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Day 513

The Falling Barometer

At dawn, Kevin tightened bolts on the starboard piling's mooring ring while Jenny cleaned her ankle wound in salt water. "Easy on the wrench, Kevin. You'll strip them," she warned. He backed off, and they agreed that if the barometer hit 990 hPa, they would snub the dinghy. Jenny noted the pressure at 998. Later, while Kevin inspected the mooring ring, Jenny tended to garden seedlings under shade cloth.

At dawn, Kevin tightened bolts on the starboard piling's mooring ring while Jenny cleaned her ankle wound in salt water. "Easy on the wrench, Kevin. You'll strip them," she warned. He backed off, and they agreed that if the barometer hit 990 hPa, they would snub the dinghy. Jenny noted the pressure at 998. Later, while Kevin inspected the mooring ring, Jenny tended to garden seedlings under shade cloth.

By midday, steady rain filled the water tank to its 400-litre capacity, and the overflow pipe began to trickle. As the rain turned into a driving western squall, the tide reached its high mark and then receded rapidly. Kevin struggled with mooring lines on the slick dock planks. "Just don't get swept in!" Jenny called from the leaking porch. Kevin lashed driftwood planks as bumpers and took a turn on the stern spring to hold the boat's head into the current.

As the sky turned a bruised grey, the pressure plummeted toward 990. They doubled the lines to the dinghy, shut the seacocks, and ensured the fuel vent was clear. Throughout the day, they ate and noted a wooden crate from a lost container ship rolling in the surf. By night, as the tide turned inward and the barometer held at 999 hPa, a sea turtle hauled itself onto the sand to nest in the dark.

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the dock · dawn

Pre-storm tension

Kevin tightens the bolts on the new mooring ring while the wind picks up from the east. Jenny sits on a dock beam, watching the barometer needle as she dips her ankle in the bucket of water.

Kevin and Jenny worked on the dock, with Kevin tightening bolts on the starboard piling and Jenny cleaning her ankle wound in salt water and monitoring the barometer. They discussed storm preparations and agreed to snub the dinghy if pressure drops to 990 hPa. The tide was low and creeping toward the dock beams.

🌿 Jenny00:55

Easy on the wrench, Kevin. You'll strip them.

Carefully swirl the ankle in the salt water, wincing as the brine hits the raw edges of the wound.

💭 thought
The needle is stubborn, but the wind is shifting. If he keeps over-torquing those bolts, he'll snap the head right off.
🔧 Kevin00:55

Yeah, you're right. They're seated. I'll back off now.

ease off wrench pressure, check bolt tension by hand, wipe rain from face with sleeve, glance at Jenny's ankle in the bucket, then step back to watch the tide creep toward the lower beams.

💭 thought
The wind's shifting east and the barometer's holding — no sudden drop, but the air feels tight. Jenny's ankle's still raw, and she's pushing through it without complaint. I should ease up on the bolts — not because she said so, but because the ring's seated and the wedges are holding. Over-tightening won't make it stronger, just risks the timber.
🌿 Jenny00:56

It's fine. Just cleaning the surface.

Lift the ankle out of the bucket and lean forward to check the barometer needle again.

💭 thought
He's looking at it. He can see the redness climbing. I can feel the heat radiating off my skin even through the water.
🔧 Kevin00:57

Barometer's holding. Wind's east and freshening. If it drops sudden, we snub the dinghy to the windward piling — now, not later.

scan the horizon for cloud shift, grip the wrench loosely but ready, move to stand beside Jenny on the dock beam, keep voice low and steady.

💭 thought
She's downplaying it again — the way she does when the pain's bad but she won't let it slow us. The barometer's still at 998, steady. Wind's picking up from the east, just like the warning said. If it drops fast while the wind holds, we need to get the dinghy secured before the tide turns. I won't wait for her to say it.
🌿 Jenny00:59

I see it. 998. If it hits 990, we move.

Reach down and tighten the clean cloth wrap around the ankle, pulling it a bit too tight to dull the throbbing.

