Day 415

Drainage and Doubt

The sky thickened over Sorrel Island as Kevin checked the rising barometer and Jenny de-salted her notebook on the porch. By morning, the tide covered the rock crevice and the first heavy drops fell. Jenny redressed her ankle and began her antibiotics while Kevin checked water levels. At midday, they met under the oppressive humidity to plan the afternoon’s work. Jenny rested, managing her ankle swelling, while Kevin watched the barometer. In the afternoon, rain drummed on the roof as they sheltered under the eaves, watching the garden vanish in grey mist. The barometer held at 989 hPa and the tide went fully out, exposing slick rocks and kelp. At low tide, they saw a new crevice in the rock shelf and a turtle hauled out on the beach to nest in the dark. Evening brought a fine drizzle and the tide’s slow return. Jenny noted the barometer dropping fast and insisted on moving the seed tin inside. Kevin battened the loose porch tarp while she prepared the radio log. They ate mackerel and limpets, though Jenny resisted at first. Later, they checked the mooring ring at the dock — the pin was fast, wedges holding. Jenny stood on the high rock, refusing help, asserting she could stand on her own. Kevin said he wasn’t managing her, just securing the dock against the tide. The rain tank gained about twenty-five litres. Jenny sketched the garden’s current state, noting where water pooled.

Scenes

the keeper's cottage · dawn

Morning coffee and tide watch

Kevin and Jenny sit on the porch while the clouds thickens over the flat sky. Jenny de-salts the notebook on the table while Kevin checks the rising barometer.

The sky thickens over Sorrel Island, the air heavy with the coming wet season rain. The tide is steadily rising, lapping at the lower garden beds and beginning to cover the crevice in the rock shelf.

🔧 Kevin23:33

Barometer's rising fast. Looks like we're past the worst of it.

Walk to the rain tank, tap it to check the level, then glance at the flooded garden beds.

💭 thought

The barometer's up to 991 and still climbing — good sign, but I won't trust it till it holds. Garden's underwater, heirloom seeds are at risk. Need to check the mooring ring at high water, then get on the radio for Tom. Jenny's quiet, de-salting that notebook like it's the only thing keeping her sane. I should say something about the evacuation line. Not now. Later.

🌿 Jenny23:35

It's a mess. The beds are holding too much water.

Reach for the ballpoint pen and carefully mark the current edge of the red lines on my ankle.

💭 thought

The garden is a swamp. If the soil stays this saturated, the root systems will suffocate before I even get the seeds in.

🔧 Kevin23:35

We'll trench the low side at low tide. Let it drain to the beach.

Lean against the porch rail, watching the garden. Reach for the tin mug of mackerel on the table, eat a bite.

💭 thought

She's right — the beds are drowning. Lime helped the pH but nothing helps standing water this deep. The red lines on her ankle haven't moved past the mark. That's something. She's marking them herself now, methodical. Good. Means she's watching.

🌿 Jenny23:37

We'll need a deeper channel, or the sea beet will just turn to mush.

Sketch the current state of the garden in the notebook, noting where the water is pooling.

💭 thought

Trenching would help, but I don't have the strength to dig in that clay today without collapsing.

🔧 Kevin23:38

Clay pan at the south end. We cut a V-trench, line it with the old roof tiles from the shed. Holds shape, drains fast.

Finish the mackerel, wipe fingers on a rag. Stand, stretch the shoulder that's been stiff since the dock repair. Walk to the garden's edge, boot sinking in mud, eye the ground for the natural fall.

💭 thought

Sea beet's tough but not that tough. A deeper channel means cutting through the clay pan at the garden's edge — hard work, but doable. She's sketching it out, thinking ahead. That's Jenny. Plans while the water rises.

🌿 Jenny23:39

Just don't over-drain it. Some of those species need the damp.

Set the notebook aside and slowly stand up, favoring the infected ankle.

💭 thought

He's already calculating the angles and the materials. He thinks everything is a problem to be solved with a trench and a tile.

🔧 Kevin23:39

I'll stop at the sand layer. Won't touch the upper beds.

Crouch at the garden's low corner, scrape mud aside with a boot heel to find the clay line. Glance back at her on the porch — watch how she weights the good leg.

