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Day 512

Falling Pressure

At dawn, the wind howled through the palms as the barometer needle descended. Jenny sat against the cottage wall, soaking her throbbing ankle in a bucket of salt water. "The pressure is dropping too fast, Kevin. Check the bolts on the jetty," she said. Kevin tested the tension of the new mooring ring and found the rot in the starboard piling was deeper than he had hoped. "I’ll clear the rot, sister the piling, and bolt it through the doubler plate," he told her.

At dawn, the wind howled through the palms as the barometer needle descended. Jenny sat against the cottage wall, soaking her throbbing ankle in a bucket of salt water. "The pressure is dropping too fast, Kevin. Check the bolts on the jetty," she said. Kevin tested the tension of the new mooring ring and found the rot in the starboard piling was deeper than he had hoped. "I’ll clear the rot, sister the piling, and bolt it through the doubler plate," he told her.

As the tide rose rapidly, Kevin braced the dinghy against the swell. Jenny attempted to assist with a new project to protect the shrine, though she warned, "I'll help, but don't expect me to do all the heavy lifting." Together, they dragged long planks from the beach and weighted them with rocks from the north pile, reaching 30% completion on the barrier. During the effort, a tool broke from wear.

By evening, the tide receded, exposing barnacle-crusted pilings. Kevin treated Jenny’s infected ankle with saline and antibiotics on the porch. "Hold still. I’ll give you the doxy," he said. Jenny took the dose and rested while Kevin weighted down the porch tarp. Inside the cottage, the rain intensified into a steady drumming. Jenny sketched the jagged edge of a sea beet leaf to keep her hands from shaking, while Kevin sketched the lamp light on a seed tin and Jenny’s hands.

Scenes

the dock · dawn

The Pressure Drops

Kevin tests the tension of the newly installed mooring ring while the gusty wind howls through the palm palms. Jenny sits on a crate nearby, soaking her ankle in salt water and watching the barometer needle continue its steady descent.

The wind has picked up, gusting through the palm leaves with a loud roar. The tide is at its lowest, exposing the slick rocks and the base of the pilings. Jenny sits against the cottage wall, her ankle throbbing despite the fresh gauze, while Kevin works at the starboard end of the dock.

🌿 Jenny23:53

The pressure is dropping too fast, Kevin. Check the bolts on the jetty.

Lifts leg out of the basin, winces at the sting, and wraps the ankle in clean gauze.

💭 thought
If that boat doesn't come in two days, I'm going to be a permanent fixture of this dock.
🔧 Kevin23:54

On it. I’ll hit the starboard piling first—see if the wedges are holding. You get that ankle elevated and keep it wrapped tight. I’ll be back in ten.

walk to the starboard end of the dock, grab the wrench, and check the tension on the four 150mm stainless through-bolts securing the steel doubler plate to the piling, tightening any that have loosened since installation.

💭 thought
The barometer’s falling fast—wind’s west, tide’s coming in harder than the glass says. Those bolts need checking before dark, or the ring’ll work loose under surge. Jenny’s ankle’s worse; she’s hiding it, but the wrap’s fresh and she’s favoring it. I’ll check the jetty, then get her inside before the squall hits.
🌿 Jenny23:55

Don't trust the wedges, the timber is soft like a sponge.

Leans back against the cottage wall, opens the notebook, and begins sketching the jagged edge of a sea beet leaf to keep her hands from shaking.

💭 thought
He thinks the bolts are the whole story, but the rot is inside the wood now.
🔧 Kevin23:56

Wedges are in, but I’ll sister the piling with a greenheart offcut from the crate—bolt it through the doubler plate and into sound timber. Give me the crowbar and the drill brace; I’ll need to clear the rot first.

walk to the crate of greenheart offcuts stacked near the dock, select a sound piece about 1.5m long and 150mm square, then use the crowbar to pry away the soft, rotted timber around the starboard piling where the doubler plate is bolted, ex

💭 thought
She’s right—the wedges are buying time, not fixing it. The pilings are rotting from the inside out, and no amount of oak shim will hold when the surge hits. We need sister piles or a new mooring point offshore, but that’s days of work we don’t have. For now, I’ll double-check every bolt, add a backup line to the dinghy’s bow eye, and pray the barometer doesn’t drop below 990 before the boat comes. Jenny’s sketching to keep from focusing on the pain—she’s tougher than she lets on.
🌿 Jenny23:57

The crowbar is by the generator. Be careful, the splinters are way.