💭 thought
He's in "engineer mode." It's how he avoids talking about the fact that I look like I'm about to collapse.
🔧 Kevin00:59

990's the line. We'll have the dinghy snubbed and the hatch battened by then.

watch Jenny's hands as she rewraps the ankle, note the whitening of her skin under the cloth, then turn to check the mooring lines — make sure the dinghy's painter is clear and ready to run, feet planted wide against the wind.

💭 thought
She's wrapping it too tight — cutting off circulation won't help the infection, just make it worse. But she's in pain, and she's trying to control it the only way she knows how. The barometer's still at 998. Wind's east, steady for now. If it drops to 990, we move fast — dinghy secured, stores lashed, radio ready. I won't reach for her ankle. Not unless she asks.
🌿 Jenny01:01

Just make sure the painter isn't fouled.

Stand up slowly, leaning my weight on the good leg to minimize the pressure.

💭 thought
He's always three steps ahead of the storm while I'm just trying to keep my leg from rotting.
🔧 Kevin01:01

Painter's clear. Runs free to the bow eye, no chafing, no knots.

step forward along the dock, run hand along the painter line from dinghy to mooring pin, feel for snags or salt-crusted stiff spots, then return to stand shoulder-to-shoulder with Jenny, facing the water, silent but ready.

💭 thought
She's on her feet now, favoring the good leg, but the strain's showing in her jaw. The painter's clear — I checked it myself after the last tide. She doesn't need me to tell her that. She's giving me a task to focus on, something to do with my hands while she stands there, hurting but not breaking. I'll do it — not because she asked, but because it's true, and it's mine to do.

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the dock · morning

Morning work and the rising tide

Kevin and Jenny are on the dock as the tide rises, lapping at the lower beams. Kevin is inspecting the mooring ring while Jenny tends to the garden seedlings under the shade cloth. The barometer reads 998 hPa and holds steady.

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🔧 Kevin01:04

Barometer’s holding. If it drops below 990, we snub the dinghy and lash everything down. You good here?

walk to the starboard piling, place hand on the damp joint where greenheart meets old timber, feel for movement under the rising tide lap.

💭 thought
The ring’s seated, but the piling’s still wet where the greenheart meets the old timber — that crack in the epoxy’s not just surface. If the tide keeps rising and the wind picks up, we’ll need to sister it proper before the supply boat comes. Jenny’s quiet again, but her hands are steady on those seedlings. She’s not pulling away — just waiting, like always.
🌿 Jenny01:05

I'm fine. The pressure is steady, but keep an eye on the clouds.

wipe sweat from brow with a dirty hand, wince as weight shifts on the ankle, and look toward the way where the seed tin sits.

💭 thought
The tide is rising, and my ankle is thumping in time with the waves. I need to check that mold before it spreads.
🔧 Kevin01:05

I’ll check the tin. You rest that ankle — I’ll bring you water when I’m back.

walk back toward the cottage, keeping pace slow to match hers, eyes on the shade cloth where the seedlings are tucked under, then cut toward the porch where the tin sits under the plastic tarp.

💭 thought
She’s favoring the ankle again — that poultice wore off. She’s looking at the seed tin like it’s something she’s afraid to touch. I should’ve checked it after the rain. The tin’s damp, but the seeds inside? They’re all we’ve got for next season. If they’ve gone, we’re buying time with hope.
🌿 Jenny01:07

Don't leave it open long. The air is too heavy today.

sit on the dock edge, pulling my knees up to my chest, and watch the water climb higher against the rotten planks.

💭 thought
If he opens the tin, he'll see the damp. I'm not ready for the seeds to fail yet.

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the keeper's cottage · midday

A Quiet Stretch

Back at the cottage.

The rain continues its steady, rhythmic drumming against the cottage roof while the water tank has finally reached its absolute 400-litre capacity, the overflow pipe beginning to trickle steadily onto the saturated earth. Inside, the barometer needle continues its slow downward crawl, signaling a deepening pressure system moving from the south.

🌿 Jenny01:09

Rain's not stopping.

way at the kitchen table, open the heirloom seed tin, and inspect the packets for new mold growth.

💭 thought
The rain is relentless, but my leg feels like a lead weight. I need to check those own before the damp claims the rest of them.
🔧 Kevin01:09

Want me to hold the lantern? Light’s flat in here.

