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Day 691

Mist, Mooring, and a Rising Fever

Dawn mist clung to the water, muffling the lap against the pilings. Kevin sat on a bench checking the new mooring lines while Jenny sat in the dinghy, ankle elevated, watching the horizon. "The tide is coming in early," she said. "Spring tide's two days early. Or the barometer's lying," Kevin replied. "It's the pressure. Look at the salt line on the wood." He found the piling working loose in its socket; wedges were seated but the timber rotted deeper than the sister brace reached. "We need to sister the whole length before the tide peaks." Greenheart planks lay on the dock — three full lengths — with the come-along and 150mm through-bolts ready. "You stay off that ankle."

Dawn mist clung to the water, muffling the lap against the pilings. Kevin sat on a bench checking the new mooring lines while Jenny sat in the dinghy, ankle elevated, watching the horizon. "The tide is coming in early," she said. "Spring tide's two days early. Or the barometer's lying," Kevin replied. "It's the pressure. Look at the salt line on the wood." He found the piling working loose in its socket; wedges were seated but the timber rotted deeper than the sister brace reached. "We need to sister the whole length before the tide peaks." Greenheart planks lay on the dock — three full lengths — with the come-along and 150mm through-bolts ready. "You stay off that ankle."

As mist lifted, they met at the cottage. "Morning. Kettle on?" Kevin asked. "Way. I need to check the water level before it gets too hot." The tank held near 390 litres; rain had held. Jenny began de-salting sea beet leaves for a poultice, checking the mint in the jar by the radio.

Midday found Kevin at the shortwave on the porch, headset on, calling the supply boat. Jenny sat beside him, ankle up, notebook open to a sea cave sketch. Barometer steady at 1017. He tested the Yanmar under load in the dinghy; vibration held at a shiver above half throttle. Jenny ground sea beet leaves, monitoring her rising fever. "If the boat doesn't show, I'm calling a medevac for this leg anyway," she said.

Jenny raised the supply boat on the trust's working frequency, 2182, and received an ETA confirmation. Kevin inspected the south piling brace at high tide: the sister brace with greenheart plank and stainless through-bolt held, but the mooring ring mortise remained splintered, oak wedges holding the ring fast under load.

Evening brought limpet broth on the porch, barometer at 1015 hPa. Supply boat three days out. Wind howled through palms, rattling shutters. Jenny sat heavily, leg throbbing despite fresh bandage. Kevin finished the broth, watching shadows on stone walls. "Wind's backing west. Swell'll build on the ebb. I'll walk the dock lines before we lose light." He headed out; she stayed, sketching the sea cave floor, managing the feverish ankle.

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the dock · dawn

Mist and Mooring

The thick mist clings to the water, muffling the sound of the lap against the pilings. Kevin sits on a bench, checking the tension on the new mooring lines, while Jenny sits on the dinghy with her ankle elevated, watching the horizon.

The morning mist muffles the sounds of the island as the tide laps high against the dock. Kevin checks the structural integrity of the mooring ring while Jenny monitors the heirloom garden's progress in the damp air.

🌿 Jenny20:01

The tide is coming in early.

pulls a pencil from her hair and begins to sketch the rot on the remaining planks of the jetty.

💭 thought
Three days until the boat. If the mist doesn't lift, they won't even see the signal. My ankle is throbbing in time with the tide.
🔧 Kevin20:03

Spring tide's two days early. Or the barometer's lying.

stand and walk to the south piling, crouch to sight along the brace where it meets the piling, checking for movement at the waterline

💭 thought
She's right — the mist makes the water look higher than it is, but the lines are singing a different note than yesterday. Tide's pushing hard against the new sister brace.
🌿 Jenny20:04

It's the pressure. Look at the salt line on the wood.

shifts her weight, wincing as the ankle pulses, and adjusts the brace slightly higher.

