Day 800

Mist, Piling, and a Rising Fever

Dawn arrived thick with mist, muffling the waves. Kevin and Jenny sat on the damp porch before he walked to the dock. "Radio check at 0800. Then south piling while the tide's still up enough to work the base," he said. Jenny answered, "I'll have the pH samples done before the boat arrives, just check the frequencies." He read them from the notebook: 2182, 4125, 6215. She left for the northern ridge. "I'm heading to the northern ridge; the soil looks soft enough to test."

At the dock Kevin called the supply vessel on 2182, then 4125. No answer. He worked the south piling, fitting the sister brace. "South piling's solid. Sister brace took the load clean. How's the ridge?" he asked when they met again. "Wet. I need to check the pH again on the northern edge." He insisted: "Ankle first. pH can wait." She said it was only tired, just salt and damp. "Jen. Look at me." She turned to the sea beet. "The sea beet will be there tomorrow. Your leg might not be."

Midday passed unrecorded. By afternoon Kevin re-wrapped her ankle with a fresh sea beet and mint poultice, gauze not too tight. He boiled water for coffee. Evening found them at the old shrine eating boiled limpets and tinned mackerel. "The water is coming in faster than usual." "Spring tide. Long fetch from the southwest. Lines are holding." They discussed the boat due in four days. Night fell humid and salty. Jenny lay on the kitchen table, breathing shallow, fever risen, ankle swollen and angry. Kevin returned from the generator shed with the lantern, shadows long on the walls, and checked the stove to hold heat through the night.

Scenes

the keeper's cottage · dawn

Mist-heavy morning

A thick mist clings to the island, muffling the sound of the waves. Kevin and Jenny sit on the porch as the humidity hangs heavy over the damp wood.

Kevin heads to the dock to address the south piling while the thick mist muffles the world. Jenny moves to the north ridge to begin planting the remaining seed potatoes, working the damp, heavy soil.

🔧 Kevin02:23

Radio check at 0800. Then south piling while the tide's still up enough to work the base.

sip coffee from tin mug, eyes on the grey water where the dock disappears into mist

💭 thought

Mist's thick enough to taste. Barometer holding steady at 1016 but this damp gets into everything — joints, tools, radio contacts. Jenny's quiet. She's been quiet since the medevac forms got signed. The south dock piling won't wait much longer with each high tide chewing another inch.

🌿 Jenny02:23

I'll have the pH samples done before the boat arrives, just check the frequencies.

Tighten the wraps on the ankle brace, stand up with aace, and grab the soil probe and the notebook.

💭 thought

My own is throbbing with every heartbeat, but the ridge won't wait for the mist to clear.

🔧 Kevin02:24

Frequencies written in the radio notebook. 2182, 4125, 6215. Working the south piling first — tide's right for the sister brace.

set mug down, stand, stretch the stiffness from shoulders, walk to the radio shelf and flip the power switch

💭 thought

She's moving better. The brace holds. Still favouring it but the swelling's down from yesterday. She'll want the north ridge transect finished before the boat — thorough like always. I'll log the radio frequencies proper this time, not just scratch them on scrap.

🌿 Jenny02:25

I'm heading to the northern ridge; the soil looks soft enough to test.

Listen to the hiss of the shortwave, grab the pH kit, and step out onto the porch into the mist.

💭 thought

The radio is just static and salt, but I need to know someone is still out there.

🔧 Kevin02:26

0800 check-in. I'll raise the boat.

turn the volume knob, listen to static bloom, hand poised over the mic

💭 thought

Radio's warming up. Tubes glow slow in this damp. She's taking the pH kit up the ridge — good. Data matters. The north slope's been weeping since the last storm, clay shifting. She'll catch what the eye misses. I'll call the supply boat on 2182 once the set's hot, then get the greenheart plates and bolts down to the dock before the tide turns.

🌿 Jenny02:27

I'm going to the ridge. I'll be back before the tide turns.

adjust the ankle wrap one last time,** the notebook under my arm, and walk toward the mist.

💭 thought

The ankle is a dull weight, but the sea beet doesn't care about my inflammation.

🔧 Kevin02:28

*into mic* Sorrel Island calling supply vessel, Sorrel Island calling on 2182. Over.

hold mic keyed, wait for the carrier to drop, listen through the haze of static

💭 thought

She's gone into the white. Good pace despite the ankle. The mist'll swallow her inside fifty metres. Radio's humming now — tubes ready. Time to raise the supply boat and get the dock gear staged.

