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Day 573

The Storm Breaks

Dawn pressed heavy and grey over Sorrel Island. The barometer read 986 hPa and falling. Kevin inspected the dinghy's bow line while Jenny sat on a crate, ankle swollen, fever climbing. "Morning. Tide's slack in twenty. You staying on the crate or moving up to the cottage?" he asked. "I'm staying here. I need to check the lines before the surge hits," she said. "Ankle first. Lines'll hold another hour." She winced: "It's hot, Kevin. Really hot." He helped her to the cottage. Kevin repointed the northeast foundation corner with tank water, fighting tide seepage. Jenny elevated her leg on a damp bed cushion, took doxycycline with corned beef and ship's biscuit. By midday the wind rattled the radio mast. Kevin lanced the abscess — deeper than it looked — draining significant pus, flushed with saline, packed fresh gauze, reapplied the sea beet-mint poultice. "Thirty-nine point four. We're opening it. Let me," he said. She whispered, "Just get it over with." Fever held at 39.4°C. At 1400Z Kevin keyed the shortwave: "Sorrel Island, Sorrel Island, Sorrel Island — this is Kevin, call sign Victor-Kilo-4-Alpha... Barometer nine-eight-four holding. High tide running. Supply boat due tomorrow. Over." Static. He tried the trust frequency. "Sorrel Island, Victor-Kilo-4-Alpha. Weekly report... Medical: one crew, ankle infection, fever 39.4 rising, antibiotics day three. Seed tin compromised — mold active... Request supply boat confirm ETA tomorrow. Over." Trust answered: "Supply boat confirms tomorrow 1000 local, weather permitting. Medical noted — advise evacuate on arrival if fever persists." Jenny murmured, "Tomorrow... it has to be tomorrow."

Dawn pressed heavy and grey over Sorrel Island. The barometer read 986 hPa and falling. Kevin inspected the dinghy's bow line while Jenny sat on a crate, ankle swollen, fever climbing. "Morning. Tide's slack in twenty. You staying on the crate or moving up to the cottage?" he asked. "I'm staying here. I need to check the lines before the surge hits," she said. "Ankle first. Lines'll hold another hour." She winced: "It's hot, Kevin. Really hot." He helped her to the cottage. Kevin repointed the northeast foundation corner with tank water, fighting tide seepage. Jenny elevated her leg on a damp bed cushion, took doxycycline with corned beef and ship's biscuit. By midday the wind rattled the radio mast. Kevin lanced the abscess — deeper than it looked — draining significant pus, flushed with saline, packed fresh gauze, reapplied the sea beet-mint poultice. "Thirty-nine point four. We're opening it. Let me," he said. She whispered, "Just get it over with." Fever held at 39.4°C. At 1400Z Kevin keyed the shortwave: "Sorrel Island, Sorrel Island, Sorrel Island — this is Kevin, call sign Victor-Kilo-4-Alpha... Barometer nine-eight-four holding. High tide running. Supply boat due tomorrow. Over." Static. He tried the trust frequency. "Sorrel Island, Victor-Kilo-4-Alpha. Weekly report... Medical: one crew, ankle infection, fever 39.4 rising, antibiotics day three. Seed tin compromised — mold active... Request supply boat confirm ETA tomorrow. Over." Trust answered: "Supply boat confirms tomorrow 1000 local, weather permitting. Medical noted — advise evacuate on arrival if fever persists." Jenny murmured, "Tomorrow... it has to be tomorrow."

Evening brought still air before rain. Kevin doubled the dinghy lines, dogged down the leaking port seacock. He cleaned Jenny's ankle again, flushed with saline, applied fresh poultice. "The supply boat's due tomorrow if the weather holds... But right now, your ankle comes first." She said, "Just... make sure it's tight." The barometer kept dropping.

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the dock · dawn

The Calm Before the Surge

Kevin inspects the dinghy's bow line while the heavy air presses down on the grey sky. Jenny sits on a crate nearby, monitoring her swollen ankle and watching the barometer needle drop to 986 hPa.

