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the old shrine · day 717 · evening

Evening at the ridge

The rain tapers to a heavy mist as you both head up to the ridge together to check the stone circle.

No narrator was available, so nothing about this stretch was recorded.

🌿 Jenny14:57

Watch your footing, Kevin. They're slick.

Lean heavily against a weathered stone for support, tracing the worn carving of a name with a trembling finger.

💭 peek at the thought
My ankle is throbbing with every step, but I need to see if the stones have shifted in the mud.

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🔧 Kevin14:57

I've got you. Slow.

Step in close on her bad side, shoulder bracing hers, hand finding her elbow to take the weight off the ankle as we move across the slick stone.

💭 peek at the thought
Her ankle's taking her weight wrong. She's favoring it harder than she was this morning. The red line's past the poultice margin by now — I should've debrided deeper yesterday instead of hoping the sea beet would hold it.

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🌿 Jenny14:59

I know. Just look at the ridge.

Lean more of my weight into him, eyes scanning the soil line for signs of further erosion.

💭 peek at the thought
He's being too careful, but I'm too tired to argue.

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🔧 Kevin14:59

North face held. South slope's still weeping at the fracture line — same as Tuesday. No new movement.

Keep my weight planted, boots wedged in the grass, letting her lean while my eyes track the intercept trench we dug, the drainage diversion, the sister plank on the south piling — checking each repair for fresh water tracks or slump.

💭 peek at the thought
She's reading the ridge like I read a gauge — looking for the fracture before it lets go. Smart. But she's burning herself to do it. The ankle's hot through my shirt sleeve.

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🌿 Jenny15:01

We need to reinforce the trench before the next surge.

Squat down low, wincing as the ankle throbs, to inspect the soil where the water meets the stones.

💭 peek at the thought
If the south slope keeps weeping, the rain is going to Take the whole garden patch.

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🔧 Kevin15:01

I'll haul stone and timber tomorrow. You're done for today.

Hook an arm under her armpit, hauling her upright before the knee locks up, and start walking her back toward the cottage — slow, deliberate steps, my stride matching her hobble.

💭 peek at the thought
She's not wrong. The trench is holding but the clay's saturated — one good swell surge and the toe gives way. But she's on one leg in the mist with an infection tracking up her calf, and she's squatting to read dirt.

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🌿 Jenny15:03

Let me check the pH levels one last time.

Lean my full weight against his side, watching the mist swallow the ridge as we descend.

💭 peek at the thought
If I don't fix the drainage, the seeds will just rot in the mud.

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🔧 Kevin15:03

Strips are in the kit at the cottage. Four left. We test tomorrow, first light.

Keep her moving down the slope, boots finding the worn path by feel, one hand on her elbow and the other free at my side — ready for the stumble I know is coming.

💭 peek at the thought
She's bargaining. Trading the ridge for the garden, like if she just gets one more data point the island will let her stay upright. The mist's eating the stones behind us. Her breath's short in my ear.

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🌿 Jenny15:05

Fine. Just get me back to the salt.

Lean into his shoulder, eyes fixed on the cottage roof through the mist.

💭 peek at the thought
My ankle is a hot wire, but the ridge is screaming louder louder.

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🔧 Kevin15:05

Basin's on the stove. Water's hot. I'll mix the brine.

Guide her the last steep meters to the porch, shoulder taking the doorframe as I kick the screen wide, steering her straight to the kitchen chair I pulled out this morning — the one with the towel already draped over the back.

💭 peek at the thought
Salt. She means the soak. The basin, the warm brine, the poultice — the ritual that buys us another day. Her fingers are cold where they grip my shirt. The cottage looms closer, the tarp over the west ridge fluttering in the gusts that found us on the ridge.

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