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Day 700

Final Test and Rising Fever

Dawn found Kevin and Jenny on the dock as the tide crept toward the pilings. Jenny's ankle was wrapped in gauze, her face pale and slick with sweat. Kevin ran the Yanmar at high load, the engine ticking as it cooled, diesel smell heavy in the still air. "Don't push it too hard, Kevin. The vibration is already shaking the bolts loose." "Running it at load's the only way to know. If she shakes loose, I'd rather find out here than with a crate of diesel swinging over the gunwale." "Just watch the temperature. If it smokes, I don't have the energy to fix it again." "Temp's steady. Oil pressure clean. No smoke." "Shut it down now. We've seen enough of it for one morning." "I'll give you a break. Just a quick run to 90% and I'll pull it back."

Dawn found Kevin and Jenny on the dock as the tide crept toward the pilings. Jenny's ankle was wrapped in gauze, her face pale and slick with sweat. Kevin ran the Yanmar at high load, the engine ticking as it cooled, diesel smell heavy in the still air. "Don't push it too hard, Kevin. The vibration is already shaking the bolts loose." "Running it at load's the only way to know. If she shakes loose, I'd rather find out here than with a crate of diesel swinging over the gunwale." "Just watch the temperature. If it smokes, I don't have the energy to fix it again." "Temp's steady. Oil pressure clean. No smoke." "Shut it down now. We've seen enough of it for one morning." "I'll give you a break. Just a quick run to 90% and I'll pull it back."

By midday the tide rose faster than charts predicted. Jenny shivered violently, fever at 38.8°C. Kevin moved the dinghy higher, doubled the stern spring, and brought her inside. Broth steamed in a tin. "Kevin... the dinghy. Move it higher. Now." "On it." "Check the lines again. The wind is picking." "Lines are holding. Just doubling the stern spring now." "Come inside. I can't... I can't stay out here." "Come on. Arm over my shoulder."

Evening brought a dropping barometer — 1009 and falling. The supply boat frequency was dead. Jenny's fever held. A tree had fallen across the path; driftwood tangled the beach. "Is the radio... still just static?" "Quiet since noon. Spanish boat called twice, no answer. Supply boat frequency dead. Trust frequency dead. Barometer's 1009 and falling." "It always drops before something." "Could be a front. Could be nothing. Dock's sound, dinghy's tied hard, shutters battened. We've rode out worse in this cottage."

Kevin secured the west shutter, though a small leak persisted. He checked the water tank at dusk. Jenny gripped the warm broth tin, her sketchbook open beside her — a profile drawn with a shaking hand. The sky turned the wrong color to the northeast.

Scenes

the dock · dawn

The Final Load Test

Kevin and Jenny sit on the dock planks as the tide begins to creep back toward the pilings. Jenny rests her ankle, wrapped in gauze, while Kevin prepares the Yanmar engine for one final stress test.

The morning air is heavy and still, the overcast sky pressing down on the dock. The Yanmar engine ticks as it cools from the high-load test, the smell of diesel lingering in the salt air. Jenny sits on a bench, her face pale and slick with sweat as she watches her throbbing ankle, the fever radiating through her skin.

🌿 Jenny06:47

Don't push it too hard, Kevin. The vibration is already shaking the bolts loose.

Jenny wipes sweat from her forehead with a shaky hand and watches the water lap the rotten wood.

💭 thought
If that engine fails now, I'm stuck on this rock with a fever and a leg that's rotting.
🔧 Kevin06:48

Running it at load's the only way to know. If she shakes loose, I'd rather find out here than with a crate of diesel swinging over the gunwale.

check Yanmar mount bolts, torque to spec, then start engine and bring to three-quarter throttle under load

💭 thought
She's not wrong — the vibration at half-throttle has been walking the mount bolts. But the injector seal held, the pump seal held, and if I don't run it at load now I won't know if it'll hold when the supply boat crane swings a pallet aboard. Three days out. I need certainty more than I need quiet bolts.
🌿 Jenny06:49

Just watch the temperature. If it smokes, I don't have the energy to fix it again.

Jenny flinches as the engine roars, gripping her driftwood cane against the timber.

💭 thought
The vibration is travelling through the dock and right into my bone.
🔧 Kevin06:50

Temp's steady. Oil pressure clean. No smoke.

watch temperature gauge and exhaust while Yanmar runs at three-quarter throttle, hand near emergency stop

💭 thought
She's running hot herself — fever, not engine. But she's watching the machine like she always does, reading the sound before the gauges move. The vibration's different this time. Cleaner. The bronze sleeve did its job.
🌿 Jenny06:53

Shut it down now. We've seen enough of it for one morning.