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🔧 Kevin13:11

Morning. Tide's slack in twenty. You staying on the crate or moving up to the cottage?

crouch at the bow cleat, run thumb along the chafe guard where the line kisses the dock timber, feel for heat or fuzz in the fibres

💭 thought
Barometer's still dropping. Wind'll shift west by noon if it holds this track. Bow line's got the chafe guard I fitted last week — doubled line, served with sail twine — but the cleat on the dock's working loose again. Need to check the sister plank bolts before the tide turns.
🌿 Jenny13:11

I'm staying here. I need to check the lines before the surge hits.

Shift weight to my left side, wincing as the throbbing heat in my ankle flares, and reach for my sketchbook to note the way the clouds are bruising.

💭 thought
The pressure is dropping too fast; if the boat doesn't come tomorrow, I'm going to rot in this heat.
🔧 Kevin13:13

Ankle first. Lines'll hold another hour.

straighten, wipe hands on thighs, hold out a hand toward the crate — not pulling, just offering

💭 thought
She's favouring the left again. Ankle's not right. She won't say it but the wince tells me. Lines can wait — she shouldn't be on that foot.
🌿 Jenny13:13

It's fine. Just... let me see if the red is moving.

Reach for the antiseptic in the kit, fingers trembling slightly as I notice the skin around the swelling is tight and shiny.

💭 thought
If I don't check it now, I won't be able to hold a pencil own.
🔧 Kevin13:15

Show me.

step close, crouch on the balls of my feet, bring my head level with her ankle, don't touch yet — just look

💭 thought
Shiny skin. Tight. That's spreading. She's out of doses on the doxy — finished the blister pack yesterday. Metronidazole's five tablets left. Not enough for a full course if this takes hold again.
🌿 Jenny13:15

It's hot, Kevin. Really hot.

Roll back the fabric of the sock slowly, a sharp breath catching in my throat as I expose the angry, red skin spreading toward the knee.

💭 thought
The streaks are moving. They're further up the calf than they were yesterday. I'm losing time.
🔧 Kevin13:17

Right. Up to the cottage. Now.

slide one arm under her shoulders, the other behind the knees, lift her — steady, no jerk — and start walking toward the cottage

💭 thought
Red's tracking up the calf. Cellulitis. Lymphangitic spread. She's septic if it hits the groin nodes. Five metronidazole won't touch this — wrong spectrum anyway. Need the doxy but it's gone. Radio the trust. Medevac form's already signed. Boat's due tomorrow but weather's turning. Could be days.
🌿 Jenny13:17

Careful... the movement is throbbing.

way my head against his shoulder, eyes squeezed shut as the pain in my ankle thumps with every step he takes.

💭 thought
If this gets to my blood, I'll never see the bloom of my grandmother's seeds.
🔧 Kevin13:19

Got you. Slow as I can.

carry her up the gravel path, boot heels biting in, left shoulder taking the gate frame so she doesn't clip it, through the porch door and straight to the settee, lower her gentle, grab the cushion from the armchair and prop her ankle high

💭 thought
Every step jars her. Cottage is forty metres up the path. Gate, two steps, porch, kitchen. Lay her on the settee — flat, leg raised on the cushion arm. Cold compress first. Then the radio.
🌿 Jenny13:19

Thank you... just give me a minute to catch my breath.

lean back against the cushions, watching him with tired eyes as I reach for the first aid kit on the table, my gaze fixed on the red map climbing my skin.

💭 thought
The relief of the elevation is instant, but the heat in the room is a physical weight.

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the keeper's cottage · morning

A Quiet Stretch

Back at the cottage.

Kevin reinforced the dinghy's bow line and began repointing the cottage foundation to combat the rising tide seepage. Jenny stayed at the cottage, managing her fever and monitoring her swollen ankle while the air pressure continued to drop.

🔧 Kevin13:23

Jenny, the barometer’s tanking. I’m going to repoint the northeast corner before the tide turns. You keep off that ankle—elevate it, stay on the porch.