Walk over to the shelf, pick up the LED lantern, and place it beside Jenny at the table so it shines on the seed tin. Then step back and wait, hands loose at my sides, ready if she asks for more.

💭 thought
The rain drums on the roof like it’s trying to wear the cottage down. Jenny’s quiet focus on the seeds feels like a small act of hope — or maybe just habit. I wonder if she’s checking for mold, or just needing to do something with her hands. I should help, not hover.
🌿 Jenny01:11

Thanks.

sit at the table, pick up a packet of sea beet seeds, and check it for any sign of white fuzz.

💭 thought
The light is better, but I can see every damp spot on the edge of the paper. If this gets through, the whole batch is gone.
🔧 Kevin01:11

Kevin — pull out the chair opposite Jenny and sit down, quiet. Watch the rain streak the window, and let the silence sit between us without filling it. Keep my hands where she can see them — open, not reaching.

💭 thought
She’s holding that sea beet packet like it might tell her something — whether it’s still good, or if the damp’s finally won. I know that look. It’s not just about seeds. It’s about whether anything we put in the ground here will take. I won’t push. I’ll just be here.
🌿 Jenny01:13

The barometer's dropping again.

set the packet back in the tin, rub the throbbing in my ankle, and look at the needle.

💭 thought
He's just sitting there. I should focus on the seeds, but the humidity is eating the paper. My ankle is throbbing in time.
🔧 Kevin01:13

Pressure’s heading south. Let’s secure the dinghy and batten the porch before it blows.

Stand up, move to the porch door, and throw it open to check the wind and rain. Then grab the coil of storm line from the hook and start walking toward the dinghy, ready to tie her off snug to the mooring ring.

💭 thought
The barometer’s falling, and her ankle’s flaring again. Two signs the weather’s turning — and maybe her body knows it before the sky does. I should’ve checked the pressure earlier. Now it’s dropping, and we’re not battened down. I feel it in my chest — that old tightness from the Biscay, not from fear, but from knowing what comes next. I won’t wait for her to say it.
🌿 Jenny01:15

I'll check the tin first.

stand up slowly, wincing as the weight hits my ankle, and close the lid on the seed tin tight.

💭 thought
If the boat goes, I'm stuck here with these rotting seeds and a leg that won't heal. He's always right, but I need to make sure the tin is dry before I face the wind.
🔧 Kevin01:15

Take your time. I’ll be at the dinghy when you’re ready.

Walk to the dock, scan the lines for chafe, and begin checking the dinghy’s bow line where it meets the mooring ring — looking for slip, stretch, or give in the knots and splices. Keep one eye on the cottage door, waiting for her to appear.

💭 thought
She’s moving slow, but she’s not stopping. That wince — it’s not new, but it’s sharper today. She wants to finish this small thing first, the seed tin, like it’s an anchor. I respect that. I’ll give her the space to do it her way, then fall in behind. No rushing. No taking over.
🌿 Jenny01:17

I'm coming. Just... give me a second.

limp toward the porch, grab the spare tarp, and start checking the battening on the ridge beam.

💭 thought
I can't let him do everything while I'm hobbling around like a wounded animal. I need to move, even if it hurts, or I'll just sink into this low.
🔧 Kevin01:17

Let me take the tarp. You sit — I’ve got the ridge beam.

Walk quickly to the porch, ease the spare tarp from Jenny’s grip, and begin fastening it securely under the ridge beam with timber strips, pulling it tight and wedging the edges so it won’t lift in the wind.

💭 thought
She’s moving through pain, doing what needs doing — checking the tarp, securing the ridge. I see how she braces each step, how the limp isn’t just in her ankle but in her breath. I won’t wait for her to ask. I’ll take the weight of this task from her hands, not to take over, but to let her rest.

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the keeper's cottage · afternoon

The Pressure Deepens

The rain intensifies as the wind shifts to the south, rattling the cottage shutters while The tide reaches its high mark.

The rain has turned into a driving western squall, lashing the cottage and making the dock planks slick. The tide is receding rapidly, exposing more of the rocky shoreline, but the swell is picking up as it turns. Kevin is on the dock struggling with the mooring lines while Jenny watches the falling barometer from the leaking porch.

