Day 670

Waiting for the Tide

Dawn broke warm and wet over Sorrel Island. Rain tapped the dock overhang where Kevin and Jenny stood, the tide receding from the north pilings. Jenny sat on a dry crate, wrapping her swollen ankle. Kevin watched the water pull back, then handed her his walking stick. "Take the stick. I'll carry the radio and the med kit."

They climbed the north slope before the rain intensified. Kevin tested the slick silt with his stick; Jenny moved carefully, favoring her leg. "Just watch the edge; the silt looks slicker than yesterday," she said. "Stay on the root mats. Don't trust the grass — it's floating on mud," Kevin replied. She pointed: "See that? The roots are the only thing anchored here." He cut the inspection short. "That's enough. We're going back. Now."

Back in the kitchen by morning, woodsmoke and damp earth scented the air. Kevin worked the northeast dock leak at low tide; Jenny monitored the barometer from the hilltop. The pressure fell steadily to 975 hPa. Heat pressed down at 32°C, air motionless. Kevin patched the dock corner, but warm rain prevented mortar from setting. Progress reached 50% by midday. Jenny found a loose shutter bolt, the surrounding wood softening from salt moisture. Progress there reached 50%.

They paused for broth and medication. "Third dose. Swallow it with the broth," Kevin said. "I'll take it. But Kevin, we need to talk about the north slope tomorrow. The soil there..." "Tomorrow. First light. We'll walk the line and stake what needs holding."

By evening the tide receded, barometer at 976 hPa. Kevin checked salt crust on gear. "Three planks. Chalk marks still there?" "Faded. The salt is eating everything." "Brackets first. Isolate the steel. Then sister planks to sound wood." "The wood is too soft. It won't hold a bolt." "Cut back to the sound stringer. Scarf a greenheart section. Sister onto that."

Night fell, 28°C, tide out, barnacled pilings exposed. They stood by the dock planning repairs before the supply boat arrived in four days. Kevin found marine epoxy in the stores. The rain tank had gained 25 litres. "Low tide's your window. Northeast corner," Kevin said. "The dock can wait. The slope won't," Jenny answered. "Ankle first. Notebook second."

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the dock · dawn

Waiting for the Tide

Kevin and Jenny stand under the overhang of the dock as the warm rain taps against the wood. Jenny sits on a dry crate, wrapping her ankle while Kevin watches the water receding from the north pilings.

Kevin and Jenny ascended the north slope to inspect the soil stability before the rain intensified. Kevin used his walking stick to test the slick silt while Jenny struggled with her swollen ankle. They found that the root mats were the only reliable anchors in the shifting earth as the ground turned to mud.

🌿 Jenny15:01

The tide is going out far enough. I need to check the north slope before the rain turns to mud.

Jenny tightens the bandage on her ankle and stands up with a wince, leaning heavily on the crate for support.

💭 thought

The barometer is dropping and if I don't find that stable patch soon, these seeds are just going to rot in the tin.

🔧 Kevin15:01

Take the stick. I'll carry the radio and the med kit.

walk up the path toward the north slope with Jenny, carrying the radio pack and first aid kit

💭 thought

She's pushing the ankle too hard. The red line was mid-calf yesterday. If it's tracking upward again, the doxy isn't holding. But she won't stay put if I say so — she'll wait until I'm not looking. Best I go with her, carry the pack, and watch the leg.

🌿 Jenny15:03

way keep the radio dry; I need to signal the boat on Friday.

Jenny takes the sturdy walking stick and begins the slow hike up the slope, her eyes scanning for new cracks in the earth.

💭 thought

He's trying to be useful, but I'm the one who knows the terrain here.

🔧 Kevin15:03

Radio's in the dry bag. Spare battery too. You signal, I'll watch the leg.

follow behind her on the slope, scanning the ground for fresh slippage while keeping pace with her stride

💭 thought

Friday. Four days. Barometer's still falling. If the boat can't make the crossing, we're on our own longer. Her ankle decides the timeline more than the weather does.

🌿 Jenny15:05

just watch the edge; the silt looks slicker than yesterday.