Grab lime, sand, trowel, and the bucket from the shed. Walk to the northeast corner of the cottage foundation. Scrape out the damp, crumbling mortar with the trowel. Mix lime and sand in the bucket to a stiff paste.

💭 thought
The barometer’s falling fast—984 and dropping. Wind’s still NE, but if it shifts, we’ll feel it in the timbers. Jenny’s ankle’s flaring again; I saw her favoring it on the path back. I should’ve checked the northeast seep yesterday. Now it’s urgent. Salt’s eating the mortar, and if the surge comes tonight, that corner could go.
🌿 Jenny13:25

Just don't get the salt water in the mix.

Sit on the porch chair, propping my swollen ankle up on a crate. Open the tin of seeds and trace the edge of a dried bean with my thumb.

💭 thought
He thinks he can fix the world with mortar and wood wedges while the fever is literally throbbing in my marrow.
🔧 Kevin13:25

Using tank water. You need that leg higher—grab a cushion from the bed.

Walk back to the cottage. Fill the bucket from the rain tank tap. Carry it to the northeast corner. Set the bucket down. Scrape the last loose mortar from the joint with the trowel. Wet the stone faces with a flick of water from the brush.

💭 thought
She's right—salt in the mortar means it never sets proper. Need fresh water from the tank, not the bucket I used for the limpets. Her ankle's worse than she's letting on. The crate's too low; she needs it higher than her hip to drain.
🌿 Jenny13:28

The bed cushion is still damp from yesterday's rain. I'll get the cushion.

Strip the bandage from my ankle, soak the gauze in the seawater bucket, then carefully re-wrap it with fresh cloth. </think>THOUGHT: He's right about the cushion, but the infection needs proper drainage, not more moisture. Grab the cedar-sh

💭 thought
Tank water's fine for mortar but not for soaking this ankle that's already infected.
🔧 Kevin13:28

Take the doxycycline with breakfast. Both pills.

Pack the lime-sand mix into the cleaned joint, pressing deep with the trowel tip. Strike the joint flush with the pointing tool. Move down the course, scraping, wetting, filling, striking.

💭 thought
She's stripping the bandage one-handed, careful. The gauze comes away pink at the edges. She's not showing it, but the swelling's tracked up past the ankle bone now. Seawater soak'll help draw it, but she needs the antibiotics in her, not just on her. The cushion's damp—she'll use her pack folded double. Stubborn.
🌿 Jenny13:29

Make sure I take them with something solid, not just water.

Open the flour sack—wait, that's compromised—and check the tin of mackerel. I need protein to fight this, but I also need to set the radio properly for tomorrow's contact. Walk to the kitchen, open the pantry, and pull out the corned beef.

💭 thought
The antibiotics are fighting the infection but I'm running low and he's making me eat pills like they'll fix everything. I need to check if the supply boat coming tomorrow or if I need to start conserving my remaining doses.
🔧 Kevin13:30

Corned beef and the last of the ship's biscuits in the blue tin. Radio's on the shelf—coax is coiled beside it. Spare aerial wire in the crate if the insulator holds.

Finish the last meter of foundation joint. Brush loose mortar from the stone face. Stand, wipe hands on trousers. Walk to the tank, rinse bucket and trowel. Set them upside down to drain.

💭 thought
Flour's gone—rat-chewed and wet. She's checking the mackerel tin, but that's empty too. Corned beef's salt-heavy for an infected limb, but protein's protein. She's thinking ahead to the radio contact, practical as ever. The antibiotics tear her stomach empty; she knows this.
🌿 Jenny13:31

I'm going to check the lines before the tide gets higher.

Limp out to the porch, weight heavy on the good leg. Reach for the dinghy lines to inspect the knots for fraying or surge-wear.

💭 thought
The pressure is dropping again. If that way hits 980, the dinghy is in trouble and I can't be out on it with a leg like this.

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the keeper's cottage · midday

The Storm Breaks

The wind finally picks up, rattling the radio mast as the first heavy drops of rain hit the cottage roof.