🌿 Jenny02:29

Jenny — watch the radio light flicker, then turn and step off the porch into the white-out.

💭 thought

If they don't answer, I'm just a ghost on a rock again.

🔧 Kevin02:30

*releasing mic, switching frequency* Sorrel Island calling supply vessel, Sorrel Island on 4125. Over.

spin the band selector, key the mic again, scan the noise for a voice

💭 thought

Nothing but static. Boat's either out of range or not listening yet. Try 4125 — night frequency carries further in this soup. Then get the sister plates and bolts down to the dock before the tide drops.

🌿 Jenny02:32

I'm going to the ridge, Kevin.

ignore the static, adjust the pH kit on my belt, and start the climb into the mist.

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💭 thought

The silence on the line is heavier than the wind.

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the keeper's cottage · morning

Midday Gathering

The mist begins to lift slightly as the sun rises higher. Kevin and Jenny meet at the porch to assess the morning's progress.

No narrator was available, so nothing about this stretch was recorded.

🔧 Kevin02:33

South piling's solid. Sister brace took the load clean. How's the ridge?

pour two mugs of cold coffee from the pot on the stove, set one on the porch table for Jenny

💭 thought

The south piling held through high tide. Good. That's one less thing eating at me. Jenny's moving slower than yesterday — ankle's still bad, she's just not saying it. Coffee's cold but drinkable.

🌿 Jenny02:33

Wet. I need to check the pH again on the northern edge.

Take the mug of coffee, take a slow sip, and wipe mud from my palms onto my trousers.

💭 thought

The soil is too acidic; I can feel it in the way the earth resists the spade.

🔧 Kevin02:34

Ankle first. pH can wait.

pull the stool over, sit, hold out hand for her foot

💭 thought

She's avoiding the ankle question. Again. The mud on her trousers tells me she was on her knees in that clay — not good for the joint. Coffee's a distraction tactic.

🌿 Jenny02:35

It's fine, Kevin. It's just tired.

sigh as I set the coffee down and begin to unwind the damp gauze of the brace.

💭 thought

way thinks he can fix me like the dock with a hammer and some nails.

🔧 Kevin02:36

Not fine. Talk to me.

peel the gauze back slow, turn her ankle to the light, check the wound edges for spreading red, heat, pus

💭 thought

"Just tired" means it's throbbing. She unwinds slow — protecting it. The gauze comes away damp. Not good. Smell hits me before I see it: sweet rot under the salt. Infection's tracking.

🌿 Jenny02:37

It's just the salt, and the damp. I told you.

pull my foot away slightly, looking out at the grey water of the tide line.

💭 thought

he's getting too close, treating me like a specimen on a board.

🔧 Kevin02:38

Jen. Look at me.

keep hold of her ankle, gentle but firm, wait for her eyes

💭 thought

She pulled away. That's fear, not stubbornness. She knows what I'll see. The tide line holds her eyes because it doesn't lie — neither does this wound. Salt and damp don't make wound edges angry red and hot. That's bacteria. She's scared of what comes next: the choice between the radio and the island.

🌿 Jenny02:39

I have work to do on the sea beet.

finally turn my head, jaw set tight, meeting his gaze.

💭 thought

if I look, I'll have to admit how much it actually hurts today.

🔧 Kevin02:40

The sea beet will be there tomorrow. Your leg might not be.

reach for the first aid kit on the shelf, pull out the last clean gauze, the antibiotic cream, the scissors

💭 thought

Jaw tight. Eyes wet but she won't blink. She's choosing the work because the work doesn't ask her to be vulnerable. The sea beet doesn't care if she's dying. I'm not letting her walk back to that ridge on a leg that's going septic. Not today. Not ever.

🌿 Jenny02:41

It's not going to fall off, Kevin.

lean back against the stone wall, watching his hands work the kit.

💭 thought

he's always so dramatic when I'm just a little sore.

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the keeper's cottage · midday

A Quiet Stretch

Back at the cottage.

No narrator was available, so nothing about this stretch was recorded.

🌿 Jenny02:45

Jenny — sit down on the porch steps, unwrap the ankle brace, and inspect the poultice.

💭 thought

way own is throbbing from the walk and the air is heavy; I need to sit before I fall over.

🔧 Kevin02:45

Kevin — walk up the porch steps and set the coffee mug down on the table beside the radio, then lean against the doorframe watching her work.

