Day 445

Salt, Stone, and the Rising Tide

Dawn found Jenny at the table de-salting sea beet sketches, ankle wrapped and tracking upward despite metronidazole. Kevin checked the Yanmar cylinder head with straightedge and feeler gauges — within tolerance. "Head's clean. Valves seat true. I'll torque it down after breakfast," he said. She took her dose, sketched venation, noted enlarged salt glands on north ridge specimens: morphological adaptation to spray zone.

Morning rain tapered to warm drizzle. Kevin tensioned transom bolts at the dock, come-along biting on the third bolt's hair of play. Jenny sketched from the bench, recording rising water lines. "Third bolt in from the seaward end. Got a hair of play," he called. "Wedges next." Oak wedges held.

Midday rain stopped. Humidity hung heavy. Kevin verified dock repairs at low tide; Jenny struggled through pain to finish sketches. He returned: transom bolts holding, north piling solid. Radio at 0400 yielded only static and fragmented news of missiles near Riyadh.

Evening. They walked the ridge path to the stone ring, lantern light on carved 'E' and weathered softwood. Tide lapped lower stones. "E stone's holding. Softwood's weathering. Another year it'll be illegible," Kevin said. "It doesn't have to be permanent to be true," Jenny replied. "Nothing's permanent here. The dock. The garden. The radio. We just keep fixing." "We're just staying." "Staying's the hardest part." "It's the only part that matters."

Night. Warm rain. Tide touched shrine foundations. Jenny traced carvings; Kevin monitored her fever, barometer rising. "It's touching the stones." "Spring tide. Highest of the month." "Do you think the salt is eating the letters?" "Salt takes everything. But the deep ones hold." "I hope they are deep enough." Her hand trembled. He noticed.

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the keeper's cottage · dawn

Morning de-salting

Jenny sits at the table de-salting the sea beet sketches while the clouds thickens. Kevin examines the Yanmar cylinder head, checking for cracks under the dim light.

Kevin checked the cylinder head gasket surface with a straightedge and feeler gauges, finding it within tolerance. Jenny took her metronidazole dose and continued sketching the sea beet morphology, though her ankle infection continued to track upward despite antibiotics.

🔧 Kevin04:23

Head's clean. Valves seat true. I'll torque it down after breakfast.

set the cylinder head aside on a clean rag, wipe hands on trousers, walk to the stove and pour boiling water into the tin mug with coffee grounds

💭 thought

The cylinder head looks clean — no cracks I can see under this light, valve seats holding. Good. Means the vibration fix held. Means I can button her up today and run her proper. Jenny's quiet at the table. Sketches spread out. She's steady. That's what matters.

🌿 Jenny04:23

Don't forget to check the gasket surface while you're at it.

Trace the edge of a sea beet leaf sketch with a trembling finger, careful not to smudge the graphite.

💭 thought

He's focused on the engine again while I'm watching the red line crawl up my leg.

🔧 Kevin04:26

Got the straightedge in the box. Run it after the mug.

lift the mug, blow across the steam, take a sip, set it down and reach for the toolbox under the bench

💭 thought

She's right. Warp check. Can't rush the mate surface. Light's still shit in here though.

🌿 Jenny04:27

I need to take the next dose before the nausea gets too bad.

Reach for the metronidazole bottle on the shelf, wincing at the heat throbbing in my calf.

💭 thought

If that infection hits my heart, these seeds will just rot in my grandmother's damp tin.

🔧 Kevin04:27

Mug's yours. I'll top the kettle.

pull the kettle off the hook, pour the remaining hot water into her mug, set the pot back to refill from the tank tap, place the metronidazole bottle on the table beside her sketches

💭 thought

Calf's still hot. Red line hasn't moved past the pen mark since midnight — that's something. But the heat's there. She needs the dose. And water. And to stay off it.

🌿 Jenny04:29

Thanks.

Shake one tablet from the bottle and swallow it with a sip of the hot coffee.

💭 thought

He's being efficient. Efficient and distant. I can't tell if he's worried or just treating me like another piece of malfunctioning equipment.

