Day 877

Storm Rising Over Sorrel

Afternoon wind roared, rattling shutters. They gathered by the stove as light failed early. Kevin cleaned Jenny's infected ankle with hot water and laid on a fresh sea beet poultice. "It's pulsing," she said. "I can feel my heart beating in it." "Almost done," he replied. "Fresh poultice going on now." The barometer dropped. A wooden crate rolled in the surf below the south cliffs.

A heavy spruce branch lay across the garden path, snapped down in the night wind. Jenny sat on the cottage steps, ankle wrapped, watching Kevin inspect the fallen timber and tap the barometer glass — 993 hPa and falling. The air hung thick and humid under flat grey light, tide high against the dock pilings.

Kevin re-tensioned tarp stakes along the garden perimeter where ground had softened. Jenny worked the southern edge, securing grommets and down-downs until her hand trowel snapped in the dry soil. Rain thickened from the west by midday. Kevin retreated to the cottage to monitor radio and water levels; Jenny stayed under the eaves, managing her ankle and seed stores.

Evening found them on the ridge path with tin mugs of limpet broth and medevac forms in a dry bag. Barometer 995 hPa steady. Jenny stayed at the stone shrine — carved initials 'LB,' a softwood scrap reading 'I'm still here' — sketching bruised purple clouds gathering over the south ridge. Kevin descended toward the south beach as tide receded, the crate still out of reach behind building swell. "The surge comes faster than the forecast says," she called after him. "Watch the wind." "Wind's west. Barometer steady. I'll time it to the slack," he answered, not turning. "Just... don't stay out if the wind shifts back." "I'll be back before dark."

Night thickened. Jenny watched the horizon from the shrine, monitoring infection spreading in the damp air. Kevin waited on the beach for slack water, the crate rolling in the backwash.

Scenes

the keeper's cottage · dawn

Humidity and Fallen Timber

A heavy spruce branch has fallen across the path to the garden during the night wind. Jenny sits on the steps with her wrapped ankle while Kevin inspects the fallen tree and checks the dropping barometer.

The morning light is flat and heavy under a thick overcast sky. The air is stagnant and humid, clinging to the skin as the dry season heat builds. The tide is high, water lapping steadily against the dock pilings, while the barometer continues its slow descent to 993 hPa, signaling a shift in the atmosphere.

🌿 Jenny10:59

It's going to break soon. Don't waste your energy fighting that branch until you've checked the dinghy lines again.

Lean back against the porch railing and tighten the gauze wrap on my ankle.

💭 thought

993 and falling. This isn't just a squall; the island is bracing for something. I can't even stand up to help him, and the sight of that spruce blocking the path feels like a personal insult.

🔧 Kevin10:59

Fair point. Back in a minute.

walk down to the dock to check the dinghy lines and storm anchor warp

💭 thought

She's right about the barometer — 993 and falling fast means the real wind hasn't hit yet. The branch can wait. The dinghy's the only way off this rock if things go wrong.

🌿 Jenny11:00

Jenny — use my arms to hoist myself up from the steps and limp slowly toward the kitchen to start the limpets.

💭 thought

He's always moving. I can feel the hunger clawing at my stomach, but the thought of standing over the stove makes my ankle scream. I need to see those seed trays before the light fails.

🔧 Kevin11:00

(nothing — already walking)

reach the dock, crouch to inspect the bow line chafe guard at the chock, then trace the stern spring and second spring to the mooring ring and north piling, checking each knot and splice under tension

💭 thought

Good. She's moving — means the ankle's holding enough to work. Limpets for breakfast, water on the stove. Normal morning. If I can keep the dinghy tied down, today's just work.

🌿 Jenny11:02

Jenny — set the pot of water on the wood stove and carefully drop the handful of limpets inside.

💭 thought

I hope he's actually checking the tension and not just touching the ropes. If that north piling shifts in this pressure, we lose the boat.

🔧 Kevin11:02

(to self, quiet) Holding.

walk back up the path to the cottage, pull the bow saw from the shed, and start cutting the fallen spruce branch into movable sections

💭 thought

Bow line's clean at the chock — chafe guard holding. Stern spring tight, no slack. Second spring doubled around the north piling, knot seated. Dinghy rides level, not jerking. Good. Now the branch.

