.
Jenny sets the mug down on the dry timber and reaches for her sketchbook, sketching the way the water is swirling around the paddings.
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Yeah, it’s closing in. Storm’s not far. I’ll shore up the trench one more time, then come back.
Drive two oak stakes into the banks on either side of the trench where the water’s fastest, then lash a third plank diagonally across the flow with sail twine to deflect the current away from the cottage foundation.
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Hurry. I can smell the rain coming.
Jenny closes her sketchbook with a snap and looks toward the horizon, her hand instinctively gripping her ankle brace.
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Almost there. One more thing to hold it, then I’m coming.
Pack the loose soil around the stakes and planks with my boots, tamping it down hard to seal the channel, then sprint back to the dock, slipping slightly on the wet timber as I go.
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Careful! The second plank is gone.
Jenny shifts back to give him room, her movements stiff and cautious.
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It’s gone. I’ll lay another—hold the line while I pass it over.
Grab a salvaged plank from the stack near the garden wall, jog back to the trench, and hand it to Jenny to hold steady as I lay it across the flow, aligning it with the first to form a solid diversion.
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I've got it. Tight.
Jenny presses her weight against the wood to keep it steady, her teeth gritted as the effort ripples through her ankle.
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Good. Keep it tight—I’ll wedge it.
Kneel in the mud, drive two short stakes through the plank into the bank on either side, then fill the gaps behind it with packed clay and stones, stomping it down until the water flows clean through the channel and away from the cottage.
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It's holding. You did it.
Jenny lets go of the plank and leans back, exhaling a long, shaky breath as she relaxes her leg.
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the dock · nightThe rain breaks
The first drops fall as the tide is now high enough to submerge the lower steps of the dock. The wind picks up, rattling the spruce mast of the dinghy.
Kevin hauls heavy stones from the rock pile and passed them to Jenny at the dock's edge. Jenny knelt in the rising tide, wedging flat stones into the silt beneath the sandbags to divert the flow. The effort slowed the erosion, though the high tide continues to push against the rotting pilings.
Kevin, the tide is coming too fast! We need to sandbag the corner now!
Squat down despite the throbing ankle and grab a heavy stone, bracing it against the pooling water to break the flow.
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On it. Grab the sandbags from the shed—I’ll brace the planks.
run to the shed, grab two sandbags, carry them back to the overflow corner, and start stacking them against the pooling water to divert flow away from the foundation.
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Use the heavy stones for the base! The water is already cutting through!
Crawl toward the edge of the jetty, pressing weight onto the sandbags in the mud to seal the gap.
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Stones first—stack them tight. I’ll pass them down.
wade into the shallow water at the dock’s edge, heave the largest loose stones from the nearby rock pile, and hand them to Jenny to lay as a base under the sandbags, pressing each one into the mud to seal the leak.
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Push them deep! The water is already getting under the timber!
Grabs a flat stone and hammers it into the gap, using her body weight to wedge it into the silt.
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Keep wedging—I’ll feed you stones. Don’t stop.
haul more heavy stones from the rock pile, wade knee-deep in the rising tide, and pass each one to Jenny so she can drive them deep into the silt beneath the rotting dock planks, using her body and the flat stones to seal the undermining ga
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What changed
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