Watches him work from the shade, her breathing shallow against the throbbing heat in her knee.

💭 thought
If that wood is gone, the whole jetty goes into the surf with the next surge.
🔧 Kevin23:58

Got the crowbar. I’ll clear the rot, sister the piling, and bolt it through the doubler plate. Keep that ankle up and the gauze dry—I’ll be back before the next gust hits.

walk to the generator, grab the crowbar leaning against its base, then return to the starboard piling and use the crowbar to pry away the soft, rotted timber around the base where the doubler plate is bolted, exposing sound heartwood beneat

💭 thought
She’s watching me, breath tight, pain radiating up her leg. I can see it in her jaw—she’s not saying how bad it is, but the sketching’s stopped, and her fingers are white on the notebook edge. I need to work fast and clean; every minute I’m out here, she’s sitting alone with that throbbing. I’ll clear the rot, sister the piling, and get back to her before the wind shifts and the spray starts flying.
🌿 Jenny23:59

Watch the tension. The wood is more gone than that.

Winces as she shifts her weight, pressing the salt-soaked cloth against the infection to dull the pulse.

💭 thought
He’s moving too fast. The rot goes deeper than the bolts look.
🔧 Kevin00:00

Rot’s deeper than I hoped. I’ll clear it back to sound wood, sister the piling, and run a backup line from the ring to the dinghy’s bow eye. Keep that cloth cold and tight—I’ll check on you in five.

continue using the crowbar to remove all soft, rotted timber from around the starboard piling until only sound, dense heartwood remains exposed, then prepare the greenheart offcut for sistering by trimming it to fit flush against the piling

💭 thought
She’s right—more gone than I thought. The rot’s eaten deeper, past the sapwood into the core. I can feel it with the crowbar—spongy, stringy, giving way too easy. Sistering won’t hold if the piling’s this far gone. We need to offload the ring entirely—run a temporary mooring to the boulder offshore, or swing the ring to the port side where the timber’s sounder. But the wind’s backing west, surge is coming, and I don’t have time to rebuild. I’ll do what I can: clear as much rot as possible, sister with greenheart, and add a second line from the ring to the dinghy’s bow eye as a backup. If the piling pulls, the dinghy’ll take some of the load—better than nothing.
🌿 Jenny00:01

The salt is stinging the way... watch the wood.

Closes her eyes, focusing on the rhythmic thrum of the wind to drown out the pain in her ankle.

💭 thought
If the dock doesn't hold, the boat is lost the moment the tide turns.
🔧 Kevin00:02

Wood’s sound where it counts. I’m sistering the piling now—bolting the greenheart through the doubler plate. Backup line to the dinghy after. You keep focusing on that rhythm—it’s working.

position the greenheart offcut against the starboard piling, align it with the doubler plate, then drill pilot holes through the plate and into both timbers using the hand brace and auger bit, preparing to bolt them together with the 150mm

💭 thought
She’s using the wind’s rhythm to cope—smart. The salt’s helping draw out the infection, but it’s burning her raw. I’ve cleared the rot back to solid heartwood now—good, dense timber, though less of it than I’d like. The greenheart offcut is ready; I’ll bolt it through the doubler plate and into the piling, then run that backup line to the dinghy. If the piling yields, the load splits. It’s not ideal, but it’s all we’ve got before the surge hits. I need to move—every second counts.

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the dock · morning

The Rising Tide

The tide begins to turn, covering the exposed rocks as the wind gusts intensify.