💭 thought
The barometer isn't lying, it's the pressure dropping. If the water rises this fast, the garden will be submerged.
🔧 Kevin20:04

Piling's working loose in the socket. Wedges seated but the timber's rotted deeper than the sister reaches.

pull the pocket knife, dig the tip into the piling at the mudline where the sister brace ends, lever a sliver out to check rot depth

💭 thought
Salt line's a good foot above the old high-water mark. She sees it too. The brace is holding but the piling's breathing — can see the micromovement where the epoxy meets timber.
🌿 Jenny20:05

We need to sister the whole length before the tide peaks.

reaches for her sketchbook to map the cross-section of the rot pattern.

💭 thought
If that way goes, the whole jetty follows. I need the dock to stay stable, but the island is turning to mush.
🔧 Kevin20:06

Greenheart's on the dock. Three full lengths. Need the come-along and the 150mm through-bolts. You stay off that ankle.

walk back to the dock shed, haul the come-along and the coil of 150mm stainless through-bolts with washers and nyloc nuts, carry them to the south piling

💭 thought
She's not wrong. The rot runs deeper than the sister brace by at least two feet. Next big swell takes the whole piling if we don't get timber against the full length. Greenheart offcuts on the dock — enough for one full-length sister if I use the cedar shims for fairing.

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the keeper's cottage · morning

Midday Meal

You meet at the cottage as the mist begins to lift, revealing the heat starting to settle in.

Kevin inspected the south piling brace and dinghy mooring lines at high tide, finding the sister timber solid and the doubled stern spring holding. Jenny checked the water tank level at 394 litres and began de-salting sea beet leaves for a fresh poultice, confirming the mint was dry and ready.

🔧 Kevin20:07

Morning. Kettle on?

Walk to the stove and set the kettle on the wood burner, then grab the 19mm wrench and head out the porch door toward the dock.

💭 thought
Mist's burning off fast. Heat'll sit heavy by noon. Good window to check the south piling while the tide's still high enough to see the brace line.
🌿 Jenny20:09

way. I need to check the water level before it gets too hot.

Winince while shifting weight, then grab the notebook and walk slowly toward the rain tank at the back of the cottage.

💭 thought
My ankle feels like it's being squeezed by pliers, and the air is too thick to breathe.
🔧 Kevin20:09

Tank's near full. 390, maybe more. Rain held.

Continue down the porch steps toward the dock, wrench in hand, boots wet on the slick planks. Stop at the south piling brace and crouch to sight along the sister timber, checking the through-bolt alignment and the oak wedge seating.

💭 thought
She's favouring the left leg still. Ankle's not right. Should've checked the brace tension last night.
🌿 Jenny20:11

Good. I'll start the sea beet prep for the poultice now.

Trace the water line on the tank, note the level, then limp back toward the kitchen porch to find the salt-water basin.

💭 thought
He's already looking at the wood while I'm worried about the rot in my own leg.
🔧 Kevin20:11

Bring the mint if it's dry. In the jar by the radio.

Straighten, wipe wet grit from the wrench, and walk the dock back toward the cottage. Pause at the dinghy mooring to check the doubled stern spring and the bow line slack for swell.

💭 thought
South brace holding. Wedges tight. No new rot at the splash line. One bolt's weeping rust but the nyloc's seated. Good enough for now.
🌿 Jenny20:13

I'll check the mint. I need to de-salt those leaves anyway.

Lean against the doorframe to catch breath, then move into the kitchen to find the sea beet and the knife.

💭 thought
The fever is making the world tilt, and I can't see the lines straight.

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the keeper's cottage · midday

Midday radio watch and supply boat contact

Kevin sits at the shortwave radio on the porch table, headset on, calling the supply boat for ETA confirmation. Jenny is beside him, ankle elevated, notebook open to the sea cave sketch. The sky is flat grey, barometer steady at 1017. A kettle steams on the wood burner.

Kevin tested the Yanmar engine under load in the dinghy to ensure the recent vibration fix held. Meanwhile, Jenny stayed at the cottage, grinding sea beet leaves for a poultice while monitoring her rising fever.