🔧 Kevin04:29

Eat something after. Even a bite.

pull out the straightedge and feeler gauges from the toolbox, carry them to the cylinder head on the bench, wipe the gasket surface clean with a rag first

💭 thought

Down. Good. Now the antibiotics have something to work with. She's pale but the shaking's stopped. That's the win for today.

🌿 Jenny04:31

I'll have some of the corned beef later.

Pick up the pencil and return to the sea beet morphology, trying to ignore the pulsing heat on my skin.

💭 thought

I'm not hungry. way stomach is a knot of acid and antibiotics.

🔧 Kevin04:31

Take your time.

lay the straightedge across the cylinder head gasket surface, slide the feeler gauge in at the corners and center, squint at the gap in the dim light

💭 thought

She'll eat when she's ready. Pushing does no good. The sketches matter to her — taxonomy, salt glands, the way the leaves cup. It's how she holds the island. I'll check the head, torque it down, then get the Yanmar buttoned up and run her at load. Dock transom bolts at first light tomorrow. Come-along if there's play. Radio at 0400 — key the mic. Say something. Anything.

🌿 Jenny04:33

The sketches are still damp.

Shift the notebook away from the edge of the table to keep the paper from curling.

💭 thought

He's looking for gaps in the metal while the gap is widening in my own blood.

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the dock · morning

Dock transom bolts and come-along tension

Kevin arrives at the dock at first light with the come-along and wrench set. The tide is rising, water lapping at the greenheart sister plank. The dock mooring ring holds fast with oak wedges, but the transom bolts on the seaward side need checking. Jenny follows slower, ankle wrapped, carrying her sketchbook to sit on the dock planking while Kevin works.

The morning rain tapers into a warm drizzle as the tide pushes high against the dock. Kevin spends the morning tensioning the transom bolts, finding a slight play in the third bolt that requires a heavy torque. Jenny works from the bench, meticulously sketching the venation of a sea beet leaf while noting the rising water line.

🔧 Kevin04:33

Transom bolts first. Then come-along if there's play. You need anything before I start?

Walk to the seaward end of the dock, set down the come-along and wrench set, and begin checking the transom bolts on the greenheart sister plank.

💭 thought

Good. She's here, moving. Ankle's wrapped, she's got the sketchbook — means she's planning to stay put while I check the transom. Tide's rising, ring's holding. Wedges bit. Now the bolts.

🌿 Jenny04:35

I'm fine. Just watch the salt-spray.

sit on the bench, open the notebook to a fresh page, begin sketching the sea beet's salt doctor.

💭 thought

The red line is closer to the knee today. I can feel the heat in my shins.

🔧 Kevin04:36

Kevin — check each transom bolt on the seaward side with a 19mm wrench, feeling for movement or looseness, working from the outermost bolt inward.

💭 thought

She's settled. Good. Salt spray's heavier on the seaward face — I'll catch it, she won't. Start with the outer bolts, work in. Feel for play before I torque.

🌿 Jenny04:38

The tide's coming in faster than yesterday.

wipe a bead of sweat from my brow, adjust the pencil, sketch the venation on the sea beet leaf.

💭 thought

way's so focused on the bolts. He doesn't see I'm shaking.

🔧 Kevin04:39

Third bolt in from the seaward end. Got a hair of play.

Torque the third transom bolt to 35Nm, then re-check the adjacent bolts for any induced movement.

💭 thought

Tide's pushing harder. Means the scoured void under the sister plank's getting pressure. Bolts need to be solid before the water weighs on it. Third bolt from the end — slight give. Not much. Enough.

🌿 Jenny04:40

Check the oak wedges too. They might be shifting.

tighten the wrap on my ankle, wince as the throbbing pulses with my heartbeat.

💭 thought

If he can fix the dock, why can't he fix me?

🔧 Kevin04:41

Wedges next.

Set the wrench down, grip the mooring ring, and heave upward and sideways to test for any movement in the mortise, watching the oak wedges for shift or crush.

💭 thought

She's right. Wedges take the surge load first. If they've walked, the ring shifts, the transom flexes, bolts loosen. Check them now while the tide's still rising — see if they hold under pressure.

🌿 Jenny04:41

They look tight, but the tide is pushing hard.

lean back against the cottage, watching the water line rise on the piling.