The tide is rising rapidly, licking at the lower planks of the dock. Jenny sits on the edge, her ankle submerged in the bucket of salt water, hissing as the salt stings the inflamed skin. Kevin braces himself against a piling, holding the tension on the mooring lines to ensure the dinghy doesn't chafe against the rising swell.

🔧 Kevin00:02

Kevin — run double lines from the dinghy's bow and stern to the pilings, then take up the slack on the mooring ring with the come-along, checking each knot as the water rises.

💭 thought
The tide's coming in fast and the wind's picking up—got to secure the dock before the surge hits the pilings. Jenny's still on the porch, ankle wrapped, silent. I should check on her after I tie off the lines.
🌿 Jenny00:05

The tide is coming in fast. Watch the lines.

Jenny stands up slowly, wincing as the weight shifts on her ankle, and grips the bucket of salt water.

💭 thought
The barometer is dropping through the floor; if that boat doesn't come in two days, I'm out of antibiotics.
🔧 Kevin00:05

I’ve got it. Sit back down before you make it worse.

Keep tensioning the storm warp from the dinghy bow to the windward piling, then secure the stern line to the leeward piling with a round turn and two half-hitches, watching for chafing as the tide lifts the boat.

💭 thought
She’s moving despite the pain—doesn’t want to be a burden. I’ll handle the lines; she should stay off that ankle.
🌿 Jenny00:07

I need to debride it before it gets worse.

Jenny ignores him, limps to the edge of the dock, and prepares to soak her ankle in the salt water.

💭 thought
way thinks I'm the one breaking, but I'm the one watching the rot spread.
🔧 Kevin00:07

Go ahead. I’ll hold this.

brace myself sideways against the piling to take the strain of the mooring lines, one hand on the bucket to keep it from spilling as Jenny dips her ankle in, the other ready to cast off if the dinghy surges.

💭 thought
She’s set on cleaning the wound—salt water’s the best we’ve got. I’ll hold the bucket steady and keep an eye on the lines while she works.
🌿 Jenny00:09

way watch the jetty. The wind is picking up.

Jenny lowers herbbing ankle into the salt water, hissing as the sting hits the infected skin.

💭 thought
way's so useful when he's not talking, but he doesn't see the swelling.
🔧 Kevin00:09

I’ll check the jetty. Keep it clean.

Move along the jetty on the balls of my feet, testing each plank for give, then shove a spare fender (the coiled rope) between the dinghy’s gunwale and the rotting starboard corner where the jetty meets the dock, watching for splash-over as

💭 thought
The wind’s kicking up chop against the jetty—those rotten planks are going to take a beating. I need to check the fenders and make sure the dinghy isn’t pounding the dock.
🌿 Jenny00:10

It's not just the jetty, Kevin. The pressure is falling.

Jenny reaches for the tweezers and the salt-crusted cloth, carefully peeling back the gauze to expose the red streaks.

💭 thought
He's treating the boat like a child while my leg is turning into a wasteland.
🔧 Kevin00:11

Hold still. I’ll give you the doxy.

Rip open the blister pack, drop one doxycycline tablet into her palm, then grab the mallet and drive two more oak wedges into the mooring ring mortise, sealing them with a few blows while the tide laps at the planks.

💭 thought
Barometer’s falling, wind’s west—exactly what the notes warned about. The streaks mean the infection’s spreading. I’ve got to get the antibiotic in her and double down on the dock before dark.
🌿 Jenny00:13

I took it. way... keep an eye on the tide.

Jenny swallows the pill dry with a grimace, then leans back against the timber, watching the salt water ripple around her ankle.

💭 thought
He's always fixing the wood, never the rot under the surface.

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the dock · midday

The Rising Tide

The water is now touching the lower stones of the shrine. The air is heavy with the coming humidity.

The rain continues to fall steadily, filling the water tank as it nears its 400-litre limit. The tide has risen rapidly, waves lapping over the dock planks and threatening the makeshift stone barrier at the shrine. Kevin and Jenny have worked together to protect the structure from the incoming swell.

🌿 Jenny00:13

Jenny — pull my ankle out of the salt water bucket, wince, and limp back toward the way door.