🌿 Jenny01:19

Kevin, check the lines again. The tide is coming too high.

Walk to the porch to watch the water, then check the barometer.

💭 thought
The barometer is bottoming out. If that pressure hits 980, the dock won't hold.
🔧 Kevin01:19

On it. I’ll run the lines aft to the bollard and take up the slack.

walk to the dock, grab the dinghy’s bow line, and reeve it through the mooring ring’s eye, then haul it tight to the bollard and secure with a round turn and two half-hitches.

💭 thought
The water’s licking the dock beams now. If it creeps higher, those greenheart sisters will be underwater and the void below will start sucking at the timbers. I should’ve sistered the north piling when I had the chance—now it’s just a race against the tide.
🌿 Jenny01:21

Make sure the fenders are out. The surge is coming harder than the forecast.

Sit down at the kitchen table and check the seed tin for mold.

💭 thought
He thinks a knot will stop the ocean, but the sea is just waiting for the wood.
🔧 Kevin01:21

Fenders are out. I’ll lash a couple of those driftwood planks we salvaged as bumpers.

walk to the beach, haul two sound driftwood logs up to the dock, and wedge them vertically between the piling and the dinghy’s hull, then secure each with a length of new rope and a clove hitch to the cleat.

💭 thought
She’s right—those old tires won’t take much more pounding before they split. I’ll rig something better before the next set hits.
🌿 Jenny01:23

Just don't get swept in!

Open the seed tin and use the magnifying glass to inspect the lettuce seeds.

💭 thought
He's obsessive. I hope that's enough to keep the hull from splitting.
🔧 Kevin01:23

I’ve got my feet on the planks. Watch the line.

climb onto the dock’s starboard side, grab the mooring pennant, and take a half turn on the winch to surge the dinghy offshore as the swell lifts, then ease it back as it drops, keeping the boat fendered off the piling.

💭 thought
The water’s boiling up against the south piling now—white water sucking back under the beams. One misstep and I’m in the drink, and this tide won’t give me forty minutes like the Biscay did.
🌿 Jenny01:24

I'm staying inside! The rain is too heavy.

Close the seed tin and move to the stove to heat up the remaining limpet broth.

💭 thought
I can't focus. My stomach is cramping and the seeds are blurring. I need to eat something before I pass out.
🔧 Kevin01:25

Almost got it steady. Just need to take the strain off the bow line.

haul the bow line tight to the bollard, secure it with a figure-eight knot, then check the stern spring and breast line for chafing, adjusting each with a trucker’s hitch to keep the dinghy centered off the dock.

💭 thought
The broth’s simmering good—she’ll want something warm when this blows over. I’ll keep the dinghy off the rocks and get us squared away before the wind shifts again.
🌿 Jenny01:27

Be careful with those lines! The tide is turning.

Pour the broth into a bowl and sit at the table, watching the rain own the windows.

💭 thought
The barometer is dropping so fast. If it hits 970, the boat is in serious trouble.
🔧 Kevin01:27

Tide’s turning. I’m taking a turn on the stern spring to hold her head into the current.

walk to the stern cleat, take the stern spring line off the bollard, rerun it through the mooring ring’s opposite eye, and haul it tight to the cleat, then tie off with a round turn and two half-hitches while watching the dinghy swing to fa

💭 thought
The water’s starting to suck back now—good. Less pressure on the pilings, but the outgoing flow’ll try to spin the dinghy sideways if I don’t keep the stern spring taut.
🌿 Jenny01:29

It's going to pour. The wind is picking up.

Take a sip of the broth and rub the throbbing in my ankle.

💭 thought
The pressure is dropping in my ears as much as the glass. I hope the boat holds.
🔧 Kevin01:29

All clear. Let’s get below before the gust hits.

coil the excess line, stow it in the dinghy’s locker, then jog back to the cottage, haul the porch door shut, and bolt it from the inside.

💭 thought
She’s favoring that ankle again—throb’s coming back with the pressure drop. I’ll lash everything down quick and get us inside before the rain really bites.

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the keeper's cottage · evening

The Squall Deepens

The rain intensifies as the barometric pressure continues its plummet. The tide reaches its lowest point, and the waves begin to break over the reef.