💭 thought

She's right — the Carex and the saltmarsh grasses need wet feet. Over-drain and we lose the transect species. She's moving slow, testing the ankle. No limp she can't hide, but she's hiding it. The pen mark's still the boundary. Infection's held.

🌿 Jenny23:41

I'm fine, Kevin.

Carefully sit back down in the chair and reach for the first aid kit to prepare a fresh dressing.

💭 thought

He's watching me. He can see the limp even when I try to hide it.

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the keeper's cottage · morning

The Rising Tide

The tide is now covering the rock crevice. The clouds are low, and the first heavy drops of rain are falling.

The morning air is heavy with humidity as the pressure holds despite the overcast. Jenny redresses her ankle and begins the morning dose of antibiotics, while Kevin checks the water levels and prepares the gear for the day ahead.

🔧 Kevin23:41

Tide's covering the crevice. Going to check the shackle pin at the mooring ring while there's still slack. Back in twenty.

walk down to the dock

💭 thought

Tide's up. Crevice covered. Rain starting proper now. Window for the mooring ring shackle check is closing — need to get down there before the swell builds. Jenny's inside. She'll want to know the plan.

🌿 Jenny23:43

Be careful with the slip!

Walk slowly to the stove and pour a bowl of the limpet broth.

💭 thought

He's obsessing over the hardware again. Let him. I need to get something in my stomach before I pass out from the fever.

🔧 Kevin23:43

Aye. Testing each plank.

step onto the first dock plank, testing weight before committing

💭 thought

She's worried about the dock timbers. Right to be — greenheart sister plank's floating on a scoured void, held by driftwood braces. One bad step and I'm in the drink. Forty minutes in Biscay taught me that lesson.

🌿 Jenny23:45

Jenny — sit heavily in the kitchen chair and eat a spoonful of the broth, wincing as the movement pulls at the skin of my ankle.

💭 thought

He's so meticulous it's exhausting. I can't even stand up straight and he's treating the dock like a minefield.

🔧 Kevin23:45

(nothing — already on the dock, too far to speak without shouting)

continue down the dock toward the mooring ring, testing each plank, watching the greenheart sister plank where it floats on the void

💭 thought

Heard her wince from here. Ankle's still bad. Red lines haven't spread past the pen mark she drew at 0400, but the wince says it's not right. I'll check the shackle, get back, make her stay off it.

🌿 Jenny23:47

Jenny — set the bowl aside and carefully peel back the gauze from my ankle to check the red streaks.

💭 thought

I can't focus. The room is tilting. I need to see how far those lines have moved since yesterday.

🔧 Kevin23:47

Kevin — reach the mooring ring, grip the shackle pin, test if it turns clean by hand

💭 thought

Can't see her from here but I know what she's doing. Checking the lines she marked at 0400. If they've crossed, she knows the deal — we leave. No discussion. That was the line I drew in my head. Haven't said it out loud yet. Need to say it at breakfast. First, the shackle.

🌿 Jenny23:49

Jenny — use the ballpoint pen to mark the current leading edge of the infection on my skin.

💭 thought

God, it's higher. The red line has climbed another inch toward my knee. I'm running out of road.

🔧 Kevin23:49

Kevin — pull penetrating oil from pocket, spray the shackle pin threads, let it soak while watching the water rise

💭 thought

Pin's seized. Salt and time. Needs penetrating oil and heat, but the tide's coming up fast and the swell's building. Can feel the dock move under me. Greenheart sister plank flexing. Not safe to stay out here long. Mark the pin, come back at next high water with tools. Jenny's marking the infection line — good. She's tracking it honest.

🌿 Jenny23:51

Jenny — reach for the notebook and log the new measurement: 12cm from wound margin.

💭 thought

It's moving faster than the antibiotics can catch. I feel cold, despite the humidity.

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the keeper's cottage · midday

Midday Heat

The humidity is oppressive as the overcast sky thickens. You and Jenny meet for lunch to decide on the afternoon's tasks.

The humidity is heavy as the clouds close in over the island. Jenny rests on the porch, managing the swelling in her ankle with a fresh dressing, while Kevin checks the barometer and prepares for the potential shift in weather.

🔧 Kevin23:51

Mackerel and limpets. Eat while it's hot.

set two tin mugs on the porch table, pull out the wooden crate for a seat, and gesture to the food

💭 thought

She's moving slower today. Ankle's stiffening despite the antibiotics. Need to keep the afternoon light — tide's high enough for the shackle check, that's the only must-do. Rest can wait.

