Day 517
Tide and Tension
Kevin knelt by the dock at dawn, checking the mooring ring as the tide retreated. Jenny sat on the bench, wrapping her ankle in clean gauze while watching the water pull away from the pilings. The wood below was slick and barnacle-covered. Kevin pried at a sagging plank in the shallows, then lifted the joist with a crowbar to slide a scrap brace underneath. Jenny tried to help but her ankle throbbed too sharply; she stepped back as Kevin bore the weight alone. By midday, he prepared to replace the temporary brace with a permanent fix, though no record exists of that work. Back at the cottage in the afternoon, heavy rain lashed the walls. Kevin readied limpets for supper while Jenny struggled to debride her infected ankle, the pain making the task difficult. They ate salted shellfish by the stove as the rain intensified, drumming on the roof. Outside, the low tide exposed southern pools, but wind and spray made the shore treacherous. That night, the wind howled through the radio mast, the barometer dropped, and the reef flats lay slick and exposed. They stayed inside, waiting for the turn.
Kevin knelt by the dock at dawn, checking the mooring ring as the tide retreated. Jenny sat on the bench, wrapping her ankle in clean gauze while watching the water pull away from the pilings. The wood below was slick and barnacle-covered. Kevin pried at a sagging plank in the shallows, then lifted the joist with a crowbar to slide a scrap brace underneath. Jenny tried to help but her ankle throbbed too sharply; she stepped back as Kevin bore the weight alone. By midday, he prepared to replace the temporary brace with a permanent fix, though no record exists of that work. Back at the cottage in the afternoon, heavy rain lashed the walls. Kevin readied limpets for supper while Jenny struggled to debride her infected ankle, the pain making the task difficult. They ate salted shellfish by the stove as the rain intensified, drumming on the roof. Outside, the low tide exposed southern pools, but wind and spray made the shore treacherous. That night, the wind howled through the radio mast, the barometer dropped, and the reef flats lay slick and exposed. They stayed inside, waiting for the turn.
Scenes
the dock · dawnMorning tide inspection
Kevin kneels by the dock, checking the tension of the mooring ring as the tide retreats. Jenny sits on a bench, wrapping her ankle in clean gauze while watching the water pull away from the pilings.
The tide is receding rapidly, exposing the slick, barnacle-covered wood of the dock's lower structure. Kevin is crouched in the shallow water, prying at a plank while Jenny watches, shifting her weight to manage the throbbing in her swollen ankle.
The tide is dropping fast today. Check the rot on the lower planks.
Tightens the bandage on her ankle and winces at the throbbing heat.
💭 thought
Aye. Lower planks first—then I’ll sister the sill before the flood comes back.
kneel and pry up the rotten dock plank with the crowbar, feeling for solid timber underneath.
💭 thought
Watch out for the sill. If that's soft, the whole jetty goes in next storm.
Picks up her notebook and begins to sketch the grain pattern of the exposed wood.
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Sill’s shot. I’ll sister it with greenheart offcuts—bolt it through and let the tide seat it.
lift the exposed sill slightly with the crowbar and slide a greenheart sister plank into place, aligning it with the bolt holes.
💭 thought
Don't just drive them in. Check the void underneath first or you're just bridging air.
Leans forward, squinting at the gap between the greenheart and the original beam.
💭 thought
Void’s scoured out under here. Gotta pack it before I bolt, or we’re just spanning air.
reach into the gap and feel the depth of the void with my fingers, then pull out a cedar wedge and tap it in where the sill sags lowest.
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the dock · morningThe rising tide
Kevin reaches for the cedar wedges to pack the gap in the sill while the first fingers of the returning tide lap at the pilings.
Kevin used the crowbar to lift the sagging dock joist just enough to slide a piece of scrap wood underneath as a brace. Jenny attempted to help but the pain in her ankle was too sharp, forcing her to step back while Kevin took the weight of the structure onto himself to stabilize it.
Wait. Check the gap first.