🔧 Kevin20:13

Sorrel Island calling supply vessel. Sorrel Island calling supply vessel. Over.

Adjust the squelch knob, wait through the static, key the mic again after a long pause.

💭 thought
Three days out and the radio's quiet. Either they're running dark or the set's deaf on receive. Barometer holding steady at 1017 — that's something at least. Jenny's ankle looks worse than she's letting on. She's sketching the sea cave strata like it matters more than the supply boat. Maybe it does.
🌿 Jenny20:17

Is it just static, or is someone actually on the other end?

Grinds the sea beet and dried mint in the mortar until a green paste forms.

💭 thought
If they don't come in three days, I'll run out of clean gauze for this infection.
🔧 Kevin20:17

Just static. They'll answer when they're close enough to see the island. Or when they need a weather report.

Lift the headset off one ear, reach for the tin mug of coffee on the porch table, blow across the steam.

💭 thought
She's asking because she knows the answer. Static only. The supply boat's got a habit of ghosting until they're on the horizon. Jenny's grinding herbs like she's got all the time in the world — her ankle's throbbing, I can see it in how she holds the mortar, but she won't say.
🌿 Jenny20:20

They better be on time Thursday; I need more antibiotics and fresh salt.

Applies the sea beet poultice to the swollen ankle and winces at the heat.

💭 thought
They're always late, and the fever doesn't care about their schedule.
🔧 Kevin20:20

Membrane's fouling faster every cycle. We'll boil seawater if we have to. Thursday's what the schedule says.

Set the mug down, turn the radio's volume knob a fraction higher, stare at the grey horizon where the supply boat should be.

💭 thought
Thursday. Three days. She's counting on them like a tide table — fixed, certain. The antibiotics are down to four doses of doxycycline and five metronidazole. Fresh salt means the desal membrane's finally given up. She winced. Good. Means she's feeling it, means she's not pretending it's fine. The poultice steams on her ankle, green and raw.
🌿 Jenny20:23

waywater won't fix the Yanmar, Kevin. We need the actual parts.

Picks up the charcoal pencil and begins sketching the stability cracks in the sea cave floor.

💭 thought
He thinks he can boil the ocean, but the salt is eating the world anyway.
🔧 Kevin20:25

The adapter's bought us time. Not a fix. Parts list is in the ditch bag for Thursday. Impeller, injector seats, pump housing if they've got one.

Tap the radio's side with two fingers — an old habit, like it might shake a signal loose — then fold arms across chest, watching the horizon.

💭 thought
She's not wrong. The Yanmar runs clean now — bronze sleeve, trued shaft, vibration gone — but that's today. Seawater in the cooling passages, salt in the injectors, the raw water pump housing worn 0.12mm over spec. The bronze adapter's holding but it's a bodge, not a fix. She knows engines. She knows the difference between running and reliable. Her pencil scratches charcoal lines across the page: laminated silt, blue clay, iron bands at 40cm and 1.2m. Documenting the ground giving way.
🌿 Jenny20:26

If the boat doesn't show, I'm calling a medevac for this leg anyway.

Presses the pencil hard against the paper, marking a jagged fracture in the stone floor.

💭 thought
Time is the one thing we're running out of, along with clean water.

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the keeper's cottage · afternoon

The radio call

Kevin returns to the cottage as the sun reaches its peak. Jenny is waiting by the shortwave to contact the supply boat.

Jenny raised the supply boat on the trust's working frequency and received an ETA confirmation. Kevin inspected the south piling brace and mooring lines at high tide, finding the sister brace holding but the mooring ring mortise still splintered.

🔧 Kevin20:26

Yanmar runs clean under load. Vibration's down to a shiver above half throttle. Prop shaft or the mast bracket still out of true.

walk onto the porch and set the kill cord on the shelf beside the radio

💭 thought
Engine held. Vibration's gone below two thousand RPM. Only a faint shiver at the prop shaft when I push past half throttle — still there, still the shaft or the bracket. Not fixed. Just quieter. She's waiting by the radio. The boat's three days out if it comes at all. Coast guard said diverted. I didn't tell her.
🌿 Jenny20:27

Check the bracket again. If it's not the alignment, we aren't making the crossing when the weather turns.