🌿 Jenny23:53

I'm not really hungry, Kev.

Lean back against the porch wall and gingerly lift the ankle to inspect the dressing.

💭 thought

I can't even look at the food. The smell of the fish is making my stomach turn, and the throb in my leg is timed to my heartbeat.

🔧 Kevin23:53

You need calories for the antibiotics to work. Eat half.

push the second mug closer to her, settle on the crate opposite, watch her ankle not her face

💭 thought

She's not eating. Not hungry, she says. Ankle's swelling against the wrap. Red lines haven't moved but the skin's shiny tight. She knows what that means. I know what that means. Neither of us says it.

🌿 Jenny23:55

(with a small, tired laugh) I'm not a Yanmar, Kevin.

Take a small, reluctant spoonful of the limpets and chew slowly.

💭 thought

He's treating me like a malfunctioning engine again. Just fuel the system so the parts don't fail.

🔧 Kevin23:55

No. You're not.

eat my own portion in silence, wipe the tin rim with a thumb, glance at the barometer on the shelf through the doorway — 989 and steady

💭 thought

Not a Yanmar. No. She's softer. Breaks easier. Takes longer to repair.

🌿 Jenny23:57

The barometer is lying. Look at those clouds.

Reach down and carefully peel back a corner of the gauze to check the infection line.

💭 thought

Steady is a lie. The sky looks like a bruise. I need to know if those red lines have moved while I was sitting here.

🔧 Kevin23:57

Pen mark still holding?

stand, walk to the doorway, pull the storm lantern down from its hook, check the wick

💭 thought

She's right. Barometer's steady but the sky's bruising purple-grey to the west. Front's building. Pressure holds before it drops. She's checking the line herself — doesn't trust my eyes, or doesn't want to ask.

🌿 Jenny23:59

It's... still there. I think.

Press a finger firmly against the skin just above the pen mark to see if the inflammation feels deeper.

💭 thought

He's avoiding looking. He'd rather check a wick than see how much more of my leg is turning red.

🔧 Kevin23:59

Four hours. Fresh dressing. We'll catch the high tide for the shackle after.

turn back from the lantern, set it on the table, pull the first aid kit from the shelf and open it on the porch rail

💭 thought

She's pressing it. Testing depth. The mark's holding but she's not sure. Neither am I. Infection's cunning — travels where you can't see. Doxycycline's had twenty hours. Should be slowing. If it's not...

🌿 Jenny00:01

I can do the dressing myself.

Reach for the first aid kit, trying to pull it toward me with one arm.

💭 thought

He's already scheduled my afternoon around his hardware. I can't even get a moment to just be sick without it being a 'task'.

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the keeper's cottage · afternoon

The First Drops

The first heavy drops hit the corrugated roof as the wind picks up. You and Jenny are under the eaves, watching the garden disappear in the grey mist.

The rain continues to fall in warm bursts, drumming rhythmically against the cottage roof. The barometric pressure is holding at 989 hPa, suggesting a slow change in the weather front. The tide is fully out, exposing the slick rocks and kelp of the southern shore.

🌿 Jenny00:01

The barometer is dropping too fast. We need to move the seed tin inside.

Wrap the bandage tighter around my ankle and wince as the pressure shifts.

💭 thought

If this rain keeps up, the heirloom seeds will rot before I can even dig a hole.

🔧 Kevin00:03

Grab the tin. I'll get the door.

hold the cottage door open and wait for Jenny to carry the seed tin inside, then secure the porch tarp corners with extra timber strips

💭 thought

She's right — barometer's dropped two millibars since breakfast. The seed tin's on the porch table under the tarp, but if the wind shifts northeast it'll drive rain sideways under the eaves. Need to move it now before the gusts hit thirty knots.

🌿 Jenny00:03

I've got it.

Limp to the table, clutch the seed tin to my chest, and shuffle through the door into the kitchen.

💭 thought

He's always treating me like I'm made of glass. I can carry a tin of seeds.