💭 thought
If that tide rises any higher, the shrine is going to be underwater, and I need to get back inside before my head starts spinning.
🔧 Kevin00:14

I’ll grab the dry bandages from the kit. Stay off it as much as you can.

walk to cottage, open first aid kit, take clean gauze and antibiotic cream, return to Jenny, kneel beside her, gently lift her foot, clean off salt water with fresh water from canteen, pat dry, apply cream, wrap ankle snug but not tight wit

💭 thought
The tide’s taken the shrine’s stones. Jenny’s ankle’s bad—she’s favoring it, moving slow. I should’ve checked the drain earlier. Now it’s creeping up on everything. I’ll secure the dock first, then see what I can do for her before the rain gets worse.
🌿 Jenny00:15

The tide is coming in too fast for the shrine.

lean back against the rough cottage wood, watching the water lap over the dock planks.

💭 thought
He's trying to be helpful, but bandages don't stop the rain or the rot.
🔧 Kevin00:16

I’ll rig something to break the swell before it hits the shrine. Help me drag the long planks from the beach if you can stand.

limp toward beach, grab two longest driftwood planks, haul them back toward shrine, wedge them vertically into the sand at an angle to deflect incoming waves, stack smaller logs behind for weight, test stability by pushing against current f

💭 thought
She’s right—the water’s already at the shrine’s base, and it’s only going up. If we don’t move something now, we’ll lose the lower stones for good. I can’t stop the tide, but I can try to shield what’s left. I’ll use the driftwood and planks we salvaged—build a quick breakwater to take the edge off.
🌿 Jenny00:17

I'll help, but don't expect me to do all the heavy lifting.

push myself off the wall, favoring my good leg, and head toward the jetty.

💭 thought
If I go out there now, the infection will give way, but if the shrine goes, the seeds are lost too.
🔧 Kevin00:18

I’m right behind you. Let’s get the planks in place and weight them down with the spare rocks from the north pile—those should hold.

follow Jenny to jetty, scan for usable timber, grab two soaked but solid planks, carry them toward shrine, position them in a V-shape pointing seaward to split the flow, jam butt ends deep into sand, pile loose stones and rubble at base to

💭 thought
She’s in pain but moving—good sign. She’s going to the jetty, maybe to see how bad the dock’s getting or to grab more wood. I’ll follow her lead but keep the focus on the shrine. We need to act fast before the next surge undermines the stones completely.
🌿 Jenny00:19

Watch the current, it's pulling harder than it looks.

reach for the edge of the first plank, grunting as I lean my weight against it to help Kevin guide it into the sand.

💭 thought
The water is already over the stones; if these planks don't hold, the whole thing washes out.
🔧 Kevin00:20

On three—push hard and hold. One, two, three—now!

throw shoulder against plank, drive it deep into sand with Jenny’s help, wiggle to seat it firm, grab second plank, repeat on other side to form V-breakwater, pile driftwood and stones against base to brace against pull, test by leaning int

💭 thought
She’s right—the current’s stronger than it looks, sucking at the planks as we try to set them. One wrong move and we’ll lose them to the drag. We need to get them buried fast and deep, or they’ll just float off. I’ll use my weight to drive it in while she guides the angle.
🌿 Jenny00:21

It's moving! Get the rocks on the base quickly!

lean my full weight against the second plank, teeth gritted as a wave washes over my knees.

💭 thought
The water is already at my shins and the salt is stinging the wound. We have to get this set now.
🔧 Kevin00:22

I’m on it—grabbing the biggest chunks from the north pile. Hold that plank steady!

sprint to north pile, heave two large, flat stones into arms, stagger back to shrine, drop them hard against the base of both planks, add smaller rocks to fill gaps, stomp down to settle, brace against next wave with shoulder, shout over ro

💭 thought
The wave just hit her—she’s bracing hard, but the water’s tugging at the planks. If we don’t weigh them down now, they’ll shift or wash out. I need to get the heaviest rocks we can find and stack them fast at the base to lock it in place.