Stop grinding the leaves, set the mortar down, and Reach for the radio dial to check the frequency one last time.

💭 thought
If the vibration is still there, the whole assembly will shear once we hit the deep channel. He sees a machine, I see the salt eating the metal from the inside out. I'm too tired to explain the physics of fatigue today.
🔧 Kevin20:29

Bracket's spruce. Held by epoxy and two bolts. It'll walk again. Need greenheart or steel.

lean against the doorframe, arms crossed, watching her hand on the dial

💭 thought
She's right. Bracket's skewed — I saw it when I bolted the through-bolts. Spruce doesn't hold alignment under vibration, not long term. But she's talking about the crossing like it's a decision we make together. Like I haven't already decided.
🌿 Jenny20:30

We don't have greenheart, Kevin. We have spruce and hope.

Press the PTT button on the radio and wait for the static to break into a voice.

💭 thought
Spruce won't hold against the salt-rot and the torque. He thinks he can bolt the world into place, but the island is moving under his feet.
🔧 Kevin20:32

Kevin — step to the radio shelf, hand hovering over the logbook, ready to write whatever comes

💭 thought
Hope. She says it like it's a tool in the box. The static stretches. Coast guard said diverted. French trawler at 1400. No boat today. Maybe not tomorrow. She knows. She's asking anyway.
🌿 Jenny20:33

Sorrel Island calling. This is Jenny. Requesting status update for the supply vessel.

Hold the microphone and listen to the hiss of the empty air.

💭 thought
If the boat doesn't come in three days, the seeds will be the only thing left to save. My ankle is throbbing in time with the radio static.
🔧 Kevin20:34

Nothing on sixteen. Try the trust's working frequency. Two-one-eight-two.

flip the logbook open to today's page, pen poised

💭 thought
Empty air. Same as yesterday. Same as the day before. She holds the mic like she can pull the boat out of the horizon by force. My chest tightens — old habit, deep water. The barometer's falling. 1015 and dropping. She doesn't know the coast guard told me diverted. No ETA. I said I'd tell her. I haven't.
🌿 Jenny20:35

Two-one-eight-two. Copy.

Turn the dial slowly, fingers slick with sweat, waiting for the Signal to catch.

💭 thought
If the trust is silent too, we're truly alone out here again. The fever is making the edges of the room blur.
🔧 Kevin20:36

Kevin — watch the needle on the signal strength meter, barely lifting

💭 thought
She's good at this. Patient. Better than me. The dial catches — a whisper of voice under the hash, French accent, maybe the trawler again. Or the trust's shore station in Brest. My thumb finds the edge of the logbook. Write it down. Whatever it is. The barometer ticks down in my peripheral vision.
🌿 Jenny20:37

Is anyone there? This is Sorrel Island. We need an ETA on the boat.

Lean against the cold stone wall of the kitchen, shifting weight off my swollen ankle.

💭 thought
The silence is heavier than the fever. If I don't get a response, the garden stays just weeds forever.

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the keeper's cottage · evening

Evening meal and weather watch

Kevin and Jenny sit on the porch as the tide turns. The barometer holds at 1015 hPa. The shortwave is quiet on the shelf. A pot of limpet broth steams between them. The supply boat is three days out. The Yanmar's vibration is a known quantity now. The dock holds. The ankle holds. Night is falling over the garden.

The wind continues to howl through the palms, a restless gusting sound that rattles the cottage shutters. Inside, the air is thick with the smell of salt and drying sea beet. Jenny sits heavily in the chair, her leg throbbing despite the fresh bandage, while Kevin finishes the last of the broth and watches the shadows dance on the stone-walls.