🔧 Kevin00:05

Porch tarp's loose on the west corner. I'll batten it. You get the radio log ready — weekly report's due.

step back onto the porch, pull the spare timber strip from against the wall, and nail it over the loose tarp corner with three quick hammer strikes

💭 thought

Good. Tin's safe. Now the porch — that tarp's only battened on three sides. If the wind gets under the leading edge it'll peel the lot. Need to weigh down the fourth corner and check the garden wall's drainage gaps before the beds flood.

🌿 Jenny00:05

I'll get to it. Just... give me a minute.

Sink into the kitchen chair and carefully set the seed tin on the table next to the notebook.

💭 thought

I can't concentrate on the log when my head is swimming and my ankle is pulsing.

🔧 Kevin00:06

Take the minute. I've got the porch.

finish driving the last nail into the timber strip, tug the tarp to confirm it's fast, then walk down the garden path to check the drainage gaps in the stone wall

💭 thought

She's exhausted. The ankle's draining her more than she'll admit. Radio log can wait ten minutes — she needs to sit, drink something hot, let the antibiotics work. I'll secure the porch and check the garden drainage, then bring her a mug of broth.

🌿 Jenny00:07

Jenny — reach for the ballpoint pen and slowly open the radio log, staring at the blank lines.

💭 thought

He's obsessing over the stones again. The stones aren't the ones failing; I am.

🔧 Kevin00:09

Kettle's on. Limpet broth still warm from this morning.

walk back up the path, step onto the porch, and enter the kitchen to fill two tin mugs from the pot on the stove

💭 thought

Wall's holding — drainage gaps clear, water running clean through to the beach. Beds won't flood. Rain's settling in steady now, not squally. Wind's west-southwest, not the northeast that'd drive it under the eaves. Porch is secure. Time to put the kettle on and get her something warm inside her.

🌿 Jenny00:09

Thanks, Kevin.

Push the radio log away and lean back, closing my eyes as the smell of the broth fills the room.

💭 thought

I can't eat. The thought of that salty, rubbery broth makes my stomach turn.

🔧 Kevin00:10

Kevin — pull out the other kitchen chair, sit heavily, and wrap both hands around the tin mug letting the heat bleed into my fingers

💭 thought

She's not going to write the report right now. That's fine — it doesn't have to go out this hour. The barometer's steady at 989, the porch is battened, the seed tin's dry, and she's eating. That's enough for this afternoon. I'll sit, drink mine, and let the rain wash the rest down.

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the old shrine · evening

Evening at Low Tide

The rain slows to a fine drizzle as the air cools. The tide is at its lowest point, revealing the floor of the tide pools.

The tide begins to pull back from the northern shelf, exposing the slick rocks and the new crevice. The humid air is heavy with the scent of salt and coming rain, as the overcast clouds thicken and lower the horizon line.

🌿 Jenny00:11

It's out. The tide is completely out.

Limp toward the edge of the ridge, leaning heavily on a piece of driftwood for support.

💭 thought

The air is finally breaking. My ankle is throbbing in time with my heartbeat, but the low tide is too rare to ignore.

🔧 Kevin00:13

Stay on the high rock. Don't go down the shelf wet.

Walk down to the mooring ring at the dock's seaward end, crouch, and run my fingers over the shackle pin and the four oak wedges in the mortise, feeling for movement or weep.

💭 thought

Good. Low water means the mooring ring's exposed. I can check the shackle pin properly now, see if the wedges are holding under slack tide. Her ankle's taking weight — that's something.

🌿 Jenny00:13

I'm not five, Kevin.

Sit slowly on a weathered stone, gingerly lifting the infected ankle to inspect the dressing.

💭 thought

He's treating me like a fragile piece of glassware again. I know how the shelf feels when it's slick.

🔧 Kevin00:14

Pin's fast. Wedges holding. Ring's not walking.

Straighten, wipe salt off my hands on my trousers, and walk back up the ridge toward her.

💭 thought

Didn't mean it like that. She knows the shelf gets slick. The pin's solid — wedges compressed, no play. Ring doesn't shift when I heave on it. Good enough for the supply boat.

🌿 Jenny00:15

Good. Now stop hovering.

Pull back the edge of the gauze to check the red line's progress.

💭 thought

He's so preoccupied with the hardware. The ring isn't walking, but I can barely stand.

🔧 Kevin00:16

Not hovering. Checking.

Stop two paces back, hands in pockets, and look out at the water instead of at her ankle.