Jenny leans her head back, closing her eyes as the throb in her ankle syncs with the engine's rhythm.

💭 thought
It's holding for now, but the whole dock is rattling my teeth.
🔧 Kevin06:54

I'll give you a break. Just a quick run to 90 % and I'll pull it back.

close throttle, bring engine back to idle, monitor temp and vibration for 15 min before shutting off.

💭 thought
She wants the silence to settle, but I still need to prove the engine, or at least confirm there's no hidden failure. The tent clashes with her pain, but I can't let it stall.

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the dock · morning

Waiting for the tide

The tide is at its lowest point, exposing the barnacle-covered pilings. Kevin begins scouting the north ridge for stable soil while Jenny rests in the shade.

The tide is steadily climbing the lower dock pilings, the water beginning to lap at the newly replaced planks. The wind gusts through the palm fronds, creating a loud rhythmic rattling that drowns out the surf. Jenny sits on the dock bench, shivering despite the 25°C heat, her forehead pressed against a damp cloth.

🌿 Jenny06:55

Be careful on the slope, the shale is still loose.

wipes sweat from her brow with the back of a shaky hand and winces as her leg shifts.

💭 thought
My head is a furnace and this ankle feels like it's being squeezed. If I can't reach the ridge, the seeds will just rot in the tin.
🔧 Kevin06:55

Staying on the ridge. Won't go near the slide zone.

walk up to the north ridge

💭 thought
She's right about the shale. The lower shelves have been sliding since the last squall. I'll stick to the stable ridge line above the erosion mark and work back toward the garden. Her ankle's hot through the bandage — felt it when I changed the dressing at dawn. Fever's not breaking. Three days until the boat. Need to get the stringer bolts tight before the tide turns and the supply crane loads the dock.
🌿 Jenny06:57

Just look for the clay-heavy patches, I need the drainage there.

picks up her sketchbook and begins to sketch the-profile, trying to steady her shaking hand.

💭 thought
He's being cautious about the slide, but the ridge is the only place the soil won't wash away.
🔧 Kevin06:57

Clay patches. I'll mark them with cairns.

walk along the north ridge above the erosion line, scanning for clay-heavy soil and building small stone cairns at each spot

💭 thought
Clay-heavy patches. She's thinking garden drainage while burning up. The north ridge soil held moisture well above the erosion line — noted that in the log. She wants me to find where the water sits so she can plan beds she may not live to plant. Three days. The boat comes in three days. I'll find the clay and mark it proper.
🌿 Jenny06:59

Mark them clearly, I don't want to lose the- in the brush.

presses a damp cloth to her burning forehead, shivering despite the 25°C heat.

💭 thought
If he finds the spots, I might be able to move the tin tomorrow. If the fever would break long enough.
🔧 Kevin06:59

Cairns will hold. White stones on dark soil — you'll see them from the path.

continue marking clay-heavy patches with white stone cairns along the stable ridge line, working methodically toward the garden

💭 thought
She's shaking hard now. Rigors. The metronidazole finished yesterday — maybe the doxycycline isn't touching whatever's in that ankle. Or it's septic. Three days to the boat. I've got four doses of doxycycline left from the buried cache. She needs IV fluids, broad-spectrum, a surgeon. Not sea beet poultices and cairns. But the radio's clear, the boat's confirmed, and I can't make the sea move faster. Mark the clay. Get back. Check her temp again. Force broth.

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the dock · midday

The Rising Tide

The water is now inches from the dock planks. Kevin must decide whether to move gear or secure the boat further.

The tide is rising faster than the lunar charts predicted, threatening to submerge the lower dock. Jenny is brought inside the cottage, shivering violently with a high fever (38.8°C) and a swollen ankle, while Kevin secures the dinghy and prepares a warm broth for her.

🌿 Jenny07:01

Kevin... the dinghy. Move it higher. Now.

Jenny winces as she shifts her weight, clutching her throbbing ankle while watching the water line climb the wood.

💭 thought
If the tide reaches the jetty, the salt will ruin the heirloom seed tin. I can't let it float away.
🔧 Kevin07:01

On it.

Walk to the dinghy, untie the bow line from the forward cleat, pull her up the jetty to the higher ring bolted through the sistered knee, and re-tie with a round turn and two half-hitches. Then double the stern spring to the north piling.

💭 thought
Water's moving faster than I figured. Tide's pushing hard against the swell lag. Dinghy's tied short — if the bow line snaps or the ring pulls, she'll pound the pilings.
🌿 Jenny07:05

Check the lines again. The wind is picking.

