Day 643
Day 643: The Storm Arrives Early
Dawn broke heavy and still, the tide high against the dock pilings, the barometer at 988 hPa and rising slowly. "It's at 988. Still rising, slowly," Jenny said. Kevin checked the binding on her ankle. "Holding. Swelling's down a fraction from last light." "A fraction. I'll take it." He told her to change the sea beet poultice at noon; she said she could do it herself. "Thanks. I'll be ready."
Dawn broke heavy and still, the tide high against the dock pilings, the barometer at 988 hPa and rising slowly. "It's at 988. Still rising, slowly," Jenny said. Kevin checked the binding on her ankle. "Holding. Swelling's down a fraction from last light." "A fraction. I'll take it." He told her to change the sea beet poultice at noon; she said she could do it herself. "Thanks. I'll be ready."
Warm rain fell intermittently. Kevin prepared the radio mast and checked the mooring lines while the tide receded, exposing slick rocks. "The tide's slow pull is good — it'll give us a clear dock when the boat comes. "Three points of contact. Always."
By midday the rain tapered to a drizzle. Kevin worked the dock; Jenny managed her ankle. "The skin's hot above the wrap. Let me re-do it fresh. Got new sea beet and mint cooling in the basin." "Thanks. The mint helps with the heat."
Afternoon brought a bruised purple sky. The barometer had dropped back to 988 hPa, falling fast. "It's falling. Fast." They ate mackerel in silence, broth and salt oil in the close air. The tide rose, pushing against the reinforced pilings. Evening gusts hit 40 knots. Rain lashed the shutters. Jenny saw the tide higher than usual. "The tide is coming in higher than usual. We need to check the moorings one last time before the light fails." Kevin checked lines while she stayed back. "Watch out for the north cleat, it's been looking loose since the gale." "North cleat's bolted through the sister knee. It's not moving." The bow bolt shifted; he fetched through-bolts. "Working!" Water rose fast. The storm had arrived ahead of the boat.
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the keeper's cottage · dawnThe Calm Before the Arrival
Kevin and Jenny sit on the porch as the heavy air sits still over the island. Kevin checks the binding on Jenny's ankle while she watches the barometer for any sign of the rising pressure.
The air is heavy and still as dawn breaks on Day 643. The tide is high, pressing against the dock pilings, while the barometer shows a slow rise to 988 hPa. Kevin and Jenny are at the keeper's cottage, preparing for the supply boat's arrival tomorrow.
It's at 988. Still rising, slowly.
Lean back against the whitewashed wall and watch Kevin's hands on the bandage.
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Holding. Swelling's down a fraction from last light.
finish re-wrapping the ankle with fresh sea beet poultice, secure the binding with a clean strip of gauze, and sit back on the porch step with the medical kit beside me
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A fraction. I'll take it.
Gently shift the leg to test the tension of the gauze, then look out toward the garden.
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The poultice is drawing heat. Change it again at noon.
wipe my hands on a rag, set the medical kit on the porch floor, and pick up the binoculars to glass the horizon toward the mainland
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I can do the noon change myself.
Reach for the tin mug of water and take a slow sip, eyes following the line of the horizon.
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Noted.
lower the binoculars, rest them on my knee, and watch the tide line on the beach where the crate floated in yesterday
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the keeper's cottage · morningThe Calm before the Arrival
The still heat continues as the sun rises higher, waiting for the boat to break the horizon.
Warm rain falls intermittently over the cottage as Kevin prepares the radio mast for the coming supply boat arrival. Jenny manages her ankle infection with a fresh sea beet poultice while watching the tide recede, exposing more of the rocky shoreline.
Boat's due tomorrow. Radio check at ten.
Pour two mugs of coffee, set one beside Jenny on the porch step.
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Thanks. I'll be ready.
Reach for the mug and take a slow sip, wincing as I shift my weight.
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Hold the mug for a sec, I'll bring the other.
Put the other mug on the table, lean back, and watch the tide.
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It's falling. Fast.
Lean back against the stone wall and stare out toward the horizon.
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The tide's slow pull is good — it’ll give us a clear dock when the boat comes. Let me finish the bilge check; I’ll be ready.
Tighten the dock mooring ring with the new bolts, double‑check the bilge pump, and lash a spare rope to the porch rail. Then set the radio to 1000, check the signal, and log a ETA note for tomorrow.