💭 thought

The line hasn't moved past the pen mark. Skin's pink at the edges, not angry red. No heat radiating when I held her ankle this morning. Doxycycline's doing its work. She's right — I'm hovering.

🌿 Jenny00:17

Jenny — trace the inflammation with a finger, noting the heat and the exact margin of the redness.

💭 thought

At least he's looking at the horizon and not at me. I can breathe for a second.

🔧 Kevin00:18

Kevin — pull the barometer from my pocket, tap the glass, read the needle. 990. Still rising.

💭 thought

She's mapping it. Methodical. Good. That's how you track infection — know the ground. The tide's turning already, a faint suck at the channel mouth. Barometer's steady. We've got days before the boat's due.

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the old shrine · night

The Rising Tide

The water is already creeping back over the edges of the northern shelf. The air pressure drops slightly, bringing the first cool, damp breeze.

The air at the shrine is heavy with humidity, smelling of salt and rain-warmed stone. The tide is high, lapping rhythmically against the lower pilings of the dock, while the overcast sky presses low. Jenny's ankle is throbbing in the heat, a constant reminder of the morning strain.

🌿 Jenny00:19

Jenny — stand up slowly, leaning heavily on a weathered stone for support.

💭 thought

The tide is faster than I thought. If I don't move now, I'll be limping back through salt spray and mud.

🔧 Kevin00:20

Stay off it. Sit back down.

step forward and offer a steadying hand, keeping my weight ready to take hers if the stone shifts

💭 thought

She's moving too soon. Ankle's not ready for weight on uneven ground. The shrine stones are slick with salt and dew — one wrong step and she's down again, and I'm carrying her back with a compromised leg and no backup.

🌿 Jenny00:21

I'm not a specimen, Kevin. I can stand.

Pull away slightly from his hand, shifting weight cautiously to the good leg.

💭 thought

He thinks I'm a piece of fragile glassware. I can feel the pulse in my ankle, but I can also feel the wind changing.

🔧 Kevin00:23

Didn't say you couldn't. Said stay off it. There's a difference.

hold position, hand still extended but not gripping, weight balanced on both feet ready to move if the ankle gives

💭 thought

Stubborn as the bolt heads on the Yanmar's exhaust manifold. She'll walk on it because she decides to, not because it's ready. The red lines haven't crossed the mark yet — that's the only metric that matters. Let her prove it, but stay close enough to catch.

🌿 Jenny00:23

The difference is that you're still trying to manage me.

Take a small, tentative step forward, testing the ankle's stability.

💭 thought

He's doing that thing again. The precise, corrective phrasing. It's exhausting.

🔧 Kevin00:25

Managing's keeping the mooring ring from pulling out. You're not a mooring ring.

let my hand drop, turn slightly to walk beside her instead of leading, pace matching her limping stride

💭 thought

She's right. Managing's what I do — engines, structures, systems. Keep them running, keep them from failing. People aren't systems. Tom wasn't a system. Forty minutes in Biscay taught me that. Still doing it anyway.

🌿 Jenny00:25

(A short, sharp laugh) No, I'm just the one who has to live in the house while you bolt the dock to the seabed.

Continue limping toward the ridge, glancing back at the water reclaiming the shelf.

💭 thought

He thinks he's being clever. He's just reminding me that everything on this island is either bolted down or breaking.

🔧 Kevin00:27

The house held the last storm. So did the dock.

follow her up the ridge path, boots finding the worn steps between stones, breathing steady in the cool damp air

💭 thought

The house. The dock. The seabed. She draws lines I don't know how to cross. The ring's holding — four 150mm bolts, steel doubler, oak wedges driven vertical grain. Solid work. But she's not talking about the ring.

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What changed

3 intentions for today.

plan · dawn

×2

Jenny made a sketch: "Current state of the garden in the notebook, noting where the water is pooling".

made · dawn

A fish run is moving through the shallows off the dock.

fish_run · dawn

A new crevice was exposed in the rock shelf at low tide.

discovery · dawn

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · morning

The rain tank gained about 25 litres.

weather · midday

Low tide has exposed a new crevice in the rock shelf.

discovery · evening

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · evening

A turtle has hauled out on the beach to nest, in the dark.

turtle · night

The rain tank gained about 25 litres.

weather · night

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