🌿 Jenny11:05

Jenny — lean against the kitchen counter and wait for the water to boil while watching the barometer needle.

💭 thought

At least he's working. My ankle is throbbing worse with the dampness. I need to check those trays before the damping-off takes them all.

🔧 Kevin11:05

Barometer still dropping?

finish the last cut through the main branch, kick the rounds aside to clear the path, and stack the three sections near the garden wall

💭 thought

Saw bites wet spruce slow. Wood's heavy with rain. Three cuts to clear the path — trunk section, two limb sections. Stack the rounds by the garden wall for splitting later. Firewood's firewood.

🌿 Jenny11:07

Still dropping. It's going to be a long night if it keeps.

way the limpets out of the water with a slotted spoon and set them on the cutting board.

💭 thought

It hasn't stopped. The air feels heavy, like a wet wool blanket pressing against the skin.

🔧 Kevin11:07

Aye. Limpets ready?

wipe sawdust off hands, walk up the porch steps into the kitchen, and take a tin mug from the shelf

💭 thought

She's not wrong. 993 and falling steady. Night'll bring the shift — wind'll back west and pile the tide on top. Garden tarp, shade cloth anchors, dock lines all need a second look before dark. And the radio check with Tom's frequency if the static clears.

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the keeper's cottage · morning

The Approaching Storm

The air grows thick, and the first gust of wind picks up from the north.

Kevin worked the garden perimeter to secure the tarp against the coming front, re-tensioning several loose stakes where the ground was soft. Jenny checked the southern edge of the garden for lift, securing the grommets and down-downs but her hand trowel snapped under the pressure of the dry soil.

🌿 Jenny11:09

typical.

Pick up the limpets from the counter and move toward the wood stove.

💭 thought

The pressure is dropping too fast; that storm is coming before I even have breakfast.

🔧 Kevin11:09

Wind's turning.

Walk to the porch door and scan the garden tarp corners, checking for lift or slack.

💭 thought

She's right. Typical. The barometer's been whispering this all morning and now the wind's catching up. She's moving the limpets to the stove — practical, quiet, doing what needs doing. I should check the garden tarp anchors before the gusts settle in proper.

🌿 Jenny11:11

check the south stakes again.

Drop the limpets into the cast iron skillet and start the water boiling.

💭 thought

If that tarp catches, the whole heirloom crop is buried in the mud.

🔧 Kevin11:11

On it.

Cross the porch, step down into the garden, and check the south tarp stakes — test each one for movement, drive any loose ones deeper, re-tension the lines.

💭 thought

South stakes took the worst of the last blow. She knows the ground as well as I do. The limpets hit the iron with a sound that means breakfast is happening whether the weather holds or not.

🌿 Jenny11:13

Watch the edge near the wall.

Scrape the limpets into the pan and watch the water bubble.

💭 thought

He's better at the physical than I am, but the humidity is still winning the battle.

🔧 Kevin11:13

Got it.

Move to the garden wall edge, kneel, and check the tarp grommets and tie-downs along the stone — pull each line tight, drive stakes deeper where the ground's soft, lay a timber strip over the leading edge and weigh it with stones.

💭 thought

The wall edge — where the tarp meets the stone, the wind gets under it. She's seen it lift there before. I'll add a timber batten if the stakes won't hold.

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the keeper's cottage · midday

Midday on Day 877

Kevin returns to the cottage to monitor the radio, while Jenny stays in the garden assessing the broken equipment.

The rain intensifies from the west, turning the air heavy and making outdoor physical labor impossible. Kevin stays indoors to monitor the water levels and check the radio, while Jenny attempts to manage her ankle and seeds under the shelter of the cottage.

🌿 Jenny11:15

Jenny — pick up the broken handle of the trowel and drop it into my pocket.

💭 thought

I could forge a new blade from a piece of scrap metal, but the humidity is too high for the forge today.

🔧 Kevin11:16

Kevin — adjust the squelch on the shortwave, lean back in the chair and wait

💭 thought

The static's thick today — ionosphere's still churning from the front. Supply boat's seven days out if the captain kept his word. Might hear something on 2182 if I sit here long enough.

🌿 Jenny11:19

Jenny — wipe the mud off my hands onto my trousers and head toward the cottage.