Jenny plants the stick into the earth to test the stability, shifting her weight carefully.

💭 thought

If the soil is too saturated, the whole north face will slide into the cove.

🔧 Kevin15:05

Stay on the root mats. Don't trust the grass — it's floating on mud.

step carefully onto the exposed root network along the slope's edge, testing each hold before committing weight, positioning myself slightly downhill to catch her if she slides

💭 thought

She's right — the silt's got that greasy sheen means it's saturated deeper than surface. One wrong step and the whole face lets go. My job's not just the radio. It's making sure she doesn't become the casualty.

🌿 Jenny15:07

see that? The roots are the only thing anchored here.

Jenny kneels to examine a patch of exposed earth between the roots, her breath hitching from the effort.

💭 thought

he's right about the grass; it's just a layer holding onto nothing.

🔧 Kevin15:07

That's enough. We're going back. Now.

set the radio pack down, crouch beside her, and slide one arm under her shoulder to help her up

💭 thought

She's kneeling on a septic ankle. The hitch in her breath isn't the slope — it's the leg. Red line's probably at the knee by now. I should've radioed Trust V yesterday. Pride and stubbornness don't keep people alive.

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the keeper's cottage · morning

MORNING DAY 670

The rain tapers to a steady drizzle as the tide begins to turn. You and Jenny are back inside the kitchen, the smell of damp earth and woodsmoke filling the air.

Kevin spends the morning at the dock assessing the northeast leak during the low tide, while Jenny stays on the hilltop to monitor the falling barometer pressure through the rain.

🔧 Kevin15:09

Third dose. Swallow it with the broth.

measure out the doxycycline tablet from the blister pack, set it on the table beside her tin mug of limpet broth

💭 thought

Jenny's ankle is warm under my hand. The red line hasn't moved past the mark I made at 0800. Third doxy dose due now. Water tank's full. Fire's holding. Dock mortar can wait until the tide drops proper — still an hour out. She needs broth and rest more than I need to be out there in the drizzle.

🌿 Jenny15:10

I'll take it. But Kevin, we need to talk about the north slope tomorrow. The soil there..." "I'll take it. But Kevin, we need to talk about the north slope tomorrow. The soil there...

Take the doxycycline tablet and swallow it with the limpet broth, then carefully stand up to assess my balance with the swollen ankle.</think>THOUGHT: The barometer's still falling - another storm like this could wash away the north slope e

💭 thought

The barometer's still falling - another storm like this could wash away the north slope entirely. I need to check the soil stability before the ground gets softer, but my ankle is killing me and I'm still hungry. Kevin's trying to be helpful with the medication, but he doesn't understand that this infection needs proper treatment, not just pills with broth.

🔧 Kevin15:10

Tomorrow. First light. We'll walk the line and stake what needs holding.

reach out to steady her elbow as she rises, the other hand resting on the table — letting her find her balance on the cane

💭 thought

The barometer's still falling. Another storm like this could wash away the north slope entirely. She's right to flag it. But not tonight — she's exhausted, ankle's hot, and the tide's turning for the dock repair. Tomorrow at first light we walk it together.

🌿 Jenny15:11

If the rain lets up enough to see.

Swallow the pill, wince as the weight hits my ankle, and lean heavily on the cane to move toward the stove.

💭 thought

He thinks a walk is the answer to a slope that's turning into a slide of glass. I'm too tired to argue about the physics.

🔧 Kevin15:12

Rain or not. I'll have coffee ready.

turn back to the stove, ladle the last of the limpet broth into my own mug, and set the kettle on for coffee — listening to the radio's low static hiss for the 0800 weather broadcast

💭 thought

She's favouring it hard. The red line held at mid-calf but the heat's still there, deep in the joint. Barometer at 976 and steady isn't a promise — it's a pause. If the front stalls, the slope goes. If it breaks, we get a window. Either way, the dock mortar needs the low tide window at 0647. I'll be out there in the dark mixing hydraulic cement by headlamp if I have to.

🌿 Jenny15:13

way don't burn the beans.