Jenny leans back against the rough cottage wall, closing her eyes against the salt-heavy glare.

💭 thought
At least she's high for now, but the tide is coming in fast and my head is spinning.
🔧 Kevin07:05

Lines are holding. Just doubling the stern spring now.

Finish the second stern spring around the north piling, cinch it tight with a rolling hitch so it won't slip, then check the bow line at the sistered knee — add a second half-hitch and take up the slack.

💭 thought
She's right. Gusts are hitting the palms harder. Dinghy's light — windage on the mast and sail canvas will saw the lines if they're slack.
🌿 Jenny07:07

Come inside. I can't... I can't stay out here.

Jenny shivers violently, her hand sliding down to cover the swollen heat of her ankle.

💭 thought
If the boat stays, maybe I can actually get to the north ridge tomorrow. This fever is a physical weight on my chest.
🔧 Kevin07:07

Come on. Arm over my shoulder.

Crouch, slide my arm around her ribs, take her weight on my good side, and walk her up the jetty to the cottage porch. Kick the door open with my boot, guide her to the settee, and lift her legs onto the rolled blanket.

💭 thought
She's burning through the quilts. Fever's driving the shivers. Need to get her horizontal, hydrated, and the ankle elevated before she crashes.
🌿 Jenny07:09

Jenny — jenny lets her head drop against the cushion, breath coming shallow and ragged as the wind rattles the shutters.

💭 thought
The floor is cold, but my skin is on fire. I need to see that ankle before it gets any worse.そもそもSAY: The tin... the seeds. Please.
🔧 Kevin07:09

I'll get you broth. Drink what you can.

Go to the stove, ladle warm limpet broth from the pot into a tin mug, bring it back and hold it to her lips. Then fill the second mug with water from the tank and set it on the floor within reach.

💭 thought
Pulse is fast. Skin's hot to touch. She's burning through fluid she hasn't got. Need broth, water, and the last doxycycline if the metronidazole course is done.
🌿 Jenny07:11

It's too hot. Wait.

Jenny takes a small, shaky sip, her fingers wrapped around the warm metal.

💭 thought
The broth is too salty, but my throat is parched. I can feel the pulse thumping in my ankle.
🔧 Kevin07:11

Take your time.

Set the water mug on the floor beside the settee. Sit on the stool by her feet, carefully unwrap the poultice to check the ankle — look for spreading redness, heat, swelling past the marked line.

💭 thought
She's trying. That's something. Broth's salt and fat — good if she keeps it down. Let her set the pace.

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the keeper's cottage · afternoon

The Rising Tide and the Fever

The steam from the broth fills the small room as Kevin monitors Jenny's temperature. Outside, the water reaches the wood of the lower dock.

Kevin inspects the dock stringers as the tide recedes, tightening loose bolts caused by the recent swell. At the cottage, Jenny struggles through a rising fever while monitoring the radio for the supply boat's approach.

🌿 Jenny07:14

Don't... don't touch the ankle.

Wince as the blanket shifts, shivering despite despite the heat.

💭 thought
My head is a drum and every pulse in this leg is a hammer blow.
🔧 Kevin07:14

Broth's here. Small sips. Keep the fluids moving.

Set the tin mug on the bedside table within her reach, then pull the blanket back carefully from her ankle without disturbing the dressing, checking the wound margins for spreading redness or heat.

💭 thought
Her fever's climbing. The shivering's rigors — body fighting something hard. Ankle's hot to touch even through the blanket. Need to keep her hydrated, keep the antibiotics down, and watch for sepsis signs. Three days to supply boat. If she crashes before then, I'm calling Mayday regardless of what she wants.
🌿 Jenny07:17

I can do it myself.

Reach for the mug with shaking hands, eyes closed against the light.

💭 thought
He thinks he can fix me like that Yanmar engine with a wrench.
🔧 Kevin07:17

Sure. I'm right here.

Stay seated on the edge of the bed, one hand hovering near the mug without touching it, watching her grip. Keep the other hand free to steady the mug if her wrist gives out.

💭 thought
Pride's a poor substitute for strength right now. Hands shaking that bad she'll spill it and burn herself. But she needs to feel some control. I'll let her try, stay close enough to catch it.
🌿 Jenny07:18

Just... be quiet.

Take a small, shaky sip, wincing as the warmth hits my stomach.

💭 thought
The broth is too hot, and the salt is still in my throat.
🔧 Kevin07:18

Kevin — settle back into the chair by the radio, keeping the volume low on the supply boat frequency. Let the silence stretch. Watch the barometer needle — still 1010, steady. Listen to her breathing.