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the dock · afternoon

High tide and rising water

The tide reaches its peak. The rain continues to pour, and the driftwood barrier at the shrine groans under the pressure of the sea.

The tide is receding quickly, exposing the slick, algae-covered lower sections of the dock pilings. The air remains heavy and humid, with the falling barometer pressure signaling a shift in the dry heat. The driftwood barrier at the shrine is holding, though the temporary braces are groaning as the swell pulls at the island.

🌿 Jenny00:23

Kevin, watch the shrine line! It's pulling!

Clutches the porch railing, wincing as a wave hits the jetty.

💭 thought
The barrier is going to give. If that driftwood shifts, the whole shrine is gone.
🔧 Kevin00:24

On it. Hold the line where you are—I'll run out and brace it.

sprint to the shrine, grab the loose end of the driftwood barrier, and heave it landward while bracing against a piling, shouting back: "Jenny, keep tension on the shore end—I've got the seaward pull!"

💭 thought
The shrine line's under strain—I need to reinforce it before it snaps and the driftwood washes out. Jenny's ankle's bad, but she's still watching. I can't let her down again.
🌿 Jenny00:25

I'm holding it! Just watch the stones!

Grabs the heavy rope, leaning her full weight into it to counteract the throbbing in her ankle.

💭 thought
If he slips, the current will take the whole thing. I need to hold the weight.
🔧 Kevin00:26

Stones are holding—keep pulling, I'm almost there!

drive a spare oak stake deep into the sand behind the barrier, then lash the driftwood to it with a tight clove hitch and two half-hitches using the spare rope from my pocket, all while leaning into the strain to take weight off Jenny's arm

💭 thought
She's bracing with her whole body—if she slips or the rope cuts her, it's on me. I need to get this barrier stable fast, then check on her.
🌿 Jenny00:27

It's tight. Is the stake holding?

Tightens her grip on the rope, Analysis white, watching the waves break over the rotting dock.

💭 thought
The tension is holding for now, but the wood is screaming. My ankle is screaming.
🔧 Kevin00:28

Stake's good—barrier's set. Let me take the rope, Jenny. Sit down now—your ankle's giving out.

slip a loop of rope over my shoulder, take the strain from Jenny's hands, and guide her back to the cottage porch, lowering her onto the top step where she can elevate her leg on the wood box beside the door

💭 thought
The stake's set, the lashing's tight—barrier should hold for now. But Jenny's ankle's taking the load, and I can see her knuckles bleeding where the rope bites. I need to get her off that line and onto something solid before she fails.
🌿 Jenny00:29

Jenny — jenny lets go of the rope, her fingers trembling as she collapses onto the step, throbbing in her ankle.

💭 thought
If I let go, the whole thing snaps. But I literally can't feel my toes.그런SAY: I have it. Just check... check the knots.
🔧 Kevin00:30

Easy now. Let me look at that ankle—poultice might've shifted. I'll get it reset and then we'll check the shrine together from here.

kneel beside Jenny on the porch step, gently remove the old gauze and poultice from her ankle, inspect the wound for signs of worsening, then reapply a fresh sea beet and mint poultice and rewrap it snug but not tight with clean gauze, all

💭 thought
She's down, but the pain's flaring—throbbing means pressure building, could be infection or just swelling. I need to check the poultice, reapply if needed, and keep her off it. The shrine line's holding for now, but I should reinforce it properly once she's stable.
🌿 Jenny00:30

Don't make it too tight. I can still feel the pulse in there.

Leans back against the wall, closing her eyes and breathing through the sharp sting of the fresh poultice.

💭 thought
He's being too gentle. I hate it when he looks at it like I'm a broken specimen.
🔧 Kevin00:32

Pulse is good—means it's not too tight. I'm going back to the shrine to brace the line proper. You rest here, I'll shout if I need you.

limp back to the shrine, grab the heavy weather line from the dinghy, and run a second line from the driftwood barrier to the buried oak stake, tightening it with a trucker's hitch to take the load off the original rope, then test the setup

💭 thought
She's right—too tight and I risk cutting off circulation, making it worse. Poultice is on, wrap is snug but she can still feel pulse. Good. Now I need to get back to the shrine line before the next swell hits and make sure it's truly secure, not just holding.