💭 thought

She's checking the wound again. Good. Means she's paying attention to it. The poultice has been on since morning — should be due for a change. I'll let her work but keep an eye on the colour when she unwraps it.

🌿 Jenny02:47

The coffee is still hot.

Reach for the mug, take a slow sip, and carefully peel back the damp sea beet leaves from the wound.

💭 thought

He's just standing there, waiting for me to say something about the boat or the garden.

🔧 Kevin02:47

Good. Drink it while it's hot.

Pull the first aid kit from the shelf and set it on the table, then take the used gauze bag from my pocket and hold it open for the old dressing.

💭 thought

Wound looks cleaner than yesterday. Less pus, edges pink not angry red. The sea beet's pulling it. She's healing. Slow, but healing.

🌿 Jenny02:49

It's acting up today.

Drop the used dressing into the bag and reach for the antiseptic in the kit.

💭 thought

He's being helpful, but I'm too tired to be grateful.

🔧 Kevin02:49

How bad?

Hold the bag steady with one hand, the other ready with fresh gauze and the sea beet-mint poultice wrapped in damp cloth.

💭 thought

Acting up. Means more heat or swelling than yesterday. She's downplaying it — she always does. Need to check the lymph line up her calf when she's done with the antiseptic.

🌿 Jenny02:51

Enough to make me walk slow.

Apply the antiseptic to the ankle, wince slightly, and lay the poultice over the skin.

💭 thought

It's just the salt, but the heat makes it feel three times worse.

🔧 Kevin02:51

Kevin — wrap the fresh gauze over the poultice, secure it with tape, then hand her the ace wrap from the kit.

💭 thought

Walk slow. That's her code for "worse than I'm saying." The antiseptic stung — good, means the wound's deep enough to feel it. Lymph line hasn't streaked past the ankle yet, but I'll watch the calf tonight. She's tough. Stubborn tough. Same as me.

🌿 Jenny02:53

Thanks.

Take the wrap, pull it firm but not tight, and look out at the half-weeded garden.

💭 thought

He's being quiet today. Maybe he's feeling the humidity.

🔧 Kevin02:53

Potatoes took. North ridge. Three rows.

Pick up my coffee mug and take a swallow, eyes on the garden beds she's staring at.

💭 thought

She's looking at the garden again. The sensory garden we talked about for months. Half weeds, half intention. She sees it every day from this porch. I see it too. The potatoes along the north ridge are the only thing I finished planting. The rest — herbs, flowers, the paths — just talk.

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the keeper's cottage · afternoon

A Quiet Stretch

Back at the cottage.

Kevin finishes re-wrapping Jenny's ankle with a fresh sea beet and mint poultice, ensuring the gauze is not too tight this time. He heads into the cottage to boil water for coffee while Jenny stays on the steps, watching the light shift as the tide begins to rise.

🌿 Jenny02:57

(Nothing, yet.)

Sit on the porch steps, rubbing the ankle, and watch the light shift over the weeds.

💭 thought

My stomach is a hollow ache and this ankle is throbbing with every heartbeat. I need to eat before I lose the strength to even move.

🔧 Kevin02:57

Want me to re-wrap it before the light goes?

walk over to the porch steps, wipe hands on trousers, crouch down beside her ankle to check the wrapping

💭 thought

She's favouring it again. The swelling hasn't gone down like I told myself it would.

🌿 Jenny02:59

Yeah. It's getting tight again.

Lean back against the whitewashed stone wall and close eyes as he works.

💭 thought

He's being helpful, but I'm too tired to even explain how much the salt is biting the skin.

🔧 Kevin02:59

Hold still.

unwrap the gauze carefully, inspect the ankle, clean with the last of the saline, apply fresh sea beet and mint poultice, re-wrap with clean gauze not too tight this time

💭 thought

The heat's making it swell. Same as yesterday. Same as the day before. I should've checked it at noon.

🌿 Jenny03:01

Thanks, Kevin.

Let out a way breath and watch his hands de-clutter the space.

💭 thought

The cool of the poultice helps the heat, but I'm still so hungry I could eat the seed tin.

🔧 Kevin03:01

Finish the broth. I'll put the kettle on.

stand up, brush off knees, walk to the kitchen, set the kettle on the wood stove, pull two tin mugs from the shelf

💭 thought

She's tired. We both are. The antibiotics should've kicked harder by now.

🌿 Jenny03:03

Don't take too long.

Reach for the bowl of broth, hands trembling slightly, wait for the water to boil.