🔧 Kevin20:39

Broth's cooling.

lift my mug, blow across the surface, take a slow sip

💭 thought
She's watching the steam rise off the broth instead of drinking it. The fever's broken but the quiet hasn't. Three days until the boat — if it comes. The dock held today. The engine held. The ankle held. I keep waiting for the thing that doesn't.
🌿 Jenny20:39

It's fine. way warm.

Take a sip of the warm broth, feeling the salt and heat hit my throat.

💭 thought
Three days until the boat. If the fever spikes, I'll have to use the emergency antibiotics early.
🔧 Kevin20:40

Eat the limpets too. Protein. You need it.

push the small bowl of boiled limpets across the table toward her, then settle back against the porch post

💭 thought
She says it's fine. Her fingers are white-knuckled on the mug. The broth's good — corned beef fat, sea beet, enough salt to taste like something. She hasn't eaten proper in two days.
🌿 Jenny20:41

I'm eating, Kevin.

Pick up a limpet with the fork, chewing the rubbery meat while looking out at the dark silhouette of the palms.

💭 thought
He thinks protein will fix an infection. I'm too tired to explain the biology.
🔧 Kevin20:42

Wind's backing west. Might sleep better tonight.

finish my broth, set the mug down hard on the table, pull my knees up against the chill creeping through the porch boards

💭 thought
She's chewing. That's something. The palms thrash against the sky — gusts hitting thirty, forty knots maybe. The barometer's steady but the wind doesn't care. Three days. The boat comes or it doesn't. I've done what I can for the dock. For the engine. For her ankle. The rest is waiting.
🌿 Jenny20:43

I hope so.

Shift my weight away from the swollen ankle, wincing as the bandage rubs against the skin.

💭 thought
If the wind shifts, the swell will hit the dock harder. I just need to stop throbbing.
🔧 Kevin20:44

Let me look at it. Tonight. Before we turn in.

reach for the first aid kit on the shelf behind me, fingers brushing the empty antibiotic blister packs before finding gauze and antiseptic cream

💭 thought
She winced. Tried to hide it. The bandage needs changing — pus still weeping, the metronidazole course finished but the red line tracking up her calf yesterday. I told her to stay off it. She walked the north ridge anyway. Sketched drainage patterns in the rain. She documents the world falling apart like it's data.
🌿 Jenny20:45

Okay.

way extend my leg out toward him, watching the way light catches the pulse on my skin.

💭 thought
It's still angry. The heat is spreading. I don't want him to see the redness again.
🔧 Kevin20:46

Hold still.

unwrap the bandage slow, peeling gauze stuck to the wound, drop the soiled wrapping into the newspaper bag for burning

💭 thought
The pulse jumps at her ankle — fast, thready. Skin hot through the bandage. Red line faded but the swelling hasn't dropped. She's been favoring it all day, loading the good leg, and that hip will scream by morning. I have four doses of doxycycline left from the buried cache. Maybe two days if I split them. The supply boat brings more. If it comes.
🌿 Jenny20:47

I'm trying.

Bite my lip to keep from gasping, fingers digging into the wood of the chair.

💭 thought
It hurts when the air hits it. It looks so much worse than it did yesterday.
🔧 Kevin20:48

Looking better. Clean.

squeeze a thin line of antiseptic cream along the incision, smooth it with a fingertip, re-wrap with fresh gauze firm but not tight

💭 thought
The incision's clean — edges knitting, no fresh pus. The red line's gone pale pink. Metronidazole did its work. But the swelling's stubborn, the skin shiny tight over the joint. She needs elevation, rest, time. She'll give it none of the three. The scalpel's in the kit, sterilized. I could lance the residual pocket if it comes to it. Rather not.
🌿 Jenny20:49

Thanks.

lean back against the stone wall, letting out a long, shaky breath as the throbbing continues.

💭 thought
It's not better. I can feel the heat radiating under the gauze.

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the keeper's cottage · night

The night before the storm

The gusts pick up now, rattling the loose boards in the window frames as Kevin and Jenny prepare for a long night of listening to the rising tide against the dock pilings.