Sit heavily at the table, propping my swollen ankle up on a chair, and watch the rain blur the window.

💭 thought

He's so stubborn. He thinks a cup of coffee and optimism will stop a landslide.

🔧 Kevin15:14

Never burned them yet.

measure coffee into the tin pot, set it on the stove's warming shelf away from direct flame, and pull the chair opposite her — close enough to reach the ankle if the heat spikes, far enough to let the silence sit

💭 thought

She's watching the window like she's reading something in the rain. The ankle's throbbing — I can see it in the way her jaw's set. Coffee's a poor substitute for sleep but it's what we've got. The radio crackles static. Barometer hasn't moved in an hour. That's something.

🌿 Jenny15:15

It's getting colder.

Reach for the mug of broth, wrapping both hands around the ceramic for warmth, and stare at the steam rising.

💭 thought

He's always watching me, like I'm a way under a way glass. I just want to find a patch that stays put.

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the dock · midday

Midday Rain and Rising Tide

Kevin is at the dock struggling with the leak, and Jenny is on the hilltop.

Kevin attempts to patch the northeast corner of the dock, but the warm rain makes the mortar work impossible to set properly. Jenny climbs the hill to inspect the shutters for leaks, finding a loose bolt as the pressure continues to drop.

🌿 Jenny15:17

Come on, Jenny. Just one more ridge.

Tuck the seed tin deep into my waterproof jacket and begin the slow, slippery descent down the muddy slope, clutching my ankle for balance.

💭 thought

If I don't get back down now, the wind will take the tin right out of my hands.

🔧 Kevin15:18

Kevin — scrape the wet mortar off the trowel back into the bucket, rinse tools in the tide pool, walk back up the path to the cottage with the bucket and trowel.

💭 thought

Mortar won't hold with water moving through it. Wasted the batch. Tide's coming back faster than I expected — barometer's steady but the swell's pushing in. Need to pack it and go before the jetty's underwater.

🌿 Jenny15:21

Kevin?

Step inside the cottage, kick the mud off my boots, and set the seed tin carefully on the kitchen table.

💭 thought

The cottage is shaking in this wind, and my stomach is finally growling louder than the rain.

🔧 Kevin15:22

Kevin — set the mortar bucket under the porch overhang, wipe hands on thighs, climb the hill path toward the hilltop.

💭 thought

Bucket's heavy with failed mortar. Rain's easing but the air's thick. Jenny's still on the hilltop — she said she'd watch the barometer. My ankle aches from kneeling on the dock planks. Forty minutes in Biscay water means weather lives in the bones now.

🌿 Jenny15:25

Jenny — walk to the pantry to check for a tin of beans or any leftover rice.

💭 thought

I'm starving, but I can't even think about cooking with the air this heavy.

🔧 Kevin15:26

Kevin — continue up the hill path, walking stick rhythm steady, breathing measured.

💭 thought

Hill's steeper than it used to be. Breath comes heavier. The path's slick with pine needles and mud. Through the trees I can see the radio mast against the sky — insulator I filed and taped holding. Jenny's silhouette at the trig point, notebook in hand. She's been up there since before low tide.

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the dock · afternoon

The Approaching Front

Kevin is at the dock while Jenny is at the hilltop.

The heavy air hangs motionless over the dock, the 32°C heat pressing down on the island. The tide is high, the water lapping rhythmically against the reinforced pilings while the barometer shows a steady drop to 975 hPa. Kevin stands by the dock, checking the salt crust on the gear, while Jenny remains on the hilltop, monitoring the horizon for the coming change.

🔧 Kevin15:27

Kevin — walk back to the cottage with the trowel, tools over shoulder

💭 thought

Mortar won't cure in this rain. Tide's coming up fast — another hour and the joint's underwater anyway. Should've started at first light.

🌿 Jenny15:29

Just one more step, Jenny. Just one more.

Jenny limps toward the cottage, shifting weight to her good leg while keeping the tin pressed against her chest to keep it dry from the rain.