Kevin lanced and drained Jenny's infected ankle, the procedure painful but necessary. The wound released a significant amount of pus, and Kevin cleaned it thoroughly with saline before packing it with fresh gauze and reapplying the sea beet-mint poultice. Jenny took her doxycycline dose with water, and her fever held at 39.4°C.

🌿 Jenny13:32

(A sharp, pained hiss) Not yet.

Sit up slowly, wincing as the weight shifts on my ankle, and reach for the flashlight to check the spread of the redness.

💭 thought
The rain is late, and if the surge hits hard, the dinghy will go before I can reach it.
🔧 Kevin13:33

Let me see.

walk over to her, crouch down, and hold the flashlight steady so the beam hits her ankle directly

💭 thought
She's up and moving on that ankle. The redness spread overnight — I can see it from here. Barometer's still falling, storm's building, and she's checking her own wound by flashlight instead of waking me. Stubborn.
🌿 Jenny13:33

(Gritting my teeth) Don't touch it.

Pull back the damp-soaked bandage with trembling fingers, exposing the angry, red streak of infection to the light.

💭 thought
It's moving faster than it did yesterday; the heat isradi off the skin.
🔧 Kevin13:35

How long since the last dose?

stay crouched, keeping the light steady on her ankle, not reaching for it

💭 thought
She won't let me touch it but she'll show me. That streak's tracking upward — lymphangitis. She's burning up. We're two days from the supply boat if it comes at all, and the radio's been dead quiet. I need to lance and drain if there's pus, hit it hard with what's left of the antibiotics, and keep her off it entirely.
🌿 Jenny13:35

(Voice thin and dry) Six... maybe own.

Look away from the beam, staring at the shadows on the cottage wall while the wind howls against the tin.

💭 thought
It was six hoursization, but the fever is making me lose track of the light.
🔧 Kevin13:37

Temperature first. Then the rest of the doxy.

stand, go to the medical kit on the shelf, pull out the thermometer and the doxycycline blister pack, bring them back to her

💭 thought
Six hours, maybe more. She's lost track. The metronidazole blister pack is empty, doxycycline's got maybe a couple doses left if she hasn't missed any. That red line's creeping past her ankle toward the calf — sepsis risk is real. I need to check her temperature, get the remaining antibiotics in her, and decide if we're cutting it open tonight or waiting for the boat that might not come.
🌿 Jenny13:37

(A weak whisper) Just get it over with.

Take the thermometer with a shaking hand and place it under my tongue, ignoring the throb in my ankle.

💭 thought
My head is too hot to think about the boat, only the heat in the leg.
🔧 Kevin13:39

Keep it there. Breathe through your nose.

sit on the edge of the bed beside her, one hand on the mattress for balance, watching the thermometer, the other hand resting on my knee — not touching her ankle

💭 thought
She's deferring to me on her own body. That's not like her. Fever's driving this — she's too tired to fight. Thermometer will tell the story. If it's over 39, we're in trouble deeper than antibiotics can fix alone. The wind's tearing at the mast guys; rain's hitting sideways now. Boat's not coming tomorrow in this.
🌿 Jenny13:39

(Muffled around the thermometer) Okay.

Close my eyes, focusing on the rhythm of the rain hitting the tin roof, waiting for the beep.

💭 thought
If the fever is too high, I won't be able to walk to the garden tomorrow.
🔧 Kevin13:41

Thirty-nine point four. We're opening it. Let me.

set the thermometer aside, reach for the medical kit again, pull out the scalpel, fresh gauze, and saline bottle

💭 thought
The thermometer beeps. 39.4. High. She's been running hot for hours, maybe all night. Two days of oral antibiotics haven't stopped the spread. The infection's winning. I have to lance it — there's pus under that skin, I can feel the tension in the tissue just looking at it. Need the scalpel, more gauze, the saline, and to get her to let me touch it.

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the keeper's cottage · afternoon

Radio contact attempt

Kevin sits at the shortwave radio under the tarp, adjusting the tuned circuit and keying the mic for Tom's frequency at 1400Z. Jenny rests on the bunk, ankle elevated on a rolled blanket, notebook open beside her. The barometer reads 984 hPa steady; high tide slaps the dock pilings. Rain begins to fall, a fine mist on the roof.