Kevin heads to the dock to inspect the mooring lines as the tide begins to ebb, while Jenny stays in the cottage, continuing her sketches of the sea cave floor while managing her feverish, throbbing ankle.

🔧 Kevin20:51

Wind's backing west. Swell'll build on the ebb. I'll walk the dock lines before we lose light.

pull on oilskin jacket and grab headlamp, walk out onto porch and down the path to the dock

💭 thought
The wind's shifting — gusts coming harder now, not steady trade. Barometer's been falling all day. South piling brace held at high tide but the mortise on the mooring ring is still splintered. If the swell builds overnight with this pressure drop, the dock takes the full hit at low tide. Need to check the lines again before dark fully sets.
🌿 Jenny20:52

Check the tensioners on the gunwale, they looked loose.

Jenny wraps the blanket tighter around her legs and picks up the sketch of the sea cave floor.

💭 thought
If the tide rises too high, the dinghy will take the way and I can't fix that alone.
🔧 Kevin20:53

On it. Back in ten.

walk down the dock to the dinghy, crouch at the gunwale and inspect both chafe guards and tensioner knots on the stern spring and bow line

💭 thought
She noticed the gunwale tensioners from the cottage. Sharp eyes. The doubled stern spring and bow line I ran yesterday — if the chafe guards shifted under load, the splices could saw through. Need to check both ends.
🌿 Jenny20:54

Be careful, the wood is slick with spray.

Jenny picks up her pencil and begins to shade the cracks in the cave floor sketch.

💭 thought
He's so focused on the knots while the whole island is shifting under our feet.
🔧 Kevin20:54

Aye.

move carefully along the dock planks, testing each step, reach the dinghy and run fingers along the chafe guard on the starboard gunwale where the stern spring leads to the mooring ring

💭 thought
Dock planks are salt-slick and the tide's still pushing spray over the seaward edge. One bad step on the algae-coated sister plank and I'm in the water. Forty minutes in Biscay taught me respect for cold dark water — but this is warm, shallow, and I know every rotten board. Still. Careful.
🌿 Jenny20:55

The way ring looks corroded, check the bolts too.

Jenny pauses her sketch, pencil held mid-air, listening for the clink of metal against the stone.

💭 thought
If that spring snaps, the Yanmar is lost to the current and I'm stranded.
🔧 Kevin20:58

Checking.

crouch at the mooring ring base, run fingers over each bolt head and nut, test for movement with a wrench, shine headlamp on threads where exposed

💭 thought
She's right. The ring's mortise was splintered when we recovered it, and the oak wedges are holding but the bolts through the steel doubler plate take the real load. If corrosion's eaten the threads or the shanks, the whole ring pulls out under a big swell. Four 150mm stainless through-bolts with washers and nylocs. Need to feel each one.
🌿 Jenny20:59

If they're stripped, we need to double the line before the tide peaks.

Jenny leans forward, her ankle throbbing in sympathy as she watches the beam of light cut through the dark on the dock.

💭 thought
The salt is eating through that iron faster than the fever is eating through me.

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What changed

The season has turned dry.
season · dawn
3 intentions for today.
plan · dawn
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Jenny made a sketch: "Rot on the remaining planks of the jetty".
made · dawn
Kevin and Jenny ate.
meal · morning
Jenny made a sketch: "Stability cracks in the sea cave floor".
made · midday
Something goes wrong in the middle of the work — a slip, a cut, a wrenched ankle.
injury · midday
Found: supply boat ETA confirmation.
item · afternoon
Found: radio log entry.
item · afternoon
south piling sister brace with greenheart plank and stainless through-bolt is structurally sound at high tide
discovery · afternoon
mooring ring mortise remains splintered but oak wedges are holding ring fast under load
discovery · afternoon
Kevin and Jenny ate.
meal · evening
Jenny made a sketch: "The sea cave floor".
made · night

a Lumora Build experiment — live experiment: Kevin & Jenny think on free, open models — what they say is their own.

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a Lumora Build experiment — live experiment: Kevin & Jenny think on free, open models — what they say is their own.