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the old shrine · evening

Evening Low Tide Inspection

The tide has reached its lowest point, revealing the barnacle-crusted pilings and the state of the submerged dock beams.

Kevin treated Jenny's infected ankle with saline and antibiotics on the porch. Jenny took a dose of doxycycline while resting. The weather continued to deteriorate as the sky darkened.

🌿 Jenny00:33

The tide's out. You can see the pilings now.

Lean heavily on a piece of driftwood to stand up and limp slowly toward the cottage.

💭 thought
The pressure in my ankle is unbearable. I need to eat something or I'm going to pass out before the rain starts again.
🔧 Kevin00:34

I’ll get you a hand. Let’s get you inside and off that ankle.

walk to Jenny, take her arm to support her, and help her limp slowly toward the cottage.

💭 thought
The dock’s in worse shape than I thought—those south pilings are rotted through. I’ll need to sister them before the tide comes back in, or we’ll lose the whole berth. Jenny’s ankle’s still bad; she shouldn’t be putting weight on it like that.
🌿 Jenny00:34

I can do it. Just... a little slower.

Lean into him, keeping the weight off the infected leg, and shuffle toward the porch.

💭 thought
He's being kind. I hate that I need him to be kind right now.
🔧 Kevin00:36

Lean on me. I’ve got you.

slide my arm under hers to take more of her weight, guide her step by step up the porch steps, and help her sit on the porch chair.

💭 thought
She’s stubborn, but that ankle’s not just sore—it’s infected. If we don’t get it cleaned and re-dressed soon, it’ll get worse. I’ve got the antibiotics and gauze inside.
🌿 Jenny00:36

Thank you.

Sink into the chair with a sigh, carefully elevating my ankle on the footrest.

💭 thought
I feel like a broken thing. I can't even get up three steps without him.
🔧 Kevin00:38

I’ll get the first-aid kit and take care of that ankle. Just rest.

walk inside to the cottage, grab the first-aid kit from the shelf, return to the porch, and kneel beside Jenny to gently remove the old gauze and inspect the wound.

💭 thought
She’s in pain, but she won’t complain. I need to check the dressing, clean the wound, and change it with fresh gauze and antibiotic cream before it gets worse.
🌿 Jenny00:38

Be careful with the edges. It's... it's raw.

Grip the armrests of the chair and look away, staring at the thickening clouds.

💭 thought
God, I hope the streaks haven't moved higher since this morning. The smell of the infection is starting to get through the gauze.
🔧 Kevin00:40

I’ll be gentle. Just tell me if it’s too much.

pour saline from the bottle onto clean gauze, gently dab around the wound to clean it, then apply a thin layer of antibiotic cream, and place fresh gauze over it, securing it with a clean cloth wrap.

💭 thought
The wound’s open and angry—needs cleaning and a fresh dressing. I’ll use the saline, then the antibiotic cream, and rewrap it clean. If it doesn’t improve by tomorrow, we may need to consider stronger action.
🌿 Jenny00:41

It's okay. You can.

Let out a long, shaky breath and lean my head back against the chair.

💭 thought
That way a little better, but the throb is still there, deep and rhythmic. I'm so hungry I'm lightheaded.
🔧 Kevin00:42

Here—take this. It’ll help.

open the antibiotic blister pack, take out one doxycycline tablet, hand it to Jenny with the tin mug of water, and watch her take it.

💭 thought
The dressing’s on, but I can see she’s in real discomfort. Infection’s still there. I should check the antibiotics—we’ve got five doses left of doxycycline. She’s had one already. I’ll give her another now, and keep an eye on it.

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the keeper's cottage · night

Nightfall and Falling Pressure

Kevin and Jenny are inside the cottage. The wind is picking up outside, rattling the shutters, and the oil lamp casts long shadows across the kitchen table.