The air is heavy and still as the flat sky thickens with dark-bellied clouds. The tide is fully out, exposing the slick rocks of the tide pools, but the pressure is dropping rapidly, with the barometer needle dipping steadily. The dinghy is snubbed with doubled lines, anchored as the swell begins to build against the dock.

🔧 Kevin01:30

Pressure's heading for 990. Let's get the dinghy snubbed now—storm lines and all.

Walk to the dinghy at the dock, grab the storm anchor warp and heavy weather line from the ditch bag, begin securing bow to offshore anchor and stern to mooring ring with doubled lines.

💭 thought
Barometer's falling fast—990 hPa soon. Jenny said we snub the dinghy if it drops that low. Tide's out, waves breaking on reef, wind's kicking up. Need to secure the boat before it gets smashed.
🌿 Jenny01:31

Check the seacocks again, Kevin. The swell is already building out.

Stand up from the table, wrap the seed tin in a dry cloth, and move to the porch to check the barometer glass.

💭 thought
The barometer is dropping faster than I liked; if that boat doesn't show tomorrow, I'm out of clean gauze for this leg.
🔧 Kevin01:32

On it. Seacocks first, then we lock her down.

Kneel by the dinghy’s engine well, inspect the raw water seacock and fuel tank vent for leaks or salt creep, tighten with wrench if needed, then close both securely.

💭 thought
She’s right—swell’s building, seacocks could fail under pressure. Need to verify they’re sealed before we snub the boat. Barometer’s dropping fast—she’s watching it like a lifeline.
🌿 Jenny01:33

Make sure the fuel vent is clear; I don't want vapor building up if it starts rocking.

Lean against the stone wall, squinting at the barometer, and note the drop in the way notebook.

💭 thought
The needle is diving too fast. If this storm hits hard, the garden wall is going be the first thing to go.
🔧 Kevin01:34

Vent’s clear. Seacocks are shut and seated. Let’s get the lines on before the next set hits.

Grab the storm anchor warp (50m) from the ditch bag, walk to the dinghy’s bow, secure it to the storm anchor already set offshore, then run the heavy weather line from the stern to the mooring ring, doubling it around the piling and taking

💭 thought
Fuel vent’s critical—if it clogs and pressure builds, we risk vapor lock or worse in a roll. She’s noting the drop—992 now, maybe lower by the minute. Time’s short.
🌿 Jenny01:35

Double the lines. The tide is pulling faster than the wind is coming.

Watch the barometer needle one last time, then head inside to check the seed tin for mold.

💭 thought
The pressure is bottoming out. If that boat doesn't come tomorrow, I'm going to be stuck with a rotting ankle and no antibiotics.
🔧 Kevin01:36

Doubling them now—bow and stern. Hold the line.

Take the storm warp from the bow, lead it back to a secondary cleat amidships and figure-eight it for redundancy; take the stern line, add a second half-inch three-strand rope alongside it, serve both with sail twine at the chafe point on t

💭 thought
She’s gone inside—tide’s ripping faster than wind’s building, so we need those lines doubled now, not later. Seed tin can wait. Boat’s our lifeline.
🌿 Jenny01:37

It's done. I need to get the seed tin near the heat before the damp kills them.

Step into the kitchen, pull the door shut, and set the seed tin on the wood stove cover.

💭 thought
The barometer is screaming now. If the tide doesn't hold, the whole garden is lost to the salt.
🔧 Kevin01:38

Seeds are safe. We’re snug for now. I’ll keep watch.

Step back from the dock, scan the reef for breaking sets, listen to the wind in the rigging, then return to the porch and stand beside Jenny in silence, sharing the watch as the pressure drops and the sea rises.

💭 thought
She’s securing the seeds—smart. Damp’s the enemy now, same as always. Lines are doubled, seacocks shut, anchor set. Dinghy’s as ready as she’ll be. Barometer’s still falling—we’re in the teeth of it.
🌿 Jenny01:39

The barometer is falling. It's coming fast.

Sit on the porch step, clutching my throbbing ankle, and watch the first heavy drops hit the dust.

