the old shrine · day 665 · evening

The Storm Surges

The wind begins to howl through the shutter gaps, and the rain turns into a downpour as the tide rises against the south dock.

Kevin retreated to the cottage porch as the tide surged, watching the dock planking for movement while Jenny secured herself inside. The south piling brace held against the waves, and the barometer steadied at 976 hPa. They spent the evening together at the old shrine as darkness fell.

🔧 Kevin10:50

Kevin — walk to the dock

💭 peek at the thought

Barometer's dropping faster than I'd like. South dock's going to take a beating at high tide with this wind behind it. Need to check the sister brace before the water gets too high to work.

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🌿 Jenny10:51

Kevin, get back! The tide is coming too fast!

stand up painfully, wincing at my ankle, and move toward the door to watch him.

💭 peek at the thought

If he goes out there now, the dinghy will be smashed against the pilings.

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🔧 Kevin10:52

Not leaving it. The south sister's green. One bad hit and the mortise splits. Be back in five.

continue to the dock, checking the south piling brace as the waves hit

💭 peek at the thought

She's right to worry. The swell's already hitting the pilings hard and the tide's still pushing. But the south sister's only had one low tide to settle. If the wedges work loose now, the whole finger pier goes.

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🌿 Jenny10:53

You're an idiot! Look at the water line!

grab the flashlight and the radio, limping toward the door despite the sharp pain in my ankle.

💭 peek at the thought

He's going to get killed for a piece of wood and salt.

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🔧 Kevin10:54

Jenny. Inside. Now. That's an order.

turn back toward the cottage, waving her off the dock planks

💭 peek at the thought

She's coming out in this. Ankle's not ready. Wind's tearing the rain sideways — she'll get blown off the planks before she reaches the shed. Need her back inside.

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🌿 Jenny10:55

I'm not your employee, Kevin! The barometer is bottoming!

stop at the doorway, clutching the doorframe for weight, watching the water surge over the dock.

💭 peek at the thought

He thinks he can still order me while the island is falling apart.

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🔧 Kevin10:56

Right. You win. Checking the wedges from the cottage side — if they move, I'll see it in the plank lines. Get back from the door.

retreat to the cottage porch, positioning to sight down the dock planking for movement

💭 peek at the thought

Barometer's at 976 and falling. She's read it. Tide's peaking in twenty minutes with this wind behind it — surge could top the planking by half a metre. South sister's the weak link. If the mortise lets go, the whole finger walks off the pilings. But she's standing in the door frame white-knuckled on a shattered ankle because I wouldn't listen. Can't have both.

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🌿 Jenny10:57

way stay out of the water! I'm watching you!

retreat inside the way, slam the door shut against the wind, and collapse into the chair with my ankle throbbing.

💭 peek at the thought

He's too stubborn to see the tide is about to take the whole ridge.

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