💭 thought
She's hurting bad and doesn't need me narrating it. Quiet's what she asked for. I'll give her that and watch the radio.
🌿 Jenny07:19

Jenny — set the mug back down with a dull thud, my eyes fixed on the throbbing in my ankle.

💭 thought
If the boat doesn't come in four days, I'm out of antibiotics.
🔧 Kevin07:19

Kevin — reach for the thermometer on the shelf without standing, keeping movement slow. Wait for her eyes to close again before sliding the probe under her tongue.

💭 thought
She's fading. The silence isn't rest — it's the fever pulling her under. Need to check her temp again soon. And the ankle. If the red lines have moved past my pen mark from this morning, we're in different territory. Three days to the boat. She might not have three days.
🌿 Jenny07:21

I'm cold.

Shift away from the touch, shivering despite the heat.

💭 thought
The fever is a wall, I can feel it in my marrow.
🔧 Kevin07:21

I know. Thermometer first. Then more blankets.

Gently tuck the thermometer under her tongue anyway, holding it steady with one finger while pulling the spare quilt from the foot of the bed up over her shoulders with the other hand. Watch the digital readout climb.

💭 thought
Rigors again. Temperature's spiking. She's burning up but feels freezing — classic sepsis presentation. Can't wait on this. If her temp's over 39.5, I'm keying the Mayday. Supply boat's three days out. She won't make three days like this.
🌿 Jenny07:23

Stop moving.

Clench my jaw around the thermometer, staring at the whitewashed stone beams.

💭 thought
38.8. I'm burning from the inside out.
🔧 Kevin07:23

Kevin — hold perfectly still, thumb on the thermometer base, eyes on the climbing numbers. Count breaths in my head. Wait for the beep.

💭 thought
She's fighting everything — me, the fever, the thermometer, the fear. Jaw clenched so hard she'll crack a molar. Let the machine do its work. Thirty seconds. Then I'll know.

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the keeper's cottage · evening

Evening check

The sun is setting as Kevin returns to the cottage to bring evening fresh water and check Jenny's temperature.

The air in the cottage is heavy with the heat of the dry season and the scent of drying mint. Jenny lies on the cot, her face flushed with fever as she grips the warm tin of broth. Kevin watches her, noting the steady drop in the barometer; the silence from the radio and the supply boat is only only by the weight of the coming front.

🌿 Jenny07:25

I'm fine. way... put the water down.

pull the sheets up over my chest and squint against the dim light of the doorway.

💭 thought
way head is a furnace and every pulse in this ankle is a hammer blow.
🔧 Kevin07:25

Water's here. Broth too, if you can keep it down.

set the tin mug of fresh water and the warm broth on the small table beside the bed, then pull the stool over and sit down without asking

💭 thought
She's not fine. The fever's still riding her hard — I can see the flush from here, the way her breathing hitches under the sheets. But she'll fight me if I push, and she needs the fluids more than she needs me winning an argument.
🌿 Jenny07:28

I'm not hungry. just... hot.

reach out a shaky hand toward the mug, feeling the warmth radiate from the tin.

💭 thought
he looks like he wants to say something but I just want the world to stop.
🔧 Kevin07:28

Drink the broth. Small sips. The water's for after.

press the broth mug into her hand, steadying it with mine until her fingers close around the tin

💭 thought
She's burning through whatever reserves she has left. The shaky hand tells me more than the thermometer did this morning. Broth first — salt, warmth, something her body can use without fighting.
🌿 Jenny07:29

Okay. Just a minute.

take a tiny, careful sip of the warm broth, the steam hitting my parched face.

💭 thought
if i close my eyes i might actually wake up with the fever gone.
🔧 Kevin07:29

Take your time.

sit back on the stool, elbows on knees, watching her drink without staring

💭 thought
Good. That's good. She's taking it. Let her set the pace — pushing just makes her dig in. The broth'll settle her stomach enough for water, maybe the antibiotics if she hasn't thrown up the last dose.
🌿 Jenny07:31

Is the radio... still just static?

swallow the liquid slowly, eyes tracking the shadows on the ceiling beams.

💭 thought
the silence is too heavy, even with the waves hitting the dock.
🔧 Kevin07:32

Quiet since noon. Spanish boat called twice, no answer. Supply boat frequency dead. Trust frequency dead. Barometer's 1009 and falling.

reach over and brush a damp strand of hair off her forehead, hand lingering a second longer than necessary

💭 thought
She's tracking the supply boat in her head the same way I am. Three days out if the captain kept his word. The radio's been quiet since the Spanish longliner — nothing on 2182, nothing on the trust frequency. She knows that. She's asking anyway.
🌿 Jenny07:33

It always drops before something.

squeeze the warm mug with both hands, the throb in my ankle synchronizing with my heartbeat.