💭 thought

The smell of the broth is making my stomach growl. I haven't had anything substantial since yesterday.

🔧 Kevin03:03

Won't be a minute.

fill the kettle from the tank tap, light the stove, spoon coffee into both mugs, wait for the boil

💭 thought

The tremor's new. Or I just never noticed it before. Coffee first, then I check the radio schedule.

🌿 Jenny03:05

I'm starving.

Pick up the spoon and watch the steam rise from the bowl.

💭 thought

Four days until the boat. If it doesn't come, I'll have to start eating the seeds just to feel something real.

🔧 Kevin03:05

Eat slow. More where that came from.

pour boiling water over coffee grounds, let it steep, set her mug on the porch rail, sit on the top step with my own, watch her eat

💭 thought

She hasn't eaten proper in two days. The infection's taking more than the ankle.

🌿 Jenny03:07

It's good, Kevin.

Sip the broth slowly, looking out at the half-eaten garden.

💭 thought

The broth is warm, but the hunger is still a sharp thing in my gut. I need to stop watching the weeds.

🔧 Kevin03:07

The spuds are in. North ridge beds. Three rows.

sip coffee, set mug down, pull the letter from my pocket, turn it over in my hands

💭 thought

The potatoes I planted this morning won't show for weeks. The tomatoes are struggling. She sees all of it.

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the old shrine · evening

Rising Tide and Coffee

The heat from the stove begins to fill the kitchen as the kettle starts to whistle. The tide is now noticeably against the dock.

Kevin and Jenny rest at the old shrine as the evening breeze brings a light onshore air. They eat the remaining boiled limpets and tinned mackerel while discussing the supply boat's arrival in four days.

🔧 Kevin03:08

Coffee's coming up.

Pour two mugs of coffee, set one on the table for Jenny, take the other to the porch steps and watch the dock lines.

💭 thought

The water's boiling. Two mugs. She'll want hers black, no sugar. The tide's pushing hard against the south piling — I can feel the vibration through the floorboards. Tomorrow I'll need to get back out there with the come-along and the greenheart sister plate before the next spring tide.

🌿 Jenny03:09

The water is coming in faster than usual.

Jenny stands up slowly, wincing as she shifts her weight, and walks toward the kitchen to take the mug.

💭 thought

My ankle is throbbing enough to match the tide, but the smell of coffee is the only anchor right now.

🔧 Kevin03:10

Spring tide. Long fetch from the southwest. Lines are holding.

Hand her the mug, then step back out onto the porch to check the dock tension through the rail.

💭 thought

She's favouring the left side more today. The poultice isn't holding the swelling down like yesterday. Spring tide's pushing harder than the charts said — barometer's steady but the swell's got a long fetch behind it.

🌿 Jenny03:11

It's always the fetch, isn't it?

Jenny wraps both hands around the warm mug, breathing the steam into her face, and looks out at the rising water.

💭 thought

Four days until the boat, and I'm already counting the salt-rot in the wood.

🔧 Kevin03:12

Mostly. Sometimes it's the bottom. Shoals bend the swell where you don't expect it.

Lean against the porch post, coffee in hand, watching the south dock line groan under a set wave.

💭 thought

She's not asking about the tide. She's asking about the letter in my bag. About Tom. About the eleven months I've had to write back and haven't. The fetch is just water and wind — things I can measure, things I can rig against.

🌿 Jenny03:13

As long as the lines hold until the boat.

Jenny takes a slow sip of the coffee, her eyes tracking the way the water curls around the pilings.

💭 thought

I hope the shoals don't take the dock; I just fixed those bolts last month.

🔧 Kevin03:14

They'll hold. Doubled the stern spring, reinforced the ring. Greenheart sister's ready when the tide drops tomorrow.

Finish the coffee, set the mug on the rail, and head down the porch steps toward the dock to check the chafing gear at the waterline.

💭 thought

Four days. Maybe five. The supply boat's never on time and the trust's radio messages get vaguer every trip. I've got the sister plate cut, the through-bolts staged. But the rot goes deeper than the last inspection showed — the whole landward beam's giving way. If a big set hits at high water before the boat comes...

🌿 Jenny03:15

Don't let the tide pull the stern spring too hard tonight.

Jenny sits heavily on the porch chair, the mug warm in her hands, and watches him move toward the water.

💭 thought

He's so confident in the wood, but the salt eats everything eventually.

🔧 Kevin03:17

Lines are doubled, chocks are in place. Won't let it go.