💭 thought

The rain is turning serious; I need to get the seed trays inside before the wind catches them.

🔧 Kevin11:20

Kevin — stand, stretch the stiffness from my shoulders, and walk to the porch to check the barometer proper

💭 thought

Nothing but atmospheric noise. Should've expected it — boat's still days out and the skipper only keys up when he's in range or in trouble. Time to move.

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the keeper's cottage · afternoon

The Storm Breaks In

The wind has picked up to a roar, rattling the shutters of the cottage. You and Jenny gather by the stove as the light fades early today.

Kevin and Jenny treated Jenny's infected ankle with a fresh sea beet poultice as the barometer dropped and wind hammered the cottage. The storm building off the Aleutians drew closer, and a wooden crate rolled in the surf below the cliffs.

🔧 Kevin11:22

Barometer's at 990. Dropped five millibars in two hours. Going to be a long night.

check the stove damper and add two more splits of spruce kindling

💭 thought

Barometer's dropping faster now. Wind's got teeth in it. The garden tarp held through the last squall but this feels different — heavier. Should've checked the deadman anchors yesterday instead of the radio. Jenny's quiet. She's been quiet for days.

🌿 Jenny11:23

It's the humidity. Everything's too heavy. Even the air feels like it's trying to push the walls in.

Lean back against the table, gingerly shifting the weight off the infected ankle and glancing toward the seed trays.

💭 thought

990. It's not just a long night; it's a siege. I can feel the pressure change in my sinuses and the throb in my ankle.

🔧 Kevin11:24

Humidity's not the wind. Wind's what'll test the tarp and the shutters. Ankle still hot?

pull the kettle forward and fill it from the tank tap, setting it on the stove top

💭 thought

She's right about the humidity. It's in everything — wood, rope, tools, lungs. The seed trays won't dry, the epoxy won't cure, the radio contacts won't hold. But she's talking about the air to avoid talking about the ankle, or the letter, or Tom, or the fact that we're both still here when we said we'd leave.

🌿 Jenny11:24

It's pulsing. I can feel my heart beating in it.

Reach down to touch the edge of the bandage, then pull my hand back quickly as a gust slams against the south porch.

💭 thought

He's always so technical. Hot? It feels like there's a coal pressed into the joint.

🔧 Kevin11:26

Hand me the gauze and the sea beet poultice. We'll change it now before the light goes completely.

reach for the medical kit on the high shelf and pull down the gauze roll and the cloth-wrapped poultice from the cool corner by the water basin

💭 thought

Pulsing means pressure building. Could be the antibiotics working, could be the infection spreading deeper. She's down to two doses of doxycycline and four metronidazole. No evac boat coming in this weather. The spring tide's pushing hard against the dock pilings — I can feel the vibration through the floorboards.

🌿 Jenny11:27

Here. Be careful, it's still major.

Hand the gauze and the damp poultice over, my fingers trembling slightly as the wind howls through the gaps in the window frames.

💭 thought

If I don't change it now, the infection will be worse by morning. The damp is making the skin so soft and angry.

🔧 Kevin11:28

Hold the mug. Hot water first — clean the wound, then fresh poultice.

pour steaming water from the kettle into the tin mug and set it on the table beside her leg, then unwrap the old gauze with the scalpel blade, letting the soaked strips fall into the burn bowl

💭 thought

Her fingers trembling — cold, or pain, or the storm pressing against something loose in both of us. The poultice has gone lukewarm. Need fresh sea beet, fresh mint, hot water. But the tide pools are too far in this wind and the garden's a mess of flying debris. Work with what's here.

🌿 Jenny11:29

It's stinging. Just quick.

Wrap my hands around the warm mug to steady myself, watching him work away the grit from the swollen skin.

💭 thought

The steam is hitting my face, but the heat in my ankle is worse. He's moving too fast.

🔧 Kevin11:30

Almost done. Fresh poultice going on now.

spread the sea beet-mint-honey mixture thick over the cleaned wound, wrap it smooth with fresh gauze, and tie off the ends with sail twine — not too tight, just enough to hold

💭 thought

The wound looks angry — red tracking up the calf, yellow at the edges. Antibiotics should've knocked this back by now. Either the dose isn't enough, or the bacteria's resistant, or the circulation's too poor in this humidity to carry the drug down to the bone. She's not eating enough. Not sleeping. The storm's not helping.