The sky thickens as the 32°C heat turns heavy with humidity, and the barometer continues to drop to 984 hPa, signaling an approaching front. Inside the cottage, Jenny struggles with a rising fever of 39.4°C while Kevin prepares for the supply boat's arrival, managing the spreading infection.

🔧 Kevin13:42

Sorrel Island, Sorrel Island, Sorrel Island — this is Kevin, call sign Victor-Kilo-4-Alpha, transmitting on Tom's frequency at 1400 Zulu. Barometer nine-eight-four holding. High tide running. Supply boat due tomorrow. Over.

key the mic, wait through the static, listen for any return — even a carrier wave

💭 thought
The barometer holding steady at 984 is worse than a drop — it means the low's parked itself. Rain on the roof, tide against the pilings, and I'm calling a frequency my brother hasn't answered in eleven months. But the trust requires weekly contact, and the supply boat's due tomorrow. If I don't log the attempt, they'll flag it.
🌿 Jenny13:45

Come on, you stupid radio... just once.

swallow the bitter pill with a grimace and close eyes against the throbbing in my leg.

💭 thought
The pressure is too low; if that boat doesn't come tomorrow, I'll be out of antibiotics by the weekend.
🔧 Kevin13:45

Nothing but static. I'll log the attempt and try the trust frequency next.

write in the radio log: "1400Z — no contact on Tom's freq. Barometer 984 steady. High tide. Rain onset. Will try trust freq 1415Z." then switch to the trust's working frequency and key the mic

💭 thought
She's awake and listening. The pill was the last doxycycline dose — metronidazole still has five tablets. Her ankle's throbbing through the poultice. She hears the static same as me.
🌿 Jenny13:47

Please stay alive, just for one more day.

press a cold cloth to my burning forehead and hiss through gritted teeth.

💭 thought
If the boat doesn't show tomorrow, this infection is going to take the leg of me.
🔧 Kevin13:47

Jenny. Your fever's up. I'm switching to the trust frequency now — they need the weekly check-in. Then I'm getting more cold water.

key the mic on the trust frequency — "Sorrel Island, Victor-Kilo-4-Alpha, weekly position report. Barometer 984 steady. Two souls aboard. Medical: one ankle infection, fever 39.4°C, on doxycycline and metronidazole day three.

💭 thought
She's not talking to the radio. She's talking to me — or to whatever's keeping her alive in that bunk. The cold cloth on her forehead means the fever's spiking again. 39.4 earlier, probably higher now. Five metronidazole tablets left. The infection ate through the first antibiotic line.
🌿 Jenny13:50

Tell them... tell them I can't lose another month's worth of seeds. Kevin, whatever happens, make sure they have my notes on the plant survey.

grip the notebook tighter until my knuckles go white. </think>THOUGHT: That infection is spreading faster than I can document it. trace a trembling finger along the sea beet sketches in the margins.

💭 thought
He's talking about the boat again instead of me.
🔧 Kevin13:50

Sorrel Island, Victor-Kilo-4-Alpha. Weekly report. Barometer 984 steady. High tide. Rain. Medical: one crew, ankle infection, fever 39.4 rising, antibiotics day three. Seed tin compromised — mold active. Plant survey data current through day 573. Request supply boat confirm ETA tomorrow. Over.

release the mic, wait for a reply, one hand already moving toward the kettle for more hot water

💭 thought
She's thinking about the work, not the fever. The seed tin, the survey notes, the months of data in that notebook — that's what she's holding onto. Not me. Not the island. The work. I need to get this report sent and get back to her with water, more poultice, the last metronidazole dose schedule. The trust frequency might actually answer.
🌿 Jenny13:51

Don't let the seeds rot, Kevin.

close my eyes and try to breathe through the heat in my skin.