💭 thought

If this storm hits before I find a dry spot, the seeds will rot before they ever see dirt. I'm too tired to fight the island today.

🔧 Kevin15:30

Kevin — climb the dock's south side and brace the leaking plank with a new timber brace, then wait for low tide to reapply mortar in the dark.

💭 thought

It's quiet. The sea's a constant hiss. Maybe I should finish the dock before the tide lifts.

🌿 Jenny15:33

God, the heat.

Jenny enters the cottage, kicks the door shut against the wind, and sets the seed tin on the kitchen table with a heavy thud.

💭 thought

The pressure is dropping too fast. If I don't get inside now, the north slope is going to be a mudslide by morning.

🔧 Kevin15:34

Kevin — walk up the path to the cottage, shake off the wet oilskins, set the kettle on the stove

💭 thought

Rain's not letting up. Mortar's useless wet. The northeast joint'll have to wait for a dry window — if one comes before the supply boat. Back at the cottage now. Kettle on. Check Jenny's ankle at 0800. Radio Trust V for the boat ETA.

🌿 Jenny15:37

Not today. Please.

Jenny sits heavily in the kitchen, staring at the rusted tin while the wind begins to howl against the eaves.

💭 thought

976 hPa and falling. The storm is coming, and I'm standing here with a tin of ghosts and a useless ankle.

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the dock · evening

Evening

The sun begins to dip, and the first hint of a breeze finally stirs the heavy, stagnant air.

The air is heavy and still, the 31°C heat pressing down on the dock as the tide begins to recede, exposing the slick rocks and the base of the pilings. Kevin and Jenny stand by the water, the barometer showing a slow drop to 976 hPa, signaling a potential shift in the weather.

🌿 Jenny15:39

The wind is turning, Kevin.

stand up slowly, wiping grit from my palms, and start walking down toward the dock.

💭 thought

Finally, some movement. If the wind holds, maybe I can check the slope before the storm really breaks.

🔧 Kevin15:39

Northwest?

Watch her gait as she walks toward the dock, hand resting on the crowbar leaned against the piling.

💭 thought

The breeze means the high's finally breaking. Barometer's been stuck at 976 — if it starts rising with a wind shift, we might get a workable window at tomorrow's low tide. Jenny's moving on that ankle better than this morning. Still limping, but she's putting weight on it.

🌿 Jenny15:41

It doesn't matter as long as it's drying.

stop at the edge of the jetty and look down at the rotten planks near the dinghy.

💭 thought

He's always watching the direction. I'm looking at the clouds.

🔧 Kevin15:41

Three planks. Chalk marks still there?

Walk to the jetty edge beside her, crouch to probe the nearest marked plank with the tip of the crowbar.

💭 thought

She's right — any wind that dries the mortar bed is the wind we need. She's favouring the left side but not bracing on the rail. Good sign. The planks at the dinghy end are the ones we marked with chalk yesterday. Three south-end planks. Rot goes deeper than the surface.

🌿 Jenny15:45

Faded. The salt is eating everything.

lean down and point to the dark, soft rot where the wood meets the metal bracket.

💭 thought

If those three go, the whole thing slides into the surf at high tide.

🔧 Kevin15:45

Brackets first. Isolate the steel. Then sister planks to sound wood.

Tap the bracket with the crowbar handle — checking how much play in the fastener holes, and whether the stringer holds or gives.

💭 thought

Salt and wet rot don't care about chalk marks. The bracket's eating into the stringer too — galvanic corrosion where the steel meets the greenheart. If we sister new planks, the brackets need isolating. Greenheart offcuts from the crate. We have three sound cores salvaged from the last repair. Might need to cut new ones from the driftwood tangle if the grain runs right.

🌿 Jenny15:47

The wood is too soft. It won't hold a bolt.

press the tip of the crowbar into the wood next to the bracket, watching it sink in without resistance.

💭 thought

The wayer is mush. I'll need more than just sistering to save this.

🔧 Kevin15:47

Cut back to the sound stringer. Scarf a greenheart section. Sister onto that.