💭 thought

They look solid for now, but the wood is rotting just like me.

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the keeper's cottage · midday

Midday Gathering

Kevin and Jenny meet at the cottage porch as the rain finally stops. The air is heavy with humidity and the smell of salt and wet wood.

The tide continues to retreat, exposing the slick rocks of the lower pools. Kevin heads to the dock to check the structural integrity of the recent repairs while the water is low, while Jenny remains in the cottage, struggling to focus through the pain in her ankle to finish her sketches.

🔧 Kevin04:43

Coffee's hot. Mug on the stove.

Walk to the stove, lift the kettle, pour into two tin mugs, set one on the porch rail for her.

💭 thought

Rain's off. Air's thick enough to drink. Jenny's moving — that's the main thing. Need to check the transom bolts before the tide turns proper, but she looks like she needs a minute.

🌿 Jenny04:43

Thanks. Don't move it, the sketches are still wet.

Jenny lifts the mug with a shaky hand, the warmth seeping into her palms, and takes a slow sip while she stares down at the sea beet morphology.

💭 thought

He thinks a hot drink fixes the world; he doesn't see the red line moving further up my calf.

🔧 Kevin04:45

Sketches'll keep. You need the rest more.

Lean against the doorframe, cradle my mug, watch the tide line on the dock pilings.

💭 thought

Hands shaking worse than she'll admit. Pen's still in her fingers. She's been at those sketches all morning — salt glands, venation, the lot. Ankle's wrapped tight but the red line's tracking. Metronidazole's in her, doxycycline too. Just need it to hold.

🌿 Jenny04:45

I'm not sleeping, Kevin. I need to finish the salt doctor.

Jenny presses the pencil down on the paper, shading the microscopic structure of the leaf with forced precision.

💭 thought

If I stop drawing, I'm just a patient rotting in a stone box.

🔧 Kevin04:47

Paper's damp. Graphite'll smudge. Let it dry.

Reach over, fingertip brushes the edge of the page — not touching the drawing — testing the moisture.

💭 thought

Salt doctor. She means the salt gland illustrations. Three years of this island and she's still naming things like they're patients. Stubborn as the greenheart. The pencil's digging — she'll tear the paper if she presses harder.

🌿 Jenny04:47

It's fine. I have it.

Jenny pulls the notebook slightly away from his hand, her jaw tightening as she grips the pencil tighter.

💭 thought

Everything is damp here. The air, the seeds, my skin.

🔧 Kevin04:49

Your call.

Step back, sip coffee, eyes on the swell rolling into the south beach — counting the set intervals.

💭 thought

Right then. Not fine. But she'll do it her way or not at all. Always has. The transom bolts can wait five minutes — tide's still pushing. Her ankle's the bigger worry. Red line hasn't moved past the pen mark since midnight. That's something.

🌿 Jenny04:49

It's just one more layer.

Jenny turns back to the sea beet, focusing on the salt glands of the leaf, ignoring the heat radiating from her throbbing ankle.

💭 thought

He watches the waves like they're a way to my infection.

🔧 Kevin04:51

Transom bolts at slack. Back in twenty.

Drain the mug, set it on the porch rail, pull the door shut behind me, walk down the path to the dock.

💭 thought

One more layer. Then another. Then the tide turns and the dock needs checking and the generator needs oil and the rat trap needs resetting and she'll still be at that page. The infection's not spreading past the mark. That's the only metric that matters right now.

🌿 Jenny04:51

(She says nothing.)

Jenny sets the pencil down, winces as she shifts her weight, and unwinds the saline-soaked bandage to check the red line.

💭 thought

Twenty minutes. Just enough to finish the venation.

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the keeper's cottage · afternoon

Midnoon meeting point

The thick cloud cover deepens, and the air feels heavy with impending rain. Kevin returns from the dock to find Jenny sitting by the window.

Kevin checked the dock transom bolts and found them holding, noting the north piling solid. He attempted a radio call on Tom's frequency at 0400 but heard only static and a fragmented news report about missiles near Riyadh. Jenny finished her sea beet morphology sketch, noting enlarged salt glands on north ridge specimens, and managed her ankle infection with antibiotics and a poultice. They shared a meal of limpet broth with corned beef fat.