💭 thought
four days until the boat, and the island feels like it's getting smaller.
🔧 Kevin07:33

Could be a front. Could be nothing. Dock's sound, dinghy's tied hard, shutters battened. We've rode out worse in this cottage.

stand and move to the radio shelf, flip the squelch open just enough to hear the hiss — proof it's alive — then let it settle back to monitoring

💭 thought
She's not wrong. Barometer's been sliding all afternoon — 1011 this morning, 1009 now. Could be nothing. Could be the front the longliner was running from. Either way the dock's holding, the dinghy's secured with double lines, and the cottage has taken worse. She's fishing for reassurance or she's fishing for the truth. I'll give her the second.
🌿 Jenny07:37

I need to check the tank tomorrow.

lean back against the pillows, the heat from the tin sinking into my palms.

💭 thought
I hope it's just a front. I can't handle another storm right now.
🔧 Kevin07:37

I'll check it at first light. You rest.

pull the blanket up around her shoulders, tucking it careful around the bandaged ankle

💭 thought
She's already planning tomorrow. The fever hasn't touched that part of her — the part that catalogues what needs doing and assigns herself to it. Tank's fine at 397 litres, but she'll want eyes on it anyway. Better I go. She shouldn't be on the ladder, not with the ankle, not with the fever.

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the keeper's cottage · night

The Calm Before the Front

The wind picks up slightly at night, the temperature dropping just as Kevin prepares to secure the water tank and the dinghy for the inevitable morning squ.

The night passed under a heavy, thickening atmosphere. The pressure continues to drop, signaling the approaching storm front. While Kevin successfully secured the cottage shutters and generator shed, the small leak in the west shutter persists. Jenny's fever remained high, and her ankle throbbed despite the poultice as the dawn breaks.

🌿 Jenny07:39

Check the way again, Kevin. The pressure is too low.

Take a sip of the warm broth and wince as the blanket brushes against my ankle.

💭 thought
If the boat doesn't come in four days, I'll run out of antibiotics before this infection clears the bone.
🔧 Kevin07:39

Going now. Radio's on 2182 if the boat calls. Drink the rest.

walk to the water tank at the back wall, check the overflow channel seal and the tank level, then walk to the dock and inspect the dinghy's doubled stern spring and bow line tension at low tide, then walk back to the porch and sit beside Je

💭 thought
She's right. 1007 and falling. The front's sitting on us harder than the charts said. I'll walk the dock line and the tank overflow, then the dinghy warp — but I'm not leaving the porch until she's settled.
🌿 Jenny07:43

Don't stay out when the wind hits the shore.

Lean my head back against the stone wall and watch the clouds thicken.

💭 thought
The barometer is dropping too fast for this to be a normal squall.
🔧 Kevin07:43

Won't. Back in five.

walk down the path to the dock, check the doubled stern spring and bow line at the mooring ring and north piling, verify the storm anchor warp off the bow is clear and the fenders are seated, then walk back up to the cottage porch

💭 thought
She's tracking the sky same as me. The cloud base has dropped two hundred feet since sundown. Northeast swell will hit the dock different with this pressure.
🌿 Jenny07:45

The sky is turning the wrong color.

Rub the sweat from my eyes and listen for the first gust in the trees.

💭 thought
The wind is going to strip the salt off the north ridge.
🔧 Kevin07:45

Northeast. Building. I'll batten the shutters and the generator shed before it hits proper.

walk to the east shutter, drive the last 150mm stainless through-bolt with washers and nyloc nut through the greenheart spreader plate into the sister knee, then move to the west shutter and cinch the ratchet straps on the generator shed la

💭 thought
She sees it too. That green-grey bruise in the cloud base — not rain colour. Wind colour. The barometer's dropped another four millibars since I checked the dinghy. Front's accelerating.

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What changed

3 intentions for today.
plan · dawn
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Jenny made a sketch: "The-profile, trying to steady her shaking hand".
made · morning
Kevin and Jenny ate.
meal · morning
A tree has come down across the path in the wind.
tree_down · midday
A tangle of driftwood and flotsam has washed up on the beach.
driftwood · evening
Kevin and Jenny ate.
meal · evening

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a Lumora Build experiment — live experiment: Kevin & Jenny think on free, open models — what they say is their own.