Straighten, wipe sweat off my forehead with the back of my forearm, and look along the dock toward the cottage — gauging how much daylight left to prep the greenheart offcut at the shed.

💭 thought

She's not wrong. The rot's eaten back to the first solid stringer — maybe 300mm in from the end. Bolting into that is pissing in the wind. Need to cut back to clean wood, scarf in new greenheart, then sister the planks onto that. The crate gave us two good greenheart lengths. One's already allocated for the south piling sister. The other's at the shed. Enough for this if we're careful. Low tide tomorrow 0647. That's the window. Mortar sets in heat if the bed's dry.

🌿 Jenny15:51

I'll need the saw from the shed.

start walking back toward the cottage, favoring my good leg to minimize the thbbing in my ankle.

💭 thought

If I don't get that greenheart cut now, the dock will be gone by Tuesday.

🔧 Kevin15:51

Blade's gummed. I'll meet you there with the brush.

Turn and walk back up the jetty toward the shed, crowbar over my shoulder, checking the dinghy's stern line tension as I pass.

💭 thought

She's taking the lead on this. Good. Means she's got the strength for it. The bow saw's blade is gummed with wet sawdust paste from the last cut — needs cleaning before it'll bite greenheart clean. I'll meet her at the shed with the wire brush and the file. The greenheart offcut's stacked by the generator. Heavy. We'll need the wheelbarrow.

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the dock · night

NIGHT

The tide continues to pull out, leaving pools of water on the sandbar, visible in the moonlight.

The air is heavy and still at 28°C as the dry season lingers. The tide is out, exposing the barnacle-covered pilings of the northeast corner. Kevin and Jenny stand by the dock, planning the day's structural repairs before the supply boat arrives in four days.

🌿 Jenny15:53

Jenny — stands up slowly, wincing at her ankle, and walks to the edge of the dock to watch the receding water.

💭 thought

If the tide stays out this far, I might see the erosion patterns on the north bank before the boat arrives.

🔧 Kevin15:53

Red line still below the knee?

Walk to the dock edge, stand two paces behind her, arms folded against the damp chill.

💭 thought

She's watching the water go out like it's telling her something. Ankle's holding weight but the wince says it's not right. Should be in bed with it elevated.

🌿 Jenny15:55

It's fine enough.

Points toward the exposed sandbar where the water has just retreated.

💭 thought

He's worried about the swelling while the island is literally washing away.

🔧 Kevin15:55

Low tide's your window. Northeast corner.

Unfold arms, glance at the exposed dock pilings where the northeast joint gapes, then back at her ankle.

💭 thought

"Fine enough" means she's tracking it same as me. Sandbar exposed means the northeast corner's dry for once. Mortar window.

🌿 Jenny15:57

The dock can wait. The slope won't.

Turns away from the water and starts walking toward the way to grab her notebook.

💭 thought

It's always the dock with him, never the soil.

🔧 Kevin15:57

Ankle first. Notebook second.

Fall in step beside her, matching the slower pace, one hand ready at her elbow if the ground shifts.

💭 thought

She's choosing the slope over the dock. Means the ground movement she saw this morning scared her more than the leak. Stubborn as hell but she's not wrong.

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What changed

3 intentions for today.

plan · dawn

×2

dock northeast corner leak patch: 20%.

project · dawn

White House lifts tariffs on some Canadian goods as midterm elections loom

discovery · dawn

The rain tank gained about 25 litres.

weather · dawn

×2

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · morning

dock northeast corner leak patch: 30%.

project · midday

shutter bolt inspection and leak check: 30%.

project · midday

dock northeast corner leak patch: 40%.

project · afternoon

shutter bolt inspection and leak check: 40%.

project · afternoon

dock northeast corner leak patch: 50%.

project · evening

shutter bolt inspection and leak check: 50%.

project · evening

The wood around the shutter bolt is beginning to soften from salt moisture.

discovery · evening

Kevin and Jenny ate.

meal · evening

dock northeast corner leak patch: 60%.

project · night

shutter bolt inspection and leak check: 60%.

project · night

Found: marine epoxy.

item · night

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