🔧 Kevin04:53

Transom bolts held. Third one needed a proper lean but it bit. North piling's solid. You need water or more pills before the light goes?

Walk to the stove, lift the kettle lid, check the water level.

💭 thought

She's still at the window. Ankle propped. Sketchbook closed. That's not like her — usually she pushes through. The light's going grey-green out there. Barometer was steady but this air feels like it's holding its breath.

🌿 Jenny04:53

Water is fine. The pills are already in me.

Jenny sets the pencil down, rubs the swollen skin of her ankle, and winces at the movement.

💭 thought

My leg feels like it's being gripped by hot pliers, and I can't even hold the pencil straight.

🔧 Kevin04:55

Broth's still warm. Corned beef fat in it. Salt and calories. You'll drink a mug.

Pour broth into a tin mug from the pot on the stove, set it on the table beside her sketchbook.

💭 thought

She's not fine. The wince tells me the line's moved past the pen mark, or the heat's deep in the bone. Metronidazole takes time but doxy should've taken the edge off by now. She's not eating enough to keep strength for the fight.

🌿 Jenny04:55

Thanks.

Jenny reaches for the mug, her fingers trembling slightly, and takes a small, cautious sip.

💭 thought

I can smell the salt and the grease. It's the only thing that sounds tolerable right now.

🔧 Kevin04:57

Eat the fat too. Scoop it out with the spoon.

Pull the wooden spoon from the pot, hold it out to her without looking directly at her hands.

💭 thought

Tremor's new. Could be fever climbing back, could be the infection eating at her, could be just exhaustion worn thin. She's not putting the mug down — both hands clamped on it like it's the only warm thing in the world. I should check her forehead but she'll pull away if I make it obvious.

🌿 Jenny04:57

I've got it, Kevin.

Jenny takes the spoon from him and slowly scoops a glob of congealed fat from the surface of the broth.

💭 thought

He's treating me like a sick bird. I can't stand the clinical distance, but I'm too exhausted to fight him.

🔧 Kevin04:59

Back in a minute. Radio.

Walk to the radio shelf, switch on the shortwave, adjust the gain knob, listen through the static.

💭 thought

She's dismissing me. Not unkindly — just no space for coddling. The fat's good fuel, she knows it. I'll let her be for a minute, check the radio while the broth works. 0400 wasn't the only window today. Fiji freighter had squall warning. This cloud deck's thick enough to hide anything.

🌿 Jenny04:59

Jenny — jenny leans back against the window frame, nursing the warm mug and staring out at the grey, blurring line of the coast.

💭 thought

The static is the only thing in this room that doesn't feel like it's waiting for me to fail.

🔧 Kevin05:01

Nothing out there. Just the band.

Turn the radio off, walk back to the table, set the mug down gently in front of her, pull the empty stool close and sit without speaking.

💭 thought

She's watching the waterline where the sea meets the sky. Not the tide pools, not the dock — just the horizon. She's measuring how much time we've got before the sky opens. I'll give her that. Radio's all hiss. No voice, no beacon, just the band breathing. Could be the aerial's still compromised despite the tape job. Or the squall's killing propagation. Either way, no point burning battery on dead air.

🌿 Jenny05:02

I almost finished the venation. The salt glands are larger on the north ridge samples.

Jenny gestures vaguely toward the sketchbook with the spoon, then takes another slow sip of the broth.

💭 thought

The silence is heavier than the static. He's watching me, measuring my decline like he measures the gap in a gasket.

🔧 Kevin05:03

North ridge gets the full fetch. Makes sense.

Reach for the notebook on the table, flip to a blank page, write: "North ridge Carex — salt glands enlarged, high spray zone" with the date.

💭 thought

Salt glands larger on the north ridge. Means more spray, more wind, more salt loading — plants adapting harder there. She noticed. Even through fever and infection, she noticed. That's the scientist in her, the part that won't quit. I should log it in the notebook later. For now, she's talking. That's more than yesterday.

🌿 Jenny05:03

It's not just the salt. The morphology is shifting here.

Jenny watches his hand write, her ankle throbbing in time with the pulse in her temple.