💭 thought
If that boat doesn't come, I'm just another specimen in the herbarium.
🔧 Kevin13:51

Copy that, Sorrel Island. Trust reads you five-by. Supply boat confirms tomorrow 1000 local, weather permitting. Medical noted — advise evacuate on arrival if fever persists. Will relay to coastguard. Your plant survey data logged. Stand by for weather update. Over.

key the mic — "Roger, Trust. Supply boat 1000 confirmed. Medical understood. Plant survey data current. Sorrel Island out." then set the mic down and move to the stove for the kettle

💭 thought
The radio crackles back — a voice, faint but clear through the static. Mainland. The trust. They heard me. But Jenny's burning up and the seeds are still damp under the tarp and I can't be in two places at once.
🌿 Jenny13:53

Tomorrow... it has to be tomorrow.

lean my head back against the stone wall and let the fever pulse in my eyes.

💭 thought
1000 tomorrow. I have to survive twenty-four hours.

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the keeper's cottage · evening

The Calm Before the Storm

The air is still before the first drops of rain hit the dust. The supply boat is distant in the gathering mist.

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🌿 Jenny13:54

Kevin, the pressure's dropping fast—we need to secure the dinghy before the tide turns. And check the seacocks again, I don't care if it's late.

walk to the dock and check the barometer again while mentally noting the seacock locations, then head to the cottage to retrieve the medical kit and assess the ankle wound.

💭 thought
The barometer's dropping faster than I expected—983 and falling hard. If it hits 990 before dark, I need to secure the dinghy double-lines and check those seacocks again. But first, the infection's still hot and angry, and those grandmother's seeds are going to die if I don't get them in the ground soon.
🔧 Kevin13:55

On it. I’ll check the lines and seacocks, then bring the kit down.

walk to the dock and check the dinghy’s bow and stern lines for chafe, then inspect the port and starboard seacocks for tightness and leaks.

💭 thought
The barometer’s falling fast—983 and dropping. Jenny’s right, we’ve got to batten down before the surge hits. Ankle’s still angry, but the poultice is holding. I’ll follow her to the dock, check the seacocks, then get back to the cottage for the medical kit.
🌿 Jenny13:59

way be careful. Don't let the tide take the lines.

sit up on the edge of the cot, wincing as the weight shifts on the ankle, and watch the red streaks away from the wound.

💭 thought
983 hPa and still falling. The air feels like wet wool against my skin. If that surge hits before the boat arrives, the dinghy is gone, and my ankle is throbbing in time with the pulse in my head.
🔧 Kevin13:59

Lines are doubled. Seacocks next. Back in five.

inspect the dinghy's port and starboard seacocks, confirming they're closed tight with no weep, then walk back to the cottage to retrieve the medical kit.

💭 thought
She's watching the red streaks. Good. Means she's tracking it herself. I'll check the lines and seacocks, then get back to her with the kit.
🌿 Jenny14:02

(quietly) The port one felt loose when I was checking earlier. Make sure it's really tight. (weakly) The port one's been leaking since yesterday. Really tighten it.

shift uncomfortably on the cot, the ankle throbbing in rhythm with the barometer's descent, and reach for the notebook to sketch the wound progression. </think>THOUGHT: The port seacock felt loose to me yesterday—he might not have caught it

💭 thought
Good, he's double-lining. But the port seacock showed a slow weep when I checked yesterday—did he really seal it properly? And my ankle feels like it's burning from the inside out. The poultice is getting cold against the swelling.
🔧 Kevin14:09

Got it. I’ll dog it down hard. Be back with the kit in a minute.

tighten the port seacock with the wrench until it’s snug and no weep, then check the starboard one for good measure, and walk back to the cottage to retrieve the medical kit.

💭 thought
She felt it loose yesterday. That’s why the water’s getting in. I’ll tighten it properly—no half measures.
🌿 Jenny14:10

be careful. Don't let the tide take the lines.

shift uncomfortably on the cot, wincing as the weight shifts on the ankle, and reach for the notebook to sketch the wound progression.