Lean forward, wincing as the ankle pulses, and point to the alignment of the sill.
💭 thought
Yeah. Let me look.
Kneel down and run my hand along the underside of the sill, feeling for high spots and gaps where the tide’s been working it loose. Check if the joist’s still bearing or if it’s hanging in air.
💭 thought
It's unsupported. We need to shim it before we wedge it.
Reach into the tool bag and pull out a flat piece of scrap wood.
💭 thought
Hand me the crowbar. I’ll lift it slow.
Take the crowbar from Jenny, place the heel against the piling just beside the gap, and use the sill as a lever to raise the joist a fraction—enough to slide the scrap wood underneath as a temporary shim.
💭 thought
That's a brace, not a fix.
Watch the shim settle under the weight, feeling the throb in my ankle sync with the movement.
💭 thought
It’s holding for now. I’ll cut the sister while you keep the weight off it.
Keep steady pressure on the crowbar to maintain the lift, then reach for the greenheart offcut and the saw to measure and begin cutting the sister plank to span the gap and land solid on both pilings.
💭 thought
I'm not a structural support, Kevin.
Shift weight back onto the healthy leg and lean against the piling, keeping a cautious distance from the crowbar.
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Sorry. I’ll brace it myself.
Shift my weight onto the crowbar handle, using the piling as a fulcrum to hold the joist lifted, then signal Jenny to step back and rest her leg on the dry sand above the tide line.
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the dock · middayMidday Heat at the Pilings
The sun is high and the tide has begun its slow turn inward, licking the lower bolts of the dock. Kevin has finished cutting the plank and is ready to swap the temporary brace for the permanent fix.
No narrator was available, so nothing about this stretch was recorded.
Slow down. The tide is already coming back in; you're losing your footing.
lean back on the sand, clutching the notebook to my chest.
💭 thought
You're right. I'll wait for the turn. Hand me that cedar wedge—I'll set it now so it's ready when the water drops.
reach for the cedar wedge and slide it into the mooring ring mortise, tapping it gently with the mallet to seat it snug against the steel doubler plate and bolt heads.
💭 thought
Here. Don't hammer it too hard, you'll just split the remaining grain.
hand him the way wedge and watch the water creep toward the jetty.
💭 thought
Just seating it. Not driving. Like you said—let the tide do the work.
tap the cedar wedge once with the mallet, just enough to settle it flush, then step back and watch the water lap at the dock's edge, listening for the shift in the pilings.
💭 thought
If that shifts, the whole jetty goes with it. Check the tension again.
wipe the salt from the notebook cover and rub the throbbing in my ankle.
💭 thought
Got it. Let's check the tension.
take the wire tension meter (or a simple plumb line) and measure the gap between the dock beam and the pilings at the wedge. Record the reading in the notebook: "Wedge settled, tension 1.2 mm" (or similar).
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the keeper's cottage · afternoonA Quiet Stretch
Back at the cottage.
Kevin and Jenny work inside the cottage as heavy rain lashes against the walls. Kevin prepares to gut the limpets for a meal while Jenny attempts to debride the infection on her ankle, though the pain and swelling make the task difficult.
I’m going in to get the limpets cleaned. You coming?
walk into the cottage, shake rain off my jacket, and hang it on the hook by the door.
💭 thought
I'm staying here. My leg is throbbing.
Sit on the kitchen chair, lift my ankle onto the table, and reach for the tweezers and saline.
💭 thought
Let me do it. I’ve got the antiseptic cream and clean gauze. You’re shaking.
walk slowly to the table, stop just behind her chair, and hold out the small tin of antibiotic cream and a fresh gauze pad without touching her.
💭 thought
fine. just... hold the light.
Take the tin and gauze with a trembling hand and begin to peel the old bandage away from the infection.
💭 thought
I’ve got the light. Steady as I can make it.
adjust the LED lamp on the table so it shines directly on her ankle, then stand still, hands at my sides, watching her hands work.