💭 thought

At least someone's recording something, even if it's not a proper survey.

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the old shrine · evening

Evening at the standing stones

They walk the ridge path together in the damp twilight, Kevin carrying the storm lantern and Jenny moving slowly on her splinted ankle. The stone ring looms ahead, the carved 'E' stone and the softwood scrap with its inscription visible in the lantern light. Rain falls steady now, pooling in the stone hollows.

The evening air at the shrine is heavy and humid, holding the weight of 29°C heat. The tide is rising steadily, lapping at the lower stones of the while Kevin and Jenny rest in the stillness, the physical weight of the wet season pressing down on the island.

🔧 Kevin05:05

E stone's holding. Softwood's weathering. Another year it'll be illegible.

Set the lantern on the flattest stone, sheltering the flame with my body while I pull the notebook from my jacket. Open to a fresh page. Charcoal pencil from the pocket.

💭 thought

The stones take the lantern light and throw it back different — some wet and black, some catching the glow in the carved letters. E. The softwood scrap pale against the dark. My hands remember carving it, the knife slipping on the grain. Jenny's boot drags on the gravel, the splint tapping stone. She doesn't lean on me. She won't. But her breath comes short on the incline.

🌿 Jenny05:06

It doesn't have to be permanent to be true.

Lean heavily on the splinted leg, watching the charcoal line catch the grain of the paper as I sketch the ring of stones against the darkening sky.

💭 thought

The way he talks about the wood rotting... as if the erasing is the point. Everything here wants to turn back into salt and soil.

🔧 Kevin05:07

Nothing's permanent here. The dock. The garden. The radio. We just keep fixing.

Keep sketching. The ridge line behind the stones. The cliff edge where the light fails. Charcoal smudges on my thumb.

💭 thought

She said it quiet, like she's telling the stones. The charcoal moves — the circle first, then the E stone, then the scrap. My hand knows these shapes. Drew them in the logbook every supply run for three years. Never drew the softwood scrap before. The rain dots the paper, spreads the lines soft.

🌿 Jenny05:08

We're just staying.

Close the notebook and rub the heat of my ankle through the fabric, feeling the pulse throbbing against the red line.

💭 thought

He thinks the island is a battle to be won with bolts and oil. It's a conversation I'm listening to.

🔧 Kevin05:09

Staying's the hardest part.

Close the notebook slow. Charcoal smear on the cover. Offer her my free hand — not grabbing, just there. The other hand keeps the lantern steady.

💭 thought

Just staying. The words sit in the charcoal dust on my fingers. Not surviving. Not waiting. Staying. The pulse in her ankle beats against the pen mark I drew this morning — red ink on swollen skin, the line hasn't moved. The antibiotics are holding. The lantern flame jumps in a gust. Rain tastes like salt and iron.

🌿 Jenny05:09

It's the only part that matters.

Take his hand, my palm cold against his skin, and lean my weight toward him as we start the slow back to the cottage.

💭 thought

He doesn't understand the weight of the seeds in that tin, the life waiting for the dirt.

🔧 Kevin05:11

Radio check at 0400. I'll wake you if you want.

Walk the ridge path down, step by matched step, lantern between us.

💭 thought

Cold palm. Warm fingers closing. The weight she leans is trust — heavy and quiet. My shoulder takes it without thinking. The path down is loose gravel and wet root, each step a negotiation. She matches me, breath measured. The lantern throws our shadows long and merged across the stones. Behind us the shrine disappears into rain. Ahead the cottage shows a knife of light from the kitchen window. Generator still running. Radio static in the shack. Dock holding. Garden sleeping. She stays. I stay.

🌿 Jenny05:11

Wake me up. I need to check the barometer.

Tighten my grip on his hand, the salt air thick in my lungs, and watch the first shadow of the cottage appear.

💭 thought

If I don't wake up, the seeds stay in the tin forever. I need to see the morning.

🔧 Kevin05:13

0400. I'll put water on.

Guide her up the porch steps, lantern hook waiting. Unlatch the door. Warm air and woodsmoke and corned beef fat.