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Don't forget to check the coax connection on the mast. It's been touch-and-go.
Slowly pull myself up using the cane, clutching the coffee mug.
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On the list. Radio first, then the mast.
Key the shortwave at 1000, run the supply boat check-in, log whatever they give me. Then climb the mast and reseat the coax with the spare roll.
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Just... be careful up there. The rain made the rungs slick.
Limp slowly toward the garden shed to retrieve the soil pH kit.
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Three points of contact. Always.
Climb the radio mast, test each rung before weighting it, reach the insulator, uncoil the spare coax, strip ends, solder the joint, tape it with self-amalgamating, tug-test the connection, key the mic to verify transmit, then climb down slo
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I'm starting the soil tests. I'm worried the acidity is too high.
Open the shed door and find the pH meter and the testing strips.
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the keeper's cottage · middayMidday Boat Prep
The rain tapers to a drizzle as the sun reaches its peak. The tide is at its lowest, leaving the shore rocks slick and teeming.
Kevin spends the midday preparing the dock for the incoming supply boat and checking the mooring lines. Jenny stays at the cottage, managing her ankle infection with sea beet poultices while the heat hangs heavy.
All right, Jenny, let’s see if that new cable’s holding up. I’ll check the water flow on the dock first.
inspect dock water line and test new coax connection.
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Be careful with the connectors, the salt air eats the threading.
Lean against the doorframe, suppressing a wince as I shift my weight.
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Already got the dielectric grease in my pocket. Won't make the same mistake twice.
walk down to the dock, crouch at the waterline to check piling bases and test the coax connection at the radio mast base.
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Let me know if the coax is pinched!
Slowly limp to the edge of the porch and watch him, gripping the railing.
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Cable runs clean through the fairlead. No pinch points. I'll check the connector seating at the mast base and be right back.
inspect the coax connector at the mast base, wiggle-test the connection, then walk back up to the cottage.
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Did you see the tide? It's completely out.
Gently rub the edge of the bandage on my ankle, checking for any new seepage.
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Saw it. Water's off the bottom two courses. Pilings look clean, no new worm damage. Ring's holding.
climb the porch steps, wipe salt off hands on trousers, crouch beside her to look at the ankle wrapping.
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It's fine. The poultice is doing its job.
Pull my leg back slightly, avoiding his gaze.
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The skin's hot above the wrap. Let me re-do it fresh. Got new sea beet and mint cooling in the basin.
gently unwrap the bandage, assess the wound, clean with saline, apply fresh sea beet-mint poultice, re-wrap with clean gauze.
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Thanks. The mint helps with the heat.
way still, watching his hands as he works.
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the keeper's cottage · afternoonAfternoon Lull
The sun begins its slow descent, casting long shadows across the garden as you and Jenny reunite for the evening.
The air in the cottage is heavy as the flat sky thickens into a deep, bruised purple. The barometer has dropped to 988 hPa, signaling the storm is moving faster than the forecast. Jenny eats the mackerel in silence, the salt and oil filling the small space, while Kevin sips his broth. The tide is rising, pushing water against the reinforced dock pilings with a rhythmic, hollow lap.
Water's hot if you want it. Broth too.
Walk to the stove and lift the kettle lid, checking the level.
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Thanks. I'll take a mug.
I lean back against the stone wall and adjust the sea beet poultice on my ankle.
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Tin or enamel?
Pull two enamel mugs from the shelf, set them on the table. Ladle broth from the pot into one, steam rising. Fill the other from the kettle, push it across the table toward her without a word.
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Enamel is fine.
I take the mug and wrap my hands around the warm ceramic.
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Five tins left. Corned beef. Two mackerel.
Sit opposite her at the table, mug in hand, blow across the surface. Watch the steam curl and break.
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We'll have the mackerel tonight.
I take a slow sip of the broth, wincing as the movement shifts the weight on my ankle.
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Open one. Save the other.
Reach into the pocket of my trousers, pull out the small tin opener. Slide it across the table toward her.
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Right. One for now.
I reach for the opener, my fingers slightly clumsy from the heat.
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Let me.
Take the tin from the table, punch the opener through the lid clean, work the rim. Lift the top, peel it back. Oil shines on the dark flesh. Push the tin back to her.