💭 thought
Don't just stare. Tell me if the edges look more red than they did this morning.
Dip the tweezers into the saline and carefully begin to pick away the necrotic tissue from the center of the wound.
💭 thought
It’s angrier. Red’s gone past the old line — looks like it’s tracking up the vein. You need to keep going. I’ll hold the light.
lean in slightly, not touching, and point with my chin at the spreading redness along her inner calf, then return my focus to holding the lamp steady.
💭 thought
I see it. Just don't move the light.
hiss through my teeth as I press the tweezers into the wound, focusing on the edge of the infection.
💭 thought
I’m not moving it. You’re doing good. Keep going.
keep the LED lamp locked in place with both hands on the base, elbows braced on the table, eyes fixed on the wound as she works, silent except for my breathing.
💭 thought
It's deep.
Use the gauze to dab away the blood and look at the tissue under the light.
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the keeper's cottage · eveningEvening Meal and Assessment
The rain has slowed to a drizzle as Kevin and Jenny gather around the stove to eat, the smell of salted shellfish filling the small room.
The rain has turned into a heavy driving lashing, drumming against the cottage roof. Outside, the low tide is receding rapidly, exposing the slick rocks of the southern pools, though the wind and spray make movement along the shore treacherous.
Kevin — eat limpets from plate, chew slowly, watch Jenny from corner of eye
💭 thought
I'm fine, Kevin. Just eat.
Push the plate of limpets toward him, flinching slightly as the bandage rubs against the swollen skin.
💭 thought
Alright.
take plate Jenny pushed, set it in front of me, eat limpets without looking up, jaw tight, listening to the rain on the roof
💭 thought
The tide is out far enough. I should check the traps tomorrow.
Reach for the notebook, flipping to a clean page to sketch the sea beet salt Analysis I found earlier.
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Kevin — wipe mouth with back of hand, stand slowly, take empty plates to sink, rinse them in seawater bucket without speaking, leave them to drain on counter, return to chair but don’t sit—just lean against wall, arms crossed, watching her sketch i
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the keeper's cottage · nightShelter from the Storm
The two stay inside the small cottage as the wind howls through the radio mast, waiting for the tide to turn.
The wind has picked up, whistling through the eaves of the cottage. The sky is a heavy, uniform grey, and the pressure on the barometer is dipping steadily into the low. The tide is at its lowest, leaving the reef flats slick, but the salt air carries the sharp scent of a coming storm.
The barometer’s dropping fast. Storm’s coming in harder than the forecast said. I’ll batten the porch shutters after we eat — if you can hold the hammer, I’ll pass you the nails.
Stir the limpet broth on the stove, then ladle two portions into tin mugs and set one beside Jenny on the porch bench, the other in front of me at the table. I don’t look at her. I just eat, slow, letting the heat settle in my chest.
💭 thought
I'll do the shutters when I can stand without shaking.
Take a sip of the hot broth, wincing as the movement sends a spike of heat through my ankle.
💭 thought
Don’t stand. I’ll do the shutters alone. You rest. Keep the broth warm — it’s doing more good than you know.
Push back from the table, wipe my mouth with the back of my hand, and pull on my oilskin jacket. I grab the hammer and a coil of tarred line from the shelf, then step into the wind howling through the cottage’s eaves.
💭 thought
way don't let the wind catch the latch.
Watch him go, then lean back in the chair, clutching the warm mug to num the pain in my ankle.
💭 thought
(I don’t turn back. My voice is low, caught in the wind.) Latch is secured with the spare line — figure-eight knot, double-check. It’ll hold.
I move fast along the porch, nailing the shutters shut with three nails each — top, middle, bottom — driving them deep into the window frame, not just the rotting sill. The wood’s soft in places, but I hit the sounder grain beneath.
💭 thought
way come in before the tide turns.
Watch his silhouette against the grey sky, then focus on the throbbing in my ankle.
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What changed
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