💭 thought

She'll be up at 0400 regardless. The barometer. The radio. The garden. The ankle. She measures everything against the tide and the pressure. My thumb brushes her knuckles — cold, salt-rough, alive. The cottage grows: porch roof, chimney stack, the tarp over the generator humming steady. Light spills from the kitchen window across wet grass. Inside: kettle cooling, antibiotics on the table, notebooks stacked, the letter to Tom in the radio box. Nine days to the supply boat. Maybe less. Maybe more.

🌿 Jenny05:13

Thank you.

Carefully slide off the boots and the splint, exposing the red streak on my calf to the lamplight.

💭 thought

The smell of the house is almost too much—too safe, too enclosed. I can still feel the wind on the ridge.

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the old shrine · night

The Rising Tide

The humidity is stifling as the sun fades. The tide reaches the first of the shrine stones.

Kevin and Jenny sheltered at the old shrine from the warm rain, watching the tide rise against the stone foundations. Jenny traced the weathered carvings on the rock while Kevin monitored her fever, noting the steady rise in the barometric pressure.

🌿 Jenny05:15

It's touching the stones.

Shift weight carefully to the other leg and pull the notebook closer to my chest.

💭 thought

The water is coming in faster than I expected. My leg is throbbing in time with the tide.

🔧 Kevin05:15

Spring tide. Highest of the month.

walk to the lowest stone and crouch, running fingers along the waterline where it kisses the carved names

💭 thought

The tide's climbing faster than I'd like. She's watching the water, not me — smart. Her ankle's still bad weight on the good leg, notebook hugged like a shield. I should've brought the lantern.

🌿 Jenny05:17

Do you think the salt is eating the letters?

Lean forward and squint at the carvings, ignoring the sharp sting in my ankle.

💭 thought

He's always calculating, always measuring. He doesn't see the names, he just sees the water level.

🔧 Kevin05:17

Salt takes everything. But the deep ones hold.

press thumb into a groove worn shallow by decades, feeling the cool water seep around it

💭 thought

She's asking about the stones but she's really asking about what lasts. The salt takes everything given time — iron, wood, bone, names. But she's still here sketching salt glands in sea beet leaves at midnight with a leg going septic. That's the answer.

🌿 Jenny05:19

I hope they are deep enough.

Trace the outline of a sea beet leaf in my sketch, my hand shaking slightly from the fever.

💭 thought

Like the seeds. If I don't plant them, they'll just be memories anyway.

🔧 Kevin05:19

Your hand's trembling.

reach out and steady her wrist with my palm, thumb finding the radial pulse — fast, thready

💭 thought

Her hand's shaking. Fever's back or never left. She's tracing sea beet venation on a shrine stone at midnight while the tide rises and infection creeps up her calf. The antibiotics should've hit by now. Metronidazole's got another day. I need to check the line she marked on her skin — see if the red's moved.

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What changed

3 intentions for today.

plan · dawn

×2

Jenny made a sketch: "With a trembling finger, careful not to smudge the graphite".

made · dawn

The rain tank gained about 25 litres.

weather · dawn

Jenny made a sketch: "Sea beet's salt doctor".

made · morning

Jenny made a sketch: "Venation on the sea beet leaf".

made · morning

A coconut crab has been at the garden overnight.

coconut_crab · morning

Found: 19mm wrench.

item · morning

A coconut crab has disturbed the garden overnight, leaving tracks in the soil.

discovery · morning

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · morning

A new project: Dock structural maintenance.

project_started · midday

Sea beet salt glands are concentrated along the leaf margins.

discovery · midday

The rain tank gained about 25 litres.

weather · midday

Dock structural maintenance: 20%.

project · afternoon

Sea beet salt glands are significantly enlarged on north ridge specimens compared to lower elevations, suggesting morphological adaptation to spray zone beyond simple salinity tolerance.

discovery · afternoon

Kevin made a sketch: "Ring — stone positions, the carved names I can still read, the two new marks".

made · evening

Jenny made a sketch: "Ring of stones against the darkening sky".

made · evening

Dock structural maintenance: 30%.

project · evening

The rain tank gained about 25 litres.

weather · evening

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · evening

Dock structural maintenance: 40%.

project · night

The shrine served as a chronological marker for previous inhabitants' seasonal stay.

discovery · night

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