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Thanks.
I take the open tin, the smell of salt and salt hitting me.
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Fork's there if you want.
Nod toward the drawer. Pick up my own mug, drink the broth slow. Taste: pepper, fat, warmth.
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I'll eat.
I take the fork, cut a small piece of mackerel, and chew slowly.
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the old shrine · eveningThe Storm Approaches
The first gust of the 40-knot wind rattles the shutters, and the rain finally begins to fall.
No narrator was available, so nothing about this stretch was recorded.
Kevin, check the latches on the kitchen window again. The wind is picking up.
Stand up slowly, wincing as my ankle throbs, and walk toward the window to watch the sea.
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Already on it. Kitchen window first, then the dinghy.
Walk to the kitchen window, test both latches, throw the sliding bolt home. Then pull on boots and oilskin, grab the heavy weather line coil from the porch hook, and head down to the dock to double the dinghy's bow warp around the mooring r
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Make sure the cleat is secure, Kevin! The swell is already building.
Press my forehead against the cool glass, watching the grey horizon vanish into the spray.
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Cleat and backing plate. Stern spring chafe guard too.
Reach the dock, crouch at the dinghy bow. Hammer-test the cleat bolts — both ring solid. Run hand along the stern spring where it kisses the piling fairlead; chafe guard's shredded.
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Use some of the old canvas for the spring! Don't let it rub the metal!
Move own the door, the sharp pain in my ankle making me hiss, and grab my notebook.
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Canvas from the genny shed. Be right back.
Sprint up the dock path to the generator shed, haul the canvas roll out from under the lashed tarp, knife a two-foot strip off the end, sprint back down.
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way! Wrap it twice around the spring and tie it if you have to!
way against the stone wall of the cottage, watching the waves break against the math below.
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On it.
Wrap the canvas strip twice around the stern spring at the fairlead, seat it in the groove. Tie a clove hitch around the standing part, snug it hard, add a half-hitch. Yank test — holds. Coil the tail, tuck it under the wraps.
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Check the bow line again, Kevin. The swell is getting mean.
Lean against the doorframe, the salt spray stinging my eyes, and watch the wayhy dance in the rising tide.
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Checking.
Walk the dock to the bow, grab the line where it leads to the forward eye bolt. Heave on it — the cleat groans, timber compresses. Eye bolt shifts a hair in its bed. Not good.
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Kevin, the bow bolt is shifting! Get the spare bolts and reinforce it now!
Step out own the porch, heart wiring against my ribs, and watch the wayhy strain against the waves.
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Getting the through-bolts. Workshop first, then the shutter stash.
Sprint up the dock path, cut across the garden toward the workshop. Yank the door, grab the bolt bin — two 10mm x 150mm stainless, four heavy washers, four nyloc nuts. Stuff them in oilskin pocket.
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Hurry up! The water is rising too fast!
Grip the railing of the cottage, white-knuckled, and watch the wayhy lurch.
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Working!
Sprint back down the dock, vault onto the dinghy bow. Drill the two new through-bolt holes either side of the existing eye bolt, drive the 10mm stainless through with washers both sides, thread nylocs, torque with the 19mm wrench.
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the keeper's cottage · nightA Quiet Stretch
Back at the cottage.
The tide recedes, exposing the slick rocks of the tide pools as the pressure drops further. Inside the cottage, the air is heavy with the scent of salt and the medicinal tang of the sea beet poultice. Jenny's ankle is swollen and throbbing beneath the binding, while the barometer continues its steady descent, signaling a shift in weather before the boat arrives.
The tide is coming in higher than usual. We need to check the moorings one last time before the light fails.
I sit on the edge of the cot, wincing as I reach for the basin and carefully unwrap the damp binding from my ankle to inspect the swelling.
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I'll check the lines. You stay off it.
walk to the porch and pull on boots, grab the flashlight and heavy wrench from the shelf, head down the path to the dock
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Watch out for the north cleat, it's been looking loose since the gale.
I dip the cloth into the salt water and gently debride the old sea beet paste from the wound, hissing through my teeth when the water hits the infection.
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North cleat's bolted through the sister knee. It's not moving.
reach the dock, sweep the flashlight beam along the starboard mooring line to the north piling, test the cleat with a boot heel, then check the warp tension on the dinghy's stern spring
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