🌿 Jenny11:31

Thanks. It feels... tight.

Lean back against the stone wall, stretching the heavy leg out on the stool, watching the barometer drop on the glass.

💭 thought

The relief is momentary, but the throb is still there, deep in the bone. The air is like wet wool.

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the old shrine · evening

Evening at the ridge shrine

Kevin and Jenny walk the ridge path together as daylight thins, the wind steady from the west. The shrine's ring of weathered stones comes into view — the carved initials 'LB' and the softwood scrap inscribed 'I'm still here' beside the 'E' stone. A wooden crate rolls in the surf far below on the south beach. The barometer reads 995 hPa steady. They carry tin mugs of limpet broth and the medevac forms in the dry bag.

Kevin descends the ridge path toward the south beach, the air thickening with the humidity of an approaching storm. Jenny stays at the shrine, nursing her swollen ankle and sketching the bruised purple and grey clouds as they gather over the south ridge in her notebook. The tide remains high, keeping the supply crate out of reach behind a swell that begins to batter the far shore.

🔧 Kevin11:33

Crate on the south beach. Not ours.

walk to the shrine with Jenny, mug in hand

💭 thought

The wind carries salt and the crate's timing is wrong — supply boat's three days out. That crate's been in the water a long time.

🌿 Jenny11:33

It's too high for me to go down there with this leg.

Lean against a weathered stone, shifting weight off the throbbing ankle, and watch the grey water batter the wood.

💭 thought

Another piece of junk from the mainland, or maybe the island is finally spitting out what it took.

🔧 Kevin11:34

I'll go. Tomorrow at low tide. You stay here.

set mug down on a flat stone, pull the dry bag strap higher on my shoulder

💭 thought

She's right about the leg. The path down's treacherous even dry. But that crate's got something in it — wood that heavy doesn't float like that empty.

🌿 Jenny11:35

The surge comes faster than the forecast says, Kevin. Watch the wind.

Trace the worn 'LB' carving on the stone with a thumb, feeling the grit of the salt-crust.

💭 thought

He thinks it's that simple, but the tide doesn't care about his schedule.

🔧 Kevin11:36

Wind's west. Barometer steady. I'll time it to the slack.

rest a hand on her shoulder, brief, then turn toward the ridge path back to the cottage

💭 thought

She's quoting my own rule back at me. The barometer's steady at 995 but that wind's got teeth.

🌿 Jenny11:37

Just... don't stay out if the wind shifts back.

Take a slow sip of the bitter broth, watching his silhouette disappear into the thickening mist.

💭 thought

He's so certain while the pressure is still dropping.

🔧 Kevin11:39

I'll be back before dark.

start down the ridge path toward the south beach, medevac forms tucked safely in the dry bag

💭 thought

She's scared I'll become another name carved into these stones. That I'll disappear like the previous keeper.

🌿 Jenny11:39

The air is getting too heavy, Kevin.

Sit on the weathered stone, nursing the swollen ankle, and pull the notebook from my pocket.

💭 thought

The sky is turning the color of a bad bruise.

🔧 Kevin11:40

(from the path, not turning) Write it down. Gets it out of your head.

keep descending the ridge path toward the south beach, boots finding purchase on the wet stone

💭 thought

She's not just talking about the weather. The pressure's dropping in her head too — the infection, the fever, the waiting. She needs something to hold onto.

🌿 Jenny11:41

I'm already doing it.

Open the notebook to a clean page and sketch the way the clouds are bruising over the ridge.

💭 thought

He thinks my head is the problem, but it's the silence.

🔧 Kevin11:42

(nothing — too far now for conversation)

reach the bottom of the ridge path, pause at the tide line to assess the crate's position relative to the swell

💭 thought

Good. She's recording. That means she's still thinking ahead.

🌿 Jenny11:42

Jenny — make sketch: Cloud cover over south ridge - bruised purples and flat greys, thickening towards the west.

💭 thought

He's just a speck now. I can feel the pressure shift in my sinuses; it's not steady, it's waiting.