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💭 thought
983 hPa and still falling. The air feels like wet wool against my skin. If that surge hits before the boat arrives, the dinghy is gone, and my ankle is throbbing in time with the pulse in my head.
🔧 Kevin14:17

I’m on it. Lines and seacocks—then straight back.

check and reinforce the dinghy’s bow and stern lines with chafe protection, confirm both seacocks are tight and dry, then run back to the cottage for the medical kit.

💭 thought
She’s worried about the lines, but her ankle’s the real emergency. I’ll secure the dinghy fast, then get back to her. No time to waste.

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the keeper's cottage · night

A Quiet Stretch

Back at the cottage.

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🔧 Kevin14:19

Jenny, let me look at your ankle. I'll clean it again and put on a fresh poultice.

walk to Jenny on the porch, kneel beside her, and gently remove the old gauze from her ankle to inspect the wound.

💭 thought
The barometer's falling and Jenny's ankle's worse. I need to get the Yanmar running smooth for the supply boat run tomorrow, but she can't wait. I'll check the wound, change the dressing, and make sure she's got antibiotics and water. Then I'll get back to the engine.
🌿 Jenny14:20

Be careful. It's throbbbing again.

Jenny flinches as the way pulls away, her hand gripping the wood of the way chair as she breathes through gritted teeth.

💭 thought
The skin is so hot, and the red lines are moving up. If this reaches my heart, I'll never get to open that tin of seeds.
🔧 Kevin14:21

I know. I'll be gentle. Let me flush it with saline first, then we'll get the poultice on and your medicine down.

pour clean saline from the bottle over Jenny's ankle wound to flush out debris, then use clean gauze to pat the area dry around the edges without touching the open tissue.

💭 thought
She's in real pain. The infection's deep. I need to clean it out properly, not just surface wash. I'll use saline, then reapply the sea beet-mint poultice, and make sure she takes her doxycycline with water. Keep it clean, keep it covered.
🌿 Jenny14:22

It's burning. Is the boat actually coming tomorrow?

Jenny leans her head back against the whitewashed stone, eyes closed as she waits for the stinging to subside.

💭 thought
The salt water stings, but the heat in my blood is worse. I can feel the pulse in the infection.
🔧 Kevin14:23

The supply boat's due tomorrow if the weather holds. We've got the dinghy prepped, the radio checked, and a signal ready. But right now, your ankle comes first. Let me get the poultice on.

take the fresh sea beet-mint poultice from the cloth and apply it gently over Jenny's cleaned ankle wound, then wrap it with clean gauze to hold it in place without cutting off circulation.

💭 thought
She's asking about the boat because she's scared and wants hope. The barometer's still falling, wind's picking up — I won't lie. But I won't crush her either. I'll tell her what I know: we're ready, and we'll go if it comes. Keep her focused on the next step — her ankle, the poultice, the pills.
🌿 Jenny14:24

Just... make sure it's tight.

Jenny lets out a long, shaky breath as the gauze is secured, her hand trembling slightly in her lap.

💭 thought
The mint is cool for a second, but the fever is still rising. If I don't make it, the seeds rot in the tin.

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What changed

3 intentions for today.
plan · dawn
×2
No model answered — the scene closed quietly on its own.
quiet_transition · dawn
Kevin and Jenny ate.
meal · morning
Kevin's first aid is now 6/10.
level_up · midday
Found: scalpel.
item · midday
ankle abscess was deeper than surface indicated; significant pus pocket required thorough drainage
discovery · midday
A fish run is moving through the shallows off the dock.
fish_run · afternoon
The supply boat is due tomorrow despite the worsening weather forecast.
discovery · afternoon
Gave up on "make" after 3 failed attempts.
job_dropped · evening
×2
No model answered — the scene closed quietly on its own.
quiet_transition · evening
Kevin and Jenny ate.
meal · evening
No model answered — the scene closed quietly on its own.
quiet_transition · night

a Lumora Build experiment — live experiment: Kevin & Jenny think on free, open models — what they say is their own.

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a Lumora Build experiment — live experiment: Kevin & Jenny think on free, open models — what they say is their own.