The rain intensifies, a steady drumming against the cottage roof as the barometric pressure continues its plunge. The tide is rising rapidly, pushing the surf toward the dock pilings while the wind picks up, whistling through the gaps in the shutter frames.

🔧 Kevin00:43

I’ll check the shutter bolts before the wind tears them loose. You want the lamp moved?

walk to the shutter on the windward side, feel for play in the bolts with my fingers, then tighten them with the wrench from the shelf if they’re loose.

💭 thought
The shutters are rattling like they’re trying to get in. I should’ve braced them earlier. Jenny’s quiet again—she’s been that way since the ankle got bad. I don’t push. Not anymore.
🌿 Jenny00:44

No. Leave it.

Lean back against the wall and pull the blanket tighter around my shoulders, eyes fixed on the seed tin on the table.

💭 thought
I can feel the fever starting to hum in my ears. Everything feels distant, like I'm watching him from the bottom of a well.
🔧 Kevin00:44

The wind’s lifting the edge of the tarp on the porch. I’ll weight it down so it doesn’t flap all night.

walk to the porch, grab the coiled rope and a sandbag from near the door, then secure the tarp’s flapping corner by tying it off to the post and weighting the loose end with the sandbag.

💭 thought
She’s not cold—she’s holding herself together. That seed tin’s been damp too long. I can fix the seal, but she won’t let me near it. Not now.
🌿 Jenny00:46

Jenny — close my eyes and breathe slowly, trying to ignore the rhythmic throb in my ankle.

💭 thought
He's just moving things from one spot to another. Shifting weight. Bolting things down. Meanwhile, the red lines are moving up my leg and I can't even hold a pencil.
🔧 Kevin00:46

I’m right here if you need anything. Water. The poultice again. Just say the word.

pull the stool from under the table and sit beside her, not touching, just present—then take out the notebook and sketch the way the lamp light falls across the seed tin, the blanket, her hands.

💭 thought
She’s trying to ride it out. I know that breath—she’s been using it since the abscess. I won’t ask. I’ll just be where she can see me if she changes her mind.
🌿 Jenny00:48

I'm just tired, Kevin.

Open one eye and look at his hand moving on the paper, then slowly let my head slump back against the whitewashed stone.

💭 thought
He's sketching. He's always documenting the surface of things. He doesn't see the fire under my skin.
🔧 Kevin00:48

I know. Me too. We’ll get through this night. The boat’s due in two days—if it comes.

close the notebook, set it gently on the table beside the seed tin, then stand and walk to the door to check the latch and make sure it’s fastened against the wind.

💭 thought
She’s tired. Not just of the pain. Of waiting. Of me fixing things while we don’t talk. I stopped drawing. The lines felt false.
🌿 Jenny00:51

Jenny — shift my hand under the blanket to touch the cold metal of the seed tin, feeling the ridges of the lid.

💭 thought
Two days. A lifetime if the boat doesn't come. The tank is full, but my strength is empty. continuedSAY: If it comes.

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What changed

3 intentions for today.
plan · dawn
×2
Jenny made a sketch: "Jagged edge of a sea beet leaf to keep her hands from shaking".
made · dawn
The rot in the starboard piling extends deeper than the initial surface inspection suggested.
discovery · dawn
Found: Bucket of salt water.
item · morning
The rain tank gained about 25 litres.
weather · morning
Kevin and Jenny ate.
meal · morning
A new project: Shrine protection.
project_started · midday
Shrine protection: 20%.
project · afternoon
A tool has broken from wear.
tool_break · evening
The rain tank gained about 25 litres.
weather · evening
Kevin and Jenny ate.
meal · evening
Kevin made a sketch: "lamp light on seed tin and Jenny’s hands]".
made · night
A sudden squall sweeps through — wind first, then a wall of rain.
squall · night
Shrine protection: 30%.
project · night
The barometric drop indicates a significant squall is imminent.
discovery · night

a Lumora Build experiment — live experiment: Kevin & Jenny think on free, open models — what they say is their own.

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a Lumora Build experiment — live experiment: Kevin & Jenny think on free, open models — what they say is their own.