🔧 Kevin11:44

(to myself, quiet) Three days to the supply boat. This crate's been waiting longer.

walk the tide line toward the crate, testing the sand for sinkholes, eyes on the water's edge

💭 thought

The crate sits in the surge zone, half-submerged each wave. Barnacles on the strapping — been in the water weeks. Current's pushing it toward the rocks at the far end of the beach. If I want it, low tide tomorrow. If the wind holds west.

🌿 Jenny11:45

The barometer is dropping too fast for this.

trace the 'LB' carving on the stone with a thumb, feeling the grit of the lichen.

💭 thought

The salt air is in everything today. In the wood of the cottage, the joints of my ankle, the way Kevin looks at the horizon. He sees a problem to be solved with a wrench; I see the island breathing.

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the south beach · night

The Turning Tide

Kevin waits for the slack as the tide begins to recede, while Jenny watches the horizon from the shrine, fearing the wind shift.

The humidity is heavy as the sky thickens, signaling a shift in despite the dry season heat. Kevin retreats from the south beach as the tide recedes, while Jenny monitors the spreading infection on her ankle in the damp air.

🌿 Jenny11:46

Kevin! The sky is bruising! Get that crate and get back up here!

stand up slowly, leaning heavily on the driftwood cane, and squint toward the horizon.

💭 thought

The clouds are turning a heavy, metallic grey. If that wind shifts to the northeast, the south beach becomes a wind tunnel.

🔧 Kevin11:47

Tide's dropping. Another fifteen minutes and I'll have purchase on it. Stay off the ridge — wind'll take you.

crouch at the tide line, testing the wet sand with a boot heel to judge how fast the water's retreating, eyes on the crate rolling in the surf

💭 thought

She's right about the sky — that purple-grey band on the western horizon isn't normal cloud cover. Wind'll shift northeast within the hour, and the swell'll come up fast. Crate's heavy with salt water; if I don't get a line on it before the tide drops another foot, I'll be dragging dead weight through the breakers.

🌿 Jenny11:49

I'm not staying on the ridge! Just watch the water!

pull the notebook out and artwork it into my waistband, ignoring the throbbing heat in my ankle.

💭 thought

Fifteen minutes is too long when the pressure is dropping like that. The island doesn't care about his schedule.

🔧 Kevin11:49

Notebook's safer in the dry bag. Go on — I'll holler when the crate's clear.

step into the shallows as the water recedes, feeling for the crate's barnacled corner with a boot, timing the next wave to grab the rope handle molded into its side

💭 thought

Stubborn woman. Ankle's swollen to twice normal, she's running a fever, and she's trying to climb down a wet rock path in rising wind. If she falls, I'm not in position to catch her. But ordering her back won't work — she'll dig in harder. Best to move fast and get the crate secured so I can get back up there.

🌿 Jenny11:51

Don't go out there yet! The swell is building!

step back toward the dry sand, shifting my weight to my good leg and watching the white water over the rocks.

💭 thought

He's too close to the edge. If that surge catches him, he'll be under the water.

🔧 Kevin11:51

Backwash'll give me the weight. Two minutes.

brace feet in the wet sand, loop the new half-inch rope through the crate's molded handle, and haul hard on the outgoing surge, legs driving against the suck of the bottom

💭 thought

She's not wrong — the sets are stacking up three, four waves deep out past the shoals. But the crate's riding lower now, settling into the trough between the bar and the beach. If I wait for calm water, the tide'll turn and bury it again. One good pull on the backwash, then haul above the wrack line before the next set.

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What changed

Jenny's injury has healed.

healed · dawn

3 intentions for today.

plan · dawn

×2

A tree has come down across the path in the wind.

tree_down · dawn

A tool has broken from wear.

tool_break · morning

The rain tank gained about 25 litres.

weather · morning

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · morning

A tangle of driftwood and flotsam has washed up on the beach.

driftwood · midday

A wooden crate from some lost container ship rolls in the surf.

lost_crate · afternoon

wooden crate from lost container ship rolling in surf at south beach

discovery · afternoon

Jenny made a sketch: "Way the clouds are bruising over the ridge".

made · evening

Jenny made a sketch: "Cloud cover over south ridge - bruised purples and flat greys, thickening towards the west".

made · evening

The surge is coming faster than the forecast predicted.

discovery · evening

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · evening

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