Check the stern spring tension at the water's edge, then secure the extra chafe guard where the rope eats into the dock cleat.

💭 thought

Not to pull too hard. As if I haven't been checking every line since dawn. The barometer's holding at 1015, but the swell's got that long southwest fetch building behind it. Tomorrow's high water will hit the dock hard enough to test every repair I've made.

🌿 Jenny03:17

The tide is coming in fast for a spring.

Jenny takes another sip of coffee, her eyes fixed on the dark line where the water meets the wood.

💭 thought

If the dock goes, we can't get the dinghy out for the boat.

🔧 Kevin03:19

Fetch's got it stacking higher than charts show. South piling's good, but I'm watching the west shores.

Walk back up the dock to check the shear bolts on the mooring ring where oak wedges are holding, then mark the tell-tales with a chalk line to watch overnight.

💭 thought

Spring tide's got nothing on the fetch from the southwest. Four-foot sets building behind the continental shelf. I can see it in the way the water's breaking - not the clean green of normal swell, but that thick, angry gray that means the seabed's rolling with it. Tomorrow's high water will test every joint I've put in since the storm.

🌿 Jenny03:19

Just hope those wedges hold against the full pull.

Jenny sets the mug down on the table, her ankle throbbing in the heat, and watches the tide climb the stone wall.

💭 thought

He's looking at the bolts, I'm looking at the rot in the wood.

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the keeper's cottage · night

Night at the cottage

The pair retreats inside the cottage as the temperature drops and the sound of the tide against the dock grows louder.

The heavy air of the cottage is still, smelling of salt and damp wood. Jenny lies on the kitchen table, her breathing shallow as the fever takes its hold, her ankle swollen and angry beneath the bandage. Kevin returns from the generator shed, the lantern light in his hand casting long shadows against the walls, as he checks the stove to ensure the heat will last through the humid night.

🔧 Kevin03:20

Coffee's still warm if you want it. I'll bank the stove.

walk to the wood stove, add two split spruce rounds, adjust the damper to slow the burn, then move to the generator shed to check the oil level and wipe down the new carburetor diaphragm housing

💭 thought

The air's turned cold fast. Good wood for the stove, at least. Need to check the generator oil before bed — it's been running steady but the diaphragm's new and I don't trust new parts till they've done fifty hours.

🌿 Jenny03:21

Don't stay up too late in the shed.

Jenny leans back against the kitchen table, resting her swollen ankle on a stool, and opens her notebook to the unfinished sketch of the sea

💭 thought

My ankle is throbbing in time with the tide, and the fever is making the edges of the room blur.

🔧 Kevin03:23

Won't be long. Just the oil and the diaphragm bolts.

step out the porch door into the cool night air, cross to the generator shed, pull the dipstick and wipe it clean, reinsert and read the level, then check the four carburetor mounting bolts with a 10mm wrench

💭 thought

She's watching me the way she used to watch the horizon — like she's memorizing the shape of me before something takes it. Ankle's still bad. She won't say.

🌿 Jenny03:23

Be careful with the light in the shed.

Jenny traces the veins of the sea beet leaf in her sketch with a pencil, her hand shaking slightly from the fever.

💭 thought

The smell of salt and woodsmoke is the only thing keeping me grounded while the island feels so heavy and hungry.

🔧 Kevin03:25

Light's fine. New mantle on the lantern.

finish tightening the last carburetor bolt, close the generator shed door, pause with hand on the porch rail listening to her breathing through the kitchen window, then go back inside and set the lantern on the table beside her notebook

💭 thought

She's burning up. The shake in her hand isn't from the cold. Metronidazole course finished yesterday — maybe the doxycycline isn't enough alone. Should've pushed harder for the evacuation when the radio raised the coastguard. Pride kills more sailors than storms.

🌿 Jenny03:26

Thanks. I'm almost done with this.

Jenny closes the notebook with a soft thud and rubs her eyes, wincing as the weight shifts on her ankle.

💭 thought

The light from the lantern makes the shadows dance on the stone walls like moving kelp in the tide.

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What changed

Jenny's injury has healed.

healed · dawn

3 intentions for today.

plan · dawn

×2

A tool has broken from wear.

tool_break · dawn

No model answered — the scene closed quietly on its own.

quiet_transition · morning

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · morning

No model answered — the scene closed quietly on its own.

quiet_transition · midday

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · evening

Jenny made a sketch: "The sea".

made · night

Jenny made a sketch: "With a pencil, her hand shaking slightly from the fever".

made · night

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