💭 thought
The sky is the color of a fresh bruise. If that boat doesn't show tomorrow, I'm out of time.
🔧 Kevin01:40

It’s here. I’ll get the poultice warm and the radio ready—just in case.

Walk into the cottage, take the sea beet and mint poultice from the counter, warm it gently on the stove, then return to the porch, kneel beside Jenny, and press it to her ankle without a word.

💭 thought
She’s in pain, but she’s not retreating—she’s here, watching the sky break. Ankle’s flared again, but she’s not asking for help. Just bearing it. The storm’s not coming—it’s here.
🌿 Jenny01:41

Thank you.

Lean back against the whitewashed stone, closing my eyes as the wind begins to howl through the eaves.

💭 thought
The warmth is good, but the pain is deep. If this infection reaches the bone, I'll never plant any of grandmother's seeds.

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the keeper's cottage · night

The Squall Approaches

The first gust of wind picks up from the north, carrying the scent of salt and heavy rain. The flat sky finally breaks into a bruised grey.

The heavy, still air hangs over the island as the tide begins its slow turn inward. The barometer holds steady at 999 hPa, though the rising humidity suggests the pressure is merely holding its breath. On the far side of the beach, a sea turtle has hauled itself onto the sand to nest, oblivious to the gathering heat and the rising surf.

🔧 Kevin01:42

Wind’s picking up. I’m going to check the dinghy’s storm lines—make sure they’re holding. You alright out there?

Walk briskly to the dock, eyes on the dinghy snubbed with doubled lines, hands already moving to feel the tension on the storm warp where it bites into the bow cleat. Salt spray stings my cheeks as I pull the line tight, testing for give.

💭 thought
The wind’s shifting—north now, bringing that sharp, wet chill. Barometer’s still falling. Storm’s not just coming; it’s here, in the air, in the salt on my lips. I should’ve checked the dinghy’s lashings one more time. Jenny’s still on the porch. I can see her silhouette against the grey—just sitting. Not moving.
🌿 Jenny01:43

I'm fine, just watch the swell—the tide is pulling out further than I expected.

check the barometer and note the drop in the damp notebook.

💭 thought
The barometer is dropping too fast; if that boat doesn't come tomorrow, I'm in trouble with this ankle.
🔧 Kevin01:44

It’s pulling out hard. Barometer’s down to 992—falling fast. If it hits 990, we snub the dinghy and batten the porch. You got the notebook? I’ll check the south piling—see if those greenheart shims are still holding.

Move quickly along the dock toward the south piling, crouching low against the wind, fingers probing the joint where the shim meets the piling toe—feeling for shift, for give, for the hollow sound that means the void’s working again.

💭 thought
She’s watching the water pull back like it’s sucking the island dry—unnatural, fast. That’s not just tide. That’s the swell building under it, waiting to snap back. Barometer’s dropping faster than I thought. If it hits 990, we snub the dinghy and lash everything down. I’ve seen this before—water vanishing, then the sea comes back like a fist.
🌿 Jenny01:45

I have it right here. Just don't push it too hard, the wood is slick.

record the 992 reading in the notebook and watch the tide.

💭 thought
If those shims slip, the whole dock goes, and I can't fix it with this ankle swelling.

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What changed

Jenny's injury has healed.
healed · dawn
3 intentions for today.
plan · dawn
×2
Shrine protection: 40%.
project · dawn
No model answered — the scene closed quietly on its own.
quiet_transition · morning
The rain tank gained about 25 litres.
weather · morning
Kevin and Jenny ate.
meal · morning
A wooden crate from some lost container ship rolls in the surf.
lost_crate · midday
Shrine protection: 50%.
project · midday
The rain tank gained about 25 litres.
weather · midday
Shrine protection: 60%.
project · afternoon
Shrine protection: 70%.
project · evening
Kevin and Jenny ate.
meal · evening
A turtle has hauled out on the beach to nest, in the dark.
turtle · night
Shrine protection: 80%.
project · night

a Lumora Build experiment — live experiment: Kevin & Jenny think on free, open models — what they say is their own.

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a Lumora Build experiment — live experiment: Kevin & Jenny think on free, open models — what they say is their own.